Reviews by vampgirl73
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

A mating call- how cool!!! So glad for another update!!! I love this story!

Author's Response:

I wanted to try out something new with the mating call. I'm glad it's being well recieved. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Imprinting is supposed to be a mutual thing. Bella obviously doesn't feel it. I can't believe she didn't fight against it a little harder.

Author's Response:

You're right. Imprinting is mutual and she doesn't feel anything for Paul. Her initial gut reaction was to stop a fight where Edward might be hurt even if she went about it the wrong way. Don't worry though, all will be right with the world.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I really like this. Are you going to update soon?

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. Yes, I will be updating soon. I just finished my second novel and I'm taking a short break to refocus my mind back on CAM & LOMO.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah an update! Looks like Bella's shield is already developing. Interesting. And it works on Alice to. That is an interesting twist. Update soon.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my!!How I would love to be the prey of the sexy beast Edward!!! Update soon!

Author's Response:

Get in line~  The next chapter will be the hunt from Bella's pov. Sexy times ahead! Consider it an early Christmas present.

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You have got to be kidding me!!!!! This hole just keeps getting deeper and deeper.Poor Bella!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

I hope it is Edward's baby. It has to be. She said Julian always used condoms.

Author's Response:

My lips are sealed but your questions will be answered soon...next 2 to3 chapters. Thx for reading!

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I'm enjoying your story, but what is the deal with Jacob? When are they going to officially meet? She hasn't even seen him yet? Faster updates would be really nice!! Like Christmas!! :)

Author's Response:

hehehehe...

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I love this story!! Can't wait for the next update. I read the story on my phone and it won't let me review there or there would be more from me. Keep up the great work!!!!

 



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks a bunch..... Im soooo happy to hear you love my story.... I got to 22 reviews so I have just posted ch 39

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Great chapter! Can't wait until Edwards POV next!



Author's Response:

Thanks sooooo much.... I won't make you wait too long Edward is YUMMY!!!!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Revelations

Wonderful chapter. I cannot wait until she meets Edward!



Author's Response:

Yay!!! Thanks a bunch for reviewing. Hugs

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Perseaus

I hope they tear that sleezy Tanya apart.
She kept all of this from them. I hope things work out in the end. I'm curious to what will happen with Tristan.

Author's Response:

Since I have been so fail at replying to reviews- here is a teaser form the next chap...a form of bribery? I think not...just me giving back a lil and saying thanks.

 

xx

As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. Or…leave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him?

This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.

 

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Poor Tristan. But I still want Edward and Bella back together and Tanya burned!

Author's Response:

Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?


Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Are we going to get to read the destruction of Tanya Denali? Please?

Author's Response:

Lol- Enjoy!

 

I pulled her up from the floor and almost toppled over as she let loose one quick blow with her foot to my shin. I felt the bones shatter and howled in pain. The red took over then; I sprang forward and up and latched onto her hips with my legs. My hands wound in her tangled hair, and with everything in me, I snapped my wrists and ripped off that pretty fucking head of hers. I collapsed to the ground seconds later and swatted the severed head towards the door. I clutched at my shin as pain seared through it. It was already healing, but I thought the healing may have been hurting more than the shattering did.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Descending into the Darkness

So sad.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: It Just Can't Be!

I hope it is Edward's. Having Tristan's baby would just complicate things even more. I'm glad he had decided to go back.

Author's Response:

:-)

Teaser:

“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Goodbyes

So sad :( You can't let her die! Update soon!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Prodigy Child

I am rooting for Edward, but he ran off again and has not contacted anyone. I know he was upset but he should have come back by now. Keep the fast updates coming! :)

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Revelations

:( That was so sad. What took him so long. 8 days? Bella got to see through Destiny exactly what happened and how Tristan stayed and helps her. I love Edward but he is a selfish coward. Now the Volturi are coming? There are only a few chapters left? Keep them coming!!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue

Well, I was not expecting that. Good story though.

Author's Response:

Ty doll.

Glad you enjoyed the fic, and I hope the epi didn't hurt too much.

 

xx

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Please post another chapter!There is so much going on right now...the baby, Emmett and Rose, the trial. A sequel would be really nice! ;) Update soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, there will be another chapter before the epi. Thanks!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story!!! It's different than a lot of other things I'm reading. Your Edward is so HOT!! Bring on the bloodplay!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you like! I hope you'll like the bloodplay too ;)

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

An all out sex fest in the school hall! LOL. That was a great chapter by the way! I'm not sure if I'm looking forward to Tanya's return though. I wonder what Aro will do when he comes to town? I hope Bella won't be in danger. Hell, he may even want her for himself. Update soon.

Author's Response:

LOL. Yeah, Bella caused quite a reaction. Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter. I was nervous to post b/c of the period scene. lol But I'm glad it turned out alright. Yeah, Tanya's return is coming up. I hope she won't be too much trouble. And I wonder what you'll think of Aro...hmmm...

Thank you for reading and your comments. I appreciate it =)

~Jells

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What the hell is wrong with Bella? I can't believe she let him kiss her with that dirty mouth! The shower scene was hot though. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'll have ch 17 up soon.

Thanks again, love hearing form you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

They should have stayed home like they were told. This cannot be good at all!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply.

Yeah they def should've stayed home. lol

Thansk for reading. I'll have the next chappy up very soon.

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129734
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Poor Bella. Stuck in the middle of the brothers mess. If Carlisle is the one who bought her then Bella could be his own personal blood whore. Jasper is a devious one isn't he?

Author's Response:

IKR? Jasper is a schemer <--- IDK if I spelled that correctly. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74032
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Just started and read all the chapters in one day. I am an Edward girl at heart but I do try to give non canon a try. This is a really good story. I personally would like to see a C/B hunting trip! And maybe bring the Denali's back so Bella can kick their *****!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving my little C&B story a try.  I am also an Edward girl at heart, but sometimes my mind takes me elsewhere. ;) Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh man, you just had to kill another one. Poor Bella. You should have her go to Volterra so she can kick everyone's butt without being punished. How much longer before her and Edward meet up. It has been about 12 years right? Update soon!

Author's Response:

I hated killing Garrett. I loved him and I knew what it would do to Bella when he died, but it had to be done if I want Edward to come back. In Bella's timeline, it's been just over 11 years since they've been apart. I hated to keep them apart for so long but they will be seeing each other very soon. I promise. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So so close. I like this Bella. She is keeping him on his toes!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Garrett. I know everyone expected it to be James but he didn't fit in that role. He needed to be a companion to Bella and since I'm keeping this as close to canon as I can, there was no way James could have been. And I love their arguments, she just loves to rile him up and he has to be pretty forgiving too considering she keeps trying to kill him. LOL Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Outtake 1 - Peyton's First Day Back to School

Just read this all the way through. It was so good. Thanks for sharing!

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Options

Just heartbroken right now! There is no other option for her right now. He is just a minor. I as a mother would be just as furious as Esme.

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

Wow. Edward is a jerk! He won't take her but insists that Riley will not either. I would hit him again!!! But what she said to Rose was out of line. I kind of feel sorry for Rose. Bella is supposed to be her friend.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Beneath the Surface

Edward is a jackass!!! Bella should find someone else who can man up and take what they want.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not

I hope Edward doesn't do anything to mess this up. Jasper needs to get his act together.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breaking Point

She needs someone else to get her mind off Edward. He is such an ass! Scaring away all those boys while he fucks around. I'm glad she hit him!

Author's Response:

He certainly ignites the fire in people. And I think most of you enjoyed him getting slapped ;)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

Damn Rose. Now maybe Jasper will meet Alice and get some different priorities. They really need to let that girl breathe a little.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: A Step in the Right Direction

I like that Carlisle and Esme are getting it on, but I am ready for more Edward and Bella!

Author's Response:

More B/E coming up in the next chapter :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Doubts

He will be strong enough. He is expecting it this time. I can't wait until the first day.

Author's Response:

Next day is coming right up in the next chapter. As soon as my beta is done with the chapter, I'll get it up here, which should happen before the weekend.

Thankyou for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Answers

I hope him knowing about his singer doesn't scare him off. That would be so typical Edward! Is Rose a ghost?

Author's Response:

I think that you're forgetting the the Edward here is very far from canon-Edward that we all know... He's not scared that easily, I promise.

As for Rose, she's not really a ghost per se, but she's not alive either. There is more to her story, but it will be told a bit later into the story.

Thank you for reading and reviwing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Arrangements

At least Laurent is dead. I would have liked Edward to have tortured him though.

Author's Response:

Edwrad shares your sentiments. He would have loved to have a few rounds with him.

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Loss

Poor Bella. Will you have a sequel after this one? He can't leave her all alone. She needs someone there for her. She has no one else. So sad!

Author's Response:

Yes, there is going to be a sequel for this story. It is already outlined, and I am hoping to start writing it soon.

There are only two more chapters to go before the epilogue, but I promise that no one is going to be left alone when this story ends.

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Friends for Dinner

Charlie is just as perceptive as Bella. I wonder if Laurant will use Charlie and Bella as part of his revenge?

Author's Response:

I always thought that everyone underestimated Charlie in canon. I think he noticed a lot.

Laurent is bad news, I tell ya.

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue - Rosalie's Bargain

Now they have two humans to worry about and keep alive. I wonder what Emmett will think of the new Rose. Will she get pregnant and then want to be a vampire? Very curious to how this plays out.

Author's Response:

There is much to be told about what happens next, I promise. I'm working on finishing my current posting multi chapter (To Love My Enemy), but once it's done, I'm going to start posting the sequel to this story.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I hope to see you again in the next story :)

Till then, have a wonderful week!
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Surprise

You are going to kill off Charlie aren't you? On her birthday no less. That is not very nice. What is even worse you left us with a terrible cliffhanger! Update really soon! Please!!!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Growing Up

Oh good. You didn't draw out the separation. She needs someone with her to help her through this.

Author's Response:

I hate dragging out things, and I think that Bella has suffered enough on her own.

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Apple

Did she say all that out loud or did her shield fall so he could see in her head? I am really liking this take on Twilight; keep with the frequent updates please!

Author's Response:

You will see how he figured it out in chapter 18, I promise. And no, she didn't speak aloud ore lowered her sheild.

I'm glad that you like this take. I had a lot of fun writing this. Asd for the updates, I am trying my best to keep the frequent. The story itself is already finished, what is holding me back is the fact that I go back (with Simaril) to beta the chapters before I post them.

From the pace so far, I'm gonna be posting a chapter every one to three days. The total chapter count is 34, and there will be a sequel (which I just finished outlining).

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Vampires

I can't wait to hear his story and how he came to be with the Volturi. Update soon.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: This is My Life Story

I am not mad at Bella. At least she had a decent reaction to the fact that he was stalking her and borrowing her things. Can't wait until the next update.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Flashbacks

Glad he came back and did not leave her alone.

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77470
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Revelations

Wow.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Awakening

Is it because of Bella's shield and their coupling that he can't hear? Curious to see who is in the shadows.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Impasse

Sounds like a compromise is in order. When will he get his mindreading back? He is at a major disadvantage.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Battle

Charlie there sure will put a damper on things ;)

Author's Response:

Ha, Charlie and Jacob do like to spoil Bella's fun don't they!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever

Loved it.

Author's Response:

Thank you xx

Summary:

Edward Masen and Bella Swan, high school sweethearts who married young, have their lives turned upside down when Edward is “discovered”. Celebrity, tragedy, alcohol and excess dissolve what seems to be indestructible… or does it? Can love rise above fame and indulgence? Or does Hollywood truly alter what is good in a man?

 

 

 

Celebrity, Deconstructed Banner, by EvilNat


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56283 Read Count: 10591
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2012 Updated: 17 Nov 2015
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am glad they got to her in time.

Author's Response: Me too, poor Rose. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

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A young woman sets out on her first adventure in the big world. She thought her father had prepared her for everything but she holds the key to much more than she ever thought, and now she sings for every vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34870 Read Count: 9882
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

He kissed her! At least they did not hurt her dad.

Author's Response:

He sure did! Thanks for reading.

Watching Her by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He
watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the
doors forever? Daily Updates. AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95686 Read Count: 35349
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Drumsticks and Penalty Kicks

Just read the whole thing. I loved it!!! The last chapter was perfect!!!

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Alice of course will be for it! Wish you would post all those chapters too!!!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You left it there? I cannot believe I have to wait until Monday!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward will probably start paying medical expenses. I wish these updates would come sooner.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wish this drabble was a little longer! :)
Is it tomorrow yet?
Can't wait to see how this goes.

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I knew he would want her in the house! I wonder what Alice has seen if anything?
Can't wait until Monday!!!

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She can feel and hear him!!! Can not wait until the next chapter.

Chameleon by ALewis Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

“But Carlisle we want to meet her now.” Alice whined.
“Does she have to smell like strawberries? It’s almost syrupy sweet.” Rosalie hissed.
“Strawberries and chocolate, and it’s absolutely perfect!!!!!” Edward called out while Emmett and Jasper both nodded their heads.
“Oh she is so adorable my love, is she staying permanently? Please Carlisle?” Esme pleaded.
“I know you want to meet her but like I said on the phone she wanted to meet everyone individually so that she could get a feel for the atmosphere of conflicting personalities. Now I asked that Esme meet her first then Rose and Alice, then the boys. So will you please stop crowding her your behavior could be damaging to her psyche.” Carlisle gently commanded.
They were all in range of my ability and the conflict was weighing on me drastically. They argued for a bit longer and I couldn’t take it any longer. I let a scream escape my mouth then latched on to militant personality of Jasper.
“Freeze all of you. You, you, you and you go away now!” I shouted at the women and Carlisle. “I apologize for my rudeness but I can’t take the conflict right now. I will meet you all later and apologize thoroughly then.” I was seething and needed to eliminate the stress. I felt one of the boys step forward and I raised a hand before speaking. “Don’t move a muscle. I’ll get to you one at a time.” I commanded.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23512 Read Count: 3835
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2013 Updated: 26 Jul 2013
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How about a Bella/Edward/Jasper/Emmett story!!!!! ;)  Just joking. Seriously, I am partial to Edward , but we will see how the story goes.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So sad for Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Awesome banner by: LittleNudgerLove.

 

Set Post-Eclipse. Canon until that point. HEA. Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just off shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob must put aside their differences to save the girl they both love. But will they be too late? ExB

 

NOMINATED: for the Fanatic Fanfics Award 2015!!! For Favorite Action/Angst/Horror/Otherworld/WIP Fanfic.

FINALIST: Fav Newbie Author!

 

 

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'Still My Bella' Created by manu-chann, commissioned by silverhawk88.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251232 Read Count: 47813
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2017
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Jacob

Definitely want to read more.

Author's Response:

Great! :) Glad you like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Tanya is a conniving bitch and Edward is an idiot!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 88305
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella's apartment? Probably Jacob coming out of the bushes.