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Bio:
I'm a 40 years old mom of a boy and a girl, who loves to read but can't write to save my life!!!
Anyway, i try to leave constructive criticism, and i hope nobody take offense by it.
I'm from Chile, so i speak spanish, and if anyone wants to translate your stories, i`ll be honored to help.
Hugs to you all!!!
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625069
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
i absolutely loved it. You have made me cry, laugh, and wait for your updates. (i don't have any fingernails left!!)
You promissed a happy ending, and through the chapters sometimes i thought you wouldn't deliver, but you're an amazing writer, and your story is simply breathtaking. it's so weel written, the characters are always consistent, the timeline and all the details so carefully put together... what a great job!!
I hope you get to publish this story, and i'll buy a copy!!!
Congratulations!!! please keep writting!!! 'cause i'm going to miss this story!!
Best wishes on your every project, and hugs!!!!
Nessa
AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I like your story.You have a way to explain everything with very few words. it's amazing.
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
woa that's amazing! i can't wait for an update.
Hugs
“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
I love it. are you planning to write Edward's point of view?
I can't wait yo read the date!!!
Hugs
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
Ah!!! *sighs* that's awesome... so sweet!!!
i loved this story every step of the way, and i'm going to miss it...you had make me cry, laugh and daydream a lot, congratulations, really a great job!
will you write something new??? i hope so.
Hugs, hugs, more hugs and sighs!!!
Nessa
Author's Response:
Thanks. Right now I'm still working on my NASCAR story Breakaway and my original story posted here called The Children of Creation. I'm sure that there will be other Twilight fics that will brew up once Breakaway is done, but I'm going to try to keep it to one fanfic plus my original for as long as possible. I do have little plot bunnies scurrying around in my head though...so I"m sure you will see more :)
Edward is alone, invisible and chained to the forest. Invisibility is a curse until he meets Bella. But who would save who? The alone or the lonely? Written for the Once Upon a Twilight contest. A collaboration between StarLightSuccubus and magan bagan.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14984 Read Count: 304
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Nature Boy
I love it!!! so sweet, and beautiful, and magical!!!!
AWWW!!!
Great job!!
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies
good thing Edward stayed with her. I can't wait to read more.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :)
“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late.
I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
i love it!
Author's Response:
SQUEAL!!!! 22 reviews I just posted ch 39
Best Selling Author Edward Masen has more than a few secrets when it comes to his books, What happens when sweet Bella Swan finds more than a few coincidences inside the pages by her favorite author? Rated M for language and lemons. Oneshot.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15988 Read Count: 482
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hey!!
that was awesom!! i lovet it
you have written his name as Edward Cullen, in the first Bpov, so you can correct it!
keep writing!
hugs
Nessa
Author's Response:
i thought i had fixed all those haha. i havent edited this in ages. i wrote it last year!! thanks for pointing it out i really appreciate it!
J
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I love this story, and trust you won’t let us down!
Slut, between lover can be so hot!!! i'm with Edward on that! =)
As for Leah, maybe you could do an interview with her and Jacob???
Hugs for you!
Author's Response:
Leah's problem is going to be surfacing really soon...within the next few chapters ...thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Happy Thanksgiving!
Loved the chapter, can't wait to read Epov's....
Hugs!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
New banner by Julie C.
Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I love this story, but i have to tell you
"empuesta" means "from behind", and is used only to aproach hens...
you need to say "acostumbrada"
Keep writing!!
Hugs
Nessa
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions
Makes me wonder if you have some Personality Disorder.... Please don't take offense.
Anyway it's great and you're a wonderful writer. I love the story and the interview is awesome!
Hugs
Author's Response:
No offence taken, my husband thinks the same thing. When I write, I talk outloud and my voice changes with each character..lol
He thinks I am beyond insane, but whatever works right?....anyway thanks for reading and leaving a comment..lml
Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion. Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name. When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting. Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.
All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer. The rest of the story belongs to me.
Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!
Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
You wrote "Thomas and Jenna" in some parts.
I just want to help!
Hugs
Nessa
Author's Response:
Thanks