Great chapter...I'm kind of curious to know whether or not Esme understood Bella's meaning by her comment about Edward.

Two weeks in Hawaii will probably get very interesting. I can't wait.

I loved the chapter and can sympathize very easily with Bella over her sunburn. I burn very easily and have even blistered once from a burn. There is nothing worse then an all over, extremely severe case of sunburn.

I thought it was hysterical when Bella fell out of bed.

When are they going to make their relationship official? Are they going to discuss this soon? I can see where his former activities w/ all of those girls could be something they have to work through as a couple. Especially, considering the fact that she was usually standing outside the car when said activities were occcurring. That could be one very awkward conversation.

I'm so glad you were able to update again. I love this story.

Awesome chapter. I loved it all, but I loved how he left school during lunch to check on her. Then to offer to look at her injured area with out getting all "teenage boy" on her. That could have totally gone in another direction if he had acted like an overly horny teenager.

I can't decide which part I like the most. I just really liked the chapter as a whole. I hope James doesn't continue to be a problem, if he does, I hope Bella is able to take care of him herself.

Loved the chapter & I absolutely love the story.

I loved the little game that they played at school. Somehow I didn't Edward would be able to go a day without swearing.

The next chapter should be really interesting.

I loved it. Part of me is extremely curious to know what Carlisle was thinking during his talk w/ Bella. I'm also gad that she finally confided in Edward about how she was feeling. I hope that Rosalie and Emmett can decide what the best choice for them will be concerning her pregnancy, and I'm nervous about the dread Bella seems to be feeling about the rest of the school year. I hope that everything will be okay.

My favorite part...To me it was how Rosalie wanted to confide in Bella about the pregnancy.

Who was on the phone? Why is Bella crying?

Talk about awkward. I'm sure Edward will get an ear full if Ang and Bella end up talking, while he's hiding under the bed.

I can see Edward going ballistic when he finds out what happened to Bella's house. Especially when he finds out that they think it was Eric? But I'm wondering...is it Eric or could it have been someone else.

Great chapter...great story.  

I hope you get to update again soon. I loved this chapter.

I absolutely loved this chapter. I'm really curious to know who is making the phone calls. Is it Eric? Is it Laurant? Could it be Ben? Too many possibilities to know for sure, but I can't wait to find out.

I loved the tidbit about the Dopey engagement ring and Emmett's antics in the last jewlery store was hysterical. I'm really curious to see if Edward and Rosalie were more successfull in finding a ring for Bella.

Hearing about Edward's massage made me want to get one too. It sounded so relaxing.

I'm concerned that if Eric truly has an alibi for the night at Bella's house, could it be Laurent? Could Laurent be the person calling Edward and Bella? Does Bella really need to be concerned w/ Eric? What about Angela? I don't trust her at all and think Edward will have to do whatever he can to end his marriage with her.

Who is calling Edward and Bella? Will Angela attempt to come into the building again? Will Rose be able to trace the phone call? Jessica was completely awesome in this chapter. What is Edward going to say to his mother?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Who was shot? Was it Angela? I'm really glad that Bella was found and rescued by Edward, but I'm hoping that gunshot at the end of the chapter wasn't Esme trying to get revenge on Bella. Great chapter.

Yikes! I can understand why Bella is being pulled in both directions. Bella and Angela bonded during this whole kidnapping thing. The fact that Edward's dad just died is really sad, but I don't think Bella is quite processing everything right now. She has to be in some kind of shock over everything she's gone through. I hope Edward and Bella will be able to get past this. Great chapter.

Wonderful chapter. I found it comical that Emily didn't realize that her water broke. I would think that you would notice it immediately, but I can see it happening if your a heavy sleeper.

I really hope she stays in Arizona. Great Chapter.

Will Charlie be suportive? Or will he blame her for what happened?

I loved the gift of the bracelets...that seemed perfect. I hope that Bella stays in Arizona.

It's sad that the baby has a heart condition, but I'm sure with Edward's help and love that little girl will be fine. I just hope Bella decides to be there w/ them.

What did Edward do? Who's perfume does he smell like? I can totally understand why Bella would need to get away, I just hope Mr. Newton doesn't do anything to her or the baby.

Great chapter.

Really wondering what brought them all to this point, and just how badly Bella was injured even before that final blow. I hope you update soon. I really want to know how this rewrite goes.

Bella has really been put through the ringer this past year. I'm glad her year seems to be picking up a bit with the kindness of a stranger. I think this will be very interesting.

Great Chapter

I'm so glad Edward and Bella were able to share their stories w/ each other. Both of their exes are absolutely awful.

I loved the chapter and look forward to more.

I really hope they can work everything out so that their can continue to have a relationship.

I loved the chapter and I'm really enjoying your story.

Was finally able to have the time to read this chapter. I loved it. I love how the kids just seem to gravitate to each other in a way that they want to be a big happy family. I hope everything works out. I also find it kind of satisfying that Jacob has finally realized what he has lost.

I loved it!!!!!!

Mike really is mentally unstable if he thinks he just say a few words and get Bella back....like that would ever happen again. Part of me hopes that Edward gets to meet him one day and scare the living crap out of him.

Love the teasing about sleeping nude, and I especially loved her PS.

Emmett is a genius. I loved it.

loved his words, and hoping he stays safe.

He's losing it little by little...I love it.

I really hope their Skype call goes well.

I almost feel bad for the fact that Edward has to hear about the meal Bella is about to enjoy. I wonder what his response back will be.

Great chapter

Love the flirting. Will he write her a song???? Guess I'll just have to wait and see.

I can see him getting a little annoyed with Mike and her mom. I can also see him getting excited about the idea of blue lingerie. 

I can't wait for their Skype meeting.

I really like how concerned Bella is for her student. I love the fact that she's trying to help take care of him the best she can. I think that says a lot about a teacher/person.

Well, I guess you could say that Bella just took that little flame they had started with their flirting and turned it into an outright inferno. Love it. Can't wait to find out his reaction to her little note.

I hope she goes for it, which I'm assuming she did since there are still a lot of chapters that I need to read to get caught up. It should be interesting to find out what Alice and Rose think.

I feel like squealing in excitement.

That was really sweet. 

I hope they are all okay. I think I'm starting to worry too.

Yup, how are either one of them going to survivie their time apart now that they found each other.

I really hope Edward is alone when he reads her latest email, otherwise things may get very interesting.

I'm glad the Bella was able to get help for Christopher, and I love the fact that she needs some special time with her dad.

I'm glad he was able to call her, but I'm sure he was in panic mode when he heard just how upset she really was.

I'm almost too excited to find out what Charlie thinks about Bella's fairly  new relationship. Better yet, will there be a day that he will make Edward squirm? I'm evil, I know.

Loved the warning Charlie gave for Edwrad, and her first date was hysterical.

They both need to invest in cold water...

Love his reaction to the whole Emmett smoochies thing. I'm really glad he plans on going to Washington when he's done, and I'm curious to know what he will end up doing for a career.

I wonder what the consequences will be when he sees those pictures.

My daughter has gotten me started on that Once Upon a Time, I saw the last couple episodes of the season and was completely confused, but can see how easy it is to get absorbed in it all.