Reviews by SmallTownGal
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your story! Break it down now!

Lovin' your writin' sweet momma

Wouldn't never ever have anotha

You do your sweet thing and update

but don't tell your publisha cuz then she be hatin'

Ohhhhhhhhh word!

UPDATE

Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Review: Phantom of the Opera style!

In sleep he watched over her

In dreams the vampires came

that voice which spoke to stephenie

and said edwards name

and do I dream again

for now I find

you're a much better author than she

inside my miiiiinnnnnddddd

UPDATE

Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alien style!

Bee boop! dee la doop daloop! doo da doo doo duhhh! Flaggen haffer shaztin dee doo daloop baduhf BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!

Translation: UPDATE!

Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ROCKY HORROR PICTURE SHOW STYLE!

Don't get strung out by the way people hate

Don't judge your book by it's cover

You're not as famous by the light of day

But by night you're one hell of an author

You're just a sweet awesome author from awesome author places

so let me review and make you feel better

you look like you're pretty stressed out

if you want something visual thats not to abysmal

look at those reviews on your screen!



Author's Response:

A girl who knows what her Momma likes!  That's why you're my favorite Chocolate Eyed Baby Girl.  My toes are tapping to your review.

Love you!

Momma

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Revelation: Bella's POV

I LOVE EMILY!!! I LOVE THE STORY I LOVE JACOB!!! I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM REALLY FREAKING HYPER AND YOUR STORY IS JUST AGGGHHH GREAT!!!!!!!! YAY!!!! BYE!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315702
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: SmallTownGal Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets

No abuse! I LOVE JACOB! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S SO CUTE! OOO angsty Edward, what a switch. ;)