Well, in her defense Jake and Paul were acting like an old jealous couple :)  Loved it.  [Makes me think of that Seinfeld episode 'He's gay, not that there is anything wrong with it']

Glad Bella and Edward finally met and he actually spoke to her [without having to wait a week like in the original].  I am excited to see Bella meet the rest of the Cullens!

Love your story!  I am pretty annoyed that Jasper didn't man up and call off the bet.  It is not just Bella that stands to get hurt, but his own relationship with Alice will also be on the rocks.  I have a feeling all will come to a head soon, and I hope they survive the fallout.

Awesome, finally the 3 brothers are no more...time to wrap this war up now

Thanks for another great story, I have really enjoyed this one [actually I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read].  You could probably have a whole other story written now that Jax is nearing her dating years :)

Great job on this story and showing how to bring 2 families together, I look forward to more!  Don't know if this will impact your posting decision, but I have always read your stories here on TWCS [even if I am bad about reviewing each chapter - sorry].  Know that we appreciate your work and if you continue to post here I will definitely continue to read.  Thanks again!

Thank god you had Bella realize that he has been trying to tell her the truth but she was in denial hearing it.  I would have hated to see her run away, so I am happy the babies calmed her down and she is ready to fight for them and for Edward.  Yea!

I think we all knew this was coming, and truly I hope she doesn't get too mad because I think they both brought this on themselves.  When the relationship went beyond the encounter on the plane, they should have fessed up instead of spending months getting to know each other physically but none of the truth.  At least Edward has attempted to tell her, she just never wanted to hear it.  Update soon!!!

uhh, that's awkward to walk in on, especially with kids :)

What a perfect end to a first date.  Can't wait to see their relationship grow.

Wow, lots happened in this Chapter!  Glad that Bella is now an equal vampire with Edward, but that sucks they are on the run since Aro is still out there...Interesting twist on the drinking from animals theme and how it came about.  Thanks

Yea!  I am so glad you decided to continue this storyline.  There is so much plot you can explore with Bella being introduced both to America and Veggie Vampires - Can't wait.

PS - love all the historical details you add.  I love my Dior shoes today, but had no idea of the history of Dior...  Thanks!

What a ho!  So glad Rose and Carmen got to them in time, now they need to save Bella from a similar fate 

Glad to see Ives is no more, but I would be weary of Tanya and Irina both, as women can be quite vengeful when they fill they have been wronged.  I hope that Edward gets over his brooding and changes Bella soon, she is around too much danger to put it off much longer. Thanks

The chapter with Bella's side of the story is missing here, can you repost it (chapter 22 that was posted is actually a repeat of chapter 1 and i assume was posted in error).  I would like to know what she told Edward that is making him rethink things....then I will understand this chapter a little more. Thanks

Hello there, I was following this story on ff.net but with all their issues and PG-13 drama going on, I decided to favorite you over here instead.  I like this chapter and how Bella was introduced to Alice.  Shame about Emmett, but now I wonder if Bella will fess up to Edward about what she is or if it will be revealed when Emmett tries to eat him :)

I can't believe he won't take no for an answer, thank god Edward caught him and kicked his ass out.  And he still managed to take care of Bella and slip her his number - smooth!

I agree with Angela, Edward is the perfect lawyer to have on retainer for workplace harassment.  I kind of feel she should have reported the bar assault to the police, or at the very least she should get a restraining order against as a preventive measure.  Love his flowers to her.

Lauren and James sound like they deserve each other...If only Bella was that lucky... I am glad she told Kate about James, you never know when you will need supervisor support, and Kate seems to really care about Bella.  Awesome promotion for Bella! And very weird case for Edward; given there was an assault, I wouldn't have suspected the perp to be a woman.

Dang, I need an Edward to celebrate my birthday with, those gifts were awesome (tell my hubby I am just kidding).  Ouch at the end, no words you want to hear during a date...

I think it's time to hear about Edward's history given his reaction to a name, and time for more B and E time :)

Bella did a great job paying Edward back on the birthday surprises!  Tanya continues to be annoying and possibly psychotic ( she is like the female version of James not understanding that no means no).  Maybe Edwards very vocal declaration will set her straight ( but probably not).

I was thinking that James has been too quiet lately.  But cutting up flowers sounds like a chick move, so I am guessing Lauren since it happened at work.  And way to spill the beans early Emmett (oops). It's not everyday you find out your boyfriend is a mega rich, part-owner of a successful law firm.  I soooo can't wait for this announcement at the ball and to see Denali's reaction :)

That is the first tie I have heard of someone aspiring to be an oompa-loompa, Edward is too cute!  And I agree with Bella - Rosalie is a heinous bitch and I wouldn't turn my back on her.  She is plotting something...

So Rose indirectly confirms she is working with Laurent, I know her motive is jealousy and just being a bitch, but I wonder how far she will go if pushed.

I totally agree with Edward by the way, Bella should call her out on her shit during Brunch where she can't manipulate behind the scenes.

And they both said 'I Love You's - so sweet and they are so cute together, at least Em and Jasper are happy for them.

Good for Edward!  He really needed to start standing up to his siblings, they are solo inconsiderate

That sucks about the library cutting the hours.  Maybe he could work the front counter at Eclipse part time to make up some hours.

Caius must employ the dumbest criminals ever, or maybe it is just hard to find professionals...I am glad they were caught and that Demitri talked to the FBI.

So the question remains "Where are the drugs?"  I am assuming that Laurent's truck has already been impounded and searched.  Did Bella's first break-in happen after Laurent's return, cause maybe he broke in and hid the drugs in Bella's house.  Maybe they can get some drug-sniffing dogs to come out and search B's house.  The only other place I can think of is buried at first beach or hidden in a cave or something off the beach, but that doesn't sound right either.  So I am thinking the drugs are hidden at Bella's, maybe they are hidden in the purple couch.  Regardless, I don't think B and E should move back home until this Caius is behind bars.

Poor Emmett surrounded by all those females, he needs some testosterone in the house so I hope he get a boy...

One thing I never understood about Rosalie was why she hated Edward instantly from the start.  I mean, Edward was a shy, quiet bookworm, why would Rose be so hateful to him (all before Bella even showed up in the picture).  I just never understood why she was so mean to him...

I love getting to learn more about Bella and Edward through their letters.  Ladies, keep up the good work!

Triplets would be hard enough, I can't imagine if one had development issues and the parents both work full time.  Sounds like a form of autism so I can't wait to see Dr. Kate's official diagnosis

So far so good, time for Edward to find his mate now...

I like that she feels the mating connection so strongly as well, even as a human.

Oops, not a good time to get caught :)

Glad that Bella shows no fear to Rosalie, she needs to get over it and mind her own business 

That one hot date!  Question on the mating bond - how long does this scent thing take?  Is it this long for all couples, or is it longer than normal due to her being human?

Wow!  That was quite the confrontation, sounds like it was a long time coming (poor Emmett).  I have always thought Rose was a bit of a hypocrite in canon just because she can't have a baby then every human woman should aspire to?  Good for Bella!

Great chapter, that Alice is a girl you want in your corner when dealing with Charlie.  She knows how to work him!

All I can say is FINALLY!  So glad it's bonding time!

Agreed!  Those are some HOT lemons you wrote!

oh my gosh, a mature conversation related to Bella's change as a vampire - Thank you!  Time to leave the cottage and back to the real world, at least you squeezed another couple of lemons in there...

They are so cute bickering with each other :)  And those were some great Valentine gifts, so much more than cliche` flowers, candy or jewelry.  I was wondering if she was going to see her mom before the change.

Love it, they can't turn down the Limo sexin'!  Question, I know your story didn't go there with the love triangle with Jacob [thank you for that], but is there any connections with the werewolves in this story?  They have been awful quiet lately... I was wondering if they freak out about Bella dating a vampire and maybe becoming one some day.

Must be pretty morbid to watch your own funeral.  I am not sure I could have handled that, but at least her journal will give Charlie some closure.  So, I assume the Bella was surprised to be bitten in the car.  She did ask to not know when it was coming, but even I wasn't thinking on the ride.

Wow, that's a helluva intro to a new story!  Can't wait to read more!

Okay, she is really starting to piss me off acting this immaturely...I was a teenager once, and no way would I do what she did this chapter, no matter how mad I was at my parents.  She will never be looked at as a grown woman that can handle herself if she keeps acting a fool like this...I hope Edward goes thru with his threat of hiring her a 24 hour babysitter, since she obviously needs one.

Nice chapter, I am so glad to see Rose be cool with Bella...Bella has to deal with enough bitchy women from Edward's personal and professional life, so it is refreshing to see her find one she gets along with [even if Rose is a dreaded blonde, LOL].

I hope Tanya doesn't find out they were in NY and forgot to call her...oops!

Well, at least he is aware of his shortcomings in the relationship 

Ooh, they all want their cake and eat it too as the saying goes.  Sounds good in theory, but let's see how they handle the reality of this relationship.

I foresee some jealousy issues on the horizon for all three of our lovers, can't wait to see how they handle it

Aww, so sweet they drove out to Forks to get their girl :)

You are killing me as a Ranger fan, making me remember that WS loss last year - but as a fan of your writing, I am glad Edward got one last chance at a ring - great job with this story :)