Reviews by debslmac
Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131966
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: My Husband, Not Father

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

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Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
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Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Esme's pov outtake

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Isabella by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
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Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19809
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
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Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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“It was an accident,” he whispered. “I didn’t mean to do it. I…I was just trying to make her see reason. I didn’t mean to push her.”

“What happened?”

“We were arguing and…I was just so angry. She was threatening to leave me.” 

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Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55212
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
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Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

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Edward and Bella's journey started in Twelve Days of Lingerie.  We continued it with Lingerie, Lifeboats and Lullabies.  Now, see what happens after they bring home their bundles of joy.  How will their lives change with two new little ones?  How will they deal with the demands of parenthood and Edward's rigorous work schedule as a firefighter?  Throw in a few celebrations, baby firsts and doctor appointments and see how they handle the Double Duty.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6467 Read Count: 1075
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2012 Updated: 25 Jul 2012
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Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the cups. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review. 

Summary:

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Orange Crush by OzellaMarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
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Bella Swan's life is turned upside down when a hunky new guy moves in next door. Will she be able to handle 'Sex on Legs'? Or will he think she's a complete fruit cake? 

Edward/Bella/Drabble/Romance/Humor

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3003 Read Count: 5203
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Where Art Thou Taco?

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: She's Just A Little Weird

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Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Whack-A-Mole

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806497
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
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Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: On the Road

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Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Halfway

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Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

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Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 49: By the Book

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

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Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Crawl to Montauk

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

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Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 43: New Edition

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue One

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Wayward Son

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

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Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

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Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Empire

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All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

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Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

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Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

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Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

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Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

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Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

loved this. So glad there is to be a sequel

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

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Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

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