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Bio:
A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366714
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Cheesy Cullen
Hey there,
don't you normally eat your fries with mayo in the us? Is it so out of there that it ended up being a craving in your story, which others find digusting? Becausae I have to tell you it ist perfectly normal here in Germany and I know it also is in beglium, the netherlands and france´, for the rest of europe i am not completely sure, but i can'T imagine it didn't travel another border.
Personally i happen to like peanut butter and banana, arent ther muffins in this combination out there.
Oh and: great story, even if a little long.
LG;
Anna
Author's Response:
In my part of the US, we usually have ketchup. I had never seen anyone eat them with mayo until my sis got pregnant - that part was for her bc she was actually pregnant when I wrote that chapter. Cool that it's normal in your part of the world!!
I'm a peanut butter and banana fan myself - no muffins of that combo that I've seen so far. But I'll keep an eye out!
Thanks, Anna
I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
In the light of your A/N I make it short and sweet...
I like your plot idea and are eager to follow the story further- you knw how to keep the right amount of suspense by not lying everthing out in the open...I think it is all evolving a bit too fast, but I know sometimes this is really difficult to do and I still don't know where it takes, so no harsh judgement there...
There is one tiny spelling mistake, I found: he messages her tongue, but I think he would rather massage it... I don'z know of your a stickler to those things, but I always think it is nice to know...
Looking forward,
Anna
Author's Response:
I will fix the spelling mistake because yes it will bother me it's there. I will have to find it first. As for it evolving quickly no worries there, this is not one of those stories where the fight happens in one night. Remember they are in Alaska and with Bella's new pregancy needing to be dealt with before they do anything. they also need to decided whose side they're on. theres still the siege at Forks. then the dogs from port angles and lastly the threat from seattle. Thanks for such an honest review and i hope you enjoy the rest of the story. feel free to let me know what you think. nails233