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I´m a diehard TwiHard Fan. I fell in love with the saga and read all four books constantly for over a year. There was never a time at some point in my day that I did not have one of the four books in my hand. I was addicted, until fanfiction became a part of my life.
I´m a singer/songwriter and I´m currently living in Madrid, Spain. I´m having the time of my life, but trust me there´s no place like home. I have since become addicted to fanfiction, so I spend my days and nights reading, thank God for Iphone´s with 3G, I no longer even watch TV. Strongly considering a 12 step program, but that means that I would have to admit I have a problem. And i just don´t think there is one.
My preferences of course are anything Bella and Edward. I am a strong Robsten Supporter and Bellward just fit in my book. I don´t care what the go through, just as long as at the end of the day they are together...
I´m on twitter!!!!! @krazis_korner
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- http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/
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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254949
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Ok... I love the fact that he wants to know what the girls were up to... lol... and it was even funnier when he and Emmett find out... looks like Rose and Bella are some great teacher... cause sounds like Jazz is getting the spit shine of a lifetime...lol...I so love how he takes care of her every need, be it emotional or physical... and it was cute that he really didn´t know how to approach the subject of her living with him for the time being... It was really sad when Rose told her story... and I can´t wait to find out what the heck he put on her nipples, was it sometime of cream that reacts to body temperature... I love me some kinky suprise Edward.great chapter... See ya Monday.. BeBe!! have a good weekend!!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
No ... not a cream.. you will see in the next chapter and I will post a picture on the extra's page to give a visual. That's Edward's job, taking care of her needs...Rememeber Jane said. I gives him satisfaction to takke care of her have a great weekend Krazi.......Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml
The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.
“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on.
Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”
She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”
Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”
Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Whooo Hooo.... know that I did quite a few fist pumps and a happy dance for that much needed release..lol... those little bands sound quite intriguing and also the way they are removed... That orgasmic gel sounds fun too...lol... I´m glad the punishment is over.. and also that they were able to have the conversation about abuse and Bella was able to shed some light from a the perspective of pyschologist and victim, but it didn´t upset her.. I´m so loving her and Edward´s relationship.... can´t wait for the hot make up session on thursday!!! lol... as usual.. U make Mondays rock baby!!!! great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I put up pictures of the bands and I have a link for the Orgasmic ...You can check it out if you like, it's interesting that's all I can say ...lml
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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
okay...i´m sweating after this... and I think I want Santa to put the C-Grip/BFF in my stocking for Christmas... puh-Leeeeeeeeeeeeese... THAT THING SOUNDS FRICK´N AWSOME!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA... THIS STORY IS REALLY CAUSING ME TO QUESTION MY VANILLA LIFESTYLE... I´M SOOOO NOT SURE IF I FIT INTO THAT CATEGORY ANYMORE... OK.. TMI... I KNOW.. ON TO THIS WONDERFUL CHAPTER... YOU KNOCKED IT OUT OF THE PARK BABY!!!! BEING OBEDIANT HAS ITS REWARDS...AND EMMETT IS FREAKING HILARIOUS.. LEAVE IT TO HIM TO HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY.... AND ALICE AND JAZZ ARE TOO CUTE... CAN´T WAIT FOR THE REWARD ON MONDAY AND OUR LITTLE TRIP TO NEW MOON... THE WEEKEND WAS QUITE A SUCESS I´LL SAY....GREAT CHAPTER... HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND AND WE´LL SEE YA NEXT WEEK!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
There is nothing wrong with vanilla, just every now and then throw in some Hot Fudge and Walnuts..lol ...as far as Emmett goes, at least he let them finish ...lol ..have a good weekend Krazi ...
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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
You get absolutely no hating from me... I understand that the D/S relationship and the BF/GF relationship are totally separate entities.. I love how he balances his love and adoration for her, with their combined need for he BDSM lifestyle... I won´t work if he can´t give her the balace she needs... they would drift apart... that public orgasm rocked... I´m glad Stephan´s outburst didn´t ruin their night.... Jasper and Emmett were hilarious with their breakdown about how women are... and unfortunately they were dead right... As always baby... you make Mondays rock.... can´t wait til Thursday... As far as Leah... I´m just waiting for what ever little secret her and Bella share... in a minute she will not be able to blame everything on the hormones... HAVE THAT BABY ALREADY!!!! lol... I appreciated Jake voicing his concerns to Edward and it was done with respect... borrowing Edward´s whip... funny!!! Leah could use a little discipline... Great Chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you Krazi...to tell you the truth I didn't get as many bad effects as I thought I would...i was pleasantly surprise ...have a great day ...lml
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Are my panties wet... Whaaaaaaat... I mean I had to stop and change before I could review.. that´s just how hot and bothered I was... lol.... that was amazing... a little backdoor action done right... never hurt anybody... I feel so bad for the bad stuff the punishment demo is making her remember.. but maybe it´s theraputic also.. because it´s unlocking what her subconscience blocked out as a defense mechanism... this may alsp serve as a healing process... and thankfully she has Edward.. so she doesn´t have to face it alone... Thanks for another amazing chapter!!!!!
Kraz1
xoxo
Author's Response:
yup ...heiney sex never hurt anyone... and your right this just might serve as a place for her to tell him what he needs to hear as well as serve as a place for her to heal ...but I don't think that will be an easy process...thanks Krazi ...emjoy the rest of your weekend...and I have your teaser ...lml
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my uneasiness. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Wow... Bella´s really having a rough time... I hope she can find the courage to tell Edward everything.. I know it´s hard for her to except that he loves her and would not hurt her... not to mention the stuff that happens is not her fault, but she´s still blaming herself... I´m glad she let that skank Tanya have it at the gym... I really hope they knew it was her driving Edward´s car..jealous much Denali....great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
I think it will get worsee for Bella and edward before it gets better and I also foresee more problems with Tanya, before that settles itself ...thaks Kazi ...lml
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
haha...10 mins. hmmm. let´s see! i say it was extremely hard and fast, just some quick dirty smex´n.. lol... but what do I know... Gosh when the full story of what happened to her comes out, there won´t be a dry eye for miles.. Emmett had very wis words... I don´t think it´s one person messing with her, I think there are a few ppl working together.. but once again; What do I know! lol great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Sorry I didn't get back to you Krazi...been a hell of a week,,, anyway thanks for reading...and have a great Thanks Giving....
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Wow! That was an emotional rollercoster, but I just couldn´t get off the ride. I would say that was very big of Eleazar to apologoze, but anyone involved with Tanya is usually pond scum, so... not! i´m glad that Bella is beginning to open up, which wiil eventually lead to her healing. i was really blown away when she went off on Edward at breakfast. LOL! subBella´s got some pretty big balls! I just hope she doesn´t feel too guilty about when she wakes up. I know that Edward´s not holding it against her. As always, great chapter! Have a Happy Thanksgiving and buy enough on Black Friday for me!:(
Krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
It was difficault to write and I think she needed to go off on Edward and I think he needed to know that she would do it too...lml
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Wow! That was something. I enjoyed the conversation with Jane, she made quite a bit of sense. She´s extremely wise, that girl. I thought things were going to get better and these two were going to have a nice calm night. Boy was I wrong. I hope that no one bashes Edward, because in my opinion, he doesn´t deserve anyones harsh comments. In an effort to let both of them come to terms with the roller coaster of the past few days, he planned a little cuddle time. I see both sides to this: Bella´s feeling of rejection and betrayal and Edward´s feelings of contemptment and self-loathing, thinking that he´s no better than James. Technically, neither one of them are right, but then again we often tend to think the worse, so we can put up our walls, it´s a defense mechanism we all use. In the end, they both needed the hard and fast sex. Both needing to regain something different from the experience. Bella needed to feel the security that her submission gives her, in this instance she has the power to give and the power to take it away. Something she never had with James. Edward, on the other hand, wanted to reiterate that he was still hers and she in fact was still his. I could see how the thought of her leaving left him vunerable. This is new to both of them, she is use to rejection or more or less expects it, so therefore she guards herself closely and he´s used to not being so emotionally invested. I know these two are going to be okay and I´m honored I´m allowed to take the journey with them! Brilliant as always!
P.S. Can´t you tell by this loooooong review, that I am nowhere near a Black Friday saie! :( God I miss the states. Soon... sooon... I´ll be back to terrorize you Old Navy!! Opps sorry, I got carried away! They don´t call me Krazi for nothing! :P
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
See...there is always two sides to every story and of course this was gong to effect Edward, and he was having a hard time processing what the happened to her and well... i won't say too much more, because I think Edward will be telling you soon...And you are right about the power that she holds. She's never had that with anyone, ever...so she doesn't completely understand the power she hold either...in this instance, Bella responded with feelings of insecurity and Edward responded by taking control which is a nornmal rsponse for both ,,,,I was at OLd Navy at mid-night, stood in line for a hour to cheek out, ah the joys of the season ...lol....
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Whew! I am so glad things seem to be going in the right direction. Hopefully, these two can finish out the week on a good note and we can resume the usual this Friday. *crossingfingers* I´m glad that Edward admitted to her his insecurites and what he was feeling. This thing is a two-way street, and the trust works both ways. Great chapter, but then again they always are. I saw the story on a award page I was looking on, congratulations on all it´s success. See you Thursday!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
They got it together and they need some happy time together, the weekend is coming and they go away alone for a few days then it's off to Forks,,,something tells me that they had better be rested for that ....
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
That just made my Thursday! I think she enjoyed the entire punishment, that waiting only made the end result sooooo much better. Leah really needs to have that baby already, her attitude just sucks. Can´t she just be happy that Bella is happy? I swear sometimes it feels like she´s jealous of her relationship with Edward. Bella finally has a good man that loves her and treats he like a queen. Leah, get over it already! Great chapter! You officially make Thursday better than ´hump day´! Lol!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Leah is not due for another two months, and yes she is hormonal but that is not the only problem ..soon you will know...and yes Bella liked her punishment...although it wasn't a true punishment.... unauthorized O's in the bedroom are differant then those in the playroom and during the whole scene they weren't really in full mode ... so it was more of a fun punishment for Edward ... do you remember when she had to write about her orgasm? He told her that he would enjoy that punishment...he enjoyed this one too... as long as it does not become a habit...he'll let it slide and do what he is doing ... ok .. I rambled ...oh and BTW...you can hump on Thursdays too...lol...see you later Krazi ....Thanks for reading and here is your teaser....
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
That was more like it; these two definitely needed some calm, quiet, and funny times. Love the teasing and the ¨are you coming?¨ Priceless! I was a bit nervous when the subject of children came up, but I´m glad Edward handled it the way he did, and Bella trusted and felt secure in his love for her. These two continue to grow and thrive by leaps and bounds! You never cease to amaze me with your creative manipulation of the these two wonderful characters. I´m dying to know who´s stealing from the club, Aro´s going to have someone´s balls! Lol! Great chapter BB! See you, hopefully humping, Thursaday. I´ll take the usual please! Lol!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
They do need some happy times ...I think chiildren will always be a sore spot with Bella... I'm a mother I have 8 children my problem was trying to figure out how not to get pregnant...I swear I slept through at least two conceptions ...lol ...anyway as a woman I can imagine the hurt of infertility and now that she has someone she loves those pains for magnified ...They are growing, which is what I wanted to show ,,, and I could use some usual myself ,,,, see you later Krazi enjoy the rest of the week ,,,lml
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Sorry I´m so late with my review, but I have to be disciplined if I´m going to write stories as well, so work first and reading later. Never fear though, I will always have time for you!
The usual was extremely unusual, but hot never the less! I believe she´s experiencing symtoms of sub-drop, or I could be wrong, but the way he took care of her afterwards made me love him even more. They are so good together! BTW... I will not look at dinner the same again, without DomWard it´s just so boring. Lol! Great chapter BB! See you tomorrow!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
you are a better women then me sweety, I can't read and write, I just don't have the time,,, and I miss reading, getting lost in a story ...
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Okay, so I was wrong, but I knew it was one of them. I at least knew it was something euphoric and her endorphins had really kicked in. Either way I loved it! Ooooo... she´s gonna get it! Bella is a bit hard headed, I just hope her punishment is not the prolonged kind, but I doubt she will be placed in a corner, then sexed to an oblivion again. Seems it will much worse this time, she could have really hurt herself. Great chapter!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
she was naughty ....
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Whoa... that was heavy! I really felt sorry for her during her punishment. Even though she deserved that and worse. Especially since she could lose the use of her arm completely. I understand her stubborness on one hand, but she has to let that go and get use to the fact that her life was irrevocably change by the sick bastard James.
Edward was right he can protect her from many things, but herself is not one of them. She has to do her part, but I love how he disciplines and that's the end of it. No beating dead horses.
That little clit treat sounds like pure pleasurable torture. I love it! God Edward is a sneaky little devil! Always leaving us panting. I'm so glad that Tanya over heard the conversation about Bella and Edward's PDA! And how hot was Jasper putting her in her place... family only witch! Lol! I loved it! I really hope Bella can hold out and not release! The reward she gets when she gets home is always so much better.
I'm really starting to think that Leah is jealous of her relationship with Edward and his family. I think she's so used to having Bella depend on her and Jake, that she's a bit jealous. Couple that with all the raging harmones, doesn't make for a very nice Leah!
Great chapter! I'm gonna miss twice a week, but I understand, and hope you have a great holiday!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Krazi... Japser speaking up like that was great, it was his house so his place to say something .. and what kind of nerve does Tanya have inviting herself... besides with all the shit she said to Bella in the gym, it's was nice to have E & B relationship shoved in her face ....Leah and Bella will be staying with Edward and Bella in a small house together when they visit Forks...That should be interesting ... Have a great Holiday yourself...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Phew... sorry I'm a little late on reviewing this week! First let me say I have had some good laughs with Virgins and Villains so I know what your talking about. That was a doozy of a chapter! I'm wondering if it's Tanya or someone affiliated with the club... the new client at the center is a bit mysterious as well as officer Hawkins. All of this has somehow got to be connected and I can't wait to find out how. I'm glad Bella yellowed, because I was on the verge of failing myself, that was some steamy little bedtime story! Lol! Sorry to hear you were under the weather, hope you're back up and at ' em! Great chapter and Happy belated New Year!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Sorry I'm late again, but better late than never I say! Lol! This is getting more and more interesting by the chapter! I am so in love with this story, I can hardly wait for updates! I think it was Heather on the video tape and she's somehow linked to James and officer Hawk. There are too many coincidences. She knew so many personal things about Bella to be coincidence. Then officer Hawks line of questioning was a bit strange as well. They have to be working with James, why else would he be concerned about the RO and who her attacker was. Besides when have we known James to give up easily! Great chapter hon! Can't wait until tomorrow's update!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
That's a good question, when has James ever given up so easy ....
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
I'm blown away, as usual! Glad that your feeling better and are up and at 'em! Being sick sucks! Lol! Now as far as Ms. Heather goes, she is my number one suspect in the break in. Officer Hawks, I believe is her willing accomplice and he's the one whose filled her in on Bella and the fact that Charlie is a cop, but of course I'll wait patiently for you to divulge such information! Lol!
Now.. who on earth said that there was too much smut! Let me at 'em! Lol! There is no such thing as too much smut! Pay them no mind! I got really emotional along with Bella when Edward left her alone, gosh she just broke my heart, feeling so vunerable the way she did. Great chapter hon, as always!
Have a Great Weekend!!!
~Krazi~
xoxo
Author's Response:
If it was proper I would send you their e-mail addresses as it is I was told that they would no longer be reading my story...because of the smut, the extra story line ((that there is someone after Bella)), how long the story is and all the thoughts that Bella has ....I was shocked ...they didn't want an added drama? Then there would be more smut... I might as well write pure porn...lol...then again Krazi, would that be a bad thing? ...lol...NO, I'm only kidding. I'm just going to keep going the way I've been and if I loose a few readers along the way, so be it....More will come ((at least I think they will..lol..))) thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Sorry I´m so late reviewing, when I read from my iPhone I have to remember to sign-on and review. So, first things first, I still don´t trust Irina and think that she´s involved some kind of way. Honestly, I believe that one of these people will end up being either a friend or long lost relative of James´ it can´t all be coincidence and I don´t think it´s because someone wants to be with Edward, although they may be participating hoping that will be the ultimate prize. I was sad for her when she didn´t complete her task, though she didn´t do it on purpose, it still sucked. On the other hand, her request for punishment showed tremendous growth on her part. I thought Edward´s punishment was nothing if not fair and a great lessoning in learning. Bella is showing a tremendous amount of growth, she will never be perfect, but her imperfections make her perfect for Edward! See you tomorrow! Great chapter BB!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
You don´t have to worry about me, I trust Domward with my girlie bits. He knows exactly what´s best for them! Lol! I´ve learned to trust his judgement and know that he would never do anything to hurt her. I´m glad she was rewarded ´several´times. Lol! This little mystery part of the story is really adding a delicious little twist to things, I just love the variety you always give us. Thanks for sharing! Great chapter as always, hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Krazi ... thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Yeah, I had to change my panties before I could review... cause that was HAWT!!! Yeah I was crackin up at them sexin it up while poor Seth was waiting to pee-pee! Lol! Bella is really coming into her own, I can´t wait to see how Edward handles her submission out in public. My eyes bugged out of my head, when she saw the leash and dog collar! Yikes! You really have me on edge waiting for this one! Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Great chapter bb! I just love these two. Glad that Edward found peace with Bella and Aro´s relationship. It was so funny when he insinuated that Bella would have more luck getting him to go computerized with the sign in sheet.
I still can´t figure out what´s going on with Leah, it´s got to be more than just pregnancy harmones. I really think that she´s having trouble with Bella not being as dependent on her and Jake anymore. Maybe she´s feeling left out. I don´t know.
I can´t wait until Victoria, Jake should enjoy the a little Daddy and Mommy time! Lol! Great hinting at a possible proposal in the near future.
You´re so good, you´r e bad! Lol! I´m nervous about Forks though, she really got me teary, when she explained the waxing situation. Can´t wait for next Thursday! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
If you think about it you can probably figure out what Leah's problem is -- if you can't don't worry I don't think that B & L are going to be able to be in the same ((small)) house for very long without the tension exploding ....((there now you know when this is going to blow up )) ...I sent you a seperate e-mail as a way of saying thank you for leaving a review this week ...thanks agains Krazi ...louise
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I knew he would be showing up sooner rather than later! I'm just glad Leah and Bella was still in the diner and didn't witness the scene. I am so nervous about what's to come... I was really touched by Jacob's words to Edward, telling him to keep doing what he's been doing, because Bella is so much happier! Sorry I've been reading from my phone lately and like and idiot, I forget to review. Geezz, but I still have mad love for you and story.. know that I never miss and update. FYI... that little smexin" you through in there was totally HOT!!! Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
That was amazing as usual!!! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing, but it's hard to review when I read from my iPhone and I forget to go back and do it once I get to a computer. I have been keeping up and I'm even more confused about what's going on. Each time I come up with a theory, you do something to through me off the trail.. Lol! But I think I agree with the theory that James maybe trying to establish residency in the city. I can't wait to see what the meeting with Wiess turns up, but until the a little Master and pet time and family fun is in order. Great chapter!!!!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
HI Krazi ...no problems about the reviews, I have the same thing with my phone, but only here on TWCS...i do a small teaser for you...louise
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
I've missed you and the story soooo... much! I'm happy to say that I'm all caught up now! Yeah! I have to agree with you this chapter was one of my favorite as well, I can't wait to hear what Rose has to say now that the bastard who raped her is going to jail! Great chappie hon! I hope we have a long way to go before the story's over! See you next time!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
Hey krazi ...you missed me becasue it has been taking longer to get the chapters up or becasue you were gone??? Cuz hey girl...where you been?...loll... anyway ummm... the story is moving along and there is alot that will be happening in their life over the next two weeks (for them) becasue that is about all that is left in thhe main story,, then there are some OT's and a few multi-chapter epi's ...so right now it seems like this story is never going to end...lol...anyway luv ya girl...louise
Author's Response:
Hey krazi ...you missed me becasue it has been taking longer to get the chapters up or becasue you were gone??? Cuz hey girl...where you been?...loll... anyway ummm... the story is moving along and there is alot that will be happening in their life over the next two weeks (for them) becasue that is about all that is left in thhe main story,, then there are some OT's and a few multi-chapter epi's ...so right now it seems like this story is never going to end...lol...anyway luv ya girl...louise
***NOW COMPLETE***
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)
it was great and the sending Jacob to hell while bidding Renee hello on the way was funny as heck!!! Now off with Carmnç´s head!!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In
Yeah...I can´t wait..for some reason, I don´t trust Carmen very much and with Bella she has ulterior motives...but of course we shall see..can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
Ok... you wanna know what I think... I think I´d like to bitch slap Carmen... so there I said it.....but other than that.... I enjoyed it as always... I´m loving the relationship developing between Carlie and Bella and that Esmom is threaten to flog Edward if her hurts Bella...two thumbs up for that!!!! can´t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)
Well I hope Bella does get a chance to pimp slap Carmen's old azzzzz!!!! lol... And as far as Jessica is concerned... bring it on... she's unfit... I have faith in Carlie to choose Bella.. Edward and the rest of the family already have... So let the games begin!!!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident
I really enjoyed it... lov´n how Bella gave him whack in the gonads...lov´n how her relationship with Carlie is developing nicely...I know you have alot in store for us when Renee comed into the picture... that meeting should be very interesting...Can´t wait to go to Disneyworld!!!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!
haha.... nice slip up calling Bella Carlie´s Mother.. I thought it was kinda sweet actually and truth be told everyone actually sees her that way now.. I am so not looking forward to meeting this Renee... sounds like she sucks rocks.. That little scene with Heidi and Jane was pretty funny too.. the invite for Bella to joing them was priceless... great chpater and I´m certain that Carlie will be exicted about the move and want to now call Bella mom..*tear*
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time
Kudos!!!! I loved it... especially when Bella handed Edward his ass for breakfast... that was awsome... the fall in the bathroom was pretty scary... I´m kinda dredding the visit with Renee, but we´ll see.... and the school thing I hope won´t be too messy, but Mrs. Cope sounds like a handful, and course Jessica is just waiting to blow things out of the water as well.... great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
haha... I knew it wasn´t Bella because they haven´t used condoms since the first time they slept together...what... sue me I pay attention...great chapter...and I`m off to check out the new story..
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?
That was quite a chapter.... I was wondering when jessica would show her diseased self in the picture... Renee should be neutered... she´s trailer trash... Go Bella way to let Cope have it... so if you fire me... you better get ready to be fired...hahaha...great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style
I thought Emmett was being a super douche to Rose, but that Christmas song was hilarious. Esme and Carlisle rock as always. Riding Dr. Cullen´s morining wood is never a bad way to start the day! Great chapter!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming
Wow! A broken arm. How are you typing? I love that she wants to adopt Carlie. It´s so funny how people are thinking on the same wave length, but it´s never known because they don´t talk to each other. It really would save alot of heartache sometimes. Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
Whoa! That was a doozy of a chapter! Poor ClassicWard, looks like he´ll be spending the remainder of the holiday on the pull-out! Serves him right for the foul things he said. When will people learn to think before they speak! Lol! Great chapter! Hope it won´t be long until we find out the outcome!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache
I'm just glad there on the road to recovery. I was really worried in the beginning. I can't wait until Carlie sees Bella that will be an interesting reunion! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
I have not complaints. I think the counseling and them taking things slow is a great idea. So, you have my vote and I trust you completely! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: This Is Halloween
Thanks for the outtake.... that was pretty funny... especially the Robin costume... gotta Love Jack!!!!
krazi
xoxo
Banner by MsRason
All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Wow... i started this story yesterday... and I must say.. It´s a keeper...lol... I´m loving it... and this cliffie´s got me thinking.... hmmm... Renee or Leah... who will it be? great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you're loving it. =)
Next chapter will reveal who's responsible. I'll try to update soon so you won't have to wait long.
Thanks! =)
Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner
Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19761
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
you´ve got me hooked...I really hope you continue!!!! I love Domella and Subward!!!! HOTTTTTT!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose
i love it.... I can´t wait to see what Ms. Rosie conjures up...this aught to be good!!!
Krazi
xoxo
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40319
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions
that was quite entertaining... and I was flip´n honored when I saw my name.. I may have done couple of fist pumps, but I´ll never tell.. I really enjoyed this.. can´t wait for the next interview!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm so glad I could make you happy Krazi ... lol ... It's always the little things that get us excited .. anyway I'm glad you liked it, talk to you later, have a great day ...lml
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 1000th review OT
Ah Ha! You sneaky little devil. That was Emmett and Ms. Rose, in the cabin, after she shared her story with Bella. That was really awesome. I really enjoyed spending time with them. Great outtake!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Yup ... that's who it was Em & Rose ... Lots of people wondered why Em didn't say anything about B&E's sexcapades but he was getting his own funk on... and even when he yelled through the wall it was only becasue he was done...lol
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Bella's 3rd writing assignment
I think she did well and it even taught me a thing or two!..Lol! Thanks for sharing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Janes OT
God I loved hearing Jane´s point of view. I just love how she can stay in the third person like that. It was a breath of fresh air to hear more than two or three words from her. She´s so wise. I want her to be my BFF! Lol! Great outtake!
Krazi
xoxo
Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129715
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I´ve been threatening tears since the first chapter...but i couldn´t contain them any longer...you made me boo hooo seriously like snot and all...wow that was painful...phew...you got me good job
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Wow!!! This is really a great story...I´ve shed plenty of tears.. I started reading it last nite and couldn´t stop...by 9am I couldn´t keep my eyes open any longer...can´t wait for the next chapter...thanks for writing a great story!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:O)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
AWWWW... YOU GOT ME AGAIN... THE TEARS CAME WITH THE ROSES!!!! BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER!"!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue
A very beautiful ending to a very beautiful story... no chance for a sequel...
you know I had to at least try!!!lol... but I wouldn't be opposed to one...JUst sayin'
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, I'll think about it!
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
I loved it... ok so from the hint of ode de Wet Dog smell.. I take it the woives will appear somewhere in this story.. and if Edward smells them on her.. don´t the smell him too... but hey those are just my inner ramblings.. I am nothing if not patient... so I´ll wait for things to be revealed.. I hope Bella doesn´t get into too much trouble...
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Yes the wolves will make an apperance in this story, and so far they have not picked up his scent since she showered before going to see them and they haven't visited her yet. But you know you cant hide that forever.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
Hot chappie....loving the time spent outside the playroom...and the interaction with Carlisle soon she will be with the whole clan... I think the Domme and Sub were Leah and Seth...hmmmmmm.... Just my educated guess!!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank for for reading and reviewing! i can safely say it was not the pairing of leah and seth. But that doesn't mean one of them were not involved.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served
yes I felt everyone got what they deserved, but I didn´t deserve this cliffie you left me with!!!! tsk...tsk.... but I´ll happily take what I can get... very interesting chapter... as usual I hate Tanya, but hey...no surprise there... very rarely does the have a place in the story where I can tolerate her...Can´t wait to find out what the heck crawled up Esme and Carmen´s butts... great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer
HaHa!!! loved it.. well after Carlisle and Eleazar rescued Edward from that Biotch... I´m really mad at Esme... she should have know not to trust that skank Tanya... It was so sweet how she took care of him... but I have a question.. is his body temp not cold or Bella just doesn´t care? Frankly I don´t, but I was just wondering... Emmett is always a riot.. and Jazz giving the room an undiluted amount of lust was hilarious.. I don´t know if I trust the Domme Dianne or not.. It could really just be me.. great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxox
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology
That was amazing! I´m leaning toward forgiving Esme, that is if she builds a great playroom. Lol! I think he should use the crop on her! Sounds like hot fun! Great chapter!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
So is she going to eventually be able to block him?
Why are her thoughts cutting off? I hope he finds something, can´t wait to learn more about Bella´s life before Edward! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Haha! Yeah, that was well worth the wait! You've got me so intrigued to find out just what exactly happened to Charlie and what did Bella's cryptic comments mean? What does she know? And why do her thoughts cut out every so often? Well you´ve left me guessing. Lol! I can´t wait until the next update! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
that was something... Renee is a biotch and Phil is a drunken child molester...poor Bella...I hope whoever took her doesn´t hurt her, but you´ve definitely got my attention...Great start!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
That just bite...but I kinda figured something like that was going to happen..I´m just glad they got to her in time before someone to her God knows where... I´m glad this Edward is a gentleman and not a jerk.... Great Chapter..even though I wanna castrate Phil and shoot Renee...she´s better off without them
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Nice to see the whole gang is all there now...It was sweet of Carlisle to make light of what he had done for Bella... Glad to see them treating her like one of the family...Great Chapter!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I don´t want Micheal teaching her anything.... I want her to be with Edward and Edward only....They haven´t yet explaiined their relationship...does Edward know that Bella was suppossed to be for him...and will he tell Bella... and when they go to school will she be a distant relative or his girlfriend? Great Chapter
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Glad to see that Edward does really care about her...I was getting a little nervous...and I´m glad he finally put that douchebag Luke in his place...happy to see them share a very sweet and tender moment!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Whoa... Edward that was a little scary, but I can´t help but think it has something to do with him missing his time with Bella... she´s gaining a bit more independence and I think that scares him!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I´ officially pissed with Edward...how could he do something like that...stupid jackass....I don´t know if I can forgive him for this one...she could have be raped or worse killed...and she´s never been with anyone...wjhat if she got pregnant...bad move Eddie...just a bad bitch ass move son!!!! Great Chapter even with all the angst!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I am so confused...there is so much wrong with this picture...I don´t even know where to begin...I wanna be mad at Edward, but I still can´t find it in me to think that would purposely endanger her... much less allow other boys to touch her.. maybe he was a victim in all this too... I just don´t know what to believe...sheesh..you got me on this one....great chapter..lots of angst and drama!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
If Micheal´s story is correct... then things don´t add up...why would he drug her and allow all those boys have their way with her if he is in fact that possessive.. so maybe he was drugged too... I just don´t understand...and by the way will this story have a happy ending, because at this rate I don´t see her ever being able to trust him...great chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I kinda like Micheal... although I hope he just wants to be a friend to Bella and this doesn´t get awkward later... I´m still straddled the fence on the whole drugging thing... I just can´t find it in me to believe that Edward did it... so I´m sticking to that theory until you prove me wrong... I´m rooting for trusting Edward.. and why does Esmom need surgery? Great Chapter!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I´m confused, by this whole conglomoration of activity... the pranks aren´t really that bad... their not killing anyone, so why the over reaction... and I still don´t understand if we´re gonna have a HEA in this story... or what.. are Edward and Bella suppossed to be together?
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I just don´t get this Edward... and when does the ´Amazing Grace´come into play... at this moment I see no happy ending in sight.... How will she ever get past all that he´s put her through... I was trying to give this Edward the benefit of the doubt, but now I just don´t know!!!
Krazi
xoxo
He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15389
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Simple
Ok...so far so good... I´m liking where this is heading, but how did she end up in Washington from Florida, or is that coming later..
Krazi..
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drifting
Ummm... Okay....the ending kinda confused me, but it has me on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91318
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Smok´n hot and well worth the wait! I just love anytime we get to spend with these four. It´s always one hell of a ride! I´m with Bella though, I don´t know if James is worth the headache. I just feel like he may be up to something. Who knows? Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweetie:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
SO FAR SO GOOD... ALTHOUGH I FEEL THAT THE TEACHER IS GOING TO HAVE SOME NEGATIVE VIEWS ON THEIR FAMILY SITUATION...I THINK SHE PICKED UP ON THE FACT THAT BOTH GIRLS CALLED EDWARD DADDY WHEN IN THE LAST CHAPTER THEIR WERE CLEARLY TWO SETS OF PARENTS...SO I GUESS THE NARROW MINDEDNESS IS COMING SOON
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I´ve got a strange feeling Ms. White doesn´t like any of the children because of their parents.. but I can´t wait til she gets put in her place!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Yeah... I kinda figured that Ms. Whitw was a bit of a biggot and had been mistreating the kids... How sad of her to take out her ignorance on the innocent children.... I can´t wait until they get ahold of her...great chapter.. and I´ve really enjoyed all three stories...
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
haha...gotcha Mrs. White.... I guess you heard that you old bat... it was nice to see Phil show up in the story.. with a positive roll not doubt,,,, great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
haha...Carlisle and Embry to funny with all the questions... and What´s with Seth, Tanya, Ben and Angela.. another foursome in the making... haha.... that´s too funny, glad Edward will be working with Bella on the project.... I really say if I trust James.. he´s a sneaky one..... no worries... delays in posting just heightens the anticipation!!!! lol.... great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I say outtakes.... the foursome focus is so much better between Alice, Jazz, Edward and Bella.. and besides it wouldn´t fair to the other couples... the only got outtakes... I still wanna kick Ms. White´s ass... she´s such an old bitch... and desk sex with Jazz was hot... poor Whitley and her nightmare.. good thing her Mommies and Daddies have such a big bed....lol!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
haha!!! this is a trip. Love Seth´s smooth tactics. i thought he was going to ask Carlisle could he re-open the office in Forks. Loving this story!! great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
awww... Seth and T are headed to Forks. Love that Bella won the bet! So... will Ms. Di be giving the other simple minded Moms a piece of her mind? I would love to see he put them in their place. Great chapter BB!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Way to leave us hanging! Lol! James is a real douchebag! I don´t trust him at all! Can´t wait for thid epic night between EBJ&A! Sounds hot!!! Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, You're welcome for the cliffie ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Nothing like dropping an asshole client... 20 cups of coffee... hot office sex... and a cliffie to bring it all home. Once again I´m left speechless! Lol! I just knew James wouldn´t go away quietly! Then again... does he ever? Great chapter hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
That's if it is James in the car, right? ;)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Well that was unexpected or was iit? Lol! This so has James´ crazy ass written all over it, but I know, I´ll just have to wait and see! Lol! I´m nothing if not patient. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, you are very patient, my dear!!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Hey Honey! Thanks for another great update! Don´t worry about how long it takes, we´ll still be here.... promise! Missy ya when you´re gone! Great chapter!
FYI... I think it´s James and he´s doing it because they dropped his account. Someone else may or may not be in on it too, but James is most definitely involved!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yeah that was intense. I just know it´s that fruit loop James. He is such a monster´s ball. I hate him. Poor Bella, it tough when you feel like your mind is playing tricks on you! great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
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Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aspen & Cold Showers
awwwww..... that was so sweet.... I love these two.....Edward's emergency cold shower was funny... I'm nervous by Alice's premonition...but of course I know...no pain no gain!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch
Hey!!!! I thought the name dropping was funny, probably because that really happens...and I hope they don´t pop a gasket and let it slide!!! Very cute chapter...and glad to these to having some drama free times....
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains
GREAT START.. I´M VERY INTRIGUED.... YOU´VE GOT ME WONDERING WHY ROSE IS WORRIED ABOUT BELLA BEING ALONE WITH HIM.. IT MORE THAN JUST THAT HE´S A MANWHORE.... BUT I´M NOTHING IF NOT PATIENT... SO I CAN WAIT TO FIND OUT!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! MUCH more to come.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark
A DRUNK DOMESTICATED ROSIE.. HILARIOUS... LET´S JUST HOPE SHE CREASES MORE THAN SHE BURNS....HAHA.... THE LUNCH WAS MY FAVORITE.. I LIKE THAT HE PROMISED TO BE HONEST WITH HER AND WAS HONEST ABOUT BEING DRAWN TO HER... VERY...VERY....VERY CURIOUS ABOUT BELLA´S PAST....GREAT CHAPIE!!!
KRAZI
Author's Response:
I have an Aunt that used to iron when she was pissed off at her family. I always thought it was funny. I'd probably set their clothing on fire, not iron it. lol THanks for the review!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass
OK EMMETT IS JUST TO FRIGGIN FUNNY... HE FRENCH KISSED ROSE IN MASS LAST YEAR.. AND WATCHES FROSTIE THE SNOWMAN... GOTTA LOVE SUM EMMETT....BELLA GOT HIM THE PERFECT GIFTS....WHAT HAPPENED TO BELLAAAAAAAAAAAAAA??????????.. OK SORRY DIDN´T MEAN TO SHOUT..I KNOW PATIENCE....I MELTED WITH THE FLOWERS AND TEXTS TO EDWARD...ROSE IS GONNA BUST A GASKET WHEN SHE FINDS OUT.....
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
As you can probably guess, this was an extremely fun chappy to write. THanks for your review!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R
GREAT CHAPIE... LOVE DINNER WITH THE CORBITS!!! MMMM MORE B&E TEXTING...I LIKIE LIKIE.... CAN´T FOR MONDAY´!!! GO EMMETTT GET´N SUM CHRISTMAS FANTASIE POO NANNY!!! OH DO BE TOO HARD ON EMMETT HE´S A REFRESHING CONTRAST TO THE DRAMA AND ANGST!!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Emmett never gets the beat down he probably deserves...he's too lovable. THanks for the review!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations
OMG!!!!!! I had to review....that was the funniest thing I have ever read....Emmett is so stupid!!!!! God I wish he was my bestfriend....If this was a sitcom...I would be all over it every week... I am a B&E fanatic..but Emmett Swan is my freak´n hero!!!!!! I am so in love with this story...Great Chapie....I can never get enough...I actually laughed until I cried...I took me a minute to finish reading I was so tickled....BTW Go Eddie!!!! Mike Newton is an eff'n douchebag as usual....See ya next time!!! Laterzzzzz
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am inspired by nice people like you!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: First Dates & Riff Raff
Aww.....that was so sweet and we even got sum Esme and Bella bonding time!!!! And of course our hugable... ;ovable... Emmett time....all in all a great chappie...laterzzz
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Handcuffs & Power Suits
I'd like to have the rangers ballz hanging from my rearview mirror...just saying...what a jerk...thankfully he didn't try and rape her...poor Bells...thank God Edward was able to come..he takes such good care of her..great chappie...BTW... I'm lov'n me sum Esmom and Carldad!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
me too! thanks!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe
Hey....I ain't mad atcha....Emmett is always a riot when he shows up....I really hope Rose has something good cooked up for Ranger Dickhead....the discription of the prosecuter was hilarious...great chappie!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake: The He-Man Incident
funny....Damn....gotta love Emmett!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks! u r awesome!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chipmunks & Oscars
Funny as hell as usual...I mean are you serious dressing ups eating popcorn to watch an awards show on tv....lol...and of course Emmett kills me everytime...this is by far the sweetest and funniest fic I´ve read yet,,,can´t wait for more!!!!!
Kraazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Perjury & Sweet Dreams
I say let the man fart...more room out than in...haha...as always you kill me...I just love you and so look forward to the updates....yeah I'm glad we put the ranger in his place...and Mimi is next..I love Rosalie...BTW can't someone bitchslap Tanya into tell the truth...and yes...bring on the sex!!!!!! we've waited long enuff and so have they..poor frustrated darlings...see ya next time...oh I just love how Edward shows up at just the right time!!! great chappie hon!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you! Obviously the dream was in response to a few readers panting for sex...LOL. I promise they won't die virgins...they WILL get it on eventually. I know EXACTLY when ...but I'm not tellin'.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vandalism & The Apocalypse
Wow....this one made me sad....Even though I know he thought the was leaving her for her,...never the less it was still heartbreaking...on another note...can somebody please 'Bitch Slap' Camille...I am so sick of her...I'm a little salty with Tanya tooo..but then again I'm so used to her stupidity....great chappie...
krazi
xoxo