Reviews by mmsinful
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514673
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Please don't be so harsh on Carslile.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

very cool ending for James

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Is this really the last chapter? It doesn't say completed, but other than that I love your story. Very well written and just lovely.

Author's Response:

yes it is unfortunetly I could go on for ever but I think I would be dragging it out.. LOL this is how it was going to end from the begining..

 

and thank you for reminding me I hadn't clicked the completed button LOL it is now ticked!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I was worried there for a while regarding the date...but of course who better than Edward.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Really sweet chapter. I definitely loved Bella's gift to Edward. I thought it was unique and the rest of the gifts were thought out. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Can we kill all the Higgins with a bomb? Just asking. Great chap.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad it is keeping your interest

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Of course we don't mind. The sex was great. Although I'm a little jelous. Don't know if it's for Bella's sake or mine. Either way, please update soon. I can't wait to see Bella living in the household already, and maybe, since she is the glue holding everyone together, a big, big, big bed for everyone? Just saying.

Author's Response:

I know what you mean I've been single for a little over a year I'm a little shocked I was able to write it....lol And I don't think there will be a really big bed... I just don't know if I can take it that far.... I already have them pretty wacked..

Summary:

Winner of the Bella's Lullaby of Broadway contest. All Human. Bella and Edward are cast opposite one another in the New York premiere of Phantom of the Opera. As romance grows behind the scenes can Bella and Edward keep things professional on stage and off? 

 

 

Blinky made by A Cullen Wannabe

Banner Below was part of the prize for winning the BLoB contest 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10804 Read Count: 2392
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Point of No Return

I love Phantom of the Opera, the recent one being my favorite. You did wonderful mixing characters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373200
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Tanya deserved more. Really funny though.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Margarite, Helen, Aaron, Abraham, Alexander, Benjamin, Elijah, Ezra, Charles, Frances, George, Joseph, Julius, Luke, Matthew, Marcellus, lucian, Robert, Hugh, Stephen, Richard, Raymond, Ulysses, Theodore, Simon, Wilfred, Leonore, Claire, Monica, Mary, Emma, Jacqueline, Anna, Ruth, Dorothy, Ethel, Linda, Judy, Clara, Clarice, Evangeline, Katherine.....Hope these help.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

What a lovely, sad ending. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great story, I hope you do a sequel.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I enjoy your story so much, chapter 19 and they're not together yet but it still makes sense. Can't wait til Friday.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I don't like Irina, don't know why. I liked however that Tanya was not attracted to Edward. It was very refreshing. I wonder if Irina will eventually be a thorn for Bella?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^


Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work. 

Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.

Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.

"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.

"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her. 




Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays! 

There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/

Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance!    <3

 

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I never liked Jacob, always forceful. Good job putting him in his place.

Author's Response:

 

Hello, loves! Thank you to those of you new to reading, as well as my lovelies who have been here from the beginning! Here's a snippet from the next chapter.


Also, don't forget to check out http://pictease.blogspot.com/ and http://www.fictionators.com  for a couple of more teasers from the next chapter! PicTease is up now and Fictionators will be up tomorrow sometime!

 

Love y'all! 

 

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Bella stared in shock at the envelope in her hands. She looked up at Alice, who merely smiled and nodded for her to open it. 

"Alice," she asked, her voice thick with emotion. "This is from HarperCollins Publishing. What did you do?" 


Allie clapped her hands in excitement. "Just open the damn thing and see what they said!" 


With shaking fingers, she ripped open the flap and pulled out the paper. Alice bounced in nervousness and tried to peer over her shoulder.


"Holy shit," Bella breathed out, her wide eyes shot up to Allie's. 


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Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I can't wait for you to update. This is definitely one of my favorite stories.

Author's Response:

Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.

On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well. 


Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!

~Shel~


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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.

"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."

Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face. 

"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"

"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."

The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.    

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

yay, 2 updates. awesome chapter, can't wait for more. I love this date and can't wait for them to explore their relationship more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I've been waiting for this. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Wouldn't the Cullens know that she gave the wrong information, even the police would see the pictures they posted didn't match the description that she gave them.

Author's Response:

{We don't know the *whole* story yet! We'll find out a bit more in Chapter 10! But to give you a head start, Victoria wasn't concerned about Jack, just where her next hit was coming from. No one else really thought to question the validity of the mother's description of her child. The picture she gave the cops of him was a black and white copy.}

 

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Noooooooooo, this is torture, please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Noooooooo, can't wait for Edward's reaction. Pease update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I thought he would react more. I'm glad Bella talked back to him.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

How sad, he needs to choke Victoria and then kick her head. I know I want to. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Noooooo, of course you end it there. I thought Marcus was a mean person yet he's described with warm eyes and handsome kind-looking man. Man you and your clifies, now I'll be wondering........WHAT THE HELL DOES HE WANT?

Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

I loved this chapter. Of course Jack was adorable as ever. Of course we will be voting for you and your story. It has been a great pleasure reading this story and it will be sad when in 3 Fridays, there won't be more updates. Can't say i'm excited about that. LOL. Until next time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

So sad to see this go. I love the relationship between Charlie and Bella. You could definitely feel the love between them. Esme driving off was classic. Jack not always being the perfect kid was also refreshing, more human. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story and sharing it with us. This has been the first story I read where even after 9 chapters I wasn't really impatiently wondering where Edward was just because I had already fallen in love with Jack. Can't wait to read all of your future stories to come. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105120
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

how about anal?

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Cool chapter. I hope you have time to update soon.

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mmsinful Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was intense. Very interesting.

Summary:

 

 

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"I think you liked me touching you in front of your ex, didn't you?" E & B are alone for New Year's ... or not. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon, Lemon writing exercise.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2754 Read Count: 2290
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot and bothered.

The Servile Gal by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

OOC. All Human. A one-shot made for 'Squeeze my Lemon'. SMUT GALORE! ExB    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4947 Read Count: 1863
[Report This] Published: 28 Dec 2010 Updated: 28 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would really like to know what happens next. What exactly is her profession, did they end up together, what happens the next morning, Riley? Please continue at least one more chapter.



Author's Response:

I'll see what I can about that other chapter you requested. ;D Thanks!

Lonely Doctor by tiff_0001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 303]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2011 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good chapter...perhaps the writer's block is a signal that the story should finish soon...they have a baby, they're happy...epilogue?

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

very hot and sweet. Are you going to expand this? Maybe one more chapter?

 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you enjoyed it.  I didn't have any plans to extend the story but I am considering it.  Thanks so much for the review,, I appreciate the feedback!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

That was so gruesome....Awesome. Thanks for the explanation, I was confused. So now I can go back and read and understand. Thanks!

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying

I like the name Helen, but I probably would change it to Helena or maybe even Margarite. Love your story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427884
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

Great as always Soapy. After all, what would one of your stories be without any angst?

Reviewer: mmsa Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Breaking

Can't wait for your Drabble, Soapy. 

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50356
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mmsinful Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*throws a pouch of fairy dust in hopes that Edward will sneeze away his clothes*. 

Edward is gone?!!!! Victoria is all over that or maybe even Esme with her misguided atitude. Thanks for posting. 



Author's Response:

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: mmsinful Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Awww, Soapy, there you go again, hitting it where the tears are. Can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mmsinful Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This version is very different from the other one. It seems more......I don't know what the proper word would be. I like this erosion better and not so much for the pairing as I thought, the characters in a way just seem more developed or I guess "human." sorry if it doesn't make sense.
*sneezes and makes Edward naked* ----thank you for that.

Summary:

See how it all started. What did Bella do once she laid eyes on Edward Cullen to make sure he was hers. Watch as shy Bella stops at nothing to get her man. All Human, canon couples, a bit OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28487 Read Count: 2297
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mmsinful Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This Bella sounds slutty already. I feel like she'll bring mixed reactions.



Author's Response:

Ohhh she is just starting out...... I think you will love her transofrmation!!