Reviews by queenfrizz
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked the latest chapter, quite entertaining, and an interesting twist. I can't wait to see if Bella and Edward decide to start a production company together, I am sure it will mean great things for their future. Nor can I wait to see what happens with the most recent sepertion.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wonderful chapter, I love how everything is moving along, not to mention the continuing development of Edward and bella's relationship, and her career. I can't wait to see what happens next. Glad your back.



Author's Response:

thanks, glad to be back

working hard on finishing the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loving this story so far. I love stories where Bella and the gang are just a little bit naughty, no to mention how original it is to have Edward as the older one, and everyone else younger than him. I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love the "you teacher. She student" very entertaining. I can't wait to see how this story and relationshipunravel.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I  am going to love the over protective Emmett, not to mention Rosalie and Alice's advice, But I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to Bella's display. I hope Bella manages to keep an eye on Rosalie, and I really really hope that she doesn't get caught up in the week day addiction.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving the internal dialogue, JD has nothing on your Edward, and I can't wait to see what happens when Bella really gears up her seduction plans. I am really enjoying this entertaining story, but I can sense some drama on the way.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Glad we got the Edward and Bella lemon, but I wonder how they will handle the attraction between them long term. I also can't wait to see what happens with Roaselie's new school habbit, and I really hope she doesn't pull Bella and Alice in with her.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

still loving Edwards inner voice, But I really hope that Alice, Jasper and Edward are able to sort things out with Bella, before she starts walking down Rosalies path.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

glad that Bella and Edward have started to sort a few things out, and that Edward has cottoned onto Bella's habit. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

loved the confrontation and the lemons, a very well written and entertaining story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

A lot of thinking to do but at least she is considering it. And has Rosalie on board as well, I really hope things work out for them all, But I get the feeling it could be a long and hard road.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Osrry for Rose and Emmett, but I am glad that Bella nad Edward got their feeling for each other into the open (more or less). And I can't wait to find out more about the Ben twist.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh boy, i think it's about to hit the fan, can't wait

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Liked the twist of Ben only being the middle man, and the guy in charge using Rosalie to get to Bella. I can't wait to see what happens with an over protective Edward and Emmett around. I also can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Edward's beating and the news he brings about Bella's safety.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

talk about intense, nearly slipping with Carlisle and now Emmie bear is on the way into the mess. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I am really glad that Edward is alive, even if he is in ICU. But, I have to wonder if Carlisle and Emmmett will figure out the extent of Edward and Bella's relationship.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved Emmett and Jaspers reactions to Bella and Edwards relationship, and I can't wait to see how they react to Bella's unwanted current relationship. Or when they finally get a hold of Edward.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh boy, glad Edward is more or less OK, But I am not sure how Bella is going to make it through this one, especially since she is using again.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward must have real big ones to go to charlie like that. Excellent, glad they have found Bella, I just hope they are able to heklp her in time.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok Bella is safe, and Charlie and Edward have a sort of understnding going on. Although I can't see Edward staying away from her long term. I also hope the cocaine won't come between them

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awesome lovers reunion, but I get the feeling this particualr family reunion isn't going to go as well. I can't wait to see what happens when the truth or the shit hits the fan

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

glad that everything is out in the open now, and that Edward is there to help Bella,  but I wonder what secret he is still hiding from her, about his past with drugs.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Looks like Bella might pull through after all. But I can't wait to find out what happens with Emmett and Charlies reactions to her and Edward's relationship once the dust has settled. And I can't wait to find out what has Roses nose so far out of joint.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad Bella has got most of it out in the open, and what isn't soon will be. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

loving how the realtionships are slowly healing, not to mention Bella herself. But I still can't help but wonder what Edward 's secret is, especially since he knew about the rehab facility.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great chapter, loved how everything is moving along, and how everything seems to be coming together. I can't wait to see what happens with the trial.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373321
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Awesome Chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am sure it's going to be great, and I am glad I can read it all with out waiting.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

Glad Edward managed to stop that one in it's tracks. But I can't wait to see how long before he suspects that his bride and love are the same.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Ok so angela and probably Alice have worked out Tony and Bella's past. But I really wish thet would share the news. It might save some of the angst. I can't wait to see what happens next, I ma sure it's gonna be great.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

A sweet and touching chapter, there is a lot of hope for Edward after all. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

love the sex ed. I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella finally come face to face.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

beyond words, I love how everything came together, and now I am really looking forward to the wedding night.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Juicy, sweet, tneder and well written, everything I was hoping for. I can't wait to see what happens next for these two

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

Sad that their homeymoon ended so soon, But I loved how Edward was able to see what kind of person Bella has become, and what sort of queen she could be.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

Another touching chapter, I loved the good bye that Jacob and Bella shared, as well as Edward giving her the time. I also loved the chrietening of their on board bed. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to England, or as Alice goes through her pregnancy.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

I am glad that Bella and Edward get to continue their time as newly weds in honeymoon. But I can't help but wonder what has Carlisle so concerned.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Interesting twist, I find it interesting that the British government paid for a hit. I wonder just how bad the clan is, and just who their hits are, and what else they could be involved in. I can't wait to find out more about the organization, or the Cullen family.

I also can't wait to see what happens with Bella, obviously her and Rose will have alot in common, and I wonder if they will get along. I am looking forward to seeing what everyone thinks of her, and how they all get along.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella come face to face, after everything she has been through, you have to wonder if she will be able to trust Edward and his family, yet alone love him. I can't wait to see how Carlisle reacts to Bella, nor can I wait to find out more about what happened to Esme.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

Keeps getting better and better, I really hope Barlisle doesn't want Bella removed, because it looks like their is going to be at least four very over protective friends looking out for her. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

interesting, I just love how the next generation of the clan has bonded together to love and protect Bella. I can't wait to see how their relationships grow, and what Emmett has to offer to the mix, not to mention what happens when Carlisle and Edward have their talk.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

Oh god, I am so glad Jacob got what was coming to him. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this news.

I also love Bella and Edward inner voices, they are very entertaining.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Talk about burning for revenge, I hope I never get on the wrong side of Edward and Jaspers demons. I loved the insight into Jaspers mind, and his feelings towards Carlisle. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially once Edward gets back to Bella, and confronts Carlisle.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

awesome chapter. As always I really enjoyed the family banter. But I have to say I loved Carlisle's reponse to giving Alice away, and Bella standing up to Alice about her behaviour and the Familys way of handeling the situation. As always the lemon was intense and so very hot. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

Thrilled to find this story here. Not to mention how far ahead it is compared to whats posted on twilighted. I love this story, and I am glad to read the progress Bella and Edward are making in their relationship, Thanks to her grandparents and Carlisle.

Very entertaining, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

Glad some of the ban stuff got sorted out. I loved the back stage antics, and the shoes. I can't wait to see what happens during the interview.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

Darn it everything was going so well for them both, well right up to the last paragraph at least. I can't wait to see what trouble Collin is trying to stir up now, but I really hope Bella tells Edward about it, before things get out of hand.

I can't wait to find out more about Charlie and Edwards long awaited meeting. Please don;t keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

great chapter, I loved Bella and Edwards phone call. But I can't tell you how happy I am that Bella worked it all out, and went back to tell Edward what was going on. I can't wait to see what happens when the truth about James, and his kidnapping of Bella comes out.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

another wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see how Bella and Edward handle the seperation from each other, not to mention how Edward and Jack manage their time apart. I am also looking forward to what happens when they are all reunited.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

wonderful chapter, it was great reading about Jack and his mates, not to mention Charlie teasing Bella. I can't wait to see what Edward says as he proposes, not to mention how else they celebrate her Birthday before Jack gets home, and they tell them all the news. I can't wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Wonderful chapter, a sweet and touching end to a well written and emotional story. I will be sad to see the end of this story,and I really hope that Jack gets his little brother, or heaven forbid a sister. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

a wonderful chapter, very well written and touching. I loved Esme's raction to Bella being in labour, and the family bonding at the end of the chapter. I really loved reading this story, and I am sad to see it go, but I can't wait to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

well and truly worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

gotta love Emmett's timing, wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

congratulations doctor and best wishes for the future. A wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

wonderful ending, I am sorry to see this story go, but a taste of the future was just what was needed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

another great chapter. I can't wait to find out who it is. I also can't wait to see if this is enough to get Edward ad Emmett working together again. A well written and very entertaining chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked it. :) Next chapter will reveal who's responsible. I'll try to update soon. =)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the lemony loving, even if Jasper and Alice are spoiling some of the romance. Even if it is in very entertaining and highly amusing cock block. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

lol. Thank you. ;D

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

very intense chapter, well written and entertaining. I am glad they managed to get it all sorted out, and ended it in each others arms. But I can't wait to see how Emmett reacts, or whats up with Bella's phone.



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett's reaction is one to wait for. I'll explain what happened to Bella's phone maybe next chapter. thanks!)

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238934
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Interesting twist having Mike attack Bella. I can't wait to see what happens when Edward, Charlie and the Cullens find out what has happened. I enjoyed the party not to mention the at school antics and lemon, very hot. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter. Yeah, Edward is having control issues. When he wants his mate, he wants her now....and sometimes it isn't in the most private of places. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

glad they are all starting to move on and repair relationships. I can't wait to see what happens now that they are all away from the parents.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

glad they ot one sweet romantic night alone together before they have to face the world. wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

and it was all going so well. I loved Bella standing up for their relationship, and I can't wait to see how they all respond to the attack. Please don't keep us all waiting to long for the next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

Great chapter, the phone call with Edward was my favourite part as well. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially mow that Bella is going to surprise Edward.



Author's Response:

i can't wait either.  not sure how many chapters it will take...i'm kind of pokey.  Thanks!

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

wexcellent chapter, very sweet and entertaining. I was very touched by Edward asking to meet Bella's mother. And I just loved some of the talk about the wedding. I can't wait for the lessons to begin, I am sure it will be very entertaining.



Author's Response:

emmett is trying to behave.  HA!  a couple LRMs and then the next V&V will post.  Thanks!

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Great chapter, the Emmett and Charlie humor stoppped it from getting too emotional, still well written and entertaining, I can;t wait to see what happens next, especially now that Edward is back. I am so very glad he made it there for Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  here's a sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

very good chapter, I thought Emmett was quite well behaved in the classes, but in fine form later that night. I can't wait to see what happens at the prom, or in the next class.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it.  Emmett can behave...sometimes.  They only have a couple more classes...so he has more chances to embarrass everyone.  but will he? hmmm.  Check out a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134479
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, interesting take on having Edward as the new guy and Bella as the loner. I can't wait to see what Bella's relationship is to Carlisle and the other original Cullens. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

And the plot thickens. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved Edward taking a stand, and  can't wait to see what happens now that Edward has found out one of Bella's secrets, I can't wait to see what else comes out at the gym.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

and the plot continues to thicken. I can't wait to see what happens at the gym, and find out more about Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper and Bella's relationship.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A brilliant chapter, I loved finding out more about Bella and her brothers. I can't wait to find out more about what happened in phoenix, but more importantly I am loving the banter between Edward and Bella, and I can't wait to see what happens when the over protective big brothers figure out that Edward has a thing for Bella.

I also can't wait to read the beat down Lauren is about to get.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bugger, Lauren escaped the smack down. But I am glad that Bella and Edward got some bonding time, might help them survive the lecture thats coming.



Author's Response:

DId she ever deserve the best down!! Thanks for reading and reviewing:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh boy, I can't wait to see where it goes from here. I love how protectvie Edward is of his friend Bella, and it looks like Emmett and Jasper might be willing to stand up for Edward and Bella's relationship.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am loving the Bella and Edward bonding, not to mention the Cullen and Masen family dynamics and banter. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I love both of these families:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

one of the best chapters yet, I can't wait to see where this little talk goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I just love the Cullen family. It looks like things might start looking up for Bella, or at the very least a bit better since she is starting to open up a little.



Author's Response:

A little:)

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

how to make friends and influence people. I can't wait to see who the unexpected guest is.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

shocked by Charlie and Renee. I hadn't even noticed they were missing, I just assumed they were the parents. I loved the change in Edward and Bella's relationship, should make things very interesting.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Go Bella. way to defend your white knight, right before you jump him. You have to love Rose and Alice, and the way Edward handled them.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

so worth the wait, I can't wait to see what happens when the secret couple makes an appearance at school, not to mention what happens when Bella's brothers find out about the change of relationship status.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

smokin hot and smooth move there by Edward, but I have to say my favourite part was Carlisle little talk with Edward right at the end of the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am so glad I have so many chapters to catch up on, I don't think I would have handled the wait between the last few chapters that well.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i think it just hit the fan. I can't wait to see what happens after this plot twist

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh boy, talking to the sister. I wonder if Bella should be more scared of Esme then the girls she just faced in the ring. it should be an interesting conversation either way.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't wait to see Emmett and Jaspers reaction to the latest couple. But I am glad to see that Esme and Bella came to an understanding. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

good chapter, Glad to see them standing together against the brothers. But I wonder how long it will take the two of them to figure out that they are in love with each other. I wouldn't think much longer.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

still waiting for them to tell each other, but at least they are noe aware of their feelings for each other. I find the characters banter very entertaining and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad they both won, and the banter continues to entertain. I can't wait to see the reactions to the bruises

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

loved the reactions to the bruising, but I get the feeling there could be some more on the way, Lauren and Jessica just never learn.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

love them all standing up for each other, and I am lad that Esme now knows a bit about what is going on. I especially love that their feelings for each other are now out in the open, and I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Esme parents show up. I am sure it will be just as entertaining and well written as what I have read in the last few days.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved the sudden boxing lesson, and Bella opening up to the others. I can't wait to see what this means for them as a group. I also loved the advances in Bella and Edwards lemon relationship, and the arrival of Dad, I can't wait to see what conversation this sparks.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

highly entertaining. I can't wait to see if Edward Jr and Sr let the couch session slip. I loved the family bonding and banter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

loved paniced Carlisle, and the meet the parents moments. I can't wait to see what they get up to next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad Edward and Bella or together on this one, but I sure hope the others get involved before they end up in over their heads. I loved the mother son conversation, poor Edward is just getting more and more embarassed.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

shit I never saw that twist coming I can't wait to find out what i up with Charlie and Jacob, not to mention the guys for school, and mum and dad putting in an appearance,great twist. I can't wait to see where it leads.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Never saw this twist coming, but I have to say I love it, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

oh group hug. I am reall enjoying how close the characters are and how they are standing up for each other and getting things out in the open. I can't wait to see how they team up against the federal guys next time around.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

great almost lemon, very well written and tasteful. I am loving the clash of the parents and siblings. I can't wait to see what they do and say next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Go Edward. I can't wait to see what the Cullens get up to on the beach, I am sure it won't bode well for the people who have been hiding things from them all.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

oh boy, this should certainly make things even more interesting. But it's gonna cut into the Edward and Bella time, darn it.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I hope James and Victoris are just more lies, or at least smoke and mirros. I really hope who ever is at the door isn't going to cause even more problems for my favourite family who banters in the face of danger.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

well that was quick, but i get the feeling the wounds will take a long time to heal. I can't wait to see what new things Forks brings up, especially when Edward and Bella go back to school.