Reviews by elliej
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

It's nice that you made Alice uncomfortable with breastfeeding.  I know of quite a few young mothers who have been made to feel like their 'bad' mothers because they don't want to breastfeed. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Arrrrrrrrgh!!!!!!  You're evil!  Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I was lying in my bed, thinking it was too early for me to be up when I realized that today was an update day and got up to see if you updated.  You did!  yay! 



Author's Response:

glad I could help you out!

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

What a great chapter.  You did a good job with the complexities of having a neglectful parent that the child still loves and wants a relationship with.



Author's Response:

thanks honey

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Awwwww.... Poor Edward.  :-(

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

Oooh!  Football Field Sex.  Awesome.



Author's Response:

Haha glad you liked it!  Thank you!

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

LOL.  I loved Edward's reaction to Alice and Bella naming his dick. 

 

Oh.  I want you to write the chapter in Edward's pov.



Author's Response:

Hee, you and everyone else!  I expected it though and always planned on EPOV of that moment. 

Edward took that pretty well, though he was a bit surprised, not that I blame him :) hehe

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Awwwww....  That was so sweet.  Edward made me cry a little bit with his toast.  I can totally imagine Emmett wearing Hammer pants.  LOL.  At least it wasn't maternity pants a la Joey on Friends.



Author's Response:

:) It was Friends and Twitter inspired but yeah, Emmett had to put his own golden spin on the eating pants ;) 

So glad you liked it!  The toast got me teary as well.  Love Edward so! 

Thanks for the review!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

Awwwwwww.... Carlisle got his head out of his ass.   Yay!

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

Awwwwwwww........

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

LMAO!  The mystery deepens.  I loved the ending.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Face Off

"I dropped down into a frog position and began hopping up and down on my hands and feet. I let my tongue hang down low as I burped out the melody for Stairway to Heaven."

 

Probably the most unexpected paragraph in fanfic history.  Awesome.  :-D

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LMAO!!!  The idea of Bella doing the Carlton makes me very happy.  :-)

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Yay!  I'm so glad you were able to finish this story.  I've enjoyed it from when I first read it a long time ago.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Yay!  It's nice to know the whole truth!  I love Emmett's reaction.  Too hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Emmett is a piece of work

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

LMAO!  I love Emmett. 



Author's Response:

THanks for the review!

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47177
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Yikes!!!  Very creepy.  

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27174
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Yikes!  I hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you, I will update in a couple fo days :-)

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Awwwww.... I like this ending.  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268895
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Eek!  A literal cliffhanger!!!   Poor Bella.  I feel the urge to Gibbs Slap Emmett and Jasper.



Author's Response:

Nice NCIS refense:) I love Gibbs:)

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Heh.  I'm glad he told off Emmett.  Hopefully now everyone will start to get their heads out of their asses.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Awwww..... I don't want to Gibbs Slap Emmett so much anymore.  Yay!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

One day in gym class, Forks High learns that Bella Swan can kick. The football team needs a kicker.

The result of that: Bella makes the football team.

The problem: None of the guys want a girl on their team.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74692 Read Count: 22155
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2014
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Not Giving Up

Awwww... I love this Bella. 

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Another Chance

Ok.  Someone needs to beat Newton up.  I don't care if it's Rose or Edward at this point.  He needs to be punished.

Summary:

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Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Grand

Yes.  In fact, I've been re-reading the earlier chapters just this weekend so it was a happy surprise to get a new one.

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Blind

Yay!  I've loved re-reading the story.  Still so good.  Still so perfectly flawed.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Gifts

Awwwwwww.... I'm so happy little Claire got her jacket.  That makes me happy.  This was such a sweet chapter.  I like seeing them spoil each other.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wonderful job!  i'm glad Bella's standing up for herself.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I say he's talking to the cook, because I seem to remember that German cook's were prized at this point in history because of their baking skills.  Either that or she's his Domme and you're taking the story in an unexpected and slightly disturbing direction.  LOL

 

Great chapter.  I love how nervous he is to be around her.  It's very sweet how he tries to calm her down.

Summary:

Written for Fandom For Suicide Awareness. A possible futuretake for my character Wisp. Inspired by LyricalKris, who dared me to write angst at Disneyland! Mostly fluff, a little angst. Bella and Edward go on their first vacation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18096 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Nov 2012
Reviewer: elliej Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwww.... that was such a sweet possible future for Wisp.  I like that she wasn't 'cured' and that she still has issues, but has grown so much.  Great job!