Reviews by mellow974
Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77159
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Semiquaver

SO FAR SO GOOD! can't wait to read more!! see u in chapter 3!

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Overture

sweet jesus!I love it! I just want to shake bella!! great plot! I want more!! thks!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

So far so good!I can't wait to read the next chapter! good ideas!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

love your storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

3 more days before the next update!god I CAN'T WAIT!!!! did Bella know all along that she could have had an annulment?! I really like the way you write!! can I ask you something? How did you get your Beta? I've started to write some stuff...and I wanted to know if I could have someone to help me with the grammar....anyway thank you for this great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You can ask me anything! As for the beta. I got in touch with Project Team Beta, and they've been betaing my 9 first chapters. Then I had another girl offering who beta'd chapter 9,15 and 16. She quit, though so now I don't have a beta except for Pjoject Team Beta.

I would recommend PTB since they don't fix the mistakes for you, they just tell you what you should change. So, therefor you learn A LOT! I mean, my grammar has changed so much I can't believe it!

Good luck with fining a beta and your story! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

god!Is she pregnant??? love your story!!can't wait until sunday!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Just one more day!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

I think I found the quote: IF you are a bird, I'm a bird. from the notebook. great chapter again, very real!! thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12, Pt. I

I just love your story and I hpe so fucking bad that the next chapter will come sooner than later 'cause i can't wait to read more!!!I hope B and E are going to get there soon!!!! thanks again!



Author's Response:

It will come Monday... I thought about trying to get it out sooner, but Imma gonna stick with Monday updates.  Hang tight!  Glad you like it!  M

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

love your story!!! I need to read more!!! pleaaaasssssssseeeee!!It's so heartbreaking, such a good plot!!!thank you!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

what is going to happen? why is jasper angry? who is lucy??? please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

{The 'Lucy' line is from an iconic US tv show from the 1950's 'I Love Lucy.' }

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238945
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

my favourite story so far! love it!great plot!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much. It means a lot to me. =D

Hopefully, I'll keep it interesting for you.

Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella is a rising fashion photographer. She isn't as lucky in her love life as she is in her professional one. She's hired by Edward, an American model with great popularity in Europe, to take some pictures for his book. Will he be just what she needs, or just another thorn in her side?

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Note: This is an O/S that as of now I have no intention to continue.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 1964
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Domino Effect

LUV IT

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61968
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mellow974 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OKAY§ GREAT PLOT!!! I really like it! can't wait to read more!!!!!