I don't review often, but I feel this deserves it. There are a lot of things I love about this story, but Bella is driving me mad. (This is not critical towards you at all!) I get that Bella is going to have some confidence issues, but I feel like no one is really giving her the tools to solve her problems. She is being completely irrationally. Someone needs to show her that her emotions are not the same thing as reality. Her criticism of herself is never constructive and never something she would say to a friend. She needs to stop unconstructive criticism in her head and her mouth cold. It's okay to feel like a part of yourself needs improvement, but not through mean thoughts. She needs to examine her actions and choices without adding her emotional understanding of herself and then she will stop having such horrible esteem issues. Also she needs to think about how her words about herself affect others. Edward and her friends don't tolerate others being mean about her and it makes them feel horrible when she is, and that is her worst quality. Her words are constantly hurting her friends. She needs to fake it until she makes it in her head and reality. Zero tolerance for unconstructive criticism. She can begin doing it for the sake of her friends. Strong work on getting an emotional reaction from me.