Reviews by eleonor317
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

OHHHHH! Aro finally! Poor carlisle i feel so bad for him. Im pretty sure james will find them farely quickly tho, doesnt he have a gps thingy in victoris...yaaa their screwed lol Sooo excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

OMG NOOO! James is not going to edwards house you idiots! He's going to track the gps in victoria and come straight to them! How the hell is edward going to protect bella, victoria, alice AND rosalie all by himself? Fuck this is so bad lol Can't freakin wait! Awesome chapter :)



Author's Response:

Deep breathes...deep calming breathes...(your review cracked me up)  I get like that soooo often with stories.. i just want to throw something at the screen.  lol

I feel your pain.

and don't forget Esme...OH SHIT...I just pushed you over the edge didn't I ...come back bb..come back..

Love the passion in your reviews...

See you next chapter..

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

AHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! Of all the ways i pictured james finding them this was so not it *gasp* I totally thought he would get to victoria before bella u totally caught me off guard lmao Im sooo scared right now this is gonna be freakin INTERESTING to say the least lol Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Holy Crap! Now that was freakin unexpected lol I really didn't think James would get Bella AND victoria at the same time, i didn't see laurent helping him with the kidnapping at all...and where did Heidi come from? Totally didn't guess she'd be involved. I wonder how long it'll take edward and them to find out where they are?  :( I feel really bad for victoria, i hope she doesn't lose the baby thats just heartbreaking. Maybe they should just lie and say she miscarried when he left her tied to the bed...that'd be smarter right? Great chapter as always...i'm having a minor panic attack thinkin about what he's gonna do and how edward will react when he finds out she was taken lol Till next time! 

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Holy hell!!! Poor edward :( my heart is breaking for him

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Yes! He dropped his phone what an idiot! lmao can't wait to read what happens when they find them..i hope edwad rips him a new asshole, or rather SEVERAL new assholes! Freakin douch! Anywayz...thanks for the birthday present i officially turned 22 today!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

OMFG! WHAT HAPPENED?! Was it edward? Did the guys get there and create a diversion so james would leave them to investigate the bang or did the girls escape by themselves? I find the latter unlikely, i dont think they would be stupid enough to run away from james at that moment...where would they run too they dont even know where they are? lol Come on edward, jacob, emmette and jasper! I'm counting on you guys to save the day lmao Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Thank god! I dont think i could handle it if james inflicted even more damage on those two lol I think turning it into an original work if a freakin awesome idea!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow i wanna cry so badly right now!!! I'm gonna miss these two, i'll read anything u guys write about them so bring it on lol I'm looking forward to it!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625385
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

OHHH! That was some serious foreshadowing lol Im super excited to find out what happens in the next chapter. Im guessing its somethin with felix? I wonder if they will leave after finding up bella is no longer a virgin...i can only imagine carlisle's reaction to that piece of information lmao Thanks for the update...I really like this website its really grown on me pretty quickly :)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Wow! My heart stopped when he took her to the basement...i totally thought he was gonna go through with it! Gah lol I love him even more now and im so glad bella finally told him about carlisle that was way overdue. I still have a suspicious feeling about that tho, something keeps telling me what carlisle wants he gets or maybe thats me being really paranoid and scared shitless lmfao Really excited for esme's garden that little tidbit has been nagging at me for freakin ever yay!! :)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

That was heartbreaking! It was a really inspirational chapter i really enoyed it...Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

OMG!!!! I HAVE NO WORDS...JUST... OH NO!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

"Let me go"??!!!!!!! What do u mean let me go?!!! Are you out of ur mind?! Please tell me shes saying that to like prove a point or something and doesn't literally mean "let me go" :( I really want them to be together thats my idea of their HEA but hey it is ur story so all i can say is please let them be together...please! lol Thanks so much for the update..Happy Easter!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Yes i would be intersted! are u kidding!? lol This is such an amazing and heartfelt story...seriously publish it! I absolutly loved the end of this chapter it made me SOOOOO HAPPY! Thank you ur awesomeness!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

OMG! I am so sad right now!!! I dont want it to b over can't u just right forever? please! lmao I loved this ending tho, they definitly deserved it and it was freakin beautiful. lol I'm gonna miss this so much but i'm really looking forward to ur next story...do u have one in the works already? should i be prepared for a new journey coming soon? lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315854
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Beautiful, Dirty, Rich

Yay! Finally edward managed to get his head out of his ass and admit his feeling lmao I really like the bella and jacob moment, how they were both trying to get over other ppl but than were noble enough to not go through with it. So sweet! Ya i know im sappy..whatever lol Really excited for what these two will do next, i'm sure with all their emotional baggage it should be really interesting lmao Thanks so much for the update, hope you have a happy easter!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

only two more chapters?? Really?!! I'm so sad :( Well its been a fun ride i'm super looking forward to the last chapters than! Thanks for the update!!!!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

Yay! i love these two lol i'm excited for the next chapter i'm sure their day of school will be quite INTERESTING lmao thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I think rosalie is full of shit, there's just no way edward would do that in my eyes anyway. I'm really hoping edward will show up at this party because i have a feeling shit will be hitting the fan. James just can not bring anything good lmfao

P.S was eclipse not FUCKIN AWESOME or what???!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

Yay finally! Totally worth the wait I loved it!



Author's Response:

oh thank you very much, im very glad it lived up to your expectations :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

OMG did that just happen? What the hell bella? She is so gonna pay for that...i actually hope the monster comes out and rips her a new one she totally earned it. Plus monster edward is just sooo hot lmao Awesome chapter! Happy Easter!



Author's Response:

Yes I'm afraid it did :( she will pay dont worry :) And the monster shall not be the one to teach her the lesson, but i dont want to reveal too much at the moment. And thank you, happy easter to you too :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

OHHHH very interesting clue! lol Now I'm super excited! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Your very welcome hehe, i want you to be excited, i am, i cant wait to finish the next chapter :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within

Um definitly a baddy! Well at least i kinda want him to be lol Its much more fun when u have someone to really hate lmao, I was so happy for edward in this chapter! Thanks for the update Happy Easter!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

OMG! WHAT???!!!! WHAT HAPPENED???! Is it jacob?? TELL ME!!! lmao



Author's Response:

Oh wow calm yourself hehe, it will all be ok, take a deep breathe, i shall not leave you hanging for long, i promise :) the next chapter is a coming :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Sweeet chapter!!! I'm loving all the twisted drama happening...soo excited for the next few chapters lol Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

you're very welcome, thanks for the review and for reading, and im rli excited about letting all the cats out of the bag haha you guys may either hate me or love me, but i hope you trust that i will make everything kool in the end :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

Don't worry bout me i can take it...bring it on!!! lmao I really dont think u can go wrong to be honest its been a great story. Some people u just can't please tho so dont sweat over it lol can't wait to read more ;)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts

OMG!!! This is sooo intense right now, i'm about to pee myself! lol Can jacob be anymore creep?! Freakin intense chappie, totally loved it :)



Author's Response:

wow thank you very much, and i know, im so excited for the next chapter, i just hope you guys dont think i need to be locked up haha, and jacob is my own little creepy creation haha xx

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255182
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oooooh! Awesome chapter!!! That was soo fun lmao I'm thinking Heather is just alittle to weird...but then sometimes i think thats what you WANT us to think but really its someone else???? lol Or maybe its CAIUS and Victoria, or Mike??? Cauis freaks me right out LOL Victoria working for Caius would make sense. Well regardless of who tried to break in i still think James will play a part in some shananigans...but maybe thats because i just love to hate James? lmao Hope you have a very HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!



Author's Response:

You have some good theories, I hope my writing in upcoming chapters helps you put the pieces together....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Hiiiii! I came across this fic last week and have been frantically reading ever since lol I'm all caught up now im so happy LOL Loved this chapter its sooo fun to watch edward squrm. I hope she does bring her feistyness to the playroom im sure that would provide some REAL fun material lmfao Thanks so much for the update, I love this story! ;)



Author's Response: Hello ....If I didn't tell you before I will now -- Welcome to my story of love and lust ...Ummm...fiesty in the playroom? Not too much -- a little bit --lol

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"A little bit" is more than good enough for me lmfao Bring it on! ;)



Author's Response:

lol ...oh don't worry it will come...lol

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Woooow! that was intense....i def wasn't disappointed. What was up with bella tho??? I didn't really get her reaction lol was she in like a subspace or something? or was that a result of her previous trauma lol im kinda confused...oh well i loved it anyways!!! could edward be anymore sweet!?? i mean really!!!? lmao till monday :) thanks for the update



Author's Response:

It was subspace... and Edward will give his POV in the next chapter...Thanks for reading here is your Thursday teaser...lml

 

 

 

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

 

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Loved this chapter! I had never heard of sub-drop so thanks for bringing that up, now i know LOL I thought she totally deserved her punishment, she needs to stop disregarding her safety. Really looking forward to next chapter it should be funnzies lmfao Hope you have a merry christmas with the fam and thank u so much for updating at all...this is a very buisy time of year. I hope ppl arent giving u a hard time about that bc really that would be VERY selfish...most authors dont update twice a week much less at xmas time LOL k rant over ;)



Author's Response:

No, the opposite everyone understands and thank you for that,,, you have a Merry Christmas ....Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Awesome chapter! I just love when bella's saucy...edwards reactions are just so funny lol Love this story thanks so much for the update! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.