Reviews by Cami2186
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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491654
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Nice data out by the pier. Wonder if Bella is pregnant?  

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Now that she's back with Edward she will be safe from them. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great to see he's showing her around the house. 

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh no. Wonder if they will still go out when her dad finds out?

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good to see he came back. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Good. She will be safe from now on from Charlie. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Good. She will be safe from now on from Charlie. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh no. At least she was able to escape. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hopefully it's just a bad feeling. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

No awkward morning. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great ending for her birthday. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Edwards family have accepted her. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Don't like Charlie or Jacob. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Happy to see her party is going well. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Edwards plans for her birthday sound good. What happened to Bella?

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Happy to see they are official. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hopefully nothing bad will happen during his trip. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good to see Edward was honest about everything related to his work. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Proud to see Bella asked the tough question. Now,  will Edward answer ?

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Don't let Charlie order you around Bella. Make your own decisions. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great time at the movies. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no. He was recognized. I think Charlie is going to have a huge talk with Bella. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good to see dinner went well. For the most part with the waitress. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 

At least she was able to go without any problems.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great to see Edwards point of view. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Perfect time to propose on Christmas Eve. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Relieved to see no real harm came to Bella because of Jacob. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Come on Bella. Give him the answer he's waiting for. She doe fit in well with his family. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was a perfect first Christmas for them together. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

What a way to bring in the new year. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh no. Where happened to Edward? Hopefully someone will save Bella and bailey soon. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Someone find a lead soon. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Happy Seth is willing to help Bella get out of there. Hopefully he can convince Edward. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Perfect key word. Bella will be coming home soon. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Finally safe at last. Jacob and Charlie will pay soon. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Make them all pay Edward!

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

With Edward there I don't think anything will happen. Good to see Bella stand up for herself and talk to Edward. 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Finally some justice. Jacob is gone. All we need is for Charlie to pay. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I also believe both of them well be good parents. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Great to see they decided on a wedding date. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Hormones getting in the way. Great to see they were married without any problems. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Perfect valentines day. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Charlie won't be nothing them anymore. What a wedding crasher or would it be reception crasher?

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

It's good that Edward is healing well. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

They had their first official fight. Luckily they made up quickly. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Such a sweet moment of Edward talking to Bailey. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Hopefully nothing bad will happen while Edward is a way. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Finally returning home after an eventful trip. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Good to see that Edward doesn't want any secrets between himself and Bella. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Edward should talk to Bella soon about his work to see what she thinks. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Good to see they talked. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

The baby shower is coming up. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Who could it be?

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow. Bailey might be born on Edwards birthday. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Happy to see them as a family. Wonder if it was Renee who was hanging up the phone?

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Honestly and trust are always important elements to a strong marriage.  I was correct when I thought Renee was behind the phone calls. Hopefully she's gone and we won't hear from her anymore. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Babies grow very quickly. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

At least Emmett is going to be alright. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Happy times together and as a family. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

The pictures were a wonderful gift. Good to see Emmett is doing better. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Wonderful end to her birthday. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Exciting that Alice is going to have a baby. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Wonder what billy and Renee are planning ?

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Great to see Edward is back safe and sound. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Getting closer to their trip. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Fun times on the plane ride. 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Great to see they are enjoying their time in Italy. 

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
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Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Really enjoy reading epov. We get insight into what he's thinking. Can't wait to read what happens next. 



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I really enjoy EPOV in the lemon scenes.  He's such a good naughty boy.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hopefully she will meet him again.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great to hear from Edward.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Happy to see they had a fun day.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good to hear from Edward.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Funny to see the interaction between Edward and Emmett.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good to see Bella is asking questions.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's good to see that they talked.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can't wait to see how Edward handles it.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

With time she will be ok.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Talking is a good idea.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sad to hear about Edwards backstory. Similar to Bella's.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Excited the girls have joined the party.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What a story.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Cant wait for Monday.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Happy to see everything is better between them.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Too bad their vacation is almost over.



Author's Response:

Funny you say that because everyone said the same thing. I even said the same thing when I had to send them home. But stick with it.....very interesting stuff ahead. Thanks for the tea cups cami.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great to hear Edwards perspective.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Fun to see they are continuing at a different location.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Loved that everything is working out for them. Happy to see Bella will be joining the dinner and won't be separated from Edward for a while.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Happy to see they are enjoying their time together.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Really like Edwards point of view also.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edwards family is really nice.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love it. I think Tanya is the next one we are going to see.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hopefully Tanya wasn't able to get to much information.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I was correct when I thought Tanya was next to show up. Wonder what else she has planned. Good to see Bella is Enjoying her time with Edward and learning new things.



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Yes, you were Cami....and she doesn't go lightly either. She calls for backup.

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow wasn't expecting Jacob to be her attorney. The dinner was going so well until Tanya showed up. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hopefully Bella will be safe during her time away from Edward. 



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Astute as ever....

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Totally not what I expected to happen. Sad to see the distance between them. 



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But the make up sex is awesome!!!!

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

We hear what happened from Edwards side. 



Author's Response:

EPOV is Thursday....I'm excited for you to read it. It's one of my favorite chapters.