Reviews by mousekemom
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624978
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Oh boy, it's gonna hit the fan.  Will Carlisle take her when Edward isn't there, or will he have a big confrontation and take her in front of him?  Will Bella tell Edward about his past creepiness?  Will the brothers stand up to Carlisle together?  He has come so far!

Thanks for telling us where you move the story.  I would be sad to come this far and not see it to the end. 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

OOOoooo no!  Of course, now that she and Edward are good this has to happen!  If she is smart, she'll get to Edward ASAP and tell him what's up, but I doubt she will.  I bet it is going to be like a bomb.  Question is, will everyone stand up to Carlisle, or will Bella be shipped of to Alaska?

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Ooooh, no!  Please let him explain to Bella what is happening.  Why don't they all stand up to Carlisle?  Ugh...I am so disgusted with Edward right now.  I am thrilled you updated and now am sitting on pins and needles for the next one!  Great suspense!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Dear God, you had me crying at the beginning of this chapter!!!!!  Argh!  I thought...holy crap, what now???  I am excited that he thought of a way to protect her and she finally told him about Carlisle...she should have told him sooner, but the trust thing...so, yeah.  Anyway, always love your updates...never fail to make me laugh or cry.  I always look forward to this and CAM.  Thanks for sharing your talent!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter for CAM & BTP.  Hopefully I'll have those ready next week.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Holy Crow, time to find an escape for Bella...any windows near?  Phone, fire alarm, something?  I hope Edward beats the crap out of Demetri, but I bet Carlisle knows what Demetri is doing too.  Thanks for the update!  I always look forward to it.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Honestly, I love both TPW and CAM.  I always look forward to the updates.  I am shocked by how this has played out.  I am excited to read the last couple of chapters.  You have done an amazing job and I have cried, been angry, creeped out, and dozens of other emotions throughout the read.  I can pictures the horrible things she went through and still shudder from it.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awwww....they've come full-circle...I think you handled that great.  Looking forward to the epilogue.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us and I am really looking forward to CAM!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OOOOoooo, okay now you are into new stuff.  I am so tickled you came back to this story.  I know how hard you worked on theTPW, but I just love this one.  Looking forward to the rest and Mike's reaction!  I bet it will be funny.  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

Next chapter should be interesting

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yea, we missed you!  I am so excited that you came back to this story.  I loved TPW, but this one is by far, one of my favs.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent and I look forward to the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I promise it won't be a three month wait for the next update.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Holy Crow!  What an awesome twist on the story.  I can't wait to see where it goes and I have been patiently waiting too!  LOL  Thanks for not forgetting this story.  I really believe you have a great twist going here.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yay!!!!  You updated!  I was worried when you started another story because you promised to work on this one when TPW was done.  I knew things would pan out, but I really figured Paul would get her back to the rez first and there would be more drama.  You fooled me there!  Thanks so much for the update and hope to read more soon.  You have a great story here and think it deserves more of your time!  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

I wanted to try out something new with the mating call. I'm glad it's being well recieved. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OOOOooohhh, I have missed this story!  Thank you, thank you, thank you!  I know you said this would be your next story, then you started Obsession, but I just adore this one.  (I just can't see Em being such a nutjob, so I just can't get into it.)  But I love that you finally brought us another chapter.  After TPW, I need Edward to be a good guy!  Thanks so much and hope to read another chapter soon.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter and even though I started Obsession I promise to give CAM first priority in updates.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if, during the early stages of their relationship, Edward lost some of his carefully-maintained control with Bella one night?  What if his urges were precipitated by a force mundanely human and unavoidable?

This story is complete!

Thanks so much to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20515 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mutual Satisfaction

Yummy...that was by far the most delicious lemony that could have been done for Eclipse...I am awed!  Just, wow! 

The Gift by KariAnn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if – and I’ll leave the exact circumstance up to the reader’s imagination – Edward had somehow found a way to become human in order to be with Bella, instead of the other way around?  What if Renesmee was a normal human child – normal for a prodigy, anyway?  This is just a glimpse at what that life might be like.

Thanks so much to achelle131 for the gorgeous banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4643 Read Count: 408
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Gift

Awwww...that was sweet and fluffy and lemony all at the same time.  I am awed by your literary talent!  Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella just found out she's pregnant after a one night stand. Edward is enthralled by this woman who is carrying his child, but Bella has a dark past. Will she be able to let it go and give Edward the chance he deserves? AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57790 Read Count: 19425
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ten Years Later

That story was...wow, there just aren't enough words.  I was so shocked by Emmett's death and thrilled that Rose would have a reason to go on.  I think you tied it all up in a great way too.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

Yes it was really hard to write, I actually debated with someone about Emmett, and they told me to stick to the story, and unfortunately that's just how it had to be told.

 

Thanks so much for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

I was so tickled when I found this!  I loved FDKK, so I couldn't resist this one either.  Now I am harping on my hubby to start reading as he also loved FDKK.  I think you have a true talent and should look to getting published.  I think that you would do well.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

Thank you. REviews like this always make this so worth it and really encourages me to keep going.  Thanks again for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752822
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

What a great story!  I have really enjoyed the FDKK and BSK.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!

Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a great story... a fun mix of humor, sorrow and drama.  I am only concerned about the way a couple of things were left hanging...Denalis, Charlie, etc.  Totally minor, but still a great way to twist the original cannon.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

lol I always have a nasty habit of leaving just a few things unresolved, like it would be in real life, but thank you so much for reading and leaving a review, I really appreciate it :-)

Bring Me Life by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

After an argument, Edward decides to change Bella in the heat of the moment while making love to her in the meadow.  Canon OOC one shot.  Lemon!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 841
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bring Me Life

Wow...that was a great one-shot.  Some are so crass and this one had some class...no really nasty euphanisms or crass words.  I think you handled it well and still made it sexy as can be.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Where are we now?

OOooo, dangling that bit of info...you tease!  Okay, I really thought all this mess with Bella had something to do with like a sadistic James thing again, but Quil...that came as a surprise.  So now I am wondering who else is the badies in this, since Jake is there at her church.  Hmmmm...

Thanks for sharing your talent and I always look forward to more.  Glad you are on here in case FF decides to pull you down like so many other stories.



Author's Response:

Well it isn't James.  He isn't a human bad guy.  I haven't decided if I am going to have him as a vamp come after Bella yet.  I just don't know.  :( 

 

So the baddies in my story, sorry to say, are the Rex boys.  They were all I had left, I'm using almost all the other SM characters.  Jake is the excpetion. I couldn't make him bad.

 

There is one other baddie that isn't a Rex guy but you'll have to wait to see about him!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back

Yes, we are finally making progress!  Now, who does she think she murdered and when will we find out her past????  Grrrr.  Dying to know!  I also want to know more about her friends that keep calling her and why we haven't heard from her parents.  Love the sweet fluffiness of Edward trying to soften her up!  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

Thank you that you see progress,  I know it is kinda slow but there is progress there so yeah that you see it!

Who did Bella murder? or think she murdered?  That is a povitol question and honestly one that I havne't given you enough clues to guess so don't worry about it.  When that is revealed it will be shocking, or that's the plan at least.

Bella has great friends, you'll get to meet them eventually, no as for her parents not calling, there is a reason for that.  I promise.

 

Thanks for your review, here's a tease of next weeks chapter:

Bella came in before anyone could say more and looked at all of us taking in our troubled and pensive faces.  “Is everything ok?”

Esme stepped in saving us all. “Yes, dear, we’re fine. Emmett was just commenting about additional vampire movies and which ones would be best to show you.”

Emmett forced a smile, his thoughts consumed with Bella being in a place where she didn’t have support; he truly did see her as a little sister. “Yeah, I have to make sure your schooling is complete!”

Bella rolled her eyes. “Thanks, I doubt I would survive without more education, Lestat.” You could hear the sarcasm in her voice and there was a light of humor in her eyes.

Emmett walked over to Bella and tried to look threatening, though the corners of his mouth tugging up belied the threat. “Little human girl, are you making light of vampires while in a house surrounded by a coven of blood sucking fiends?” 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Just a Little Bite

OOOoooohhhh, no!  Okay, didn't see that coming.  Movie night is cute, getting closer to Edward good.  Now, when is she going to start telling them what happened????  Anyway, thanks for sharing your talent and looking forward to the rest of the story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked movie night.  I thought it was a fun easy way for Bella to spend time with the Cullens without having a lot of pressure!  She will tell them it's coming I promise.

 

Thanks for the review, here is a tease for next week.  This is Carlisle and Bella.

I walked slowly towards her, unsure of what her response was going to be. I gestured towards her arm. “Can I see it better now?” Bella held her arm out to me. Her shirt was in the way of some of the cuts. “Bella, can we take your shirt off so I can get a better look at your arm?  You’re going to need stitches and I can’t do it with the shirt.” Bella’s already white complexion paled more. “I promise I won’t hurt you or take advantage of you.”

Bella swallowed and her heart raced, she was starting to have a full fledge panic attack.  “Ok, never mind.  Keep your shirt on. Since it’s already ruined would it be ok if I cut the sleeve to get at what I need?”

Bella’s eyes took a minute to focus on me. I could see she was trying to process what I said but she was so caught in her head she couldn’t make sense of it.

“Breath, Bella, breath. Your shirt stays on.  I’ll just cut it.  Ok?” Bella nodded with short jerky movements.  I gently held her arm as I dug in my bag for a scissors. I cut her sleeve away, tearing open a few cuts that had already started closing.  I washed her arm up with a rag I had brought with me when I washed my hands.  She slowly composed herself and her breathing evened out.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Being Left Alone

Wow!  Finally, we are reaching the good stuff!  Okay, yea, we all love lemons, but I think some people just toss them in because it is convient and fills up a chapter.  If it is a truly moving part of the story...great, knock yourself out, but if it is just filler, don't.  Don't get me wrong, I'm all for Edward and Bella lovin, but don't do it because it's easy.  Hubby and I will have plenty to discuss tonight...we are still guessing about what the heck happened.  Did her parents put all those sexually negative thoughts in her head, or was that religious stuff?  She is so scared of any physical contact, something more has to be there.  Thanks for the update and, as always, looking forward to the rest of the story!  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

SERIRIOUSLY does your husbadn read this???  or do you tell him about it???  I gotta know!!!!

Thanks on the lemons.  I agree with you.  I would never put a lemon in so that there was a lemon, but in thsi case I think that Lemons are important to show the progress that they are both making in their relaionship.  I had planned some lemons but wanted to see what my readers thought before going ahead with them.

I will say this, Bella's parents were normal and loving and didn't place anything bad thoughts in her head. Everything that made her who she is today came from 2 horrible nights of her life a few days apart from each other. It is hard to make a normal loving girl be that afraid of touch, but a few horrid things can do it, she'll be sharing her story in about 4 chapters I think,

 

Thank you for the review and here's a tease that should make you happy for in two weeks:

I smiled. I was mated, to Bella. I let the idea sit with me and I felt lighter and happier just thinking of it. I was mated to Bella.  The phrase played over and over in my head. The more I thought on it the more obvious it was and I felt like the biggest idiot for not seeing it sooner.  Bella was my mate and I loved her. How could I have not seen it?  I loved Bella. Now that I considered the idea I wanted to kick myself for not realizing sooner.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated

Congrats on the nomination!  Bout time he figures it out...now, how much longer before we find out where and what's up with B?  Hubby and I are excited to find out what's going on!!!  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

well Bella'  story is 3 or so chapters away, can you hold out???

 

Thanks for the review!  Here's a tease for next week:

I hadn’t been off the phone with Bella for long when I heard Emmett and Jasper coming up to get me for a hunting trip.  I groaned before they made it to my room calling out, “I went hunting with Carlisle yesterday! I don’t need to hunt again.”

“Get up brother! I don’t care if you went hunting. We need manly brother time together. Now that you’re admitting to being mated we need to make sure you’re not going to fuck with our little sister! So get up and get moving!” Emmett bellowed as he plowed into my room.

“Language” Esme called up the stairs.

Emmett smiled. “See, that’s why we need to have this conversation elsewhere.  Don’t need to upset the ‘rents.”

I rolled my eyes. “Seriously, Emmett, can’t you say parents, or better yet Esme and Carlisle? Or the best idea, ignore it all and leave me alone!”

Jasper interrupted before Emmett and I bickered and nothing got accomplished. “Just come with us Edward.  We want to talk to you about a few things. I promise to keep Emmett in line.” As much as I can. He finished.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

Oh my lord!  I totally didn't see that coming....I mean, I figured there was some kind of rape story involved, but the religious zelot Riley...wow!  Can't wait until my hubby reads this tonight.  Okay, so what more can the family do by looking up the records?  Why is that so important to them, when she has asked that they not punish them?  I can see where she is coming from...she wants to let the courts and God deal with them, otherwise she will live with their blood on her hands, so to speak, and she just wants to move on.  How will she move on when she doesn't care to live anymore?  Has Edward finally changed her will to go on?  Looking forward to more.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!!!



Author's Response:

the Cullens know that Bella shared what she could but that there were pieces left out.  They have questions, in many cases questions Bella can't answer.  their looking let's them get answers and help her. Especailly Jasper who will be acting as a psychologist for her.  He needs to know what happened, He of course would share with the others.

 

Bella has not been on the suicide mission for a while.  Edward doesn't know that because they haven't taked about it and Alice isn't looking in her future. She hasn't thought about it or made a specific decision but she no longer has that need.  Edward already has given her enough to want to keep living.

 

hanks for reading, I know it was difficult.

Rose kissed Emmett and told him she would be right back. As she came up to my room she was already thinking to me. "I know that had to be hard for you to hear Edward, but you really blew it!"

Huh? What was she talking about?  I didn’t do anything?
Rose came in and saw the confusion on my face. "Don’t look confused. You did nothing for Bella. You gave her no comfort!"

“What do you mean?” I asked. “I was holding her the whole time! Giving her every comfort I could!” I was livid at the accusation that I hadn’t been there for Bella. Of course I had.
Don’t get pissed at me. Tell me oh supportive one.  In all the rounds of hugs and comforting what did you say to Bella?

I searched through my memory trying to figure out what I’d said that had Rose so mad. As I searched the reason for Rose’s anger became apparent. I hadn’t said anything to Bella the entire time. I was so focused on not blowing up I didn’t speak to her. I wasn’t a total failure, I had given her strength through my touch, but I couldn’t believe I hadn’t spoken one word to her. I cursed myself for the idiot I was.

"I see you got it.  Listen it isn’t the end of the world but tomorrow when she wakes up you had better start sucking up! Seriously, she needs to know you don’t hate her, blame her, or think less of her."

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Darkest Before the Dawn

Okay, I leave my good reviews for you on fanfic, so I don't feel guilty here.  How about he rents out a whole movie theater and plays one of his old favorites?  Or, he does something simple at her place...makes foods he can feed her, fireplace, snuggling?  Get her more comfortable with closeness by beginning to teach her to dance?  Make arrangements for private time in a bookstore?  I know, some are rather cliche, but what can you do?  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the ideas!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bkn

Summer Outtakes for the story Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights.  It all began the year her parent's died.  The boys took her to the beach that first summer trying to cheer her up.  It ended up being a yearly tradition for Bella and her boys.  Watch as their relationship matures and develops from one end of the pendulum swing to the other until they finally find equilibrium.  These outtakes also fill a few of the gaps between the wedding and the epilogue.  Come enjoy the angsty, hot, and volatile journey.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 26418
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Last Summer With FDKK

I have really enjoyed this and bummer that it took me so long to figure out that it went with FDKK...off to read that next.  I got a little confused on the change between Edward Masen and Cullen.  I am guessing that gets answered in FDKK?  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

When they get married in FDKK, they both take the name Cullen as an official nod to the man and woman who were his real parents for the majority of his life. He had the chance to change it in his youth, but felt it was a betrayal of his father, Edward Masen.  But when this opportunity arose, he decided it was time to make the change, even if he was in his late twenties when it happened.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awwww...sweet and fluffy!  I have really enjoyed reading this story.  I look forward to the rest.  Thanks so much for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yea, kinda figured that was coming...now is Edward gonna accuse her of cheating?  Wow, that will really stink if they have a fight over that.  Oh well, that is life.  Thanks for the update and sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I figured it would happen, but you seemed a bit rushed...might have been better to draw it out as James is nuts like that.  I think what you had was good, but could have used a bit more.  Thanks so much for the update and for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awwww....Jake's in love....how cute.  Wow, I was starting to get worried with the lapse in chapters.  I have really enjoyed your story and look forward to the updates.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Summary:

Bella's last few months as a human mean everything to Edward. Her health is his top priority, so it would only make sense that he took it into his own hands. ExB Sexy doctor smut.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2599 Read Count: 365
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my...that was hilarious!  Great lemon and funny banter.  Wow.  Thanks for the chuckle!

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17343
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Missteps

I think your story is off to a great start.  Nice diviation from the original, but still cannon, so it's a nice play on it.  Am curious where you take it overall and look forward to reading the rest!  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161835
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think your story is off to a great start and look forward to reading the rest.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Okay, Esme should have gotten one good smack in though...Yea, for Chalie!  Thanks for the update.  What will Bella have to deal with next?



Author's Response:

thanks!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55106
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

It's a great story, but the ending seems a bit abrupt.  You see everything fall into place, but it sort of hangs at the end.  I did enjoy it and there were some really great funny parts.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

i was bringing the story of them finding each other to a close on a content note.  The sequel picks up where this leaves off, following them as they get married and begin to build a life together, please check out The Family You Make to see the story continued.  I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the honest opinion...this was my first fic and my endings have become much smoother since then.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh my goodness!  Okay, didn't see Mike doing that to Victoria, betting Bella is luring Mike away on purpose, and totally didn't expect Edward to turn Angela...Wow!  Looking forward to the rest of the story.  Thanks for sharing your talent.

Dreaming of Edward by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

 

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Ever wonder what Bella dreams about when she calls out his name? Not my usual type of story was written by request. It was written for a fan for Christmas and we decided to share it with everyone who like this sort of story. Rated NC-17 for major mature and major sex ooc au/reg pairs EXB this story is not light and fluffy so readers beware. NO INCEST, RAPE or MULTIPLE ENCOUNTERS. Vulgar language please dont read if you dont like swearing.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36388 Read Count: 17524
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this is such a great take on the story with some really unique and fun twists!  I think you should absolutely come back and finish the story...I see it has been awhile since you posted.  I loved the Singer Connection and the other singer story and know you can do justice to the finish of this one too!  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

It's funny you reviewed, i am going over the entire story tonight fixing my errors and getting it ready for its finish. I don't leave anything unfinished, I hate when writers do that to me. and i still have to finish edward's outtakes which is on my profile of what he and the others went through during these moments. it will round off the story in its entirety. Thank you so much for reading my work and i hope you continue to enjoy it. Nails233

Daybreak by Missa Rated: T starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella Swan's been a vampire for around a century, and has been with the Cullens since the 1920s. When the Cullen family moves to the sleepy town of Forks, WA, she finds quite a few things she never expected, including a human boy that turns her world on its side.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98528 Read Count: 3716
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 27 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

A very good variation on the original story.  I really like the way you handled the back story for Bella...I think it was creative.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, not often you don't get her already knowing what she is in for.  Kinda a nice change and not as expected.  So many times we find Edward spilling his guts to her about all of it or her cornering him about knowing what he is, but such a nice departure from the cannon.  Refreshing.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us and looking forward to the rest of the story!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my lord!  I was shocked!  I mean, I figured Kate would do something crazy...but I figured it would be some drug thing.  Wow!  I love the multi-chapter update...thanks for that.  Looking forward to seeing what happens next.  Guess Bella will be staying closer to them after this mess, eh?  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

Congrats!  It was a lovely story and I enjoyed it.  Yes, it had some rough patches, but you smoothed them out as you went along.  I rarely noticed that English is not your first language - only one or two little syntax or grammatical errors, but US english is different from EuroEnglish, so I can't knock you on that.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Awww, it's over...you did a great job.  My husband and I always race to read it first to try and tease each other with spoilers.  I don't think you could have done a better job, especially with how you wrapped it up.  Just beautiful and funny too boot.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Just awesome!  I love how you wrapped it all up.  Beautiful story overall.  My husband and I really enjoyed it.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think it was Tanya breaking in...she knew they were at Alice's.  I think she is working with Caius for some reason I haven't figured out yet.  I also think Heather is James' new girl and sitting there getting info on Bella.  So I am looking forward to the trip to Forks.  Hope you are feeling better and thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

those are good theories, I guess we will have to see if you are correct ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58288
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

My second pregnancy was the same thing.  It was awful and I can totally empathize with what she is going through.  Poor girl, how much more can they take?  Thanks for the update.  Been reading your other stories and loving them...especially FBI Bella...very cool!  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80456
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm such a dork...I just realized that I read LOTA on fan fic and totally loved it.  Loving this one too.  Hard to picture Edward remaining such a nut and that he had no redeeming qualities.  At least he changed in LOTA.  I am curious where this one will end up.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15843
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great intro!  I am looking forward to figuring out the mastermind and reading the character development.  I loved FDKK and the Wallflower and the Flyboy and am very much looking forward to this story!  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yea, I knew it couldn't be that easy.  So, it was a bit on the short side, but definitely moved the story along.  Are you planning on bouncing POVs or are you sticking to Bella's fight?  Thanks for the update and for sharing your talent with us!  Love the Bones and Supernatural references...campy, but fun!



Author's Response:

No, although you will see a bit of what the guys were going through while after she disappeared in the Epi.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389585
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Of course!  I figured as much, when you started her saying how they deserved each other that it would end up that way.  So is she off to the Cullens to cry on Alice's shoulder?  Looking forward to more.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Hmmm, I say produce the copy of the finalized annulment.  Just call and have a copy faxed or emailed to her to show the bitch it is Jake pulling everyone's chain.  I hope Charlie doesn't have to arrest Edward for assault, but I wouldn't put it past Jake to press charges.  What a mess!  And what is up with Leah treating Sue and Seth like crap?  Yea, bring on the hate.  Thanks for the update!  I have really enjoyed this story and all the little twists you have tossed at us so far. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

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Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice

I am gonna channel Rose..."IDIOT!"  I seem much sucking up in his near future and I hope Alice and Rose make him work for their help and Bella make him work for her forgiveness...anyone else feel she gave in too quickly?  Thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

God...I LOVE Rose too! We could all use a little of Alices visions and Rosalies sound advice. Sigh...where was she when I was 17?

 Did Bella give in too soon? I don't know the answer to that. I do know that she has a long weekend and Edward is going to have to make the most of it! Let's just hope that he finally gets a clue and gets it right. I'm sick of Italy... but my passport is ready...just in case!

Have a great weekend and see you Thursday!

 

 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling

Nope, totally get why she had a fit with him...I mean, after everything he is still being a dipstick!  OOOooo, love how you had Laurant come in too and her shield dropping, very cool.  Sucks you left us hanging, but that is what keeps us coming back...LOL  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I really think he GETS it now! I just pray he's not too late! Yikes!!!

Thank you so much for your review!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31181
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

oooo, I was so excited to see this new story.  I have been reading trip of a lifetime, so I know this will be great too.  thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Awww, cute.  Shame you couldn't go into more detail.  The last chapter seemed a bit rushed, but it was still good.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30221
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

Gosh, thought you forgot about us.  Was so excited to see this update and I really enjoyed it.  Hope to read more very soon.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Ripples

Omg, you're killing me...so is he going back to the island to sulk until Bella chases him down or is he going to give her an ultimatum?  Don't keep us in suspense too long!  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327899
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Vegas...they always have the regular cuz Alice throws a fit.

Summary: Past Featured Story

svo

I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 ~ Domestic Bliss

Glad to see you haven't abandoned it!  Keep going and enjoy the ride.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Summary:

Bella decides to move in with Charlie, when she realizes that her mom is missing her husband Phil. Once Bella moves and settles in with Charlie on the first night she begins to have weird dreams of the supernatural and a goddess, telling her the stories of the supernatural. Council meetings, vampires, werewolves, witches, warlocks, and many more… The goddess leaves Bella a gift the night before she starts school. “Yeah, a council meeting, things changed Bells. Forks, isn’t the same anymore.” AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After, Supernatural, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12393 Read Count: 2081
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Nov 2015
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:

Ok, one, you need to learn about the places you are writing about....Arizona is in the aris southwestern United States....no ocean, no beach, sorry.  It makes the story hard to accept if the writer has no idea what they are writing.  Second, baseball is majors and minors...aka big leagues, the show, etc versus semi-pro or farm teams. 

While the premise is interesting, you need to know your material.  There is no suspension of disbelief when you are describing a real place.

Keep trying and thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Anything is realistic in fiction I didn't mean to offend anyone that was not my intention. :)

Shape the Narrative by LaMomo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary:

ShapeBanner

Sequel to “Correct the Narrative.” OlderWard, LawyerWard
After years of pining for Bella from afar, Edward finally confessed his feelings to her.
But between their age difference and busy careers—Bella’s impending MBA graduation, Edward’s academia at Cornell—will they be able to navigate all the challenges they face in their new relationship?

Follow their fast-paced romance as they shape their narrative.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Narrative Series
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67629 Read Count: 14389
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2022 Updated: 29 Aug 2023
Reviewer: mousekemom Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

You are killing me!  What did that shrew do?!?!