Reviews by Petralouise
Summary:

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Bella is an exotic dancer, and she loves her job. Edward is a millionaire with a savior complex who needs to rescue Bella. She doesn’t want to be rescued, but she does want Edward for the things he does to her body. When she discovers his issues run deeper than she ever thought, will she accept him for what he can offer, or will she walk away? Drabble. Olderward.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25351 Read Count: 79358
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

☺☺☺☺



Author's Response:

 Thank you, I love those!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh he is going down



Author's Response:

Down and out!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And the plot thickens 



Author's Response:

It does. Thicker and thicker.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

😛😛😛😛😛



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Tis Tis 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So need and want more



Author's Response:

So much more is coming!

HATE BELLA by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

 

I born in a rich family , life is not easy and i was innocent in all of it until i decide it to have one thing i cant never have. i decide it to not have heart-broken heart, my plan was to steal him, but i cant steal any men, but i did choose anorther option as you will know , HE will Hate me ...

CHARECTERS: BELLA, EDWARD, ALICE , ESME , CARLISE,CHARLIE,


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20791 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2017 Updated: 15 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a switch

Summary:

26 year old, multi-millionaire Edward Cullen has a problem. After telling his mother that he had been seriously dating someone for the past 6 months in a vain attempt to stop her meddling ways, Esme is insistant that he brings his girlfriend home to meet the family. 

One problem: He doesn't have a girlfriend. 

Desperate for a solution he tries to enlist the help of his long-term escort Rosalie only to discover that she has unexpectantly quite and no longer works for the agency, or Edward. 

What will happen when the only option left for Edward is to take the angencies new and unexperienced escort home to meet the parents?

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Credit to Xanath for the beautiful banner.  


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30089 Read Count: 8180
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2017 Updated: 22 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Hers - Edward POV

I love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Outtake One - Bella POV

I feel bad for Jacob



Author's Response:

I felt a bit mean doing that to him but...we will have to see what happens in later chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Getting to Know You - EPOV

So she might not be as sassy and brazen as Rose. But I like her depth and still think she may need Daddy Edward to bring her out of her self. And Edward being the kind of man who can never walk away from a challenge I can see the Daddy part coming out more he already wants to keep her safe. Can't wait for the next chapter as always well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it so much! Yes she is definately not as brazen and crass as Rose but I think that should be part of the allure for Edward. Bella would be more of the 'girl next door' type that he would bring home to his parents...if he wasnt so lazy at dating lol. Thanks again for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unplanned - Edward POV

I hope she's a  sassy little thing in need of a hot ”steamy daddy😜😉



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Interview - Edward POV

Another ‘ great job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Tension - Edward POV

Liked reading a little more of the background on Edward... 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you liked it because I very much enjoyed writing it!

Summary:

Edward, Bella & Tanya like to play together. A collection short stories, some clean some dirty.... Who am I kidding, most will be dirty.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4814 Read Count: 7411
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2017 Updated: 06 Jun 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Love the Help

Is this going to be a work in progress ? I hope so



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you for reading.

This will just be a bunch of short stories, in no set order. 

I hope you’ll enjoy the other stories. 

😁

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting the help - Signing the contract

Would love to read the first time she calls them mommy and daddy. Would love for the chapters to be longer…

Summary:

star


Starlight, star bright,


First star I see tonight,


I wish I may, I wish I might,


Have this wish I wish tonight.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11915 Read Count: 4307
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like that you chose Sam makes for a good twist………

Summary:

RN

After ditching her groom at the altar, Bella needs to get as far away from Willow City, TX as possible. The second she meets a hot rodeo star while hitchhiking, Bella knew her life would never be the same. Edward's hot, cocky, and successful and could be just what Bella needs. Rated M for Lemons and Language. Curvy Bella and Cowboyward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46504 Read Count: 14629
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2017 Updated: 01 May 2018
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Strawberry Wine

Love the road you have them.. can’t wait to read more hope you post soon❤️

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84451
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

I like that Edward was clueless to this subject.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story is going to be amazing I can’t wait to read more❤️❤️❤️

Summary:

5 futuretakes from 5 of my complete stories, centered around Edward and his kids.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5142 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2017 Updated: 22 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: (Un)Requited

Oh my gosh how true that all is. You had me in tears



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52355
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Petralouise Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like how your writing Edward. Your making him vary real..