Reviews by xxlovexx
Sons of Silence by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice believe in white supremacy after years of misjudged actions. How many lives will they destroy before they finally destroy their own? Very Mature Content. Please read disclaimer before reading. AU AH OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19501 Read Count: 1842
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Assumptions

This story is disgusting, I honestly don't understand why you would take 

Characters well known and loved and turn them into sick twisted

Trash that you come up with, you need really need help.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

one of the best stories i've every read!!

you've got alot of talent, i've been here since the beginning,

and really enjoyed this story, thank you for uploading every chapter!

can't wait to see what other stories you have in mind!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

spanking!!;]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91318
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ok, so I have to get this off my chest...I hated this chapter and the couple before it. I know its not my story and i cant change the plot, im just saying as a reader your about to lose, the plot just seems ...ridiculous. I get what they went through but there behavior is completely unrealistic, also, it seems that in every chapter since the beginning, youve been intentionally hurting bella, like you actually want her to suffer. First it was it was jacob then everyone calling her a whore, lets not forget everyone calling her a "gimp" whatever that is. then the attack and killing, car crash, the pictures, the shooting, kidnapping, rape now its all "i wanted to hug my kids but didnt, i wanted to tell them this but just kept quiet, i wanted to say i didnt cheat but just stared, i deserve what i got, im such a whore blah..." its like you actually want her and her alone to go through all this drama, for what..so she will be "stronger in the end"? its all just honestly annoying, unnecesary and..yeah, not convincing me to keep reading this story at all.

im honestly not tryna be a hater, just telling you what its like from a readers POV



Author's Response:

I can respect your opinion, but let me tell you this, if you've never been in her shoes, then you don't what the hell you are talking about. Maybe, I've put her through too much, maybe not, but I will not sugar coat what she's been through, I won't tie everything up in a little box and make it pretty.

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So because she got raped, she decides to rape Edward...bullshit

I didn't ask for everything to be pretty and tied up in a little bow tie just for me, i didnt ask for anything really, i just told you how ridiculous the story plot got, i expected better which is why i chose to read another chapter, and this...was not it.

BTW you really should warn new readers of your inscest flavored story since you obviously think it's sexy for this one whole family to be fucking each other. Everybodys moms and dads are fucking, step sisters and brothers fucking it dosent matter who got married first, nobody should be able to say "our moms and dads are fucking, our brothers and sisters are fucking, hey, lets go fuck!" its discusting really..god i hope this isnt based on a true story...god help you if it is.



Author's Response:

First of all, there is no incestous relations going on in these as they were all well into adult hood when the relationships are formed, and they were consenting adults. I don't appreciate the slight that they are acting like that. Also, waiting until you get 30 chapters into the THIRD story to decide it's an issue, is a little silly to me, but you have every right to your opinion.

Now, Bella didn't rape Edward. She needed to feel in control of something, anything, and their sexual relationship had always been a huge part of their story. I won't change that now. I don't think the plot got ridculous at all. I think it's going just as it should have seeing as it's my story to write as I feel is right. I certainly don't need you telling me that I'm writing it wrong.

I've been were Bella is. I know the terrors she feels every moment of the day. Some people turn it all inward, others of us turn it outward, attacking those we care the most about. It's dangerous and destructive, but it's the only way we know how to get the smallest amount of control back.

I'll understand if you choose not to continue to read this story, but I'll write it the way I feel it to be.

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Woah is me - Bella

 

...and this is where i part, i tried but 

I guess this story is just uncomprehensible

to me, like i said before i stuck around 

because the plot was good at first and i

Was facinated with the characters.. at first.

but it just went down hill without any chance

Of making it good again, im more disappointed

That i wasted my time...

On to the next..



Author's Response:

Honestly, I don't know what you expected. You've known with the way the last ten chapters have been that the road would be rough and I've made it clear that I am not going to take the easy way out. Bella's made a few steps, and that's really all I can give you right now.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

*sigh* i was kinda liking the storiy until i read the first half of this chap...can you please stop the sarcasm (i.e. every thing in italics) im sorry but its not funny an just annoying when they talk to themselves, umm i think you have a great storie line but i really wish you would't have gone with the whole

bella:your beautiful, im an ugly duckling, plain, boring, boring hair and eyes nothing special about me (which doesn't make sense b/c she was bursting with confidence since the beginning)

edward:bella don't talk about yourself that way, your the most beautiful blah blah blah cliche' 

it makes me think the next thing your gonna go with a couple chaps down the line is edward leaving beacuse blah blah whatever his or her reasons, bella might leave him, but anyway sorry about my rant those were some of my pet peeves, but honestly i hope you wont be cliche' and follow through with stuff that happend in twilight (i.e. bellas low confidence, edward second geussing himself, edward leaving, some james or tayna character comming along and so on...)



Author's Response:

While I appreciate your taking the time to read and review, I also think that I may need to suggest you read another story.  You are entitled to your opinion and I value it greatly, but MY STORY will continue on as I have planned it.  I have said this in response to a few other reviews I´ve gotten, I cannot write what´s in your head, only what´s in mine.  So chances are this may not go the way you want it to.  For that reason, I will understand if you choose not to continue reading.  I don´t want to lose anyone, but I also don´t want you to tell me how cliché I am every update either.  :)  Why is it that some of the harsher and most critical reviews come from people who don´t have  any stories written. Hmmm... I´m just sayin´!   It´s not easy putting yourself out there like that, but such is life.  

I really do appreciate you reading and taking the time to review.  Oh, about the internal monologue, it´s not much and it is a natural part of life.  Whether you want to admit it or not, you have quite a few internal comments on a daily basis, be it your boss you cuss out, parents... boyfriends... etc... so I like throwing in a bit of everyday life... sue me!  Lol! That´s the beauty of creative license, that and majority rules.  Thanks for reading!

Krazi

xoxo

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89178
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Just Desserts

Almost halfway through the story and they still haven't consummated their love yet?

I don't know, I'm not being impatient it just seems like the story if full of useless

fillers and now it feels like your dragging it out. Does the story even have a major 

Plot? The edu. Obviously isn't an important factor seeing as we know nothing about

their classes other than the occasional I have a term paper due, what direction is the 

Story going in other than b/e wants to have sex but everyone else prevents them 

By interrupting then asking for details later. will the story finally end once they have 

Sex or will Bella's dream come true, I'm not asking for a plot outline just a reason 

To look forward to reading the story other than cockblocking because right now it just 

Seems like a waste of time to continue reading.



Author's Response:

Actually you are MORE than halfway through the story and they haven't consummated their love yet. Bella just broke things off with Jake a week ago and isn't ready to hop into bed with Edward yet. Some fics are about the slow burn and the chase. Kind of like Twilight was...you read four books to get to ripped pillows and feathers everywhere. This story actually follows some of that same progression. But I tried to tell a story that was how real life might go. With humor. With fluff. And a relationship developing. And sexy lovemaking, when the time is right. I'd like to think there is a plot. Bella's safety is threatened. Edward is forced to deal with past demons. There are some major difficulties to get past and that is coming up. But what do I know? I'm not an actual writer. If you're looking to read actual penetrative sex, without any further character development or relationship development or plot twists between now and then, you should just jump right to chapter 60. And that event actually takes place just three weeks after they first met; two weeks after the break up with Jake.  

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672755
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Woooah!! First off don't ever feel bad about
Posting long chapters..feel free in fact I
Insist! This is one of the best stories I
Have ever read it keeps me checkin for
Updates religiously hunny.. You don't know
How glad I am to hear that there's gonna be
A sequal!!!! Hopefully 50 or 60+ chaps *hint
Hint**wink wink**nudge nudge* =) jus sayin!
Keep up the good work..an this story could never
B dragged out..feel free to write 100 chaps or
More =D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533085
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

Awesome as always: )

I suppose it's no sequal #3....no matter how awesomely fantastic

That would be.. Hint hint : )

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

Awesome as always
Can u tell us how many chaps are left please
NOT THAT IM IN A HURRY TO GET THE STORY OVER WITH
Just so I don't get my hopes up for a third sequel 😔

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Awesome as always!!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

I feel the end is near.. Please say its not true, i feel this way everytime a story has a big climax, please please say the end ist near... Or , i kno u might say know but.. Possible third sequal? Please? .. Also ignore the haters, its always the ones with no stories written that gives the harshest reviews, btw can u or someone else explain the answers and the dream in last chap? I ws way to caught up in the intensity to realize wat every thing ment at the end of the chapter

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Wasn't that bad

Great chap as always

Keep the story goin!!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Awesome.as.always.!!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

DON'T STOP DON'T STOP DON'T STOP DON'T STOP PLEASE!!

This story could have a third insallment telling damions story

Please think about it?

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Thank you thank you thank you
Love you!!!!

Summary:

Clear and Bright banner

Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Real

Awesome although I wish updates were sooner..:)

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806530
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

Whew ..(dabs eyes)

Cant wait for next week..

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

I wish u would have gave dame an the other girl a chance

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

Awesome as always!!!!

Really happy u decided to got with the 3rd installment it's coming

Out great just like the previous two!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Omg omg omg damn u cliffy

My heart is racing, if I would have known this chap would be this 

Intense I would have waited till saturday to read both back to back!!

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

Awesome as always!!!!

:( get better soon

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

:) ahhhhhhhhh!!! Dames ok!! :)

Reviewer: xxlovexx Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

I can't believe where at chapter 30 already!! This story is so Addicting!!

Please FUCK THE HATERS 

They wish they could write a story as good as this!!