interesting story.  I am not sure if I get slither, the title. Perhaps it is how they live?

Well any how. Edward money or not is paying for his "kiss"

she was right, why did he need proof?  Well she just cheated on James. So she is no better, only she is married.

Yes we trust you, I just don't like her choices here.

of course Tanya is still trying. Grandpa is helping feed her the info.

You know they came along way. I was worried we might not make it here. You have been great, updating and all.

Pat yourself on the back. All too many writers give up while writing. 

Thank you,

ahh as usuall I love your work. I am reading  Life Happens so Just Roll with IT.  I also LOVE the Walmart piece..

Your work is always funny and not the damn same stuff over and over..

Thank you,

Bella did fine. I think Renee did not tell Bella because she knew she was wrong about the age difference. She was and is a hypocrit.   I still don't like Renee even though they have a truce.  She should love her daughter and granddaughter more than herself.

Edward is really coming along.

Thoughts?

Here goes, Jacob is out of line. PERIOD She is grown and she can make her own mistakes.  If I was Bella I would tell him straight out. If you say one ugly word to Carlisle then don't bother to come or call me again. He would retort ever and she would say until our relationship is over. If it is never over then I am sorry to say EVER.

That is not love to be that controlling. It is not!

Dragging this part out, is mean!

I think Tanya in any story is questionable when you speak of truth. If Molly does not wake up then she could be brain dead, the machines will show that. If her brain is alive they may want to take the machines off and let her die. Well with a small child that would be devistating.

WRITE FAST

She is going to date father and son? Well and Mama/Edwife is her professor?  I maybe wrong but I am think this is where this is going..

I understand they want to protect her, but she is no baby. They need to shut up and watch it develop and let HER decide.

Wow Esme is a really bad woman. You over did her! LOL

Well I think Carlisle and Bella are great together. I wonder though if Edward at his younger age might be a better choice in the long run. 

Esme,yuk!

Jacob, finally!

If they love Carlisle that is all that matters. Her family can adjust or shut up.

Well what do I think. Tanya spilled the beans to Edward. Now Edward has to get Carlisle alone and tell him. I think I need that part before I talk really! Tanya in any story is not the best one to trust on her word.

If it is true then I think it might be the best thing for Bella. She needs someone that in honest with her. Perhaps that someone is not a Cullen, they have issues.

I think Edward should have confronted his father first before telling Bella. I think Tanya has a track record of lieing on all Fan fiction!.. lol

I think if I wanted to find this out I would have gone down to the hospital and checked to see if he was there. Quietly checking up. Then I would believe Carlise over Tanya.

Great dramaless chapter.  Renee is not going to be happy so Bella needs to tell her straight up. Get over it or don't bother coming around.   Renee is just jealous. She wants Carlisle for herself.

sorry about your health problems.

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Nice story.

I thought you gave this up.

The advice was perfect.  Obviously Edward needed it.

at least they are on better footing.

good chapter

As ususal when you write I like the story. Well our southern roots, yes we were raised to be chaste ( not all stay with that), honest, go to church on Sunday.  Drink iced tea! My northern family always found that strange, we drink it year round down here. I thought the first time I went north and there was no chicken fried steak, I would die. So funny! Of course that was many many years ago.

Good story,

love the story. He acted like a guy that is in love. Slightly off on his worry though. He could have just paid her the compliment and said for a gal that has never done that before you were PERFECT. So she would have owned up to it. Save the drama.

xo

LOL.. Men

Newton.. hang him high.

another great chapter.  I am looking forward to the whole 4 books. See you soon.

another great chapter. You are doing so good with the rewrite.

You know great chapter. Yes, when you know you know. Bella is so observant. She is so grounded and for a child of a broken home she is secure in herself.

Funny. You are doing a good job. I just wished you had nothing else to do!. ha ha.

She needs to focus on school. Then after the week is over she can decide if she ever wants to see him again. 

Well nice story.

Okay well I guess you have to have some of this to be a king. Macho! Take charge! That was a time in the world ruled by MEN. women were chattel. Queens didn't really have much power, only what their husbands gave them.

Rhodesian Ridgeback, Corgy

Scotland homeland of my grandfather.

Okay. Time to toughen up Isabella. Renee needs to be delbt with severly. She was going to have the princess killed.  So tell that to Edward. Renee does not deserve to stay in court any longer. Renee and Charles should be removed.

How dirty to break your water with someone's fingernail..............ewww..

ahh, they are not having sex? Is he philandering? 

Anna, sounds like you have an auto immune disease. Causes joint pain. I have that and so does my daughter.  They are very hard to diagnose.   Start looking in that area..

Okay well he lives up to the type of people we elect to office. These people thrive on power, of course they could not be elected if not. We all seem to worship these type of people.  He uses his in the bedroom as well. Perhaps he uses it more there than in life. Okay having said that, then we visit Isabella.

She is an artist so she has lots of emotion. She is 18 so here comes the hormones. She is Catholic so she is probably a virgin because of her shyness and her father wears a gun and has instincts about people that are more developed than the average person.

If you keep this up it could be good.

I so love them. I wonder about myself for loving Mafia figures.

Thank you, good chapter. I am not sure at times what they are going to do with someone. Esme has dug herself a hole. If "Daddy" was alive she would be in better shape.  Carlisle has created a lot of their problems with his screwing around. Of course Esme does it too.  I am not fond of those type people. Two wrongs never make a right. That is my motto.

I think Edward has made some major changes. I am glad he did not let them kill Mario he should pay for hurting Alex.  When Carlisle blabbed, I laughed.  I said oh no you are stirring the pot.

Hey never hate you!?  Great chapter. THis is the MOB.. We knew once he started the war with Jersey or they started, whatever. We knew it would be like this.

Just don't kill off Edward & Bella and their kids.

Well the guy asking Bella out has a hidden agenda. He is Mafiaso.  Careful how you handle that.  Sonny is asking questions he has a right to know. 

I am getting nervous about this, too calm right now.

You never leave a chapter with Bella and Edward not together.  She flipped out. She took it out on him, his business got their son hurt.  Well yes and when she finds out her new family is part of it.  More guilt. Only this time she won't have Edward. I am afraid they have hit a bad bad place.

I am laughing. Bella and Edward are right they are happy because the don't cheat each other.  Thank YOU for that.

after reading your comments BEFORE I read this chapter. I want to say "report you for what"? These stories are about E & B and he is in the MOB. This is not Alice in Wonderland.  You do not put crap in for that sake. Just write your story and remember it is good and worth reading. This is their journey so TELL it.

Now I read.

Well Bella just got another child to raise. Oh poor Candice. Carlisle is like a cat. 9 lives! Sad day. Well this is the mob people. The people in Jersey are hitting back hard.

Well next chapter..

Thank  you..

Esme just keeps on making problems. I guess with Marcus for a father and her husband a manwhore what can you expect.

I reread this. I read it on FFtion. I swear I am starting to get old. Well I am glad they are back together together. How stupid it matters so much to me. to worry about it. I know you don't want to write this forever. WHY I don't know. Edward is something else, but his love for his wife and hers for him makes me feel all is okay if they are okay.

you wrote these last 3 chapters and they were hard I am sure and great.  Bella is a mother that was living the nightmare we mothers all worry about secretly. The loss of  a child. She was so frightened. She had to heap on to that they wanted to kill her husband as well.  I get her wanting to have at them first. I am not sure I could kill anyone but in the act of defending myself or my family you betcha I could.  Later maybe not. I do understand her feelings.  MAMABEAR is in the HOUSE!... Love ya Lexy.

what a Party. We all have nutty families but I am so glad I don't have a Renee.  Lauren flirting with my husband I would deck her too.

You know you have a life... US  I count you as one of the best writers in FFion.  I think the number is under 20. 

We all understand, we have our families. As in kids and husbands.