Reviews by EeWee
The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Breathing

What a sweet, romantic story.  I love B and E like this.  Lemons are great but sometimes romance and longing are greater.  I know this story is finished, but I just wanted to send a little review your way.  E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Goodbye

Even though your story is completed, I have to say I'm still loving it. Your rendition of B and E are different and exciting.  Count me in as a Velvet Vixen too.  I'm moving on to the next chapter.  See ya on the bus.  E

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315702
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

Cool little story.  Funny and sad all at once.  Love how OOC everyone is.  Just remember, B&E belong together...forever...just saying..E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

They belong together.  Always!!!  YEAH!!  E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

Got my tickets too!!  Can't wait.  I hope Edward shows up and kicks James' ass!!  He just needs to grab Bella and get the hell out of Dodge!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

beaches

Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13509
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Great little story.  It's been on my favorites list for a while and I just now got around to reading it.  I'm going to check your profile page to see if you have anything else.  I like your writing style and I love your E&B.  I love stories where they always end up together and happy.  E;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you got a chance to read and I'm so happy that you liked it!!

Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All human. Bella was best friends with Alice and Edward in high school. She decided to confess her feelings to Edward before end of senior year, but he unfortunately didn't return her feelings. Embarrassed and regretful of a ruined friendship, she moved back to Arizona for college but returned to Washington due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108256 Read Count: 23845
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings

OK.  I read the whole story and it was so nice to be able to read through a happy and funny story without a lot of angst.  I just get tired of all that sometimes and just want some happiness for B and E.  THANKS for that.  I will look forward to your follow-up.  E

Summary:

Edward watches Bella from the two apartments on either side of hers. What happens when Bella discovers a peephole and pays him a visit? All Human, OOC "Mentalward" Contest Entry. Contains Adult Content and Lemon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5415 Read Count: 722
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Pinholes and Passageways

Hilarious and smoking hot.  Even when they are crazy, they know they belong together!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'm glad you liked this crazy tale!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Loved the story!!  If Bella had to end up with anyone other than Edward, I agree that it has to be Carlisle.  Hot, hot, hot story. 

 

EeWee

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

this was a very good story.  excellent characters, not too much angst, and lots of love and passion.  i am reading Explosive Encounters right now, another fab story.  waiting for your next update on that one.  going over to ripple effect next and check that one out.  Keep up the great stories.  E

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Holy shit Batman.  Love me some Domward.  Can't wait until they meet up again.

 

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Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Excellent.  Love this story.  Can't wait for the reunion "weekend".  E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow.  Great chapter.  They are so beautiful together.  I hope you eventually let Edward meet up with James.  What a sleazebag.  Keep up the great writing. E:)

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome chapter!! I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes.  I hope she doesn't become stupid and leave.  Keep writing girl...you are awesome too.



Author's Response:

You are going to make me start!! thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Poor Bella.  Always a magnet for trouble.  If I were her I'd just go with Edward and stay with him all the time...sigh ;)  Can't wait to find out what James and Victoria are really up to...keep it coming.  I look forward to all your updates. 



Author's Response:

thanks!!

TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Bella. Always doubting herself so much.  I like this version (your version) of the Cullen family, especially that Rosalie looks out for Bella too.  I know you have a lot of story left to tell with the James/Victoria line and now Aro is in the picture and lets not forget big, bad Jake.  Can't wait for your next chapter.  Write, write, write...



Author's Response:

thank you for your review. so demanding.... :D

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Poor B. She just can't catch a break from these guys.  Still loving your story.  Can't wait for next chapter.  E



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I have finally been able to get back to reading this story.  I think I was about 6 chapters behind.  Lord, I have cried over the last few chapters.  I love how you can really get into Bella's head and heart and express her feelings so well that I actually feel them myself!!  I'm really looking forward to the next few chapters.  I hope Jim and Jake get what's coming to them and I hope its Jazz, Edward and Emmett  (and maybe Andy) that gives it to them!!  Write fast!!!   E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awesome chapter!!  So glad Jim and Jake got their rewards. Hopefully B cracked his skull.  Loved vigilante Carlisle and pistol packing Rose.  BTW, Rose's "illness", is she PG?  Can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

thank you ew - soon!

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Le Sigh! What a romantic chapter.  Glad you caught up this site with FF.   I like reading from here much better.  Can't wait to see what other adventures you have in store for Edward and Bella.  I have a feeling we haven't heard the last of James either.  Looking forward to your next posting.  E;)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Continues to be a great and interesting story.  The plot continues to thicken as they say. I followed you over here from Twilighted since you are further along here than there.  Get busy and write some more girl!  Like your characterizations of Edward and Bella.  I like that they are both pretty strong and smart, instead of weak and mopey (emo) like in a lot of other stories.  Looking foward to your next update.  E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Continue to love your story and your characterization of a strong Bella and Alice.  Nice that the girls are protecting the guys for a change.  Look forward to your next update.  E

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yipee!!  Edward and Emmett to the rescue.  I almost believed James for about a second.  I hope Bella gets to kick Aro's ass too. 

Eclipse was awesome. I've seen it twice already.  The movie was actually more exciting than the book.  I think David Slade did a good job. 

 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I love Charlie.  He has always been one of my favorite characters from the books but especially from the movies.  He is totally underestimated by everyone.  Let's hope he saves his baby Bella.  Looking forward to your next chapter. 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Ethics Be Damned

So love that Charlie!!

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Love it.  Thank God someone decked Tanya.  I really hate her in all the fanfics I read.  Sigh..Edward my hero and of course, still loving Charlie.  Anxiously awaiting your next chapter. 

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

Interesting so far.  I can already feel B's pain in this chapter with her flashbacks.  Been there, done that, and I cried right along with her. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too. The memories are the toughest part to write since they're all from experience...

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

Love your story.  I've had to toggle back and forth between FF site and this one because sometimes this site goes down without notice.  Anyway, love these guys and I'm so hoping everything will work out for them.  Bella really needs some happiness in her life. 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

God, your Edward is such a romantic.  B is one lucky girl.  Onto the lovin' in the next chapter (hopefully). 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Your sex scene was very tastefully written and your Edward was everything a first time lover should be.  Well done.

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

Your story continues to keep me riveted.  I personally have had trouble leaving reviews on this website.  Sometimes, it just won't submit it.  I'm so glad they worked things out.  Looking forward to next chapter. 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

Still loving your story and looking forward to your next update.  When I was pregnant, I guess I was one of the lucky ones.   I never had morning sickness or mood swings or terrible cravings or anything.  Easy pregnancies and easy deliveries. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Yeah, I believe it's different from woman to woman, but Bella is in the group that isn't as lucky as you were :)

xx
Gelix

The Great Con by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Carlisle Cullen finds himself tempted by the devel herself, his naughty step-daugher, Bella. NC-17 for language and lemons. One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3833 Read Count: 4652
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2010
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOOOOO...the evil girls of twilight. Great little one shot. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're just teasing us now.  Want some Edward!  LOL

Reviewer: EeWee Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

These two are hilarious.  We KNOW they belong together.  Let's see how long it takes them to figure it out.  And I like that Bella has a figure!  Yeah for us curvy women!!