Reviews by eviekinz
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315860
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I think Rosalie is full of shit and James is gross- no James...please

Bella Voce by Morgan Locklear Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bella Voce

Paris 1891: Bella is a popular stage vocalist and theatre owner. She's also a very powerful vampire. Edward is a piano teacher who attends one of her performances and captures her attention. Together they explore the Bohemian Revolution and each other

Banner by Mina

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208805 Read Count: 3654
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2011
Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night

I totally dig the dynamic between Bella and Jacob,

I also really like the role reversal of BxE here



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading!

I look forward to hearing your reviews as you progress with the story.

MOG

 

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Up In The Air

Oh my gosh- when Edward is talking about what he would do if he got a lady up to his room...chocked on my breakfast a little, too funny.  And this Edward is just too cute! 

If the carriage is a rockin' don't come a knockin'...

"When he sat down at the bench the line of his shirt was like a snowy horizon filled with blissful possibilities."  Dirty old women :D

"Although taking in Edward's appearance once more, he couldn't help but think that she was liable to break the thin lad in half."  I LOVE that this is a strong Bella!  Levitation...oooohhh

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps

"Alice used it for love. Bella used hers for reading."  What am I doing wrong...I use mine for sleeping :D

 

"He walloped himself in the face a few times while attempting to fasten his suspenders. He finally gave up, resigned to suffer saggy trousers."  seems like my boys always have saggy trousers (I teach high schoolers)  They all walk like penguins.

sometimes, I sign my name with angry jabs as well...

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Kiss

mmm that was a little showy...(just kidding) xx

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Pit

looking forward to listening to the music...you are a man of MANY talents MOG :D

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Lesson Learned

I really like the Alice Bella relationship and that Alice isn't a total flake.  The "overly excited pixie/sprite" is so overused in FF, it's nice to see a different dynamic!

 

Oh- and the scoundrels down by the river...totally had it coming :)

 

Hmm- Edward in only socks...yum (oh- sorry)

"icy licorice" that's Jagermiester, right?

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Love Returned

Sorry I've gotten behond on reviews- no good excuses anyway:

Jacob is such a doll.  I heart him.

 

Your lemons crack me up!  So original at times "Edward still thought like a virgin" "She looked down at the intimidating obstacle between her and his belly button"

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sunshine

I love this line: "He did not remember how he had gotten back home but recalled the rocking back and forth motion of his cocoon. It must have put him out like a baby and Bella had carried him like a stork carries a newborn"

 

"Rosalie observed that Edward was dressed to match the horse as soon as they walked outside" *SNORT*

 

Oh, Edward- you sill Nun virtue stealer

 

The week off after Edward was shot...I bet you got some HATE mail my friend...*cheeky!*

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Moonlight

Oh MOG~ R-e-s-p-e-c-? Where is the T?  It fell off after reading this: "Morgan Locklear owns every a-ha album ever released."  

 

I can tell you are married and fear your wife: ""You killed him!" Bella grabbed his groin and twisted savagely."

 

Can a vampire hyperventilate?

 

I love that Edward is so in Love with Bella that he's willing to forgive her just about anything!  Even turning him into a blood sucking leech.

 

Nice take of the New Moon Edward save :)

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Big Spoon

"Morgan Locklear wrote a letter to Nintendo thanking them for Mario Galaxy 2"  ~ I love it too!

I liked that you did the Bella Edward POV before Jake's POV of the shooting.  

 

Interesting twist on the thirst of the vampire with age.


Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: House Call

Vamp smexin' MOG style is HOT

I really dig the Edward Jacob freindship that is forming


Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: House Arrest

"Morgan Locklear owns his IMAX tickets to see Eclipse."  It was bitchin on the imax big screen- you could see wig hairlines!

 

Bella as a pirate- HA!

 

Edward~ large and in charge!  What a douche :(

 

"is your secret weapon." anytime I hear or read secret weapon I always hear the voice from "an american tail" and the lady mouse that has the speech impediment...

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Sleeping With The Fishes

oh my...somehow I think my fave vamps will be ok :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

Seriously- great update- loved the mincemeat pie mishap- glad im not eating it.  can't wait for the next!

 



Author's Response:

What mishap?  J/k.  Glad you liked it Evie.  A very memorable Thanksgiving holiday will be coming soon.

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

Can't believe you left us hanging Missy!



Author's Response:

Not for long though ;)

Reviewer: eviekinz Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-Not Again

If Emmett needs any help with the Sex toy empire, let me know.  I know Rose isn't much help since she's busy trying to broker an infant.

 

I see you thwarted my secret plan with Edward again by NOT tearing Dulian limb from limb...

 

Bella not preggers- *wheeeh*

 

It ended sweet and there was still some funny :)



Author's Response:

I bet you could help Em...lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Evie!