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Bio:
30 something mother of 2 that loves all things twilight
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I think they are forgetting a very important person who is extremely pissed about all this! Mommy Renee!!!! She could have been bitching to a friend in a cafe or something and someone overheard her or as vindictive and bitchy as she seems could be trying to break Edward and Bella up so taht Bella is soo upset taht she decides to have an abortion because she doesnt want to have any reminders of Edward. Then Renee wouldn't have to deal with the fact her teenage daughter is living with a much older man and having a baby. Just my thoughts. hope RL settles down for you soon. Keep up the good work
Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.
What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella
i love this story! great job so far and cant wait for an update. I really hope you don't plan on dragging out the suspense cuz i need to know who is trying to kill bella. Oh, i LOVE LOVE LOVE the banner.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets
any plans to update soon?!? Im dying to know who is trying to kill bella and if edward and her are able to finally work things out and move past all the BS.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
great chapter...loved the surprise...who kne charlie could be xso sneaky...shame on billy for trying to make bella feel bad...hes lucky his son is still alive cuz i would have killed him....please dont make us wait so long for a new updat cant wait to hear about this reunion y
Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be
I'm guessing Daniel Marks is an attorney handling the money or something. Hope you guys don't make us wait another several months before the next update.
Author's Response:
Dang, I guess my mystery cliffie wasn't that big of a mystery. You're very close with your guess. And RB and I do apologize for the long wait -- it was seriously too long. But the next chapter should be up in about a week and the last chapter not too long after that. We do ask for our readers forgiveness!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans
Okay you guys have definitely redeemed yourselves for the long wait between chapters. This chapter was GREAT. Loved it. Thank goodness for Emmett and Alice. Who was the blonde? Im guessing it was Rosalie but hopefully E & B have had enough drama that you're not throwing in another twist. Cant wait for the next installment
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
aww loved it. worth the wait.
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home
Don't know what the quote is this time, but i think Alice is wanting a baby of her own. both her best friends have babies and maybe her and Jasper are trying but having problems. I hope things dont get too angsty but it has been a bit to fluffy lately and don't want this story to end any time soon so bring on some drama. Cant wait till next week.
Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420896
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Aftermath
do you by any chance work in the medical field? ive wondered that for a while because most fics i read that are medically based have no idea about the procedures and medical jargon and such so its nice to be able to read this and not want to scream in frustration about ppl writing what they dont kno just throwing around big words. great chapter, great story, on to the next chap
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You are truly EVIL! We already know she is gonna say yes (right?!?!) so why leave it there? DAMN DAMN DAMN. Can't wait till next Friday.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
Glad that went well but still feel like were waiting for a bomb to drop. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
Absolutely loved this chapter! I just keep expecting Victoria to show up at the most inopportune times tho. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
=)
Shel
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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
i wonder about the look between carlise and esme at the breakfast table this morning. I would love to be able to hear from them as well in the outtakes. Cant wait for next friday. Although you woudl be my new best friend if you could post sooner than that haha. Loving this story -- so different from a lot of the others.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!
My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today!
Hope you enjoy the teasers!
XoXo Shel
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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.
Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father.
"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward.
Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded.
"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
love it love it love it! Gotta know what emmetts problem is. Cant wait till next week
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
XoXo
Shel
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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
1st thanks for the update loving the story?
2nd I was expecting the Bella and Jasper encounter to be slightly more ... I dont know intense or something
3rd couple of questions: Is Victoria gonna find out soon? What exactly is Emmets problem? and can you post more quickly :) ?
Author's Response:
{ LOL! Yes, Victoria is going to find out soon. I'm thining she'll show up around Chapter 20 or 21 right now. Emmett will have his say in a couple of chapters. And as for posting more quickly, I'd love to, lol. But, I have a six year old and other projects I'm trying to work on, plus I write this as I go because I'm too impatient to sit on anything. =) }
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Let the games begin! I keep telling myself I'm gonna wait until this is complete to read it but then I open my email and see an update and yelling at my computer to hurry up so I can read the next chapter. Not to steal Stephenie's writing or Edward's words but this shit is my brand of heroin. haha! Love it cant wait till next Friday.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
<3 Shel
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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Damn what is it with you and the cliffhangers? THANKS FOR THE SURPRISE UPDATE! can we still get the regular friday one too? haha.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
awww loving it! Cant wait til next friday
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!
Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance!
<3 Shel
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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.
"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.
"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.
"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
OMG! Whats the matter with Jack? Is he upset about his parent or is this something to do with Victoria? Cant wait till next week.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Have i mentioned I love you! No? Well now you know. The surprise update was great, wonderful, terrific and a whole lot more. This is soo much better than raiding my kids halloween candy. Cant wait till friday.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Well I always suspected James was involved with Victoria but am so relieved that another attorney was representing Edward during the divorce. I was worried that Victoria's rights were never terminated because of James' involvement. Poor Jack. I just want to hug him. Really REALLY wanted Victoria to get her butt kicked by someone. Oh well maybe the Gala wasn't the place but please tell me someone gets a crack at her.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
YES! Edward move to Seattle, please! It would make things so much better. And Bella quit being an over thinking, over worrying paranoid woman and tell Edward about your worries. Everything from James to Victoria, to the separation and Jack and well everything. AAAAHHHHHHHH (screams in frustation), I can't take this much longer. Someone please kill Victoria and James already. Can't they get in a freak accident or something? Bella tell Edward about the phone conversation with Victoria let him listen to the recording. OMG JUST DO SOMETHING.
Okay now that that is out. Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one and would greatly appreciate if it came out sooner than next Friday (or thursday night) but no pressure.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Okay this year I am thankful for my family, friends, and THIS STORY BEING UPDATED BEFORE THANKSGIVING. Hope you and your family have a wonderful day.
Loved everything about it but sorry I just don't trust Renee especially after Jack's dream about Victoria with Renee.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
Another great chapter. I'm glad Edward is starting to come around and believe Bella about James. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
Awesome chapter as always. Definitely gonna be sad to see this story end. Any plans for a sequel (please yes, please please please yes).
Can't wait till next week.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness
loving this story! how often do you post? do you have a schedule? im checking all the time and disappointed there's nothing more.
Author's Response:
oh, i'm sorry that you're disappointed, but i guess that's good in a way, too. it must mean you really like it! so thank you very much! i don't have a posting schedule b/c my life is super chaotic, but i try to post every 2-3 weeks. if you favorite me or the story, an email will automatically be sent to you when i update. i plan on updating within the next couple of days, so favorite me before then and you'll be sure to stay posted! thanks so much for enjoying and reviewing! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected
where the hell is edward and the agents? cant wait for more
Author's Response:
ah yes, we shall find out more next chapter! thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped
I think Aro is a dirty cop? and he might be behind ALL of this, maybe including the James situation? Thanks for the update and cant wait for more
Author's Response:
i think answers will be coming soon. you have some very good assumptions. thanks for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Unbelievable
Wow! I knew Riley was connected with James but never would have guessed these jerks were father and son. Okay so that leaves Aro. What is up with him and when are you gonna tell us? Also what was going on with the Cullens in the kitchen? I thought for sure that Emmett and Edward got into a fight. But you cleared that up because I don't think that Emmett and Bella would keep that from each other. DAMN!!!! A few questions answered and SOOOOOOO many more raised. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
well, aro is creepy for now. the agents are looking into his background and will let us know when they find out more. nope, emmett and edward weren't fighting. the cullen's are hiding something, but we'll find out soon. thanks so much for the awesome review!!! ;)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Shocked
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (screaming in frustration) Thank you for the update...can't wait for more...keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
i know how you feel. nothing ever seems to go smoothly for these kids. thanks so much for hanging in there, and thanks for the review!!!! ;)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waiting
Ok! Awesome chapter. Altho u still didn't tell us what was up with Aro! Rose has been in the hospital for weeks now and I'm sure Carlise has been home since then for the conversation. PLEASE DON"T KEEP US IN SUSPENSE FOR LONG! Im dying here.
Author's Response:
i'm thinking next chapter will do a little back tracking and tell us what's really going on with aro. i'll try my best to update soon!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information
I knew it! That bastard. Why has the FBI or someone already gotten Aro and James then. It seems they have more than enough evidence to nail the bastards to the wall. Have I mentioned lately that I absolutely love this story? And that you're an amazing writer? No, well now you know. Love it love it LOVE IT. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
ah yes. i knew that question would come up. they're not going straight for the jugular on aro b/c they want to get info out of him about james's whereabouts. they're being slow and sneaky. and thank you so much for loving my story! it means a lot to me that readers enjoy it. thanks so much for the review!! ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Incidents
Please don't kill Edward! Please don't kill Edward! Please don't kill Edward!
My heart cannot take this much longer. Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response:
well, i'll just say that i'm all for the HEA, so hopefully that will keep you sane until next chapter, which should be up by next week, if not sooner. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession
So Edward has a brain tumor? Is this your idea of a HEA? I'm sitting at my computer in tears right now. What are they gonna do for him? Is it treatable? How long is he gonna be in the hospital? How is Bella gonna take this? So many questions so few answers. Oh well, till next time.
Author's Response:
unfortunately, he does have a brain tumor, but more on the prognosis soon. as always, HEA is in the cards, just some rough times ahead. i hope to update soon, and i hope you can stick with me. just keep thinking "HEA, HEA, HEA." thanks for reading and reviewing! i love all of your support!! ;)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret
great chapter. cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
thanks, sweets! glad you liked it! thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken
Well first off, great chapter. Secondly, I hope the kiddies are feeling better, the flu is nasty stuff and I've been dealing with it here with my kids, so I definitely feel you. Third, AAAAAHHHHHHH, what the hell was that cliffy for? Do we not have enough stress dealing with Edward's illness and surgery and James lurking out there someplace? Oh wait, was that James in the house? Marcus, the dirty cop, Felix, the SOB's son? Come on you gotta give me something here.
Can't wait for the next update (any idea when that might be?)
Author's Response:
glad you liked the chapter. the kids are better, however, i am not (more on that in my A/N next chapter). and the cliffie was merely meant to remind you that james is still out there. the ?POV will be revealed soon. and i wish i could give you a definite on the chapter update, but i've spent some time in the hospital recently and i haven't had time to write. hopefully in the next 10 days or so. thanks for staying with me and being patient with me. i truly appreciate it! and as always, thanks for the review!!! ;)
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79236
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LMAO that was funny right from the beginning with him walking in on his parents making out to Bella punching him. Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom. Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward. Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! I'm glad that Esme and Carlise didn't react as badly as E+B thought they would. Lets see how tomorrow goes. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I just started reading this story and I'm really hoping Emmett, Esme and Carlise don't react as badly as E + B are expecting them too. Sure the people of Forks may act weird but who cares about them. Hope to see another update soon.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Dammmmmmmnnnnnnn! I cant wait till they tell the 'rents. This is one of the best fanfics I've read. Keep up the great work
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Awesome can't wait for more!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Glad your back and that editting is over. Yeah for MY OTHER BROTHER. I've missed this story. I'm also very happy that Emmet is coming around and I LOVED the bit in the car on the way back to school. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Catching snails
Favorite part: can't decide on one. Loved the arguing in the boat, Edward being a dick about getting in the car wet, Bella in Edward's clothes, and Edward pointing it out that she must have a thing for his clothes and when he was gonna get his hoodie back, to Bella thinking about how the scent helps calm her, GOD I LOVE IT ALL. Can't wait for more. Oh, BTW, quote is from Pretty Woman "slippery little suckers" when she was talking about the snails/escargo. hahahahaha Quick question-can you post more quickly, i really can't wait a whole week without an update.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Black Angel
another great chapter. i loved how Bella was woken up by everyone laughing and taking pics of her and edward. I think the quote came from titanic but was changed from "first class girl" can't drink (in the movie) to "straight a student" can't drink Can't wait til next week.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Driving Lessons
Okay i don't know what the quote was but send me a teaser anyways! PLEASE!!!!!! I think my favorite part was the bit about the snails. Love the names Edward came up with. Can't wait till next week.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sunburned
couldn't find the quote again this time but send a teaser anyways please. Loved this chapter. Every bit of it from the Esme's comment to Edward being so sweet and caring of bella's sunburn to Bella's comment at the last about her ass. can't wait till next time.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Rumors vs Truth
My favorite part was Edward's shock over Bella telling off Lauren.
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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.
Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.
Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?
*Rated for strong language and lemons* Banner made by: Kiwibeme
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I just have a weird feeling that James is really behind all of this. Please don't keep us in suspense long.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and letting me know your thoughts! I'm not giving anything away!
He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself? AH/AU
A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Damn that stupid Edward! Does he really think she's not gonna find out about Tanya. Shame shame shame. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Edward you stupid little fucker! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH (that was me screaming in frustration) I know I know you said it gets worse before it gets better but this shit is seriously killing me.
Author's Response:
*hiding my head* Sorry! I promise it'll all come together for a purpose in the end.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Ohhhhh shit! Okay, I'm not liking Bella very much right now. She had a hand in all this as well. I know she's hurting but she obviously has time to hang out with everyone but Edward, even before the whole video thing was out. She is blaming everything on him but he's not making her prove the video correct by acting like a slut. (I'm not saying girls can't go out and have fun but instead of dealing with this video and Edward she's hiding in plain sight and acting like a fool)
Now that I said all that. Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yup, Bella's definitely going to have to face the repercussions to her actions in the next chapter. The good thing about Bella is she'll own up to her mistakes and learn from *most* of them a lot faster than Edward will.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
Just found this story today and am absolutely loving it. I was upset at first, I'll admit, with Charlie and Renee's response to her pregnancy but understand many parents feel that way when their teenage daughter gets pregnant. Glad that Charlie has found out the truth and is supportive of his daughter. Renee, okay, I have no words for how much I hate her. Good for Charlie having her arrested.
Hope James gets whats coming to him for what he did; I was a victim of rape and still (20 years later) struggle with it. Although I hope he doesn't die as a result of Jacob's attack--that would be horrible for Jacob to have to live with and possibly go to prison over that douche bag.
On a side note, only pet peeve I have regarding this story is the spelling/grammar errors, If you don't have a beta, I would be happy to help you. If you do, please double check things like this before posting, as it makes it very difficult to read.
Thanks for the story. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much... Hismysticmuse is in the process of cleaning up the errors. and it taking her a bit longer since the holidays. I will do a better job at re-reading before posting the next chapter.
Quiet Storm Sequel.
How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.
Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward.
Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533173
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure
ok that isnt as shocking as i thought i might be....especially after hearing she was married before and the way charlie treated her....omg have i mentioned i am loving this storyand cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive
alices story sounds alot like mine when i was a kid and one thing i wish i could do is kill the fucker myself so let the miserable son of a bitch die but allow alice to have her moment of revenge...just saying...btw love this chapter
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone
ok i wasnt planning on reviewing until i got caught up with this story...i found it recently and went back to read quiet storm but i changed my mind when i read ur author notes and the people giving you a hard time....i am abosolutely loving this story, how real it is and the fact that you are an amzing writer. i honestly didnt think esme could be so cold hearted and wish someone would ice her too...i dont trust her anymore and she knows too much especially about bella. im really glad you didnt kill aro either...besides edward and bella and carlise (hes always getting his ass kicked) hes my favorite character...tho i wasnt a fan of him falling in love with bella or whatever he did...i understand but still dont like that it caused things to be weird between them...anyway back to reading quick question do u update every wednesday? keep up the good work and tell the haters to fuck off and find some happy sappy fic to read
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One
ok that was better than i thought i might be. i kept thinking maybe brandon swan was her father....but knowing the way you write and the twists this story has had i think this guy might be edwards enemy from jersey...cant wait for next week. btw i just started reading some of your other stories and youre fantastic
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One
ok this chapter did have some cute moments but pretty boring...cant wait for next week, hopefully we find out more about esme, and im gonna trust that an amzing writer has a plan for this bit of fluff...heres to a great week of writing
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
i would like to hear from edward about this weekend on the beach...yeah hes having fun and putting the thing on hold but hes still the skip and his mind is probably on a hundred different things. also id like to hearfrom esme...what is that bitch doing. i know shes not just hiding out, shes a sneaky bitch and its been too quiet. heres to a better week of writing.