Okay, so the three weren't who I thought they were but at the end of the last chapter you said James and it got me all confused.

Aw!  How sweet!  This reminds me of how my friend proposed to his girlfriend.  He works at Addidas and he had gotten shoes for her and he had knealt down to "present" the shoes to her and she opened it and there was the ring, tied to the shoe on a shoelace.  It was the cutest thing ever... Lol!

So, I'm seriously in awe with this story.  I absolutely LOVED it! I'm always hesitant on reading "prophecy" stories or stories where Bella is some special creature.  Either the plot is boring or the writing is terrible.

Not only is your plot amazing but your writing was horrible at all.  Sure there were a few grammatical errors but that happens.

I'm sad that Edward could never get over Bella.  I was hoping that he would eventually find a mate but I understand what Alice was saying in the epilouge.  Edward loved her so much that in the end, he would go crazy.  I'm glad to see a little Eddie though.

I think what I love most is that you didn't put lemons in your story.  Sure, I'm all up for a lemon every so often but it seems like lately a lot of stories seem to center around lemons or writer's and readers are only excited about the lemons.  Your story however made me more anxious and excited than any story that had lemons.  I'm all for the plot, lemons are just unncessary.

I'm hoping that you could write more about the Hamilton's and the Cullen's.  It doesn't have to be another story. Maybe a few one shots.  I would love to see the Cullen's interact with little Edward.  I could see Emmett wrestling with him and Esme coddling him and Carlisle teaching him.  It would be fun to see.

Anyways, enough of my ranting. Once again, LOVED the story and I think you did an excellent job!

Okay, I'm a bit torn about your story.  I like it.  I enjoy reading it however the big thing that bugs me is that we don't even know if the cancer is still there. 

You have Bella go through chemo but no where do you state that the doctors check if it has shrunk or not.  This is why I'm having trouble connecting to Bella.  I just find her being a whiny little brat.  She says she's dying but she's just weak from the chemo.  I understand how hard it is to watch someone go through chemo.  My aunt and a close family friend of mine had breast cancer and a friend of mine had a brain tumor.

Now I understand leukemia is different but the process is basically the same.  They do a round of chemo, they check the cancer and then they start another round of chemo.

Other than that, I really do enjoy this.  I'm just having a hard time being on Bella's side and I'm having a hard time understanding her whining.

I really like this.  I really want Edward and Bella to shove their relationship in everyone's faces.  Lol!  I kinda want to see a future epilouge maybe where they have a 10 year reunion and Edward and Bella are successful and/or famous.  I love stories like that lol!

So, I think I'm liking this more than your other stories.  I mean, I like your other stories, but I like this MORE XD

Now, I was wondering, are we going to see Ro's parents?  I would love to see their reaction to Ro's life now.  A great doctor with great friends and a handsome boyfriend.  It would be nice.  I love vengence like that.  It has a sweet taste to it.

Also, will Alice see her parents ever again?  I've always wondered whether Alice was curious or not about why her parents left her.  Being an intellegent woman, she know the many possibilities of why her parents abandoned her and maybe she's open minded to their reasoning.

IDK, I love the Edward/Bella plot in this but you also have great minior plots as well.  I hope to see more Charlie and Renee.  I know it's harder to tie them into the story since they're not doctors but I love Charlie and Renee. 

Anyways, great job so far.  I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

I really liked this story.  It was really well written considering that English isn't your first language.  There were a few grammatical errors and I didn't understand much of the business propositions but overall it was a good story.  

Is there a real place like this?  Because I would love to visit it lol!  I couldn't help but salivate whenever they talked about food.  Especially seafood... I love shrimp... 

Again, the only problem I have is that Bella was too perfect.  She had a good voice, she played guitar, she's a perfect cook, she excels at gun shooting, she has a loyal hybrid dog as a best friend, she has horses saving her life.  She's a typical Mary-Sue.  That's the only thing I didn't like about this story.

What I did like is that you had typical cliches but you put your own touch to them.  For example, you have Tanya try and break up Edward and Bella but you also have her be a victim in all this.

I also like the whole Jake thing.  It's sad that he died but he died because his love died and it was a bittersweet part. 

Again, enjoyed the story, didn't enjoy Bella, but I do hope that I see more stories from you.  Maybe a sequel to this?  It would be fun to see their lives in the ranch after this.  Maybe a fluff piece of Bella and Edward's wedding and having kids.  I can't get enough of Charlie and Carlisle together lol!  They crack me up.

WAH?!  HOLY KIBBLES AND BITS!  

Okay, so I was seriously going to wait to write a review until the most recent chapter but THIS.... HOLY MUSHROOM MEN!  TOTALLY UNEXPECTED!  IT'S LIKE WOAH!  GAH! 

I've read a few of your previous stories and I can definitely see a change in writing.  You're really improved.  I think you're doing a great job so far.  A few grammar and spelling problems here and there but not as much as before.  Great job with that.

I really can't wait to see what happens!

Good chapter.  I'm hoping that Mr and Mrs Cullen and Renee and Charlie appear.

I still don't understand why people are so angry and them.  They tried to protect them.  Sure, they could have told them that they were still alive but there could still be a leak somewhere.  

I also don't get why they're angry at Peter.  He was just trying to do his job.  Mr Masen, being in the military should understand this.  He most of all should understand Peter's position.  

I actually like Renee.  I can see that she does care about her family but Charlie is her family also.  If Bella had to choose between Edward and her brother's lives who would she have chosen?  I know what Renee went through wasn't that drastic but she had a choice to make.

you already see Bella choosing Edward over her brothers.  She didn't care if her brothers didn't like Edward, she continued to be with him anyways.  What if Emmett and Jasper continued to say no to their relationship?  Would she really break it off with Edward?

So you see, it's hard to have any sympathy for Bella.  Let's not forget that Mr and Mrs Cullen wasn't exactly in a good state when Bella was put into a mental institution.  They were left for dead.  I'm sure if would have taken more than a month to recover from that.  People don't usually heal from the brink of death in just a couple of weeks.  What could have they done?

I think that they're all just childish.  Especially Mr and Mrs Masen.  

Great story though.  I really enjoy it.