wow your story is  like wat is really happening in mine however its my mom that is sorry to my bff and i have no dad but a lot of older bothers that think i am to "young" to be in love and wanting everything. I hope my furture is bright like these two are. Also they should live and work like a on a ranch for another story like bella lives with her crazy dad that decide he would quit his job and start a ranch and bella lives there and emmett work on the ranch and he meets rose though bella and alice and everyone goes to a bonfire and everything happens that way. That would be pretty cool if you did that it has been in my head a while and i think you will make the people pop from the pages in the minds of many. you are a great writer and you should think about more thewn online i couldnt stop thinking about the story and at school i have all my friends hooked on it and then the school blocked it for the kids would read it my friend that just moved to school three days ago loves it its reaaaaaallllllllyyyyy greatGREATGREATGREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!