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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
Heartbreaking chapter, scary that this could be happening somewhere in this country. I love the way the both of you write and always look forward to the next update.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Horrible background story on Carlisle, very frightening. I'm concerned what has happened to Bella. I will be very anxious until the next update. Great story.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
This story is such a guilty pleasure. I feel wrong and upset reading it, but I just can't seem to stop. It's very scary thinking these things are probably going on right now in this country. The way you write though it's a non-stop ride.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
It does seem crazy, but also it seems like this is the road the story is taking, I just don't know yet where you will lead us.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
I didn't think I could hate Aro more, but I do. I'm a little nervous about the next chapter, but can't wait.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
Aro is super creepy. I don't want ot think what would happen to Bella if he finds out she is having memories.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
I find him extremely creepy, just knowing that he has to have sex with the bride before she gets to be with her husband so he can be the one to repopulate ugh. Wouldn't that make like a lot of 1/2 brothers and sisters, now that is creepy. It would however be funny if he was shooting blanks, that I would find hysterical.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
Thank goodness for Esme, at least someone in that crazy place is watching out for her and I know Carlisle will help.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
I was really hoping Felix would give Charlie some kind of clue.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Aro is getting creepier and creepier, can we do away with him now please.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
This is the worse thing that could have happened to Bella, seeing her Mom and trying to escape. I hope you have a way out for her.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Oh it would be wonderful if it was Felix or Charlie, that would be a very Happy New Year indeed.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh excruciating cliffie, is Edward at the door or did he get Charlie? Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
This is definitely a good cliffie. I think Edward should just knock Aro over the head with something heavy, take his keys, get Bella out and Charlie should be there and rescue them all. Yay!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Poor Edward & Bella, Aro is a cruel, insane demon. I just hope you have Felix and Charlie busting in their soon. I truly hope you didn't have Aro rape her.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Poor Bella, I hope you have a better New Year for both Edward & Bella. Happy New Year and thanks for the incredible story.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515313
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
I love this saga and look forward to the updates.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Great chapter, very informative, lots of new info and Jacob confused as he always is. Let's get James & Laurent and kick their butts.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG, James is out of control, sick, violent funk. I hope Heidi does something to help the girls before Victoria or Bella get hurt further.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
No body takes Bella from Edward and gets away with it. Go get her Edward!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Yay, Bella is safe, Edward is with her, and I hope James gets his just punishment. I'm hoping for an extremely happily ever after.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
I have enjoyed this story so much and was glad when you found a home for it her and continued it after fanfic blew up and started taking down all my favorites. It has been quite an experience reaing The Training School Saga and I think it's brilliant. I'm sad it's coming to an end, but I'm sure Bella & Edward will have their happy ending.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
This has been an incredible journey, I just read this last chapter for the 2nd time. You did such a great job and I loved every single chapter (even the hard ones). Thanks for sharing.
There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is? A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.
Banner by mkystich72 .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Ok, obviously trying to make this look like Emmett did it, but I don't think so. I haven't got a clue, however, who did this yet.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This kind of let Charlie off the hook, makes it seem like it's a male who had no previous attachment to Tanya, but someone Tanya obviously wanted, sounds like a member of the Cullen family because murderer said they messed with the wrong family. By the way love the deputy's name Ben Dover (bend over), very funny LOL. Still no guess.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Looks like Emmett is still in the clear and Henderson. It seems like Miss Bella hasn't been around a lot so far, could she possibly be the guilty party, I'm leaning more towards a male, by the way they grabbed Tanya's hair and yanked her head back. I really hope it's not my sweet Edward.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I think Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rose, Henderson, Carlisle can all be eliminated. Starting to look like Charlie could be involved.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
This really clears Charlie as he was out in the hall when he heard the scream. I believe Carlisle is clear also, otherwise why would he bring Charlie into the Tanya problem.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625419
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love
Wow, extremely powerful beginning chapter. So sad, but beautifully told at the end.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Let's hope Edward's training (even all of this is OOC for me) is not as bad as Charlie's. That is so sick that her father and brother would treat her this way. It's bad that anyone would but her own family ugh!
Author's Response:
Right now Edward is just the lesser of two evils. Give him time, he has a lot to learn.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Even though the whole premise of training a woman (without her consent, and being underage) is so wrong, at least you've made Edward sympathetic and basically good.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43
Beautiful chapter, if only it would last. I have a feeling Carlisle is going to ruin everything (when did he get so mean?) with this Demetri fool. I hope the angst isn't going to last too long, please.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44
That was beautiful and everything I thought it would be.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
I knew it was too good to be true. Let's get past the bad part fast please.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
Pitchfork down for now, but I can't promise I won't pick it up again.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
Your leaving me hanging like this, really. The only other person I can think of is Carlisle. Please update as soon as possible I don't want to be left alone with my imagination.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I hope you have a plan, because I was a little upset with that last sentence. She finally realizes who is really is and she wants him to let her go. I hope this is just a test to see what he will say.
Author's Response: Trust me. I always have a plan, even when I don't know what it is yet. ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
So sad this story is almost over. It was rough in the beginning, but you made it so interesting I was totally hooked. I loved this chapter by the way (I think we all knew her date would be Edward), true love is meant to be. I would be very interested in a novel. Please keep me updated.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
What a beautiful ending to such a horrific beginning. I love that in all stories (99% anyway) Edward and Bella always find each other. Thank you for sharing.
Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I'm not sure if I like Bella wanting more from Jacob. Let's bring Edward back into the mix and get something exciting going.
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315860
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I thought this was a great chapter, showed B & E getting much closer, but I wasn't sure about all the indecision Bella was still feeling. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram
What the hell is the matter with Bella, why does she have to believe what Rose said when she knows its not true, she spends all her time with Edward, how is he cheating on her. Insecurities are bad news.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think
Rough chapter, I don't like how Bella hurt Edward, but I am glad she's trying to save hersel, but at what cost.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Loved the story, thanks for sharing.
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 753014
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Great beginning, has my interest and can't wait to see where you're taking it.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it. It's all here now save for the summer outtakes :)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell
I really like how you gave a quick kickstart to Edward & Bella's feelings towards each other. Very exciting and fast paced story so far.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment
Always as you said making the wrong choices first, never fails. Kinda love Slutward though, he's just an idiot where love is concerned.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. We learn more and more about why as we go along. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel
Fascinating, really good job. You made the whole chapter very exciting and brought the boys all home safely. I found all the SWAT stuff very exciting and of course Edward coming to his senses so early in the story made me happy. I have a feeling Trevor is going to be involved with the mob being he got called away just before the guys did.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Guess I was wrong about Trevor being linked with the Mafia, but sounds like he still might be an asshole. Hope Edward gets it together soon and that Bella is open enough to listen to him.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I do think Bella was a bit over reactive, but she's loved Edward for so long and knows how he is that she just couldn't believe him even though she wanted to.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm sure things won't be smooth, but I'm so happy that Edward & Bella are going to try. Can't wait (I hope) for their first date.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection
Great job! Everything Edward did was so thoughtful and so E & B. I loved how Edward didn't try to hide the bulge but was just honest about the way Bella affected him, very funny. Hopefully Edwards 2 weeks away for training won't be a problem between them (not that it should).
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum
I can't wait to find out how Trevor fits into all this. He must be important, because Mr. Clean wouldn't need to make money setting up girls for guys to pick up if he's that close to the mob. Hmmmmmmm......... What do you have up your sleeve, can't wait to find out.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for the great reviews!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster
Thank you for resolving that angst issue so quickly. Tanya is nothing but trouble (even if she doesn't mean to be). I don't understand how Edward's own mother didn't try and contact him, but I'm sure you'll resolve that also even though I don't know if I could forgive any excuses she comes up with.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted
Lots of information in this chapter about E & B's past. His Mom, her being Annie Oakley and lots of lemony expectations. You're correct very well rounded.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed
I loved the result of the visit with Elizabeth, very creative and not at all what I was expecting. Hot oral sex to Kings of Leon great! Oh the lemons I can just imagine.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time
That was the most romantic (& hottest) night ever. Great job with both. This Edward may be the Studward of all time.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I'm so glad Esme said the things Edward couldn't, it brought the closure he needed so badly. I think the love story between these two characters transcend any situation and make them so easy to love. You have captured that so beautifully.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss
Wow, what an incredible person you have made Bella (and to think there actually are people who are as selfless as that). Very intense, angst filled chapter. You wouldn't dare let anything happen to Edward or the story would be over, but the wait is still exruciating.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Focus Fluctuations
Right now your writing is amazing me. I really feel like I am so inside the characters, all of them and it's because of your wriing. I am truly amazed.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed
I really love how you having Bella deal with everything that has traumatized her. She shows such strength, but how much she needs Edward also. Great job.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Equivalency
I also love both Psych and Bones (I think both shows are underappreciated). Very insiteful, moving chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Sympathetic Solitude
Thank you for clearing that up so fast. I can't imagine how hard it must be for an active adult male to be so cooped up with no outlet and no way to speed things up. Great insite into both Edward and Bella, of course we know they always gravitate back to each other. Patience, love, understanding.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Concerning Charlotte
Excellent chapter. All the drama and pain for poor Charlotte. God forbid any of us has to go through that trauma, don't we all wish for a Dr. Swan.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations
Beautiful sentiments for the hottest couple in fanfic. Could the engagement have been more perfect, I think not.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 41: A Happy New Year
So Edward and the future Mrs. Cullen are exhibitionists now. Is it wrong that I find that extremely hot? Except for Bella's work that was an extremely fun chapter.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The World Spins Madly On
It may have been heart wrenching, but it was also heart warming. Edward remembering everything about Bella from their first meeting at her parents funeral was beautifully told. I love the way you describe his feelings for her.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Rock On
Wow! I have tears running down my face from the vision of E & B singing Bring Me to Life to each other. What a fantastic chapter. You threw a little of everything in, the lemony goodness was awesome, the hot suggestions great but the love was just beautiful to think about. Thank you. Your idea for this Battle of the Rock Band was terrific and you did it up well.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think it was my favorite chapter to write :)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off
I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, really hot lemon, love all over the place.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There
Well done. Beautiful ceremony, words, music leading up to it and such love. This was everything a wedding should be and more. Tears still flowing (happy tears), just absolutely beautiful.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Everything
I can't say enough about the glorious day this wedding was. First the ceremony, then the reception and now they are off to Greece, (after joining the mile high club). Very, very cool.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I'm so glad I found this fanfic, it has been a wonderful adverture. You have a great way of storytelling and I will be reading your other fanfics as well. Thanks for sharing all the heartache and joy with your readers.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all of the awesome reviews. This is actually in the top ten reviewed list now :)
AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer. Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174121
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Backlighting (Collaboration)
First review for this story, I wanted to wait until one of the chapters you wrote/co-wrote. This has been my favorite chapter to date. The story draws you in, but I love the interaction between Bella/Edward and Bella/Alice. Looking forward to continuing the read. I found you and read Femme Docs & Kevlar Knights and just loved it so much, I have decided to soak up all your fabulousness.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Focal Point
Lots of info, a little intrigue, kept E just mysterious enough.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Overexposure
I really love the way you write and describe, it was all beautiful (except for Victoria of course, Bitch) lol.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty
How Romantic was that? Absolutely wonderful, you are a genius, I have no other words.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I really had fun writing this. It forced me to expand my wings a little more description wise. I had a lot of fun doing it. I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Observational Distortion
Beautifully descriptive at the end. The beginning was most women's internal head games with themselves when there afraid to take chances, I like the way you did that.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: More Latent Images
I love where this is going and how you didn't leave us hanging for 10 chapters.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Complimentary Colors
How romantic can you get. Amidst the hangover pain and them not really knowing each other, they still meet and can feel what there is between them. It's absoltely beautiful and I've said it before, but I love the way you write.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill
Halloween sounds like fun Cullen style. I thought Bella & Alice had plans with the outfits they found shopping that day. Bella better check in with Alice and let her know she's okay.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Vignetting
What an incredible date. You have a wonderful, creative imagination and I can't wait to see where it leads next.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sharpness
Where do I find this Edward, love pours out of him at every turn. Very romantic and they are so supportive of each other, I love it.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Fixation
Beautifully done. That was incredible sweet, hot, long lemony goodness.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Negative
Love, love, love, it's a beautiful thing.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Diffuser
This was one of those chapters that was just perfect, beginning to end. You have told such a beautiful story of how love can complete two people who are open to it.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity
Romance and love is in the air incessantly and so beautifully worded. Just incredible.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Perfect Background
Such fun and of course it would be Edward's meadow, perfection again.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Contrast
OMG your killing me here, I don't know if I can get through the next few chapters. The way you describe their love is so amazing, it has tears streaming every chapter showing how much beauty their characters contain.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Conflicting Shadows
That was great. I loved your idea of Bella bidding (even though I had my suspicions), but I was wondering who the other bidder was. Very good.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Angelic Phantom
Fantastic wedding, beautiful gowns, flowers, love the horse and carriage. Perfection.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Thank you for sharing one of the most beautiful love stories in fanfic. You did an incredible job and I'm sure I will revisit to reread one day. Can't wait to continue with your stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the reviews!
Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research
I love the way this story started, fast right out of the gate. Bella & Edward flirting from the get go is very hot.
Author's Response:
Awe...I'm glad you liked it! They do jump right into it~
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster
That was fast and very lemony. I loved the interaction with the Cullens, that was fun.
Author's Response:
That was my first ever lemon so I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman
Wow I like this pace, only 3 chapters and Edward knows he loves Bella already, yea! Looking forward to hearing more about both their backgrounds and for Bella to recognize her feelings.
Author's Response:
There past comes to light pretty quick too and with everything happens the pace keeps up.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Buried Under the Guilt
There is still a possibility if she had her eggs frozen, they still could have children or at least one natural child. Adoption is always possible and we know Edward loves her, so I hope he'll come around soon.
Author's Response:
There are still options, they just have to find a way to work past it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Another Country Heard From
Please don't tell me Esme has breast cancer. I don't know how much more angst I can handle right now.
Author's Response:
Well, I know you're well past that, but nothing that bad for Esme, what does happen is bad enough~
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
She will officially be known from here on out as Saint Bella.
Author's Response:
Awe...Bella is very selfless when it comes to the Cullen's and Edward, even early on.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Way Beyond Empty
Beautiful chapter, I loved every word.
Author's Response:
Thank you...the song was something I was so nervous to put out there, but it ended up being well received. I really enjoyed this chapter~
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Some String and a Bag of Oats
That was fun, enjoyed the girls and the bachelorette party, nothing got to out of hand. It seemed like Edward definitely benefited from their outing.
Author's Response:
Oh yes...Edward had more fun than the groom that night~