okay here we go. This is their problem. They are attracted to each other and are fighting it.

sister this is good.

Well when he and Bella finally do the DEED. It will take  you a chapter to tell that one! I have another story I have read that was slow building, when they got to that part it was so beautiful. You almost cried with them.

Poor Bella both Edward and Jacob want to cut her out of their lives.  I am waiting on a story where she says.. You know I am team Bella and neither of you are what I want.

See there he is jumping in with another woman. He does not love Bella. She is just some symbel to him not love the type where you can't leave that person you must be with them. He will next chapter be jumping into the sack with Elizabeth.

good story

please keep it going. Good Story. YEA BELLA

ok Yada Yada Yada.. when is sir MEETING Pet?  I keep thinking he will see her I mean you can't hide all that with that little mask. And she knows him too. SO... I  IS WAITING.

Well finally all is out.. so to speak. All these pictures and that warning.  I personally can do without the pictures. I get the drift when reading. Pictures at the top of the characters is fine the place is fine in the throws of ___. dont need that.

Another cliffy.........I could wring your neck.  

cheating is not good. Shit or get off the pot.

Dont promote that. He needs to leave her or love her. Bella split her marriage when she was not being faithfull.

Okay the calls either Eric or maybe Ang hired a private DICK. She wants to trap Edward and keep him. For her it is not about love it is about the money. She may love him, but not in a good way.

Bella was so right. The best way for this to go down is seperate until the divorce is done. If ANG wont sign then file for legal seperation prior to final divorce. Make her live on less, she has no children and in some states that puts her in responsiblility for herself. 

Edward needs to wise up and get a new cell. Tell only his family the new number and keep the old one if he has to talk to Ang. The quicker he stops talking to her the quicker she will pay attention.

GET A LAWYER GET A CLUE..

Glad there is no children.

Well, well well. about time to make this right.  Why would anyone want to stay in a marriage with someone that does NOT love you?? AHH Money. Obviously.

dear me...forks

whew I really thought she was going to kill Bella.She did the courts a favor by ending her own life. Then she can discuss eternity with Jesus.

what a chapter

You may swoon, but I am still mad as hell at him. When you loose people you are brought to the knowledge of "LIFE IS SHORT and NEVER FORGET TO SAY I LOVE YOU". His actions are horrible. Esme rubbed off on him.

I dont know what she knows but it would be to her advantage to find SOMEONE ELSE.

Edward needs to stay with MAMA.. 110 years more.

You know it seems teadious to keep rehashing " I am not safe for you Bella". Either work up another relationship and damn well mean it or leave her alone. If another Vampire kills her then too bad she is NOT your problem.  Edward drives me crazy with his crap.

Well okay now we both know we love each other and we can not seem to find that feeling elsewhere, so now what is next?  You can not live apart can not live together as she is now. She is changeable he is not.  This is really not that hard to figure out. How long does it take them?

I swear if you love something that much, you want to be able to be together.

nice and uneventfull.

children always make it simple.

good story..

wow... what a day

Well so ALice & Edward were manipulated, must be Carlisle.  War with Victoria!

This will be priceless.. hurry up now.

I have seen FUBAR before mentioned and never knew what it meant. Thank you.

Great story, by the way.

So good. You are doing such a good job. Okay Alice, well what can I say?  They wanted Bella to completely give up so they could MOLD her. I think if I was Bella that the earth would be too small for those people and me to be on it. I would not invite her back ever. Jasper that is quite another story.

I just can't wait for broodward to start hurting!  I know I am bad...S.Meyer did not hurt him enough in 3 books for what he did in the beginning of New Moon.

We miss you when your gone!

Well death to the evil ones. I am glad that Bella was not harmed further. I am sad for Hannah, too young for that life.

Miss you and your story, this time I had to reread to get back into this. You write very well, just slowly.

Great Chapter. Love you always.. waiting on Wallmart.. BellyMama.

Well I keep waiting to hear he really did f..k Tanya in his drugged stupor.  I am hoping not!  Bella is not jaded like he is.  She will be his voice of reason. He will be her strength when she needs that.  She has to remember he is not perfect.

Edward has a big ego, as he would have to have to be at his level. Okay now saying that he has many dark areas of his persona.  He needs a certain amount of alone time with her and he is not getting it and that is killing him.  MEN

Bella has this Jake deal always!  Jake is nice etc. She has to work on her relationship too. Make time for him once or twice a week. And that she is not doing.

Charlie is a dad, that would be hard to field those kinds of calls. I don't blame him.

I stopped reading. TOo much mess. She is out of control herself. She needs to settle her butt down and get rid of James take responsibility for the wreck. If you start out lieing you will continue that lie and make it bigger.

Edward needs rest time away from the business. Bella needs a manager she can trust.

Well that is sad but better she see it and end it. She is not married to him. HE has cheated with Tanya, he probably has with someone else, he can't remember.So best to end this relationship. She may have to finish her tour but end them.

Hard drugs change people and not for the better.

Yes she is making steps. She has to focus on her career and not him. He will move on in the media.

She has got to do the same. Be seen going out and doing things again. Don't hide.  I must say some of what James said is true. Aro is looking out for his bottom line and not her. She is not as high on his interests as Cullen.

You know she is wise to be away from ALL OF THEM. Do you have to sink her some more?

She is never coming out of this. She gets blamed for Edward's deed. Of course Tanya blamed Bella, self serving ho.

Let me start saying I am glad you finally decided to write again. This is a good story, shame to just drop it. I am getting to the point I wont read if something is not complete.  IT is madening to invest my time in a story and then its is flounced. Real life gets to us all. Especially when you are young and busy.

Edward still had this, "I AM A STAR" problem when he checks into the center. He wants everything his way. That is what got him in this mess.

That last paragraph gives me hope for Edward. Bella will need him and Jacob after James screws her over. Denali yuk.

Okay now we know we do not have INCEST. :-)

keep it going!

Love the story wish you would give us more each time.

thanks,

I am so glad you are updating this again. I love the period pieces. 

Well lets see if you keep this going, good start. If the updates are slow the story will become disinteresting.

Good luck,

Nice pace, not too fast on the hooking up part.

confession is good for the soul. I am glad you didn't drag that out..

good story and nice change in pace.

GOOD JOb

who hoo..

Nope not angry with Bella. That is the way it is when you love someone. You forgive them sometimes when you should NOT. So what she has to do, is be STRONG when he is weak. He is weak! 

Faced with her dating others and abandoning him he freaked out. Yeppers.. good job Bella.. That is where Stephanie went wrong.

Yes we missed you..

I love this!

good story.

Surprise baby boy.  Colton Charles Cullen. LOL 

THis chapter was so funny.

Can't wait for the christening!