Did she spnd the night with him?  Or did she just fall asleep for a minute?  I think Garrett is good for Edward.  He needed a little push.  But now what.  I cannot wait to hear what he has to say to Garrett.

He is passing the torch already?  I dont think I am ready for that....neither is Sonny!

I know it seems like it is coming at him from all directions, but I am sure they are all more connected than he thinks.  Plus if Bella will wise up and realize she knows more than she thought, she could share that knowledge with Edward and give him a leg up in this shit storm.

Oh my God. Where do I even start.  First the Free Willy comment shkuld go down in history as the best quote ever. So frickin funny. But everything after that was note worthy too. LOVE IT ALL! !!

eight bedrooms huh?

HA!  Her lack of filter an innocence together is priceless!  I love her!

I like her.  She is funny and has no idea when to shut up.

She should leave and cook him a steak dinner.  I would llove to see his face then.

I think this chapter was written about me, this is exactly what would happen to me in this situation.  Way too funny!!!

I cannot even watch Dumbo, I cry too hard to hear what is being said.  But I cry just as hard when hearing the song in Beaches.

This Carlisle is HOT!

I love Carlisle and Bella's relatiomship.

Of course she wont get away with it.  They are nothing but high school kids.  Even with a lot of money, they are young and stupid.  She is doomed.  The only hope now is that Jacob does not harm her before they get to her.  If he knows of Tanya's little deal, he may just to get something out of the deal before it turns to shit.

Oh yeah, I forgot about that.  I was a little wrapped up in the current story. HA!

That last little bit is the Edward I love most in a story.

I am thinking you may not need a beta. That was a pretty great chapter. 

I thought it would have been fun if the Tria fata members all stood around her for a picture.  I am sure they were all there.  I also hope that marcus does not find out what she did to her dress.  HA!

This has been one of the best mafia stories since SLC's Quiet Storm. Please update often as I cannot get enough.

I can totally see the lawyers trying to pull a fast one for cash. I bet they did not count on the fact that he would go straight to Seattle.  I bet they are in for it now. 

I loved this chapter!  Putting all James evil to good use was genius. I really hate seeing Seth suffer for any reason and I think Sue needs a wake-up call in the highest order. Is B having twins? 

She needs to call him out on his bullshit. I would say "fine kill me or I will do it myself because I refuse to live this way any more. "  I bet he would calm down fast. 

He needs to grow the hell up is what ha needs to do. Jealous or not he is all kinds of ass backwards. It is like at the witch trail where they burn witches because if they were a witch they would survive and if they died...oops I guess you were innocent. He really needs a wake up call. What is his intention and interest in her anyway? 

I want to know who leaked Bree's info and pic. It is one thing to make a buck off of adults but to exploit a sick child they need to be punished. She is still a ward of the state so it should be punishable I would think. 

Thanks for the tissue warning because it was very needed.  But what did she whisper to Edward before she passed? 

So he brought Momma to get aproval? So sweet but I hope she is not an avoider. He can chase but I hope she allows him to catch her every once in awhile. 

I do not believe that Renee deleted the video. Bella didn't check either. I love how they are together but what will happen when they are found out?  I can just imagine Bella alone and hounded ending up in the ER. And possibly all thanks to selfish Mommy Dearest. Edward will go apeshit if that happens.

Shit he can take charge of me too! But I am curious as to where they are headed. 

I do not even know what to say.  i cannot believe that Rosalie is that evil that she would have Bella attacked and possibly raped.  Who is she?  The level of devastation this will cause.  Not to mention Esme letting her out (willing or not) will be heartbroken too.  Then there is poor Edward on a plane and helpless.  I sure hope the next one is a long one because I do not know if my heart can take another cliffy.

Like all your stories, I love them.  However, I wanted to point out a few things that you may want to correct.  Before the trip to Phoenix Bella mentioned that Billy had a girlfriend named Susan but when they got there her name was Betty and Bella had just found out about her.  Second, the sub that replaced Bella supposedly was hired full time but as the summer hit, they were interviewing for the position.  Lastly, you keep mentioning your pictures on your blog, but there are not that many there.  We're some removed?  

No matter what, I love this story.

Like all your stories, I love them.  However, I wanted to point out a few things that you may want to correct.  Before the trip to Phoenix Bella mentioned that Billy had a girlfriend named Susan but when they got there her name was Betty and Bella had just found out about her.  Second, the sub that replaced Bella supposedly was hired full time but as the summer hit, they were interviewing for the position.  Lastly, you keep mentioning your pictures on your blog, but there are not that many there.  We're some removed?  

No matter what, I love this story.

I get so excited when you update. Each new chapter is better than the last. I wish she had some power over him or enough to not always be influenced by him. But this last stand off with the four of them was explosive. But it is like someone hit pause at the climax of the movie. Please hurry and hit play. I am dying to know what happens next! 

Awww...I am really begining to detest Bella about now.  Even with all the pain in his face and etched upon his heart at the possibility of losing either of them, she still is a raging bitch to him.  Something has to give and soon.  I feel so bad for him, and especially the baby!

I do not know how Edward can keep hanging on.  I am getting sick of Bella's not giving in.  Maybe it is worse for me because I know she has feeling for him and the baby but she is being stubborn and wanting to walk away.  Why?  I do not know.  They are different people and dealing with different issues and she is holding everyone including herslef to a standard that no longer exists.  Plus, he had to kill her family or he would have died too.  He has been victimized over and over and now she is punishing him for it all over again.  I mean, he SAVED her.  I am rezally begining to think that she is just a bitch and needs to get a reality check.  I am really not liking her.

Do you ever plan on finishing this?  I would like to follow it and know that RL gets in the way, but two years is a lot of time.  If you are not, that is too bad.  What I read was really good.

I do not know why he wants to stay married so bad, but it is a bit endearing.  I also think it is hilarious what he was thinking while the Daddy business spilled from his mouth.

Ha! That is priceless. Great first chapter.

Finally!  Bella is smart but hurting and Edward was just given a clue enema style.  That was a nice breakthrough for them.  Now Edward just needs to be honest and admit he has a messed up family, about the antics over dinner and that he needs to learn how to love and give trust. I bet Bella will be a lot more accepting. Plus he needs to stay away from the whores.

That was so visual. I could feel the sparks through the computer.

I do know your stories and love them.  However, this time when Edward said his first mean word to Bella, I immediately stopped reading.  I just had a hard time with it this time, especially knowing there is a way out.  But I toughened up and am back, but this chapter was still not easier to swallow.

I do not understand why he just did not tell her that it was Lauren that was the problem and kissed her. But I think she may be going crazy.  I also think Rose knows this and is trying to force what she has figured out in the open by dropping hints. First she tested Edward to see where his feelings were and now she is pushing Tan so that her true self emerges. I see Rose being that crafty. Especially for her family.

First,  her high school best friend began to have the same name as Banner's secretary then jumped to Angela the same as the RANGERS and back to Shelley Cope.  I think that should be fixed and be something completely different like Andrea or Rebecca.

Next, Jacob.  I think he really does see Leah as a friend and let her get into his head. But that was his mistake and he needs to come to terms with his choices. I am now just curious as to what will happen with Tanya since we know the break in Jacob's chain. 

I think that Rosalie liked the idea of him and Tanya together because she would have an in to all the best fashion and most popular celebrities by association.  If they break up she will have lost that for good.  Although selfish, I think she really believes that Bella is causing trouble.  However, her high school insecurities are the ones causing most of it.  Tanya needs to go anyway, she is unpredictible when doing drugs.

I am so glad that proper action was taken and he saw her for who she was.  I was losing hope there for awhile when he forgave her for doing drugs.  So I think I will sing: Ding Dong the witch is dead (for now), Ding Dong the witch is dead (for now), and hopefully for life!!

I still say it is Sam. Yeah he could be set up, but I doubt it. He is discreet in him manipulation and he is a jersey most of the time. It doesn't help that he's hiding his past. There is no way in hell I would stick around him if I was being stalked and found out he has close ties to the recent death. Especially with the whole cat thing. Then in the stalkers POV he or she is never trying to get between her and Sam. This could be all part of the set up but I am sticking with Sam as the killer. 

I also cannot believe Bella is so accepting about Sam's past. Being married, possible claim to a child that shows up in said man's back yard and having a ex with hooked is NOT something that falls in line with that was my past so I don't want to talk about it file. He may have been drunk but he did express his future intensions and she should be concerned about what else he doesn't deem worthy of her knowledge. Killer or not that is grounds for a breakup.

It is still Sam in my eyes. And I hope I am right for Seth's sake. Sam is good with computers and has everyplace wired she frequents.  He doesn't have to be anywhere as long as his cameras are.  He could have set an automated call to action upon answering so he can "talk" to the stalker.  But it is him. He hates Edward and would set him up in a heartbeat. Not to mention make him miserable by killing the only girl interested in him which would also link him to another killing.  He is possessive and demanding to the point of scary. I really worry for Angela and now Seth. The fact that Jess is falling for his lies and becoming someone else will probably just save her life but could end it too if he gives her an ultimatum. The killer could say I will find you and kill you next unless you give me Intel on Bella or Edward or whoever. She would totally sell out her friends and even family to save her own ass. Jess is a walking advertisement for a weak human willing to be manipulated. 

I still say it is Sam. Are Emmett and Edward brothers? I think the man in the shadows was Sam because he knew what she was wearing and he could temporarily block his number but the ring tone would register who is calling. I bet Edward is some kind of ninja too. Being all awkward he has nothing better to do than make himself deadly.

Me thinks Bella just went undercover. And I  hope she kills it and shows up all those pompous assholes at the station.

They are defiantly trying to get to the gold bars and replace them for fake ones. But I also think they want a bunch of the police to go down too. I am thinking that Edward has way deeper feelings for Bella than she understands. I do not know the Edward/Charlie connection but I am sure you will reveal it all in due time.

At first I thought that the gold bars we hiding drugs but that does not make sense. 

No, I just cannot see Jasper turning on them.  There has to be some misunderstanding.  I am sure they will get out but Jasper cannot be in on it.

I love those small gestures that speak volumes. I hope number 6 is not far behind this one.