Reviews by bethcullen29
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter

Love this story

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome chapter

can't wait  for next update

the scream was Alice when Jasper proposed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awesome chapter

LOVE THIS STORY

Can't wait for more more more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

love this chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

Great chapter

keep it up awesome writing

love it

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter can't wait for more

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

Love this story

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it and are anxious for more!  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting

Great chapter Em and Rose funny as hell

can't wait for more more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked them both!  They're definitely a fun pair!  More soon, promise!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown

Great chapter

more more more more

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Definitely much more to come :)

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Awesome chapter

EPOV is great

love this story

more more more PLEASE



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)  I love EPOV as well and plan on writing it for chapter one!  I'll get on the next chapter ASAP!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

Awesome Chapter

can't wait for more more more

this story is Awesome

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I really love writing it and then you guys give me a huge smile when I read reviews.  Means so much!  Thank you!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan

Awesome chapter

Can't wait for Bella to meet the parents

wonder what off the wall comment infront of them

 

Love this story



Author's Response:

Haha glad you liked it!  I can't wait to see what she'll say myself.  I never know with her, but I know it'll be fun!

Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

Awesome chapter

can't wait until next week for the update

LOVE this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Next week is a doozy I think! :)  I love that you love it and want more! 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it :)  I'll have more for you soon, I promise!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  More, more and more are coming, I promise :)

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Awesome chapter

I LOVED auction   AWESOME

Can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm so glad you loved it!  Definitely one of my favorites!  More soon :)

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

Awesome chapter

I think Bella should of done more damage to Dan than reported him for his conduct

LOVE this story  Can't wait for more more more more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  More damage would have been fun, maybe, but all Dan really did was show up at her door drunk and make a lewd comment.  She was the one who took things physical, so it might not have gone her way with a report ;)  And she doesn't need anymore press, sadly.  But she handled it effectively I thought :)  More soon, thank you!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  More, more, more ahead :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

Awesome Chapter

can't wait for  the next update

love this story even though I don't follow football 

More Baseball or PHX Coyotes hockey team

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll have something new for you soon.  I'm glad you like it despite not following football.  Good luck to your hockey and baseball teams.  I actually have a baseball 2-shot over at FF.  It's called Stealing Home and you might like it if you want to check it out.  Same penname as here, Nolebucgrl.

Thanks so much for the review :)

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

I love this story 

Well I read most of all other stories and there wonderful

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

The last two chapters great

love this story 

 I hope James gets more coming to him

and Edward is able to race again

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Funeral and complications

love the story so far can't wait for more

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41118
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Reason Twenty-five

For girl: Lily Elizabeth

For boy: Masen Charles

love your story

James and Tanya working to kidnap the babies

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Great story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Great chapter

When is Bella going to give Edward his father's letter

great story

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter

can't wait for more more more

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love this story

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) I'm so glad you liked the story.

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter

Bella is going need alot of therapy is Bella going to about Nanny Tanya 

love this story

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

 

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

LOVES THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Glad you are loving the story, here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Great chapter

I hope Bella tells Marcus to go to HELL

Love the interaction between Bella and Edwad in love don't know it

Is Jacob coming After Bella



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

love this chapter

Is victoria coming back wreck havok in Bella and Edwards lives

 

keep up writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I couldn't review on your FF.net

I love this story so far

great chapter  even thou wasn't beta

more more more when you can



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Awesome Chapter

Love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Love this story

funny chapter

Hope Jasper doesn't go to had on Bella

 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Love the chapter  Great story

Is Jacob out of jail

 What is that about? 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Awesome chapter

Can't wait for more more more more

Love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great chapter

Love this story

When are Bella and Edward going realize they falling in Love

More more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Love this chapter

Edward finally got up the courage to ask Bella out

Love this story

MORE MORE MORE MORE  PLEASE



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Great chapter

love this story

more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Are u going have Victoria come back into the picture

Tanya and Demtri as a couple

Great chapter

love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I hope Edward and Esme give victoria piece of there minds

Bella is able calm Jack down

Maybe Tanya get into cat fight with Victoria so bella doesn't have to

Awesome chapter

LOVE this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Awesome chapter a little short

I hope Victoria and James get what they deserve

Love this story

more more more more                         



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Great chapter

Awesome writing 

This chapter is really 26 not 27 right

keep up

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Awesome chapter

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Love this story

Awesome chapter

Keep up the great writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Cute little chapter

Awesome

Keep up the great writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more more

 

Keep up Awesome writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Awesome chapter

can't wait for Edward to find out about James

What is james going to do with Bella



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Awesome chapter

Love it

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Awesome chapter

can;t wait for more more more more more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Awesome finish
going to miss this story
can't wait for epilogue

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Awesome story

I love it

Can't wait for your next story



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Bella is the newest nurse working at the MASH 8076 during the Korean War.  While there she meets Cpt. Edward Masen, who sees in her an angel in the hell they are living through.  Will they find a way to be together in a place where life can change in an interest.  Entry for the 2010 Age of Edward Contest.

 

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Beautiful banner made as part of the AoE Banner Contest by Becksishere.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96660 Read Count: 16329
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Angel in Hell

I think it should be more than one chapter

what happened next  after the war did they make it home

love it



Author's Response:

this is going to be expanded, fleshing out more of the beginning of the relationship and continuing until the end of the war...i just have to wait until the end of the contest...thanks for the love and dont forget to vote for your fave AoE story at the end of the month

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

Awesome chapter

love it

keep up Awesome writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I will.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more more



Author's Response:

I'm posting 2 chaps of LRM today...then back to V&V.  Had some computer probs...but everything's back to normal now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more

Author's Response:

THank you, I appreciate that!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

glad you like it.  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389607
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Awesome chapters

More more more more more  PLEASE

Awesome writing

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Awesome chapter

Great story so far

Do Bella and Edward find each other soon

 

Keep up Awesome writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Awesome chapter

more more more

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Awesome chapter

Keep up Awesome writing

Can't wait for Tanya get whats coming to her

Can't wait for Edward to find out Bella is his new Sub



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Awesome chapter

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

love it can't wait for more more



Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more more



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Hopefully, you won´t be waiting too much longer!  Lol!  You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

awesome chapter

glad for the update

can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Awesome chapter

love this story

can't wait for more more more

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Awesome chapter

love this story

MORE MORE MORE

 

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Awesome  chapter

 

Long December by JustJo94 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Long December

While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH

This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 704
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)

Cute one shot



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am happy that you took the time to read it...and leave a review.

Have a happy holiday!

Summary: Past Featured Story

crr

 

What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.

After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Finding Home

Awesome story

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! Have a great day!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

awesome chapter

more more more

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome chapter

more more more

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aawesome chapter

Why doesn't Bella and the kids move to Everwood

love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

dream

Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion.  Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name.  When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting.  Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.

 

All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer.  The rest of the story belongs to me.

Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!  

 

dreamofstar

Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2011
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awesome story so far

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment.  I'm glad you like my story.  I intend to update everyday.  Happy New Year!  May God bless you.

Summary:

Neurologist/Knight in shining armor Edward Cullen is called upon by a tiny fairy to save a damsel in distress. Disney makes it look so easy. Entry for the 'Who Doesn't Love a Fairy Tale? Contes on FFn.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26057 Read Count: 4886
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2011
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Slumbering Swan

AWESOME



Author's Response:

Thanks for rating and reviewing! I really love (need) the support!

Lonely Doctor by tiff_0001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 303]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2011 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awesome story so far 

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324398
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

AWESOME chapter 

Sorry to hear about your Grandmother  I lost mine on Mother's Day of this year

just take one day at time