Reviews by krazi4TwiSaga
Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

dlir

Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Night

haha... you got that right... Poor Bella is enduring hell cause everyone wants her man... can somebody please FedEx Jasper Whitlock to Forks Wa.... I´m just saying...lol...great chapter.. I´m enjoying this.. when I should be sleeping...lol..

 

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I love that......paging Jasper ....lol....xoxox DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Then dont

phew...is right... I was getting nervous... glad he threw Tania out with yesterdays trash where she belonged.. no suprise there...lol...great chapter BB!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Pshhh on Tania...lol.....

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The night part 2

Awww.... that was a really sweet night they spent together... Can´t wait til Charlie finds out... and when we meet the rest of the Cullen .clan..great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter...I love each review. Its keeps me wanting to write...xo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Good Morning

LOVED IT... GLAD THEY FINALLY GOT SOME ALONE TIME AND ROSE HAS GOT HER BACK... I´M NOT SURE I LIKE THIS ALICE THOUGH...GREAT CHAPTER!!!

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Hehe ohh poor Alice...I had to make her different from the nice bubbly pixie...DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Pictures

OKAY AFTER THIS I KINDA UNDERSTAND WHY CHARLIE´S A JERK.. I SAID KINDA.... POOR RENEE... SHE SEEMS LIKE SHE FEELS OBLIGATED TO ME... PHIL WAS A DOUCHEBAG... GLAD THAT RENEE IS IN HER CORNER NOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER... CAN´T WAIT TO MEET THE CULLENS

 

KRAZI

XOXOXO



Author's Response:

Im so glad ur enjoying this story...xoxo DLIR 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Dream

UMMMM...YEAH...OOOOOOKAAY...

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

hahahaahah

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: My future

Awww...... that was wonderful.... I´m so glad she´s has a chance to get out... gee... her family is suffocating her... she´s an adult for God´s sake... the end was super sweet!! great chapter!!!!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thanks xoxooxoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Tender Kiss

phew... I was nervous to meet Renee, but she was pretty darn sweet.... I love the necklace....great chapter.... I just love these two..

 

Kraxi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I really love these two together as well.....:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ms. Cupid

Cullen Family time was perfect... at first I thought Carlilse was gonna be trouble, but everything went perfect... I super excited that Esme was so sweet... Jasper is sweet as usual...let´s just hope he can handle Alice and she doesn´t bust a gasket... great chapter!!!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Loved the Cullen house too.....

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Saturday Night

Wooooooooow!!!!! the vault sex was Da Bomb!!!!!! Awesome BB.. but I officially wanna kick Angela´s Assssssss... she´s such a hater!!! stupid slut didn´t even notice when Alice dissed her.... poor Jasper... Bella poor thing... I really hope she doesn´t give up on Edward because Alice is being stupid....great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

yah DA BOMB......love that u enjoyed it that much xoxoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Happy Fucking Birthday

Ummmm.....WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay we started out good... Alice forgave Bella and hooked up with Jazz... all was right with the world.... until ya left me with this cliffie... hmmmmm... all I´m gonna say is... I´ve trusted you this long... I´m gonna keep trusting.... good chapter!!! I´m off to grab a shot of stoli!!! lol...

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

GAH.....I hope u stick with me......*hides in fear* 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Bella was here

This was gut wrenching... i nearly cried reading this... poor Edward... I knew when he walked to the door.. he was gonna wanna buy the house for her.... I love him for hanging in there ever though Charlie is a ginormous ¨Dickhead¨ he´s only going to loose Bella in the end... especially when she finds out Edward broke up with her because he threatened him...love it babe... you´ve got me on pins and needles..

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Gah....welll ur theory is GREAT but im not quite sure its gonna go that way....Hope you like what i have in store  xoxoo DLIR

Summary: Past Featured Story

ttb

When the Cullens lose Alice and Rose in the battle with the Volturi, Bella must become the glue holding the family together. Alice makes the greatest sacrifice of her existence to ensure Jasper lives on.

ExB, BxEm, BxJ, ExJ, BxJxE (Ending).

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Edward/Jasper, Bella/Emmett, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184848 Read Count: 63001
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces

Just started your story.  Sad beginning losing the pixie and Rose, but i like what I´ve read so far! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Getting Warmer by eiluned price Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. AU. BxE. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159812 Read Count: 6189
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: LGA

Great chapter!  I´m really enjoying the story!!!

 

krazi

xoxo

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

stories/38123/images/Kristen-Stewart-GQ8-1[1].jpg

Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

ok...interesting start... let see where you take this baby....lol....

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, Hope it lives up to your expectations!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hmmmm...purple satin...coffee filters... bagels..... water valves... this is heating up...can´t wait for more...lol...great chapter

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! Thank you.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I sure would love to have Edward living across the hall from me! I would buy him more than just coffee filters.  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

That would be nice, wouldn't it? Thank you!! 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was tense, and full of angst, but I absolutely loved it!  I really think it´s James sending the flowers.  When she had dinner with Angela, she said,¨that he loved her in his own sick and twisted way, because Bella wasn´t just another name in his notebook.¨ So, my stalker vote goes to James, but I know Edward is leaving Twilight for Bella;  I just hope he gets home in time!  Great chapter!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

You're the only one who picked up on that. Well, and said something about it. But, You'll find out on Tuesday! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You sneaky, sneaky little girl!!! Lol!  You tricked me!  Of all people, Mike douchbag Newton. Wait until Emmett gets ahold of him, he´s in trouble!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks for reading and leaving a review! I appreciate the support.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Whew!  That was close!  Yay!  Eddie´s home for good, I´m so glad that it´s all over.  I really thought Bella was going to be preggers, cause the had some hot unprotected sex before he left!  Lol! There´s always next time. ;)  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Since this is rated NC-17, I hope we're all adults here. We'll pretend that they are responsible enough to have discussed it at some point. Especially because of James, eew!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Whaaaaaaaaat!  Another cliffie!  You sneaky... sneaky... girl!  Poor NegotiiatorWard,  he´s going to need Bella to kiss that boo-boo and make it all  better!  Let´s hope Charlie is able to save the day.  Bella´s not going to like this news... AGAIN!  Poor girl can´t catch a break.  I can´t wait to find out what happens... no pressure! *coughs*  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Your reviews crack me up! Thank you. Yes, it's been a rough few months for these two. Updating next week.  :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Phew... I´m glad that Edward was okay.  That was really smooth of Bella to just agree to move in on the sly, so when he asked her to it was pretty much done.  Lol!  I´m so glad she Tanya in her place.  That broad can never take a hint.  OMG!  That proposal was the bomb!  It was so sweet of him to propose right at midnight!  What a way to bring in the new year.  I´m really going to miss this story.  Two more chapters!  Awe man, but I guess all good things must come to an end!  :(  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words! I'm going to miss it, too. Thanks for reading!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bi

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yeah, no offence but Granny Esme is an old douchebag!  Bella is really being a hardass to Edward, but then again, I don´t blame her.  I have faith and patience, he´ll win her back.  Great chapter! I tried looking at the pictease, but the link wouldn´t work. Is there anyway you can put it in where you can just click the link?

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

 

Pic tease Link: http://pictease.blogspot.com/

 

Wow! You all are truly amazing! I’ve never had such an immediate response to a chapter before, so thank you for that! Even though my review replies may seem standard I swear I read every single word and answer or clarify anything I can at the time. When I first started writing BI I thought 100 reviews would be cool and I’m now over 1,400 which is absolutely amazing!

I won’t bore you with announcements so I’ll make this quick! Blind Intentions is being votes on in the Rare Gem Awards and Avant Garde Awards. Links to both are in the bottom a/n of the update. Also, there is a link for a contest I’m co-hosting. Voting opens up Wednesday, so please take a peak and vote! Lots of amazing wintery stories to choose from!

A piece near and dear to my heart that I actually love more than BI---I know gasp, is Breaking Faith. Public voting begins Dec 5th for the Cherry Exchange so check it out and vote!

Enough of that, onto what you really want! The teaser for Chapter 15:

“McDonalds?” He looked so angelic and innocent, I just wanted to save the image in my head forever. I nodded and the cutest grin played on his lips.

“Now it may be a little cold,” I warned as I pushed the bed’s tray table over him as he sat up to eat.

“Don’t care...” he took a bite. “Must eat....” and another. “So...so good.” He devoured french fry after french fry while alternating with his cheeseburger.

The doctor in me screamed to tell him to slow down, but the dad told the doctor to shut the hell up.

Bella started picking at her salad while I made work of my own meal.

I’d hoped this would be the first of many family meals to come in the future.

Love to you all!
Kelly (SLM)

PS. You can find me on twitter at @SammieLynnsMom or hop into the BI Twilighted Thread to share your thoughts, opinions, theories...etc. Remember, in the month of December I’ll be selecting 2 people at random, via the thread, to star in a one-shot I’m writing where Esme gets hit by a train! http://www(dot)twilighted(dot)net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=12545

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Nathan, I hope the little guy gets better.  He really wants his parents to get together. I too was glad that the pictures weren´t drawn because she hurt him.  Poor Alice, she really meant well.  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you all so much for taking the time to read and review Chapter 15. The ride is going to start becoming slightly more wild from here on out. No ETA on Chapter 16, sometime next week though. On top of the teaser in this review reply, check out The Fictionator’s Blog & the PicTease Blog on Monday’s for additional teasers. I also post random teasers and answer questions in the Blind Intentions thread on Twilighted!

Right now the Cherry Exchange has opened their public voting poll up until Dec 15th. I wrote a one-shot called Breaking Faith :) They’re allowing all to vote for their Top 3, on top of having a reader’s challenge. If you read & review all 34 entries in the Cherry Exchange, you can submit your reviews in for a chance at winning a t-shirt! More details on their FFn site, so please check it out! http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/u/2530160/The_Cherry_Exchange

Hope everyone has a wonderful week! Here is a Chapter 16 Teaser:
“Are you sure?” Bella  with pleading eyes.

“Yeah, it’s just...I don’t even know where to stay,” I sighed. “I’m gonna go call my dad.”

As I stood to walk away and find my phone Bella spoke up again.

“Edward, I know we’ve never been extremely close, but you used to be able to talk to me. I don’t know what I did to make that change, but I am here to listen if you need someone to talk to.” I could see the distance forming in her eyes and it killed me to see her like this.

“You didn’t,” I called out to her as she turned her back to me.

She turned around with a puzzle looked.

“You didn’t do anything wrong. You never did, it’s me. It’s always been me, then and now.” Bella’s face grew serious as she nodded and walked away.

Three rings on my phone later and my dad answered.

“I need a referral for a psychologist.” I ignored the pleasantries and got straight to the point of why I had called.

“I thought you both liked Dr. Banner, it may take...” I cut him off.

“Not for Nathan...for me,” I clarified.

“Oh.” Silence.

Love to all!
Kelly (SLM)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow... that was really kind of scary when Jimmy appeared.  I really hope he isn´t diagnosed with DID.  Esme and Tanya were real pieces of work!  Both skanks in my opinion.  Can´t wait to see how Edward´s therapy goes, maybe it will be the link to helping him and Bella start to work on their feelings for each other.  Who knows?  Keeping my fingers crossed!  Good luck with the 3rd round voting!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review Chapter 16 of Blind Intentions :) It means a lot to see what others thing and feel...good, bad, or indifferent!

Blind Intentions is up for 3 Avant Garde Awards in Round 2 for Best Shock Value, Best Must Read, and Saddest/Make You Cry! Check it out and vote! http://twilightfb-awards(dot)blogspot(dot)com/p/vote.html

Also my cherry exchange submission: Breaking Faith is up for voting until tonight! Take a look and vote, you can choose your top 3! http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/u/2530160/The_Cherry_Exchange

I hope to have Chapter 17 out early next week and will start writing ahead so Christmas shouldn’t affect my updating schedule!

Until then, here is a short teaser!

“So be honest, my dad called you?” I questioned the second I sat down.

“You’re very smart Edward, and yes your father may have called.” Dr. Devon was an older man who I was pretty sure I’d passed a time or two in the hallways, but never stopped to talk. He was newer, no wife, no kids that I knew of. People raved about him, but I didn’t really know him.

“I don’t really know how this works,” I admitted honestly.

“It’s simple, I ask questions, you answer. You talk, I listen, and visa versa.” I nodded and he began. “So tell me why you wanted to talk to someone.”

“Two months ago I was married to someone who I thought I loved, my family wasn’t perfect but somewhat normal, I thought I was a good enough father to my son and was wrong, and I’m slowly starting to realize I let my work invade my life.”

“What changed?” He asked.

“Well my son was kidnapped and almost murdered. My wife was behind his kidnapping, my mom wrote a note trying to exonerate my wife, my parents are now divorcing, and I’m realized things about my son’s mother that I never knew before. Oh and I was the equivalent of a present, deadbeat dad.” I laughed at the mockery which was now my life.

Thank you so much!
Kelly (SLM)

Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48039
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: A Sub Search: Epilogue

 

~Kasi~

Well, this is a bittersweet moment, I hate to say goodbye to these two, but I know that all good things must come to end end! Lol!  I am happy to say that I managed to review everyone of these wonderful chapters.  And this epilogue was no different, I couldn't have asked for a better ending,  And to see my name in the final author's note, brought a tear to my eye!  Thanks for the acknowledgement and I promise to be waiting with baited breath for your next masterpiece! Lol! I guess until you post something new, I'll start on My Sister's 3, I can't wait!  Thanks for the kind words and pimping my story!  Now get to writing and give me something new to read!

 

Luv ya bb!

~Kraz~i

xoxo

Well, here I go for the last time... rating then submit!



Author's Response:

Krazi~ My wonderful friend....Thank you so very much for being a true light in my life whiel I wrote this story.  I told you that I woudl lay credit where it was due, and you are the one that instilled the trip off to chicago in my head for the Epi.  Of course I would take one last minute to pimp you out to my wonderful readers, because your story KICKS BUTT!  Congrats on your nominations in the Tomato Soup awardsbetween my two stories I was nominated 11 times, I doubt I will win, I am up against some pretty tough compition, but I am completely honored, just because I was nominated.  Sadly enough, I slacked on gettign my nominations turned in, and feel like a shitty reader of my favs.  I am sure that you will like My Sisters 3 it is a pretty decent stalker story, it got reviews, where people said to me..."You write a really good crazy person!"....I was not sure that I shoudl take that as a compliment, but I did...LOL  As for somethign new to read...I can do that for you my dear....Actually in the authors note, there was the info about the new story, it is a collab with Jess2002 and our author name will be JessAndTAT.  It is another stalker story, it will be a forbidden romance type book, combined with a mysterious stalker, and of course some hot ass lemons, because well....I enjoy writing them!  If you ever want to check and see what I am up to check me out on twitter AT teamalltwilight of course or facebook I am Kasi Teamalltwilight.  Jess is going to work on making us a blogspot, (Maybe you could give us some hints??? Since your blogspot rocks!) for the new story and our profile over at fan fiction  has a poll to vote on the title choices for the new story.  So if you have a minute check out the profile over there, and vote.  The only thing that I will say about who is stalking poor Professor Edward, will be a HUGE surprise....the only people I will willingly eliminate from suspects is Alice, cause she is his twin sister, Esme, cause she is his momma, and Bella, cause she is the dective who is finding herself falling into a forbidden love with him, since she is supposed to be protecting him, not sexing him up.  HMMMM....YUMMY!  I am grateful for all of the story love you have shown me along this journey in A Sub Search....I luv ya too bb! XOXO.

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New

Kasi, Kasi, Kasi-

 

What can I say Hon, parting is such sweet sorrow! I just hope this won´t be the last story from we get from you.  You´re an amazing writer and it´s been a pleasure taking this journey with you.  I agree that you´re leaving it at a good place, even though I´m going to miss these two.

I was right about the rings, even though I was wrong about who was going to propose. So one out of two isn´t bad! lol!  Christmas and Paris were perfect and maybe as an outtake we can witness the trip that Bella, Edward and Katie take to Chicago.

Now what I would like to see in the epi? Hmm... I guess I would love to see them with their hands full of kids, since they want to use a surrogate and have Bella implanted as well.  A mommy Dommella and a subDaddyward would be cute to watch.  Thank you again for an amazing story and I proudly write my second to last review.  And might I add, I´ve reviewed every chapter! Squeee!

 

Krazi

xoxo

 



Author's Response:

Krazi~

I think you may have just helped me with my story and you will see why when I write the epi, I will even point out who gave me the idea in the authors note, so be sure to read it.  I love not havign an outline when I write a story, because it gives me the freedom to shoot from the hip.  I have written this entire story, without a guide.  Thanks for saying that I am an amazing writer.  That compliment coming from you, makes me feel really good.  I am so glad that you have been here throughout this entire story and have reviewed eacha dn every chapter.  THANK YOU! 

I sent a message to my pre-reader Jess several months ago about a story idea I had.  I love her writings and I have always wanted to co-write a story with someone.  So I pitched my idea of a stalker story where Edward is being stalked.  Her and I sent a few emails back and forth and have shared a few phone calls discussing it too.  Once I have this story completely wrapped up, I will finish writing the first chapter I started.  I am going to enjoy writing this story, because most of the time it is Bella who is the victim, this time Edward will be.  It will be a mystery/romance/drama type of story, but it will be a really good read.  Wait until you see who I pitched to Jess as the stalker......Bwahhahhhaahhaahhaa.....It is purely evil!  LOL

I hope to see you on board for that.  I am also currently helping a girl with a story she is writing it is not yet posted here, but if it does get posted here, the first few chapters will need to be re-beta'd because they lack a few common things.  But the story is good, if it gets posted here it will most likely show me as a co-writer, but not positive.  It is called Year Of Hell by weekitty on FF.  She approched me for help, and I have been re-writing each chapter before it posts since like chapter 4.  She has a wonderful storyline, one of the freshest ones I have read in a long time.  But the skills to tell the story properly are lacking.  She writes out her chapters and they come to me, they are okay, but they need tweaking and spelling and grammar adjustments.  Without Word, I suck, but life goes on.  Anyway so watch for that too, if you want. 

Thanks again for always reading and reviewing.  xoxo

Kasi~

PS....WHERE IS YOUR NEXT CHAPTER?  I am seriously missing me some domward!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter

Kasi-

Imagine my surprise when I discovered that I had not reviewed this chapter!  Shame on me!  I could have none of that, so here I am, a day late and a dollar short, but I´m here.  Lol!  

 

Of course I loved it!  It was so sweet how because of Master Peter´s rule, they had to go back to dating like teenagers.  Too cute!  And when Master Peter reprimanded Bella and handed her her ass was priceless!  

I´m so glad that she enjoyed her time with the Cullen´s and the no sex rule has been lifted!  Somebody´s getting ready to rumble!  Lol!

Great chapter as always bb!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Hey baby!  You know that old saying? "Better late, then never"  works for reviews too!  I love that you always remember me....Thank you!  No worries, you missed no moneys....don't you know???  We write the hot sexy stuff and don't get paid for it!  LOL

I am so glad you loved it.  I had so much fun writing a lot of different parts of this story thus far, but having Master Peter hand Bella her ass (as you so eliquintly put it) was the bomb diggity for me.  I needed the reader to see both her sides and I think between the Mike crap and Master Peter they seemed to bring her down a notch, low enough to re-evaluate her own being. 

I am writing the epi right now and striving to give my readers the things they asked of me.  I also found out this past week that A Sub Search is up for 2 different (so far) Tomato soup awards, I am rather excited about that.  My Sisters 3 is up for 1 award too.  I am kinda excited, I have been nominated a few other times, but never.  I did however win the Dommella's dungeon for A Sub Search as a one shot, so no big complaints.  I am really excited about wrapping up this story, and giving it closure.  I have a really excellent idea for the next story swimming through my head.  So watch for that....Edward is being stalked!!!  OMFG...like any one of us HOT TO TROTT Fan fic momma's wouldn't stalk him given the chance!  LMAO

Anyway thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  <3 you big time girlie. xoxo

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On

I really enjoyed the first chapter, and will patiently wait for the updates.  Great start!  I know how old Bella it, but how old is Edward and where do they both work?

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Dear Krazi~

I will have the answers to your questions in the next chapter.  I have jsut about wrapped up the main part of writing for "My Sisters 3" and as soon as it is done and over with then this story will take over my full attention!  I am just so proud of how well it did in the vote that I had to share it with everyone now!  I am super excited to get it out there so you shouldn't have to wait to long to get an update.  Once I get going chapters will fly out if it is anything like MS3.  Thank you so much for the story love, reading and reviewing!

XOXOXO
Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend

Whoa... that was so hot!  I love it!  Okay Edward is 40, but how old is Bella?  I love these two.  This is a really good story so far! Can´t wait for more, patiently of course!  Lol!  Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Bella is 41 I gave her age in chapter 1...but heck chapter 2 was pretty hot and easy to forget all about the first chapter.  LOL

Thank you so much for the story love!  IT is much needed, and makes me feel better.  I have been stressing and worrying so much over this chapter.  I jsut do not want to let my readers down and I do nto want to write crap and toss it out there.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene

Sheesh... loved it!  Even though you called me a cockblocker for my teaser!  Lol!  I can´t wait to hear Bella´s thoughts on the test weekend. We all know that subward is putty in her hands, already dreaming of forever.  Great chapter hon!

 

~Krazi~

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Krazi~~~

I am so glad that you loved it!  I did call you a cock blocker but lets face it it was true!!!  LOL  But I still love your fucking story it rocks totally!!!  SOOO MUCH!!!

Thank you for reading my story and for reviewing, next chapter will have some insight to their past's for us all to grip our minds around...they are so yummy together!

:)

Kasi~

XOXOXOXO

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day

That was some good back story. I enjoyed learning more about Edward and Bella's past. I can't wait to see where this goes, especially the Chicago trip! Great chapter hon!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Thanks so much for the kind review and for reading my story. The Chicago trip will not be for a couple of chapters but it will be interesting.  the next chapter ends on a much less boring place then this one, that is a promise. 

Kasi~

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night

Hey Kasi!

Another hot chapter!  Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!  And that scene has me heading to the shower! Lol! I can't wait to hear what he has to say about the scene and how they spend their down time in Chicago. I have a good feeling that things will be different between these two... guess I'll just have to wait and see!  Lol!  Great chapter Hon!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Thank you so very much and I am really glad that your liking it.  I hope that you know how much I think of your story too, it rocks my socks!  The talk they have about the scene will come out but not until the trip back home.  This weekend opens eyes, but not sure it can break down walls.  We will have to see.  I am sending the teaser the same as I always do if you do not have the teaser by tomorrow this time let me know check your junk mail just in case.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hump Day

Kasi

Wooo Hoooo! That was freaking awesome! I'm so glad they got to spend some E&B time, it was so sweet that the took time to get to know each other a little bit better. I definitely enjoyed the time they spent in the playroom as well! Can´t wait for their trip and see how that goes. Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

OMG Krazi~

Thanks for the awesome review......I have to tell you though I just read your update and OH MY SWEET JESUS.....HOT!  wowsa!

Thank you for reading and reviewing and for the fantastic reply too!  I love your story and I am so excited that you like mine too!  Thank you so much sweetie....Hurry and post your next chapter and I will be right on it for the next one here too!  (mine is off to beta NOW!)  HeeHeeHee!  Hugs! 

XOXOXOXO....Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip

And you call me a tease!  You so own me with this story!  I was so not expecting Mike to be Jess' new to the area cousin.  I hope there are more run-ins with him. I´m glad that Esme and Carlisle got to meet Bella. For some reason I think that this trip will be a turning point in their relationship.  I can´t wait to read the next chapter!  Great chapter, hon!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Yes Krazi~

I call you a tease, FOR GOOD REASON!!!  You own me with for the love of domination and you know it.  I am so on the edge of my seat waiting for them to like be together for real I can just taste it!  ARGHHHH!  I know I loved the mike card and what better way to bring him in then Jess....Thinking of more wicked and wild things for them to do on this weekend the next chapter is pretty freaking hot....or so I have been told from the pre-readers that have checked it out thus far.....It is so filled with lemons that the teaser is a mini lemon....I am sending that to you via the contact me button on your profile.  I will one of these days get my act together and get my blogspot all nice and awesome...LOL  right!

Thank you so much for reading nad reviewing and I am truely grateful for your story love it means EVERYTHING to me!

Seriously YOU ROCK!

Kasi~ xoxoxoxo

 

PS CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town

That was well worth the wait.  I really felt sorry for Edward when he thought that he´d over-stepped his bounds.  I´m glad that Bella was patient with him and let him make love to her.  

I love the way they are slowly developing an outside relationship. Can´t wait for more!  Great chapter Kasi!

 

Luv ya hon!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Thanks so much for the wonderful (as always) and kind words you have for me and my story.  It is reviews from people like you, butterflybetty, people like us, and a few other wonderful authors that really amaze me.  Thank you for continuing to support me and my story by reading and reviewing.  I am really happy that you are enjoying it.  The next chapter will post soon.  I sent you the preview like I normally do.  Congrats BTW for the Dommella's Dungeon First place win!  AWESOME!

Hugs!

Kasi~

xoxoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day

Hey there Kasi!

Of course this chapter was fucktabulus as always!!! Lol!  I almost cried for him, when he got punished and didn´t get to please her, but I understood her motives.  I´m just glad when given the choice he made the right one.  His journaling was moving as well.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter, to see her reaction to the journal entry and how they will go about doing things when they get back to RL!! 

Great chapter Babe!  I´ll be anxiously awaiting my teaser, so get to writing!

Laterzz!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

This is a HUGE struggle for me and to have the praise I get from readers is wonderful, but to get the kind words I get from other writers of such fantastic stories such as yours, Michele, Lori, Lisa, and several other writers whom I read and adore means the world to me....(I know my lovely run on sentence was showing my wordiness and grammar issues too!)  Stories like FTLoD, People Like Us, Be My Master, Headmaster, My Life Now, and so MANY MANY MANY more drive me.  I am so amazed by the love I feel from the reveiws I get.  I certainally do not get tons, but the ones I get make my struggle worth it.  So thank you for reading and reviewing and thank you for the story love you give me.

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound

Kasiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!

Okay, sooooo... I really wanna smack Bella right about now, but violence is never the answer! I know she´s got a lot on her mind, so I´m going to give her a reprieve!  Lol!  So, I will wait patiently and trust that you will straighten this mess out.  So, this is me... sitting... waiting.... *taps foot* .... yeah and right about now... you´re straightening... so chop... chop... get to it!  Lol!  Great chapter bb!  Can´t wait for my teaser!

Krazi

xoxo

 



Author's Response:

Krazi~

You are not alone in the wanting to smack Bella.  I want you to knwo that I seriously STRUGGLED writing her as a bitch.  It was HARD!  I literally posted the chapter 2 hours after I got it back from my pre-readers and my Beta had given it back to me just shortly over 24 hours before it got posted.  I struggled that much.  There will be more angst, but I promise a happy ending.  I snet your teaser before I even replied.  I am working on the next chapter it will cover a bit of time, and I can only promise that there will be emotions running wild from most of my loyal readers.  Yikes....Just keep the faith.....It might have to be my sig line next post.

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans

Kasi

Wow.... that was uhhh... something!  Mike is a stalker freak and poor Edward, I just want to cuddle him.  I was quite nervous when she called ´Red´  this cannot end well.  Bella is a basket case, she´s being stalked by Mike, loved by Edward, and threatened by Charlotte... Calgon needs to take her stressed a$$ away! Lol!  Great chapter hon!  I´ll just be over here cringing in the corner until you update!  Congrats and good luck with all the nominations!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

You know I love your story so much, and I am waiting on pins and needles for an update over there too!  I promise the next chapter is goign to be CHUCK full of a rather over needed conversation.  :) Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it!  Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! 

Enjoy….Kasi~

 

Chapter 12 Preview………………..

My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire.  I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night.  I can not believe I did something so stupid.  I need to fix this, and make this right. 

Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater.  It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over.  Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better.  Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet.  I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.

 

Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table.  The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen.  I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven.  Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal.  Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night.  I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo

Wowsers!  I so loved this chapter, but I was not expecting it to go like this.  I loved that they spent some Edward and Bella time together, I hope it served to somewhat put Bella at ease with having a different type of relationship.  The dream was scary, I almost thought it was real at first, but thankfully it wasn´t. You got me there girlie.  Shocker... it was Mike that had the meeting with Edward... okay he´s really a sick SOB!  i´m glad they caught that in time. Maybe they´ll set him up somehow to catch him.  Loved Master Peter, but was oh so shocked that he put them on a BDSM timeout!  Hahaha!  Poor E&B, I know  they can´t wait until Thursday!!! Lol!  Great chapter Hon!  Don´t worry about delays and RL... we´ll always be here waiting! 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

I wanted to do something different...I hate being a follower...lol.  Yeah I knew that most would be shocked by the dream, and to let the cat outta the bag on this, I changed how the ending would be, well parts of it anyway.  See I was going to have Edward get fed up with her bitchiness and end word on her, but I changed my mind because I was struggling so hard making Bella be a cold hearted bitch.  I know Mike is a wacko, and I love writing wacko's....but sadly his main damage is done and for now there is no immediate plans for him to return...all though, I would still love to have Bella bitch slap Jessica....LOL.  I love Master Peter too, and you know I felt so good about doing this and using him the chapter pretty much flew from my fingertips. I pride myself in reviewing to each and every review I get, and I am sorry that this reply is so late in coming.  Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it!  Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! 

Enjoy….Kasi~xoxoxo

 

Chapter 13 Preview………………..

I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house.  I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary.  I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship. 

 

We were kind of, weren’t we?  

 

I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary.  I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it.  I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’.  I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme.  Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France. 

 

I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married.  The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year. 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures

Kasi-

Ahhhhh!  How I´ve missed you!  Gah, real life is such a monster!  But thankfully, I´m all caught up with this yummie little treat and I must say, that you have really thrown me for a loop! I most certainly did not see that coming!  Mike is not only a douchebag, but a psychotic one at that! I was so worried he would have found the playroom and trashed it, but then he took pics of their sexy time in Edward´s kitchen!  WTF... that is wrong on so many levels.  I can´t wait to see where your going with this.  God, I can hardly wait, so get to writing! lol!  Excellent work, hon!  Update when you can!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

 

I promise that Mike's reign of crapola is well on its way to an end, I have been working pretty hard on getting a resolution.  There was no mention of the playroom, yet.  That is yet to come.  DUNDUNDUN! 

Thank you so much for all of your ongoing support, I am more grateful than you know.  I am super excited to start working on a new story, I seem to really dig stalker stories, and I have this idea that has been eating away at me.  Jess2002 and I are going to co-write it and it is going to put my other stalker story to shame.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story.  Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it!  Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! 

Enjoy….Kasi~

Next Chapter Preview………………..

Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face.  I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side.  As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face.  The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind.  I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing.  He is not safe, because of me.  I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.

The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin.  It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain.  I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today.  I am so tired of being stressed out.  I am not sure I can handle much more of this.  I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash.  Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world. 

“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.

“You look so beautiful, my love.”

“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.

“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen.  I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.

As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming. 

“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”

“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen.  Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules

Kaai-

Sorry this is lat bb, but I just gotta add my two cents! lol!  Love what you did with it and I´m glad that B didn´t turn away from Edward in some noble attempt to protect him.  Glad to see their going to get back to the D/s part of their relationship and Master Peter has taken them off of punishment!  Lol! Can´t wait for that I should be explosive!  Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Thanks so much for the wonderful reviews you always leave for me!  You are so kind, you have such a fuck~tastic story yourself, yet you take the time to show me story love.  I am so proud to call you a friend, and I am so grateful for your support and kind words.  Thank you so very very much!

Kasi~

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: A Peaceful Return, To Where We Belong

Kasi-

Whoa... I´m gonna need a cold shower after all that hot goodness!  Lol!  I thought she passed out there for a minute, subward really put it on her! haha!  That scene was smokin hot babe, loved it!  I´m glad that they decided to live together.  I hope that the catch that sick bastard this time, I hate Mike!  Poor Bella if she hits her head one more time... poor girl´s gonna be Kookoo for Coco Puffs! Lol!  Awesome chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

I am so glad that you loved that juicy lemon, I was actually nervous it was the first scene I have tried to write in a while.  I thought it would be cool to show that sometimes even the Dom/Dommes can have their own sense of subspace.  I actually read about it from a few of the D/s sites I have done research on.  I spoke to a couple of Doms too they were very interesting conversations.  I loved the kookoo for coco puff that was SO FUNNY. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  The reviews truly do mean a lot to me.  Things with ‘A Sub Search,’ are coming to a close.  I would rather end this story, than drag it out and make it bad.  I know the SEX SCENES, and LEMONS are hot, but I wanted this story, to also having a meaningful message.  During the research parts of writing this story, I have found a truly deep appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle.  Not that I could ever practice in the lifestyle, I just personally can see why people choose to.  There are so many aspects of this lifestyle that most people, me included did not before realize.  The amount of trust, loyalty, care, and compassion that go into the actions between and Dom/Domme and their sub is one of the most solid things I have ever tried to explain.  I am still not sure that I have done a great job showing the side of a BDSM relationship, I wanted to show, but I am in no way ashamed of the way that I portrayed it either.  Things can happen, but the truth is most participants in the lifestyle are not romantically linked. That is one of the biggest reason’s I wanted Bella and Edward to have the drama of trying to have it all.  I know many of you hated Bella, and for a while…I did too.  I struggled trying to write parts of this story, for lack of personal knowledge and because I personally felt animosity toward Bella at points in the story.  There will be one more regular chapter, and then there will be a epilogue.  Thank you for remaining a loyal reader, and again thank you so MUCH for your reviews of my story.  The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process.  My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed.  Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.

 

XOXO, Kasi~

 

Chapter 17 pre-view.

 

I have been comfortable throughout the day, but I have been in Edward’s arms, most of the time.  After arriving at the hospital, Edward was immediately through the door.  So many people have come to the hospital today.  Esme, and Carlisle, both were here.  Edward begged me to allow his father to look over my medical chart, I of course agreed.  Carlisle, having privileges at Saint Lukes, demanded that I have a full CT scan.  He told me it was to ease his own piece of mind, as well as Edward’s.  Carlisle even checked and rechecked where the stiches were; to be sure they were up to par.  Edward has all, but refused to leave my side.  He only did, when I asked him to once, and when they refused to allow him in the room during the CT scan.  Of course the first time he was okay, because I was going to be with Esme.  The second time he allowed it, because I would be under Carlisle’s supervision. 

Esme surprised me the most.  She has always been so easy going and nice.  Today I saw what most people consider the momma bear factor, or I have heard the term wolverine as well.  Esme was bossing around the staff, like she was in charge.  She demanded that one of the nurses be removed from my care, because she was clearly inept, and to busy trying to get Edward’s attention.  It was almost amusing to watch and hear her.  I still can feel the warmth that passed through me, when I heard Esme tell the nurse.  ‘You clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, than take care of my daughter.  Take your trampy ass out of this room.  I want your supervisor, now!’  Needless to say, that nurse never came back into my room.  I have never felt so loved in all my adult life. 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath

Hey Kasi-

You knocked it out of the park as usual!  I´m so glad that Mike is now a thing of the past and these two can move on to happier times!  Gah... Mama Es is so fierce and protective going all mama bear on the nurses.  Too funny!  So, I´m just dying to know if Bella put her mother and father´s engagement or wedding bands in Peter´s safe.  It would be totally cool if she flipped the script and proposed to Edward, who of course will totally say yes!  Can´t wait for the next chapter, good job bb!

Smooches,

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Krazi~

Thanks for always sayign such kind things about my story, I am truely grateful for all of the nice things you say.  I FLOVE Esme, and think she ROCKS!  As for turning the tables, and proposing to Edward, that is not really Bella's style, she is a strong Domme, but she has grown to realize she needs that softer side too.  You know the next chapter is off to the beta now and it is the LAST chapter before the epi.  It is a big one too, over 11,000 word count.  I love this story too much to kill it by dragging it through the dirt.  I want to let it go on a good note, I hope I am managing to do that.  Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  The reviews truly do mean a lot to me.  The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process.  My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed.  Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving the characters in the coming chapter.

 

Much Love! XOXO, Kasi~

 

Chapter 18 preview…teaser

 

“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.

“I was just coming in to get Bella.  Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”

“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.

“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess.  Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.

“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek.  “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.

“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed.  See you both in the morning,” I say.

I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door.  We walk hand and hand to the living room.  Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure.  He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest.  Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

I´ve enjoyed it thus far!  Great start!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

ty so much... new chapter soon

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

Aww... that was sweet.  Loved meeting Mama Esme and the little Pixie!  Lol!

Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

mama esme is def someone she needs to be around... shes need a older woman she can get direction from since her mom has threw her away

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread

Can´t wait for the special dinner and to learn more about Edward.Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thankyou for the review... see you on 12 /8

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

Yippie!  Edward´s home.  I can´t wait until he gets to know Bella better.  I´m glad that Rose decided to talk to Bella, at least now she has someone she can talk to if she needs it.  Hmm... Charlie´s coming,  Should I be nervous?  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

next chpter will be alot more edward nervous abt charlie... hmm?

Last Dance by mkystich Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

 

A daughters last goodbye to her father


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Charlie (non sexual)
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 228
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww that was sweet! I like it.  good job!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Awe thanks Krazi <3 I was worried people wouldn't like it, but I'm happy I got some love.

Big Hugs

Kris

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awww... that was just so sweet This story was super short, but I loved the heck out of it!  Looking forward to your future work!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it so far, can´t wait to see what lies ahead for these two!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooooo... a little more hidden drama!  Can´t wait to find out what´s the deal with Edward and Leah.  I´m loving little Miss Millie already!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is really a great story.  I´m really enjoying this Edward and Bella.  I hope their kids get to meet.  Jacob and Leah are real douche bags!   I´m so loving Little Ms. Millie, she´s going to get E&B together, I just know it!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Whoa... I really hate Jake and Nessie!  I had a step-mom just like her, she didn´t try to hide the fact that she didn´t want me around.  Why did they invite them over or why did he seek visitation if the kids were only going to suffer?  I´m so glad that they´re with the Cullen´s now, they can experience what it´s like to have a real family Christmas.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yippie!  Perfect dates, first kisses, and promises to give it a try; could this chapter get more perfect?  I hope they´re able to be together and get rid of all the deadbeat Exes and have real families for their children!  Keeping my fingers crossed!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was a bit of an angsty chapter.  All and all it ended on a wonderful note.  I´m loving the dream Bella had at the end.  I´ll be on pins and needles waiting for the next update!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Greatr chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awww... that was so sweet!  I´m gonna be sad to let them go! Great chapter and I´ve really enjoyed the story!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great Ending!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ha!  Loved the chapter and meeting little Miss Charleigh! But I´m glad I didn´t have to suffer long with the cliffie! Lol! Great chapter bb!  I´m still sending readers your way!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thanks for being such a great pimp for my stories :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Way to go Bella, now we see who´s in charge!  Lol!  Oooo, I can´t wait for Charliegh to get her and see what a raucus she causes!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am loving this story so far! I can't wait until he tells her the reason for the contract. I just know it has everything to do with Carlisle! I also want to know what punishment Carlisle has handed down! Squeeee! Can't wait! Great story!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Phew! I was really nervous about what Carlisle was going to make him do to her, but in the end... Dadward was my hero! I really think she should go over and kick Renee´s ass, she is such a terrible mother. That was worth the wait! I pimped out your story in my last chapter update. Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Loved the new chapter!  God, I had to shed a few tears at the way these two are pining away for each other.  I understand that B was hurt, but I hope that she will give E another chance soon, and let him back in little by little.  Can´t wait to read about lunch with the girls.  I just know that´s going to be the turning point.  No one can resist Moma E´s advice! Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159905
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm.... somthing old... something NEW!  Look what I found a new story from you! One that started out great might I add. So, I´m off to find out what´s going on the classroom and holding my breath, hoping no one is hurt. Love it so far, but of course you knew that already! Lol! Great start!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes of course I´m up for the ride, even though it looks like a bumpy one... I´m gonna hang on tight! Lol! Loving where it´s going, can´t wait to find out who this deranged man is! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So far so good... Where´s Rosie? She´s the only one missing from the gang. Hopefully, she´ll make an appearance soon and the group will be complete. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

She's coming:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Whoa! That was intense! I love how we´re getting back story and present day all at the same time. I am so dying to know who this crazy gunman is! Can´t wait for the big reveal! Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow that was a roller coaster ride.  The beginning was sweet loved it, but the second half was intense.  I can´t wait to find out who his boy is.  Would the real Mrs. Gribble please stand up, so he can stop kicking Bella´s arse!  LOL! Great chapter, Hon!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Phew... I finally got all caught up! Yippie!  This had really been intense!  I hate Esme and Carlisle by the way!  Just wanted to put that out there!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love the chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79498
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start!  Looks like it´s going to be a bit of a tear-jerker.  You love making me cry, don´t you!  Lol!  Love it as always!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, that was intense, but I´m glad she let Edward in somewhat and shared with him the story of what happened to her mother.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really hope that Edward goes after her, I know that he won´t tell what she confided in him, so I can just imagine how everyone feels about her running out of the dining hall.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I´m glad she shared her story with the rest of the gang.  That nap with Edward was a nice little treat, can´t wait to hear his side of things.  You couldn´t have ended the chapter in a better spot.  Newton getting the crap kicked out of him by Bella was priceless!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Their reactions to her being the Isabella was so funny and Alice like!  You are really working hard to make me cry, aren´t you!  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Lonely Doctor by tiff_0001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 303]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2011 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I will do no such thing!  Actually, I loved where you left it, because for me, it set everything up for Bella and Lilly to become closer and we don´t have to worry about Tanya.  After what she heard, Lilly will probably want nothing to do with her!  Good riddin´s to bad rubbish! Ha!  Love the chapter bb!  Update when you can!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you for the awesome reviews on 14 & 15!! Tanya's almost gone...but unfortunately not quite yet. The relationship with Bella and Lilly does grows and I try to show that in my future chapters - hopefully it works. :) We'll find out exactly why Bella is crying in the next chapter...it's a big one so I'm definitely going to try to get it posted ASAP.

Thanks again for reading and for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yeah, I was pretty pissed about what happened.  I totally agree with both of their reactions though.  Bella was thrown for a loop and had no idea what to think and Lauren deserved to be thrown out.  She was wrong for going to his door like that.  She could have at least tried to say something to Bella.  The fact that they both bailed on the practice to spend most of the week drunk is priceless!  lol! Now I hope Bella comes up with a good plan to fix this, now that she´s pulled her head out of her stubborn arse! :)  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Lol!  Can´t tell you how much I missed this little fic!  Sorry to hear about your family, that was a very traggic accident.  I hope they have a speedy recovery and all goes well.  Yeah, you got us where you stopped, but truthfully, I would have rathered you end there than anywhere else.  Update when you can, we´ll definitely still be here!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

haha...glad you missed it but sorry you missed it at the same time - make any sense at all??? Thanks for the review and the kind words. :-)

Summary:

banner by Ysar

 

After years away, Bella is returning to a place she thought she'd left behind and a man she thought never wanted to see her again. Love often comes when you least expect it. There are lies that need to be confessed and secrets to reveal.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146616 Read Count: 43647
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Jun 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I discovered your story yesterday and let me say that after staying up until 2 in the morning because I just couldn´t let it go!   I am officially in L-O-V-E with this story!  Loved the attack on Chelsea and can´t wait until Jake gets his.  I must say that I´m very rarely a fan of Tanya, but she was portrayed perfectly in the story.  Can´t wait for more!

I will definitely be recing this little yummy morsel in my next update!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Was delighted to read your review. So glad you love it. Jake will be getting his soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

 

 

♥ Susan

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow.. I´m really glad that´s over.  I don´t think she was too easy on him.  She just wanted closure and I think they both got it.  I really thought when Jake brought up their first time that Edward was gonna sock him.  Can´t wait until little Riley is officially a Cullen and Edward proposes.  Don´t think I forgot about that little slip up at the party... you remember the bareback sex E&B had.  

Can´t wait for the outcome of thatª!

Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Lol, no I havent forgotten the forgotten condom scene. We'll have to wait a little for that outcome. Edward and Bella will get to work filing for the change asap, but it will take time, especially in California. 

 

Bella got to say what she wanted to Jake, and did get some closure, but she wont forgive him for involving Irina, so they wont have any form of a relationship after the divorce. She and Edward are just ready to put it all behind them and move forward.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Woooo Hoooooo!  I knew it!  I knew it!  I knew it!  She´s pregnant!  Squeeee!  Loved it all and the proposal was perfect!!  I can´t wait until everyone else finds out about the new addition to the family!  Charlie get your gun!  Lol!  Greqat chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Awww..... I´m gonna miss them, could we maybe have a sequel??  I´m just saying!  Lol!  I´m glad that Irina came around and that there was no more drama for these two.  Riley is adorable and his birthday was perfect.  Can´t wait for the wedding!  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

no sequel but there will be a long Epilogue to tie things up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

That was just perfect! I loved it and will hate to see it end!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for continuing to read and review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved the new chapter! Can´t wait to see what Emmett and Rose think of Edward.  Will Bella have to reveal the truth about his past sooner than she thinks.  And I could be wrong, but I kind of feel like Rose and Em either are related to Edward or they knew his parents. Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

Here is your teaser

Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This story is just getting better and better with each chapter!  I have a funny feeling that Emmett talked to Edward about more than just chopping wood!  Lol! Can´t wait for the next chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was so sweet how the wolves took care of Bella too.  I almost thought that someone had found them and they would take Bella and Edward away.  I can't wait to see how much time she spends in the woods and when she'll go home.  I absolutely love this story, it's so different from the norm!  Great chapter hon, have a great vacay!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I´m so in love with this story!  It´s so original and refreshing.  It´s so cute to see Edward learning new words and communicating better.  Oh and Edward´s jealousy was adorable, as was Rose and Emmett.  Can´t wait until they get to the farm, that should be interesting.  Maybe the wolves can come there since the place is so big.  Okay, see you next week, great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

<3

 

I really appreciate you reviewing.

Here is your teaser

Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I adore this story!  Your Edward and Bella are amazing.  I can´t wait for more! I almost cried at the end of the last chapter!  Love it... love it.. love it!  Great story, great chapter!  I will definitely be rec´ing your story to others!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying and I hope you'll continue to do so,

 

 

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG... Alice has the worst timing!  I am so in love with this story and have been recing it in all of my updates.  Can't wait to see what the trail week will bring.  Great update!  

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate that!

 

 

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awww.... poor Savageward, we finally find out who he is and al his family is dead.  That's sad.  I really wanted to pimp slap Alice, she was being such a itch with a b!  Lol!  Well can't wait to see what a day of camping brings!  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

God, I love this story.  Poor B, I´m glad she went to Charlie for guidance.  I just hope she decides to take Edward to the farm.  Who knows maybe there´s enough roaming space to bring the wolves.  An older Rose and Em, that´s different.  Loved it babe!  Can´t wait for the next one!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)  Can´t wait to see the look on Edward´s face when he gets to see Leah, Sam and Jake!  I absolutely adore this story!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, here is your teaser

 

Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Gosh you´ve got me over a barrel with this one!  What´s the deal with Alice and who´s the mysterious man?  Is it Angryward?  Lol!  Off to see! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This shit is deep!  You´ve got me speechless, not something easy to do! Can´t wait to find out more back story.  Will we ever get a EPOV. I´d love a minute or two inside his angry head!  Great job, love the story!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Your welcome! It´s a great story, but I want to scream for this cliffie.  I can´t believe after all this time he shows up at her door.  Her reaction priceless.  Can´t wait to see if Foldward has changed or not.  and will he tell Bella what happened to his daughter!  Love the story, thanks for the update!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Great chapter!  I'm dying to know just what happened with Edward and his daughter!  

 

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

Bella comes from a neglectful home, and is sold to a carnival to save her sister. Once there she's put in the care of Edward, but who to trust?

 

WARNING: CONTAINS ABUSE AND RAPE AND DRUGS. IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO THESE TOPICS PLEASE DON'T READ.

 

Massive thanks to Mehek18 for the amazing banner!! *much hugs*

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Fics to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33772 Read Count: 23071
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2011 Updated: 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter!  It reminds me of Water for Elephants kind of, its fresh in my mind, because I just got back from watching it. Lol!  Can´t wait for the next chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

love

Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

I´m so glad he´s home.  I hope that we don´t have to wait long to find out where the hell he´s been all this time.  And where´s the rest of the gang! Love me some Mason!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

xoxo

Krazi