Reviews by nola80
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625328
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nola80 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Can I just say just when I thought I knew the direction you were taking this you still constantly blow me away!!!  This is my all time favorite fan fic and I've recommend it to everyone who wil listen to me.  I'm glad you're not in fanfiction.net anymore, you're story is too high a caliber to me mixing with some of the crap people put out!  Anyways, I'm so sad this is nearing the end but I already have plans to re-read it!! Keep up the good work, you are a fantastic author!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Next chapter will be up in just a few minutes.  Thank you so much for all your support

I have plans to turn TPW into an original novel and publish it later this year.  It will have new material in the book.  I hope you will enjoy.

Reviewer: nola80 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

perfect ending to the most perfect story ever written in fanfiction..I wish you all the luck in publishing this I will definitely pick up a copy!

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: nola80 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

Sorry I would have reviewed more but I was reading this on my iphone and it didn't work.....anyways, thank you for writing a story with some actual "meat" in it.  Sometimes Bella is over the top, but I do have to remember what she's been through!  Anyways, I wish you were on fanfiction.net too so I can add this story to my community and let my subscribers know all about it!



Author's Response:

hey there, actually I am on ff.net, here's my link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~tima

If you could rec me to your community and such, that would be fantastic! I think I'm flying under the radar with this story still...

Thanks a lot for your review, and I'm glad you're enjoying!

~Fatima

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: nola80 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really liked how the story began, but I don't understand the immediate bond between bella and edward, I guess I expected that to take some time.



Author's Response:

i have tried countless times to get back to you on this and i keep erasing it. his bond wasn't instantanious, he had been replaying alice's visions for months before the auction. i am still trying to figure out how to explain my therory on Bella's thinking. sorry i will eventually figure out how to explain my thinking.