Reviews by sailorgirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I absolutely love this story so far!! it is so cute!  I have already fallen in love with the characters.  I can't say much more because I am only at the beginning!  Onward I go!

 

PS. That picture of the seattle is GORGEOUS! I gasped!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

I loved this story! thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923126
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

seriously does this story EVER get better for them!! its horror after horror after horror!  i had nightmares last night, i have daymares!  i have never read something so horrific in my life, i just feel like sobbing right now! i just want to get to the good stuff where they start the escape! and the killing of aro and james and demitri! seriously the only thing getting me by is all the different murder scenrios im coming up with.  i have already given up reading this once, because i couldnt take it anymore, but then i came crawling back needing to know what happens, and thinking to myself "how many more rape chapters could she possibly write?"  but that logic was flawed, its still going and its just worse.  I really like you as an author, and this story had a great potential for me!  i was super excited about the plot.  but i think you just put too much focus on the descriptive details of these rape and torture events.  i mean its been the same thing for over 25 chapters.  its just too much.  i have read many stories that have rape scenes in it, and i can handle it just fine, but 25 chapters of the absolute worst of the worst, is just more than my heart can take.  especially without even a glimpse of hope for them.  so i have to call it quits.  who knows, i might just be back tomorrow to try again, but i dont think i can do it. 

but thanks anyways and good luck!!!

ps ive never really written a bad review before so im really hoping i wasnt mean, that wasnt my intention! i even read my review to my parents to see if they thought it was too mean, and they gave the okay.  so i hope you arent offended!



Author's Response:

No it wasn't mean. I totally respect you for your thoughts. At first I was like what???? only because the last three chapters have been pure fluff between Edward and Bella and Alice and Jasper. Things did get better for them. They aren't off the island, and wont be for a while, but it is very different. I hate to leave a person hanging, and you got really far in the fic and probably want to know the end. I'd love for you to friend me on facebook and I'll tell you the rest of the fic so you don't have to read any more bad parts, or if you want, skim and skip a head a bunch of chapters. My email is nocturnalem@gmail.com  search that on fb or nocturnalemi@gmail.com on fb (I've never checked the second email but it will get u my alternate fb profile) Once again, I'm sorry for the nightmares. That was never my intention. Then again, when I wrote this over a year ago now, I never intended anyone to read any of it.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

im liking the progress they are making!!! and yay for some light normal fun!!  im actually looking forward to chapters now instead of being scared of them!! lol.  ok im still a little scared but im starting to have hope! which is GREAT!  its come to the point where i think ive passed most of the possible horrible things, except for the virginity loss and a few other scenerios that im hoping does NOT happen!!  and im so not looking forward to edward having to have her in front of people, that is just wrong, and im still hoping that edward can talk to aro more about that.  i am in constant fear of whenever james is alone with bella, but im hoping that the interference will continue.  they are definitely smarting up!  also, im totally adding victoria to my bitch list!  i used to feel bad for her, but now that she is going out of her way to torture others, its over.

also, i want the cullens to start looking for them!!!



Author's Response:

Cullens are not looking. They believe theya are dead. No reason to look. But that will change eventually. :) 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

ok i must be a glutton for punishment! seriously, i am the cat that was killed by curiosity reincarnated!!

but YES!!! BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!! hahahahaha karma is a BITCH!! i love karma, i just might marry her! james and demetri deserve sooooo much more but this is a fantastic start!!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

omg so i have come up with the PERFECT plan!! i really hope you use it! so here we go....

so nobody wants anyone to watch edward take bellas virginity, but that has to happen and edward has gotten it down to 5 people including him so that make 4 extra people watching.  i really really desperately dont want james or demetri in there!  james shouldnt be in there for sure!  so ive come up with the perfect way to make that happen...

so edward is going to go to aro, upset that he has to share his only first with bella.  he explains to aro that he didnt get bellas first handjob, blowjob or ass fucking (he has to sound upset and with harsh words of course)  and that bella was supposed to be his,  and he wanted to be the first for all those things because he wanted to punish her for doing it badly, but now she has gotten used to it because of james and demetri.  so edward conitues to be upset that he doesnt want share his ONLY first with the man that had gotten to take all the other firsts.  he then procedes to ask if he can pick 2 of the people and aro can pick the other 2.  (or he can start with this).  but he requests that the other 2 be men that have never touched her before.  (this leaves the visitors, he can even suggest that they auction off the spot to be witness)  then edward picks aro and jasper.  edward tells aro that he would be honored to choose aro because he taught him so much and he wants to share this special moment with his grandfather (make it super mushy and super super ego-boosting so aro will feel so happy that he says yes to ALL of this) and then he picks jasper because he thinks that jasper should be witness to the ceremony since he is just joining the lifestyle.  then aro gets to pick 2 outsiders of his choice  except for anyone that has touched her already (so not james or demetri)!!!!

omg im so super excited about my plan!!!! i dont even care if you dont use it as long as james doesnt get to be part of it!!! omg james will be sooooo pissed!!! HAHAHAHA!!

or edward can request that the very first time be just edward and bella (because of him not wanting to share his ONLY first) but promises after the deed is done, they will come and do it again in front of everyone.

oh! and edward talks to aro about how if only 5 people can be there, then he wants all the cameras blocked so nobody can try and watch!

omg james CANNOT be there!! he should not be able to witness this!! it will be amazing to read his reaction to not being allowed to be there!!! omg it would be awesome!!!! *evils laughs*



Author's Response:

i love ur ideas... its mostly already written.. i just wanna say trust me... and for this amazing review, contact me, and i'll share as much as I can about what really is going to happen. I just think ur review is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

if that butcher tattooed bella, i want edward to act furious about it!! heres why...

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edward sees the tattoo, gets furious saying that her perfect flawless skin has been permanently marked by ANOTHER man.  he is furious because the best part of her flawless skin was that it was so beautifully marked by HIS own hand! and now another man has permanently marked his bride. he tells them that a tattoo completely ruins her perfect skin and is trashy. and the mother of his heir will not be trashy.  he then demands that as soon as it heals that they take her to a plastic surgeon (on the mainland, see where im going with this) to get it removed at once! he even goes on to say that the surgeon must be a female because he is not going to let another man permanently mark her.  he tells them that he has imagined taking her for years and that he is furious that she is marked by another man when he finally gets to.  maybe some point in that scene he says "now who marked my bride on my wedding day!!???" all angry like.  first he takes her of course cuase the whole blood virginity thing needs to work, maybe he doesnt take the chance to look at her when he takes her, so that afterwards he notices the tatto and gets angry.  but after he says "what the hell is this? who marked my bride on my wedding day???!!!!" after the butcher tells him he did all proud like, edward punches him going "first you butchered my fuckslut and now you marked my bride?!!!!!! get him out of here, before i kill him" "how dare you mark MY pure bride! she was MINE to mark tonight!!! now all i can see is the mark of another man! i want it removed immediately!"  "we are taking her to a plastic surgeon to remove it as soon as it heals properly! i will not be put up with a constant reminder of another mans mark when i fuck my wife!!"  maybe you can even squeeze in there something mentioning how his fuckslut and his wife are his property, and you cant scar them without his permission. or something like that.  i know you probably already have the next chapter written, but i had to get this out there, it was consuming my brain!!! plus, i think that it is an excellent idea that needed to be shared.  someone needs to punch the butcher!!! id even be satisfied with aro yelling at him and punishing him by not allowing him at the consumation ceremony!!

thoughts?

 



Author's Response:

well, the tattoo is Aro's wedding gift, and his idea, so he wont be upset. Edward will be, but I promise there is a light coming... and there is also a dark end for Vladimir. 

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

im sorry if my earlier review sounded harsh.  i think i was just emotional about the split and tried to rant it off.  i apologize if i sounded rude.  i try really hard not to write rude reviews.  sometimes i get too invested in what i read and i react poorly.  just so you know, when i said "dramatic much?" i was NOT referring to your writing, i was referring to bella as the person.  i tend to write reviews that express my emotions to what i just read, whether its excitement or frustration. 



Author's Response:

No worries, sailorgirl. No one liked Bella's reaction. I'm glad you like the story and I appreciate any review you want to give me. See you next time. xoxoxo

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

dramatic much? i seriously hate it when this happens.  it makes girls look stupid and irrational.  bella needs to get over herself.  even her best friend told her that she was mistaken.  edward deserves to at least be heard and explain himself.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

awww i loved this story so much!! what a happy ending!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

yay charlie!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

where is charlie!?? why didnt he come see his baby girl?  i want some charlie/edward banter and father/future son in law convos! they are my favorite!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

aww what a sweet reunion! im so glad the breakup didnt drag!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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As a homeless drifter in Kentucky, Edward Masen finds work and a home with widow Esme Cullen and her two young daughters. Will he have the strength to stay away from Bella, whose innocence captures his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Shena's Storys to Read, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168630 Read Count: 65046
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Sep 2012
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: A place to call our own

awww what a sweet ending to such a sweet story!!! i absolutely loved this!! thanks for sharing this with us!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324374
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother.  Losing a loved one is not easy.  I hope you and your family start healing soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419156
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

this story was wonderful!!  the emotions in this story was felt so deeply.  it really touched me.  this was incredibly well written and with such depth.  im so glad i got a chance to read this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

omg they must have lots of babies!! i want a wedding ceremony and some hot hot 19th century lovin!!!! i want them to reinvent 19th century lovin!! i think they should be ahead of their time in that department!!  but i dont want her to get pregnant right away, let them have some fun for a couple months first....maybe that unrealistic but give them at least a month or two for some fun good times!!   ooo maybe fast forward for charles to grow up and get married and take over the farm. then bella can retire!  cause we all know that she wont quit working! 

i hope you get some great ideas because i dont want this story to end either!!!!!

ps im so glad that your daughter is doing well!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

im usually so impatient for the sexing to begin, but i am actually glad they are waiting until he is better!  i think this is the first time ive ever been glad they waited!!! i know, shocker!!  but i am glad.  i want him to be healthy and at full strength.  i cant wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

aww i cant believe this story is over!!! it was absolutely wonderful!! i loved every moment of it!

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

omg i love this story! its hilarious and hot as FUCK!!  i cant wait for more!!!

Summary:

Flighty Bunny obsessed writer Bella and IT business owner Edward have a crash encounter, leaving them stuck together, literally. The first of many interesting encounters. A tale of plot bunnies, fate, flashlights, and lol. Short chapters and laughs.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10748 Read Count: 5243
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 10 Dec 2012
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Starbucks Around the Corner

OMG these two are priceless!! i absolutely love this story!  they are hilarious and it is super sexy!!  I want more!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152446
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I KNEW IT!!!!!  love this story so far! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

AH i LOVED this!!! i loved it so much!!

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

now i totally understand that she is way too broken for her and edward to do anything... but you also said it would be a slow burn... so does that mean EVENTUALLY it will happen?  i know it wouldnt be anytime soon, but ever?  ill read the story either way because i LOVE the premise of this, but some lovin' would be a great thing to look forward too!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285526
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - apple harlot

awww! i absolutely loved this story!! it was so unbelievably sweet! im gonna miss all of these guys!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

ok i fucking ADORE vicky!!!!  omg she is amazing and hilarious and awesome! 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast

omg that proposal was so precious!! and his proposal to lil bit was so adorable i shared it with my family!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

one, two, three... "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok this answers a lot of questions but what is with all the injuries?? is she hurting herself??  and why was mike being so hostile towards edward??  its not like he is really married to her.  no jealous husband here.  what is with all the "fear faces" when mike is around?  why is mike trying to keep them apart?? why did bella leave greg?? so many questions still!! love this story so far!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOVED this story!!  great plot and great execution!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Chance brought him to her home town and into her home. Awakening desires drew her to him, but made him run. Distance and time can't squelch the knowledge that is coming to light. Magnets drawn to each other, Edward and Isabella share a need for control—he needs to have it, and she wants to give up. Will they get want they want? How far will Isabella go to get under Masen's Command?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8962 Read Count: 21871
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Sep 2013
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

HOLY SHIT!!!  that was so fucking hot!!  you should so continue this!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ok i am in love with this story too!!! btw i love witches!! they are my favorite supernatural thing.  magic is awesome!  i am so excited for this story!!  i do notice it havent updated in a while.  well i hope my review gives you some good vibes and helps if you are feeling stuck!  i cant wait to see what happens next!! 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

im sooo excited that this story is going on!! yay!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272409
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

yay for babies!!!! i cannot wait for the next chapter!!! edvard must come home soon!!!  i hope RL is getting easier to handle for you!!

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

omg i am loving this!!!  but i have a bad feeling that this is going to get super angsty!! i love a little angst but not too much, it weakens me!  i am such a romantic idealist, i can only deal with heartbreak for a few chapters.  i have a feeling my heart will broken a lot in this story. im kinda hoping they get married soon and all the angst happens after they are married! no cheating of course! but i want the confirmation of their love!  i rather have them battle france and socialites than eachother!  either way, i cant wait for the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082124
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

aw im so sorry for your loss! take any time that you need!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

ooo im super excited for their weekend away!! plus im in love with charlie, he is so sweet and i feel so horrible for him having so much regret!! i cant imagine the pain he is going through!! 

also, i just had to say, grand rapids in nowhere close to traverse city...its at least a 3 maybe 4 hour drive.  im a full blooded michigander.  just thought you should know, its not a big deal, i just couldnt NOT say anything! lol

cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

awwww yay!! he is awake!!  such a sweet reunion.

 

hmm maybe james was burned so badly he now needs to wear a black suit of armor and cape with a black breathing mask/helmet.... and now he is Darth Vader.  haha totally random i know, but for some reason my mind totally went there.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:( i can't find the pictures of her outfit and alice!!



Author's Response:

It should be up now...experiencing technical difficulties. Internet connection is spotty today. 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i sooo excited about this story!!! it sounds like it has loads of potential and I can't wait to see what you do with it! im sure it will be great though, as evidenced by your previous works!  im already on my toes waiting to see what happens next! i love alice so far! and i am dying to know about what happened in florida!! i already have a few theories floating around in my head, waiting to be crossed off as more clues are revealed!

im ready for some sweaty sexy firemen!!!  maybe some pole action?? (is that even real?) (if its not, can we pretend it is?)

ps. if edward is also a sailor and enjoys sailing on the lake, I WILL DIE!!  i live in michigan (east coast), and sail and have a deep love of my lakes! i have actually done some racing in chicago back in high school... now im getting sidetracked....

anyways i also love chicago, great city.  so there are many aspects of the story i am looking forward to!



Author's Response:

Your review made me laugh...the pole action? yes, we will make sure that there is pole action. And I've never written a sailor/boat scene...it's doable...Thank you for reading! Hugs! 

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

I hope your mom feels better!!

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82045
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this was such a beautiful chapter!!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oooooo i am super super excited for this story!!!!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG i am LOVING this!!! and i love your created language! that takes major skills, im super impressed!! i cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Summary:

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Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192179
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i think edward was brilliant!! i really do hope they can follow through with his "taking it slow" promise!  im still pretty apprehensive about bella and edward being coupled with other people.... except alice and bella, that was fine before... im hoping that if they are paired with other people, they at least get to be together... (for example: bella is paired with emmett, but edward is in the room with them to make it more comfortable.)  i would love a threesome,  im just hesitant about the pairs being different from canon. (mainly edward and bella).  but i am keeping an open mind!! and im super excited for each chapter update...like super duper excited!   you should think about making a blog for this story, and post outfits and stuff.  it doesnt need everyday clothes, just when they dress up and stuff.  oo and a picture of the house they will be in!!

until next time!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

hahaha YES!!!!!

Summary:

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A troubled girl, damaged beyond repair. A lost boy who promises he'll be there.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25012 Read Count: 34708
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2015 Updated: 11 Sep 2015
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ummmm i dont think this chapter belongs..... lol

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 90

DEATH BY STONING!!! or whips! or the chinese thousand cuts thing or whatever its called!

Restoration by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary:

Restoration

Fear and close-mindedness broke them apart. Will love bring them back together? Will their faith in love be restored? The third installment in the Renovations Trilogy.

Banner by Mina Rivera!


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49186 Read Count: 43968
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2015 Updated: 10 Apr 2016
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

omg, is it sick of me that i am already imagining hot sexy foursomes in the future!!!??? i want it! pretty please!

Summary:

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My name is Bella Swan. I'm 32 and still single. While all my friends have settled down and started their families, I'm still hanging around, looking for Mr. Right. I blame books; they've ruined me and gave me unrealistically high expectations of what my perfect man should be like. How am I supposed to settle down when no one I meet matches up to my book boyfriends?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40245 Read Count: 114931
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2016 Updated: 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ohh, ok. my bad

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I have to make a comment about the usage of the color red.  Red means all play stops immediately, that what is happening is making the person uncomfortable and wants to stop what is happening, but yet you have them keep going.  its just not right.  you cant be yellow and red at the same time.



Author's Response:

He asked what her safe colours are, NOT what colour she currently was.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124535
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed
Date: 22 May 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this story so far!  So how long till we hear from Edward?