Nice story! I really enjoyed the epi. It's not often that we get to see their children as adults and their grandkids too. It's a great way to set your story apart from the others.

Hmmm, it's a little rough, but I'll read more and give it a chance.

The story's improved with the new author. Much cleaner writing.

~ Sigh ~ Such a nice evening complete with proposal and quad-nooky. Thanks for the recipe too!

Oops! You used Kellan's name in one paragraph toward the end of that scene.

If only entertainment TV shows would actually devote so much time to "setting the record straight."

I don't se the point of having drinks with Carmen. She's a Dom and she's just going to piuss B off again acting like she still owns E.

I would have told the shower attendees a larger size as she will outgrow everything quickly once she starts eating well.

Not so sure about his changing, especially in the heat of the moment.

Not setting a very good stage for Ed's appearance.

What a chicken he was at the very end. Though I didnt really think the playroom was the right place anyway.

Oh boy.

Um, I think this may be how Bethany came about. A roll or two in the hay. What about watching a horse give birth got them in the mood? 

Hope they dont need a vet while he's away. 

How did he read a story to her?

Thanks again. Another story enjoyed.

Cobwebs, LOL!

Not much of a date. No dinner. No dancing. Hmpf!

Jeez, you got a little carried away there shooting for even numbers! You forgot to mention that every business in town locked their doors when they saw the 8 of them heading their way.

Poor Betsy is spread thin. Both taking care of the children at home and travelling with Es & Bell.

Sneaking off cant be good form either.

She's collecting a dozen eggs a day. Why arent they eating them at every meal?

I like that here Ed referred to B as "the pretty one" when in most stories he describes both B & A as pretty, but in different ways.

Eds lost a wife, tho we dont know if that marriage was for love or family name. I suspect that may shape his temperment when he meets B.

Suet soup, yuk! Seems Lady Cullen may have other ideas for farm girl Bella.

As usual for we women, Bella had to meet the Queen while on "the rag." It just always seems to work out that way.  

Thank you for giving us a realistic first time -especially in their day.

Go girl!

Dont understand why single women would attend a Hunting Party, unless they are someones elder daughters?

I always love their first meeting, when he is usually so besotted by her, though she thinks little of herself. This story is another pleasing example of that.

I lIke thIs more than the shorter WPOV In the story. Makes a lot of sense when she relates everythIng to Peter's story. 

very sweet! can't wait to read more Wisp. I'm a little reluctant re his upcoming date with his ex and WIsp's reaction. I'm guessing he'll smell like the other womans perfume & that'll set W off.