Reviews by Caligyrl4cullen
Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: I Would Die for That

If that wasn't a nail bitter... Jeebus! I'm singled the everyone is ok, Abby jus has to develop a Lil more n Eli needa to recoup but whew... Can't wait for next update!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: As Time Goes By

Well damn.... That chapter brought out the tissues... And to know more are on the way is just horrible. I'll keep in mind of the HEA but the bumpy road still sucks for these kids who seem to never have a chance (even tho they do). Looking forward to next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467277
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Testing Testing

That was freakin hillarious!!! All around laughs innthis chapter. Can't wait for next update... N glad you update twcs too!!! Great stories!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Road to redemption

First... gotta say I love the print story feature twcs offers.  Ive been catching up on this sequeal for awhile and it definately makes it easier to read in a word document at work than worrying about the internet useage ;)  Love these stories and cant wait for the next update.  I also love how long they the chapters are.  Feeling kinda sorry for EJ but I dont know how i wouldve handled finding out about Jacob.  Love em all!!!  Go Red Raiders!!!

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58288
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ah man... Serious angst in this chapter... Poor Edward n Bella, they're both struggling let's hope the "we need to talk" becomes more beneficial than the typical convo starter.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh damn... Duh duh duhhhh. Wonder wut exactly was said in her nightmares. They'll get past it but it jus sucks donkeys.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OMG, only 5 left... That's crazy but soo happy to hear there's a third piece. Too much of their story hasn't been told yet n can't wait!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Bella is the newest nurse working at the MASH 8076 during the Korean War.  While there she meets Cpt. Edward Masen, who sees in her an angel in the hell they are living through.  Will they find a way to be together in a place where life can change in an interest.  Entry for the 2010 Age of Edward Contest.

 

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Another amazing banner made for me by Rosalynn.

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Beautiful banner made as part of the AoE Banner Contest by Becksishere.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96660 Read Count: 16329
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye Old Friend

That's so sad a out Jake :( but glad it ended on a slightly nicer note of Edwards birthday celebration. It's a dark time in general and glad to see Bella so strong when necessary.

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 *~ The Chapter Where They Finally Do It!*~

Loving this geekward!!! Hope you decide to continue this fic when inspiration hits you!!!!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389602
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

Damn... 2 weeks, I can deal with waiting that long. Well, continual updates would be awesome ;) but I think we can handle in two weeks.

Oh the anticipation!!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination

Poor Bella, do sexually frustrated and drank a Lil too much of the grape and got ahead of herself. Dammit, I feel so bad for her... Cause with her pov, you can see how she's prolly 10x's worse on herself than he is. Damn him for his lessons of restraint!!! Lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

So glad to see an update for this fic. It's been awhile and damn, I forgot how she misbehaved but can't wait for next update.

Boooo to blogspot and any "monitors"nano complain about the pics... It helps lay out the scene ;)

Anywho, it was kinda sad to see how both of them felt like failures, but growing pains do suck in any new relationship... Bdsm or not.

Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Hot damn... That was awesome!!!

It's been awhile but I remember something to the effect of a stalker or someone dangerous... Which, my guess would be this Mack guy. No bueno, no bueno at all!!! Refresh my memory... Am I on the right track?

Summary:

Edward and Bella finally found their way back though the darkness that nearly consummed them. Will they be prepared for the wildest ride yet? Canon couples, AH and NC-17 for the usual. Third story in the My Boys series.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86867 Read Count: 38657
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 May 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awwwwwwwww.... Love the names!!!! Especially how you tied everyone in there. Does that mean there's will be three girls somehow mixed in ;) damn RL gettin in the way haha... Can't wait for next update but understand RL sucks lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot damn, what a way to start off this next phase for b & e. Can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh man!!!! What a cliffy... I hope all is ok. I don't think they could handle anything horrible happening to the babies. And how sweet was it that he was talking to Aaron???!!! Can't wait for next update hope it comes soon!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Whew... A little safer today and help from the awesome parents. This will mos def help. Glad they convinced them to accept it

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, 9 left... That's crazy! These stories have been great to read and follow. Can't believe we're that close to it ending. We know these 3 have special guardian angels so.... Yea, they gotta make it ;)

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 82064
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That bitch!!!! Or whoever did this... That's horrible!!! I really hope it's nothing the boys were up to in their room. Theyll feel devastated if it's their fault. So glad to see an update for this fic... Can't wait for the next one ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So glad to see this chapter... Love these guys. Obviously, whoevers at the door, it isn't good... I'm thinking Lauren. I hope Bella keeps her in check!!!  Well see with the next update, I'm sure ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awwwwwww, they were making a cradle? Let's hope that somehow Sarah and Brody somehow kept some stuff safe or something. That just completely sucks!!! Poor guys!!!! Looking toward to the next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532868
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

Woohoo!!!! So much better than a surprise Sunday update. Loved it and the back seat tonsil poking. Damn Edward is hot!!! Haha!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

Im loving this chapter!!! Especially more of e being a dad more... But so outta touch with stuff cuzz his "job". He still manages... In an awesome awkward way. It's good they have some drama free time, they definitely need it after all that other bs. Sonny pov should be pretty funny, a smaller Edward, but loving e's pov in adventurous fatherhood. 3 hard core mobsters with a shyt ton of kids.... Classic!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Sonny still having his own issues. Poor guy, you would think damion would have more being the middle child and all. On to the next POV!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Sorry for not posting a review... I think I was excited about getting another in a week that I was just waiting ;)

Loved this... And the chance for Bella to have a somewhat normal parent. Jeebus!!! Lol... Seriously, can't wait for next update!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

Yea... I can totally see Edward being jealous of anyone spending time with Bella. He does NOT like to share. Glad there will be no cheating. Steepen b/e, even if u have to keep reminding us ;). Wonder what's gonna happen withthe brothers... What will it take for Edward to see Carlisle finally finding his Bella? And is that possible or is his head to far gone to actually find his Bella. Also, yeah!!!! Derek seems like he's going to be a good guy... Finally Bella gets a parent she deserves!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Love how you gotta break Indian for some folks... For someone who loves this story regardless... Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up. Loved how you wrapped up INI so totally excited for this one.

Hope there isn't too much drama in between now and 60, plus the 10+ in time jump. Hope elena was just jumpy and didn't leave anything fishy with the envelop. Call my paranoid but just looking out for our mobward ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

Bella is hilarious drunk... OMG!!!! She's all kinda mob wife just intensifies with a little help. Too funny... Can't wait for this dame bullshyt to be over with... Stupid ass Carlisle!!!

Question for you, do you let us know when the ff version is missing stuff and to come here for the unclean version?

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

Holy shyt!!!! I totally have faith in you but seriously hoping part 2 comes sooner rather than later. I know they both mean well but I'm always team e, and his heart is straight breakin. She goes to aro to check on him n get ice n doesn't even give a shyt.

Damn, seriously needing that next part ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

So this chapter was fuckin hillarious!!!! I LOVED IT!!! Between Bella getting ready to fight Pennywise, Edward having to control the both of yous... Aro talking in thrid person... LOL at work funny.

Mauro needs to watch his ass... he's gonna be swimming with the fishes soon, and i dont really feel sorry for him.

Im also glad to see Bella may have a keeper in the friends department.  I only have select few friends that are women... they really can get catty and bitchy and straight up high school!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

Yes!!!! I'm finally caught up. I've been reading this at work (gotta love print feat here at twcs). I won't get caught on this website for each chapter, I can read from word ;D)

Love this story and can't wait for next update!!! I'm also a fan of fun times from epov. Since he isn't too much of a daddyward, seeing them in a happy place is good!!! Just my opinion though lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

Loving the updates!!! Sonny is a pervert... Just like his father. Damn, how kids grow up earlier and earlier cuzz I'm sure boys this young are thinking and doin just that. And you know bella can't wait to tell Edward about earlier... She was gonna burst from it upstairs. Poor Alex tho, she's gonna give herself a heart attack between her fear of one Cullen and anger at the younger one. Hillarious!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

I have faith, I really do... But ugh!!!! That just sucks!!!! Loving bad ass Bella though... Can't wait to see her go all mafia mom on the guys who did this!!! Edward will be soooo proud, he already is but... Someone's gonna get it for messin with the kiddos!!! Nuttin like boobies to heal a tweener thats a mini Edward. ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Oh... My heart hurts for both of em. But it's almost like E's given up on thinkin she loves him for him anymore. Threw in the towel of sorts. Poor guy... Let's hope aro keeps talkin sense into her and what not. Maybe the kids all together n Bella having time away will help her. It'll prolly only make things worse for e though. Damn the heart strings :( Least Sonny got to see huge boobs!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Well shyt... I wanna be excited that they're back in the same state but there's loads of shyt to deal with. These two have the most godawful luck... But seriously can't wait for next update. I'm pulling for em to fix it sooner rather than later!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Soo not boring. Just tying up loose ends and bringing things to a close. Love your stories and can't believe we're close to the end here!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Yeah!!!! Finally beat the bitch down!!! She totally had it coming. Too mad more couldn't be done with Renee but she can be a loose end that just kind frays at the end. Although I love e &b pov's, your ther characters always come to life anyway. So when you get to the other folks... Theyll defiantly be awesome. Truly love this fic!!! Can't believe it's almost over, bu glad there's still a shytload left.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

Well damn whatever bug crawled up Bella's ass. I understand her reluctance but that's what got her in the fuked up situation with E after Sonny got shot. Regular marriage tiffs happen, they will work it out!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Ahhhhhh.... I know we still have. Inch of chapter left but I really felt the sense of wrapping it up in this one. So cute their little family down the aisle. It's alma of like theyre renewing heir vows with kids involved. Love seeing a grown up mafiaward... Soooo smexy!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

It's wrapping up..... Noooooooo!! Lol, damn the kids for growing up and for the bitchy Kylie. She was such a cute baby haha!!!

Hope you get your Number of reviews u wanted ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I'd say that's a happy ending for Kylie. At least she's not marrying that tool!!! And to kiss her after fuking eatin out carli... That's just fuked up. Yuck!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Damn... Well you figure he's got crazy on both sides so it was bound to happen to one of the kids. Skip and Bella... Yea that's a crazy combo, but you just can't hate em or their offspring lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

If only he talked to his parents would he know he isn't exactly alone in the crazy world. Apple def didn't fall far from either tree ;) I wonder if he found his Bella or just another conquest... Always looking for a challenge. Lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I will be one to say... Keep writing lol do t stop at 69. This family is fukawesome!!!!

Awwww... Damn those heart to hearts, had to use a couple tissues. Im either a softy today or just really really love this family. Poor Dame, feeling the effects of yesterday's alcohol. I wonder if his repeated OMg is for Alex or summin else.??? Gotta love Sonny too, such a voice of reason that kid. And it's always fun to see Bella lay the smack down on Edward. Hopefully got kinky make up sex is next ;).

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

Hot damn!!!! That was pretty epic.its gonna be a downfall and I'm and not that th guys aren't around... I see scumbanner poking his head around and maybe something worse? Ohh b&e, I'm sticking around but glad that ur hiding in ur bomb shelter and that you have reception to type and update as soon as possible ;)... Just cuzz how fuckin fail this chapter was HAHA!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications

Damn... The rose situation can easily blow up with Bella becoming friends with Alice and jasper who also know rose. Ruh roh!!!  And that lil couple is who I assume is having dinner, it'll be interesting too see the dynamic. As for Edwards secret, I'm guessing it's his age... Either already 18 (which would make it too easy), 16 cuzz he's super smart (which would make it extremely hard) or 17 (which is almost legal but not quite yet).  Can't wait for next update...

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances

Gotta love Edward gettin all protector on Banner... But I can see Banner being all "shyt hits the fan" for them too. Can't wait to see what Em n E do to Banner... So many teenage possibilities. 

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Letting Go

AHHHH... They heart fail and tears!!!!! I'm glad you keep drillin gin our heads HEA... HEA... It's the only thing keeping me sane here. AHHHH!!!!

What did the letter say... Is he in a funk so much he hasnt emptied his bag? Damn... The heart fail!!!

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Can't wait for the epi cuzz tissues were def needed for this one!!!

Summary:

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Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol... Bella's inner monologue is hillarious. You should at least make it a novella type story ;) you know for Bella's sake lol

 

Add BD to the robporn fuzz he can break my headboard any day... Yummmmmm

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 17073
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Give and Go

Yea!!! Such innocent high school romances and all things that follow them. So excited about update!!! Love this story and can't wait to see where these guys go.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Extra Time

Yeah!!!!!! It does seem like they'll need garage time to reconnect and solidify the strong bond they already have. Love them!!! I hope the future Convo goes well... You know the one... E's soccer career, her following wherever he goes cuzz she's a smarty too... Her and her mom... Really do love these kids!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Hard Tackle

Awwww, i think our Lil caveward needs some extra loving once Bella's dragged back to their cave. It's cute tho, and cue the hot sweaty soccer players next. She's gonna be drooling like no ones business

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Encroachment

So love how he knows disney movies/characters!!! This is was really sweet chapter where they can reconnect and just be drummer girl and creeper. Totally excited about the meet and greet with his parents. I'm sure he'll be a mess but hopefully it'll be a good thing!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

Maggie rocks!!! Glad Bella's got someone there for her since she can't get the feedback like that from her mom. I'm sure same will be an outlet too but that's always difficult being creepers mom and all. Can't wait for the dinner scene!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: A Conversation With Mom

Uh oh... Then you prep us with remember I gave you this when talking about the next chapter... Makes me nervous!!! I'm guessing something, angst, parents disapproval or summin is gonna happen at the dinner we've all been waiting for.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

Awwww, they see the bond our kids have. Mama bear will come out, prolly for Bella's benefit too at some point. Can't wait to see how she makes E squirm with a mothers stare lol. Let's hope they have E's parents in their corner cuzz I'm sure there will be bumpy times in their life

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Too Many Cymbals

Poor drummer girl... Soo much heart fail at such a young age and our poor stalker boy who shoulders it all for her happiness. Let's hope she can't work some of it out in her head. Living by the what ifs is never good.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Drag

Yeah!!!! They definitely needed time to regroup and talk it out. Those times seem to just solidify heir bond so that's good. Plus who wouldn't need sexy time with creeper??? ;) lol. Can't wait to see the bday surprise... But now a Lil nervous about the hard stuff I the upcoming chapter

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Assist

Our stalkerward is so sweet with such a huge heart. Love him to pieces!!!!! He will make our girls day the very best, can't wait to read that come to life. Got a little misty eyed but that's ok cuzz her bday is gonna be awesome!!! I can tell!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Drumroll

Your chapters are always worth the wait... What a sweet chapter that most definitely needed tissues. Can't wait to see what all creeper has planned. Im
sure that'll have a tissue warning just from his thoughtfulness. Can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Rhythm of the Night

What an awesome chapter!!!!! All of it was just fuking fantastic!!!!! Swoon age definitely high. Damn our boy is good. Lucky lucky Bella ;)

My Perfect Match by HappyMess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan never considered online dating. After all, she was only twenty-one. But after too many glasses of wine, her best friend convinces her otherwise. AH. Olderward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58757 Read Count: 64564
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well shyt... I hope he's smarter than the average guy to put two and two together about Rosalie. What a bitch, but it could be expected with their age difference and how society thinks.  Bella should act like an adult and not run but still... Who wants to be bombarded at a family dinner. 

Cant wait for the next update to see what Edward has to say. 

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

That's hilarious and a complete and true fanciful response for these teens. Poor jasper with his admission of his love. Too funny!!!! And Edwards just finding their awkwardness just as hilarious.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Awwwww!!!! That's freakin adorable....

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Yeah!!! I was hoping you didn't forgot Nout his fine hawt ass!!! Woohoo... Do we see a bit of possesive caveward coming up?

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44070
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Hell no he didnt push her... That's pure orgasmic bliss!!! He may be worried for her health or with his fukawesome cock, he may be use to it. But I'm pretty sure she's gonna be more receptive than most ;)

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142014
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 25: The Camel

Well damn!!! This is just horrible and I truly hope they make it ok. Will Edward put himself in harms way to save Bella and the girls. There's def bridges that needa be mended but damn. Stress levels are high and that's never good with arguments. Gah!!!! Please update soon!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93614
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yea... So I followed you hear rather than ff.net. With all that going on, glad you're hear too. Loved this chapter, I can see over protective big bro but can't stop chemistry ;)

Author's Response:

LOL I know right? Oh just wait til he replies to her. More tomorrow here so stay tuned!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Whoa!!!! What a craptastic dream to have :(

And there's fall out, no bueno. But if next chapter has potential lemons than yah!!! Means summin good for the couple that needs no more angst (even tho her big angst is on its way).

Can't wait for next chapt!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I'm here... I'm here!!!

So glad to see she's awake but sad how they've got the heal to move forward. Don't know what it feels like but can only imagine.

Can't wait for next update so they can get better and whatever Renee was talking about something good happening soon. Def can't wait!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

HEA HEA HEA HEA...: of course there'll be repercussion from the event but I'm glad you didn't end the chapter with her still in the coma or when his hair was being pulled.

Still can't wait for next update... The crazier update may bring an earlier chapter ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Fun in the sun before the drama begins. Well damn!!!! You've been warning is but it's now just around the corner. Glad no breakup but I'm sure Jacob and charlie are involved and Jacob is one crazy sick summabitch!!! Throw in some James and its a fuked up group.

Oahu has tons of touristy stuff. Lots of good food... Zippys (chili and plates), mc E's has spam and eggs for breakfast, POG (passion, orange and guava juice) is sold everywhere and is delicious, Costco sells tons of food souvenirs and stuff. There's an aquatic center where u can learn to surf and parasail and they take pictures, matsumotos shaved ice and the shrimp trucks nearby ... Swap meet around aloha stadium with shopping, international market for shopping, beaches, shows, luaus.... Now I wanna go back ;)

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806431
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

Where does that heartless part come from. It's not either of his parents? I hope something gets figured out. I'm still sticking around cuzz I love these guys... No matter how frustrating they are. I may be too sappy but I wanna see everyone with their own HEA and Dame is making that very hard. I'm not blaming Maggie, she doesn't know better... But at least Dame isn't hiding shyt anymore... Just working on his consequences now. I liked Amelia too so I hope he doesn't fuk that up. All these loose ends!!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: On the Road

Too funny... Some punk kids taking a road trip with their shaved heads and acting like fools. Poor Edwards hair tho... How's Bella gonna handle that? Nuttin to grab on to... Grrrrrrr lol. Looking forward to next update. This one seemed a little too tame for this family. The quiet before the storm ;) hmmm play on both titles haha

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Halfway

Ahhhh man... I can't believe the end is near. I've loved this journey but you can feel loose ends being tied up. This chap made me kinda sad with it all plus the heart ache of dame. I am looking forward to the epi and any outside. Whatever fix I can get of these guys!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Crawl to Montauk

I cracked up with the scene of Dame being his father in the car. Hilarious!!! It's funny how Maggie understands him. If he can't talk to Sonnie, kinda hope she can be the conduit. Oh we'll... Lol. Glad Jordan ended up going, ease a little heart string pulling. It's funny how worked up E gets... These guys crack me up. Impatiently patiently waiting for next update =P

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

Ohhhh... Maggie!!! Congrats to the couple ;) lol

Poor Dame, I hope he doesn't dig himself in a hole here. Love him but he does need his daddy's love now.

I'd love to see Bella get her ghetto on and out Amelia in her place. Those are always classic... That and her drunk haha.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

HOLY SHYT!!!!! That's crazy..... WOW!!! Can't wait to see where Aro's is and how he's handling everything... EVERYTHING!!! I do miss e/b but still really enjoying the rides were going on with the rest of the family and sticking around until its over.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

Damn.... That was fukawesome ending!!!! Funny as hell like this family is and foul mouthed which I LOVE!!!! Still in denial but loved their send off you created.

Definitely hope you do more (outtakes/future takes) but this had a little of that with the skip with the kiddos and all that. *sigh* oh how I'll miss them!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue One

Aw man... Only one left, I don't think in ready haha. This one was great since we got to see how they're all makin it work and everything is working out. Plus who doesn't love a baby and seeing the cullen men faun all over them. Swoon!!!

I'm in denial about one left but know you won't let us down ;) were gonna love it and it'll make us wish more and more.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Wayward Son

Just reading the AN got me feeling all weepy... Then I go reading the chapter and I can't believe it's nearing its end. Got all glassy eyed with some tears slipping out. Love these guys and would love seeing future-takes or whatever (just to feed our fix). I don't mind being a needy bitch when it comes to these guys... Give us as much as possible... Or feed our fix with a new story ;) lol

Def can't believe it's damn near over... Gonna miss em all.

You can feel loose ends being tied... And I'm glad skip and dame got to work some things. Poor B... She's gotta handle all these grown ass men... More power to her =P

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

It totally makes sense and glad he's weighted his emotions at least a little to better understand it. Still needs to clear the air just so it's done but baby steps is good. Loved the playfulness of them all in this... Light but heavy but a good heavy haha.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

Wow... It's heart wrenching but totally necessary if they're gonan work it out. Love how we can out some blame on the brainwashing fuking Lauren did. Still hate the bitch!!! Poor Sonny!!!! GAH!!! Lol

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Change of Pace

Well shyt.... With his family and poor Dames head, anything can go wrong and prolly will. Hate that he thinks he's a disappointment by glad he n Edward r starting to talk. Break some of those barriers cuzz they're really fukin similar. Make Dame see he's got an ally out there just like him.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

Awwww.... Perverted mush baby, that's cute!!! Ahh, the memories ;) this was a happy chapter!!! We got a lip b&e and dame finally booted Julia. We're seeing the the kids personalities really are a mixture of Edward n Bella which it too funny. Bella is one smart chick too, he baby boy is soooo much like his father. meddling moms not always cool but B makes it lol.

Fee free to update sooner or more frequently... Won't hear any arguments from me ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

Damn... I know everyone can't have a happy ending right away but fuking Lauren. I totally blame her for brainwashig Katie. But Katie needs to man the fuk up and talk to aro about what really went down. Her outlook would be different I think. It's funny watching Dame and Amelia... When are they gonna tell each other... It's killin em

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

Everybody needs the reassurance from our moms, especially little boys ;)

I'm glad Edwards made the appearance as someone who understands dame cuzz he was slowly drowning in his own mind. Poor Edward had to learn on his own but at least Bella was by his side then. Just like Amelia will hopefully be by dames.

Love these wild and crazy kids!!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

WOW.... That's some crazy shyt!!!!! Can't wait for next update... And loving how these outranked totally turned into a new full fic, keep em coming ;)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

Wow.... If that wasn't emotional!!!! Damn these kids and the heart aches of it all. I love this Fam... Dammit!!! Lol. Can't wait to see how everything keeps rolling out.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Holy fuking shyt!!!!! That's CRAZY!!!! She had it coming though... I just hope it gets settled without Ny of the immediate family in trouble. Hope Dame gets his shyt straight and Amelia stays around... Poor kids, all of em including B and E. but can I say a quick GO BELLA!!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

Poor bebella and Edward... So much bullshyt but infant wait to see what happens with Lauren. BITCH!!!!! Karma is a bitch ;) and I can't wait or Lauren to meet Karma.... Buwahahahahahahahaha!!! How arethe kids gonna handle this? Lets hope Dame can work they this with the help of his family and Amelia.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

Awwww... Poor anxious Bella and horny Edward. Dame is slowly getting better... Less crazy in his life will hopefully help. Wonder how that will pan out with NJ though.

Can't wait for the skip next!!!

Happy turkey day!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Poor Maggie... Lil mag pie is feeling a little separation anxiety and fear of the powder. Understandable!

The rest was hilarious... Grandpa makes it that much better too. Can't wait to see how the night unfurls!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

Damn, trouble in all kinds of paradises... Dam's, Maggie's, Kylie's had an AWOL moment but saw true gino. Crazy chapter... Really hope things work themselves out.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

Damn this was a crazy chapter but opens a whole other can of works with Vegas/Heidi. Poor sonny is struggling with skips test, dame is missing his Jordan and Kylie and Maggie high is hilarious. Maybe sonny missed he bullet with Maggie being high... One saving grace? Poor kids and their additions!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

Well shyt.... That's was drama filled but let's hope sonny got the sense knocked back into him. Plus, Bella can't complain a out the vacation anyways... She had him go over there, plus its benefitting sonny mind body soul and marriage. Can't wait for next chapter and see how this rolls out!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Hope Bella's spidey senses don't mean anything... That's got me a little worries but still point it and can't wait for next chapter. I'll be sure to vote... Woohoo!!!! Watch out fuckers, storm freak and proud of it!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

Damn... This was a nice chapter but now you got me curious about the next. In sure ill love it but I think umma be biting my nails in anticipation of what's to come, even while I'm reading it. They're going to fix the Heidi situation, please don't let someone important n get killed or hurt badly. Gah.... I can't wait!!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

Holy crap... I love me some tribute but hope an update for this happens soon. Cuzz Bella's spidey senses are never wrong... That's all I'm saying ;)