Reviews by velvetwhispers
Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204643
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

WTF?



Author's Response:

All will be explained...

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

awwwww so sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

good chap



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

good 1



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

w

afts2

 

banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268927
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

humm where to start .. well I have read your stories b4 and I like them all. i like this story too.

I see that you like to make Bella waller in her depression (smile) i see very little progression with her ..

SOME but very little.

I guess that is just your writing style ,I guess i am just not one for dragging things out. of course that doesnt mean i will stop reading cause i do see alot of talent in your writing,and enjoy the plot of your story lines.

anyway keep up the writing and plz dont be offended ,, you are a very talented writer.

The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249172 Read Count: 36371
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

keeping up the chant *HE HEA HEA* i love this story

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

honestly I dont want Edward to die..........I love it when there is an update but dread reading it because I think this might be the one ,(know what I mean)

I think Edward should get his 2nd chance at life and Bella gets preggers and Seth should be reborn as their child : )

hehe see there HEA ..ok ok ok so i like to think ahead and make my own happy ending.lol

 



Author's Response:
Hi again!
 
Well, it seems as if the resounding consensus is Isabella kicks ass and no one would be too upset if Vincent was no more. You have no idea how happy the response to the last two chapters, especially, have meant to me! I've fretted and worried over them something terrible, only because I was afraid you all wouldn't understand what I was trying to do with them. It was important for Edward to show someone else the same forgiveness and chance at redemption as he's been given as well as for Isabella to show she is more than capable of handling herself in unpleasant circumstances. I promise, both things come into play later on.
 
Next chapter...oh boy! I am really excited to see what you think about it. Please keep in mind something though...I have never written a sex scene just to write one or to fill space. This next chapter is the culmination of a very intense, emotional weekend for the both of them and what happens when they get back to the penthouse is the result of everything needing an outlet. It's more graphic, more explicit than I've written previously so be aware of that. If that's not your thing, I totally understand and I'll see you with Chapter 21. If you do read it, I hope you'll let me know what you think!
 
Once we get through Chapter 20, things will get rough. You've all known it was coming, and it has. We have a lot to work through, so get ready. I'm guessing 4 chapters or so until everything that needs to be covered is done. Someone asked on the discussion board, and thank you so much for that, how many chapters TGG was going to be. The way I have it loosely outlined is for 30 chapters, but don't hold me to that, okay? Sometimes things take a turn I hadn't planned on and I have to add more, but that is the way things are looking right now.
 
I will be posting the outtake between Chapters 19 and 20 that shows everyone's reactions...soon. I had hoped to get it done for Friday, but that doesn't look like it's happening. I wrote 3 chapters in one week , not to mention this weeks bonus scene and my brain is a bit fried at the moment. So, just bear with me and I promise I'll get it done soon.
 
Thanks to all of you, The Greatest Gift has made it to the Second Round in the Inspired FanFic Awards. Voting for the 2nd round has started and goes until the 14th. If you would, I'd love it so much if you voted for me again!! There are so many great stories out there, so check out the lists and take a few minutes and vote. Be sure to look for my friends, rtgirl, AydenMorgen, prettykittyartist, sherryola, and justginger while you're at it, too!

http://inspiredfanficawards(.)blogspot(.)com/

Don't forget that I've submitted an outtake from the honeymoon for the Fandoms4Floods fundraiser. The compilation is HUGE with so many people contributing a variety of things and a steal for only a $5 donation. You can donate here:

http://fandomsfightthefloods(.)blogspot(.)com/

If you read it, let me know what you think, okay? I would love to know!!

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, and like always, for the incredible support and encouragement you give me week in and week out. Your reviews, PM's, emails and messages on Twitter mean more than you can know. I read them over and over again and I smile each and every time. I've gotten to know so many of you and it's been an incredible experience meeting you all and hearing from you week after week. This story is a leap of faith, I know that, and I can't tell you what it means to me that you've trusted me enough to take this journey with me. It will be worth it in the end, promise!

 

 

Look for me on Twitter, I am finding myself spending more and more time on there! @les_sh_16


If you're not on Twitter but are on gtalk, hell, find me there, too! Me and my girls are always on there...erinsharpe.16(@)gmail(.)com. Friend me and I'll accept!

 

Remember to email me if you're missing a bonus scene, from yours, and I'll send it to you.

 

Okay, here is Vincent and Anna. I'd love to hear what you think of it.

 

See you Sunday. I'm nervous and excited about Chp 20, EEEK!!!

 

Hugs and Much Love,

Erin~

~*~*~*~
Chapter 19 Bonus Scene~

 

Vincent stood ramrod straight and had so much anger and frustration coursing through his veins he was like a volcano waiting to erupt as he watched Edward and Isabella and the rest of their clan turn away from him like he was nothing.

 

Who the fuck did they think they were, he thought as his mind raced with thoughts on how to get back at them for even thinking about calling him out like that in front of his colleagues.

 

He took a step forward and had every intention of going after Edward but was stopped when he felt Brody grip his arm, hard.

 

"No you don't, Vince. This has gone on long enough, it's time for you to cut your losses and move the fuck on," Brody told him angrily.

 

He was so tired of all the bullshit between Vincent and Edward, and though he'd be a fool to say it out loud, he knew that most of it was because of Vincent. He wasn't a huge fan of Edward Cullen, but the man knew his shit. He ran Cullen Publishing with an eye always on the bigger picture and never once lost sight of the fact that his job as CEO was to run the company, not to see how many times he could screw over his competition.

 

Vincent turned and stared coldly at his right-hand man. "What the hell does that mean?" he demanded as he yanked his arm out of Brody's grasp.

 

"It means, Vince, that this dick measuring thing you've got going on with Cullen needs to come to a fucking stop. You are ruining the company with your incessant need to try get the best of him and not only that," Brody said hotly, "you're ruining mine and everyone else's reputations along with it. If you are hell bent on continuing this ridiculous game with Edward, count me the fuck out. I'm tired of it, Vincent," Brody said and took a deep breath. He knew he was quite possibly slitting his own throat, but he couldn't hold back any longer.

 

"If you want to go down that's one thing, but don't expect me to go down with you. And Cullen," he said as he narrowed his eyes at him,"won't stop until he ends you if you keep antagonizing him the way you did tonight. Go after him, man to man if you have to, but even for you, going after his wife was fucking low...and not only that, it was suicide. I'm not married, but if I was, there is no way in hell I'd ever let anyone talk to my wife the way you did Isabella Cullen. I'm afraid you've just woken up the sleeping giant, my friend. Good luck with that, you're going to need it."

 

"So what, you're going to let Cullen get the best of you, too?" Vincent asked as he looked from Brody to Josh, Cameron, and Trent. "The three of you pussies, too?" he questioned incredulously when they all looked at him with the same look of disgust. "What the fuck ever," he said bitterly and waved them off. "Anna, let's get the hell out of here."

 

Anna had held her tongue, but only by biting down on it to the point she could taste blood. If she didn't have a choice but to leave with him, she wouldn't, but she had a few things of her own to take care of with Vincent. She stepped forward, without saying a word and without looking behind her either...somehow she had a feeling she wouldn't be seeing any of them anytime soon...if ever.

 

Vincent of course had kept the car and driver waiting for them, always needing to keep people at his beck and call and they both climbed into the backseat without saying a word. The air was tense between them and she felt her stomach twist in knots knowing what she was going to do and say once they'd returned to their apartment. She'd known it had been a long time coming and had made up her mind to finally put herself first after speaking with Edward, but watching Isabella had solidified her decision even more.

 

Anna was quite frankly...in awe of Isabella. She was fierce, loyal, and obviously not easily intimidated. Anna had never admired another woman the way she did Isabella, but even she had to admit how amazing she was as she handed Vince's ass...and his balls to him. Watching Isabella stand up for Edward, for their company and family and friends was an incredible thing to witness and gave Anna the push she needed to do what she should have done a long damn time ago.

 

Edward had given her a second chance by forgiving her; there was no way in hell she was letting it go to waste.

 

They arrived back at their apartment and Vince didn't even try talking to her...nor apologize for the way he'd talked to her, not that she really expected it anyway. As soon as he opened the front door, she strode without looking behind her to their bedroom and pulled a suitcase from the closet and threw it on the bed. She heard Vince walk to the wet bar in the living room and pull what she assumed was a bottle of Vodka from the small freezer but paid little attention to the muttering she heard him spew.

 

A few minutes later when she'd walked out of the bathroom carrying her toiletries, she looked up and saw him walk into the room. His bow tie hung limply from around his neck, he'd taken his jacket off, and frankly...he looked like shit.

 

"What the hell?" he asked stupidly when he spied the suitcase on the bed.

 

"I'm leaving, Vince," she said simply.

 

He looked from the bed to her and then repeated the motion several times before blurting out, "But I thought we were gonna fuck?"

 

Anna snorted at him and then rolled her eyes. She threw the bottles she'd taken from the bathroom on the bed and then turned to look at him. "You're out of your fucking mind if you think I'm letting you lay your hands on me again."

 

He smirked at her and then shook his head. "Babe, are you still pissed about what happened earlier? You know I didn't mean anything; that was just because Edward-" he started again but she cut him off abruptly.

 

"Shut the hell up, Vince. This has nothing to do with Edward and everything to do with you," she told him levelly.

 

"Me? What the fuck did I do? If Cullen wasn't such a cocksucker," he began to rant again and she'd had enough.

 

"You know for as long as we've known each other you have blamed every bad thing that has ever happened to you on Edward and that's just fucking pathetic. Try looking in a mirror sometime, Vincent. You have no one to blame but yourself for the mess you've made of things and it's about damn time for you to realize that," she told him as she began throwing more clothes into the suitcase.

 

Vincent sneered at her, trying to figure out how to get her into bed instead of thinking about what she'd said to him. He knew she was pissed, but he didn't believe for one second she'd leave him.

 

"Yeah? What the hell do you know about anything that has been going on anyway? All you do is shop, go to the spa, and gossip with your girlfriends about who has had work done to their tits or asses and what you want to get done next. I haven't seen you complain about anything up until now, Anna," he said nastily.

 

Anna wanted to disagree with him, but she knew she couldn't. She had done all of those things...but no more.

 

"You're right. I have done that, but I'm done, Vince. I'm not letting you walk all over me anymore because I'm too afraid to be by myself. I deserve better than that," she said and then realized instantly how good it felt to say that...and really mean it.

 

Watching Isabella and Edward all night as they stood side by side really drove home how much she was missing from her life. Then to watch them both face Vincent, together, was really the icing on the cake. Edward wasn't one to be underestimated, but neither was Isabella. They were a true team, one that respected the other, and she wanted that for herself.

 

She deserved it.

 

Up until she and Edward spoke Anna never believed that, but she did now, thanks to him...and to Isabella.

 

Isabella could have been a jealous bitch, and Anna knew she would have deserved it, but she hadn't. She'd been nothing but gracious, if a little cold at first, but only because Anna had tried to intimidate her because that was what she did. Instead, Isabella treated her fairly and with respect, even though she probably didn't deserve it.

 

"Where the hell are you going to go?" Vincent questioned, still not believing for one second she was leaving.

 

"I don't know, but anywhere is better than here with you," she said succinctly as she closed the suitcase.

 

There wasn't anything left she couldn't live without or buy again and she turned to Vincent to say the last thing she needed to tell him before she left to start a new chapter of her life.

 

"I'm sure you won't be alone for long, just give Biannca a call, I'm sure she's not busy," she said slyly and then smirked when he quickly swallowed and his eyes darted nervously around the room.

 

He opened his mouth to deny what she said but Anna held up her hand. "Save it, I don't care anyway. I'm done with you so what you do from now on doesn't matter to me. But," she said as she picked up her purse and suitcase off the bed and then walked to the doorway. She turned and finished her thought, "never forget who I am, Vincent, or who my family is. Stay away from Edward and Isabella. My family is very powerful and if there is anything left after Edward gets through with you if you keep going after him, I'll finish the job."

 

With that, she turned and walked out, not looking back.

 

Edward and Isabella gave her a second chance to find out who she was...she was damn sure going to take advantage of that.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm not sure what Edward has to say sorry for to anna.... maybe for using her but it sounds like she did the same thing.

as always luv this chap.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

choked up and happy for them all ... still chanting HEA HEA HEA

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

wow i feel like I just got hit by a bus .. they where so happy and their love was so strong you could taste it in the chapter then there is this one.. talk about comming out of left feild. (that is not a bad thing mind you)

Your telling of this story is amazing...I am still hoping for a miricle and that Edward wont die. that he will  find some redemption and be granted a longer life.



Author's Response:
Well, here we are again, after another chapter...and what a chapter it was judging from the reviews I've gotten thus far!
 
Before I go any farther, let me start out by saying THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart for the outpouring of support you've shown for our Edward and Isabella! Some of you are mad at her, some are mad at Edward...some are worried about affairs (as if?!) some have even wondered if Edward even really loves Isabella (REALLY??!!) but all of you, it seems, are glad we're finally at this point.
 
I know it was a rough chapter, the next 3 will be even harder, but it will make sense in the end, I promise!! It's very strange actually getting to this point in the story, but as difficult as they've been for me to write...and will be for you to read, I'm really excited to share with you Edward's story.
 
Keep a few things in mind for me as we go through these next few chapters, though, okay? First, never forget my promise of a HEA! You all have put your trust in me to give you an ending worthy of our Edward and Isabella, and I will. Have faith in me!! I won't let you down, promise. Next, even though I've been writing this story for a few months now, timeline wise in the story, we've only gone forward about 6 weeks or so...so cut Edward a bit of slack in the sharing department. He's come a long way, but he's still learning and new to all of this. Besides, he kind of has that "you're going to die any moment" thing hanging over his head at all times not to mention a rather pushy angel giving him shit every time he turns around. Last, I'll be covering about 30 years worth of "stuff" so it's going to take a few chapters to get through everything, so you won't have all your answers by the end of the next chapter. I just want to warn you of that!!
 
I'm going to be posting the outtake I submitted for the FADV on Friday. Look for it under the TGG Outtakes and Deleted Scenes. It is the story of how Seth became an angel and I hope you all will take a moment to read it and let me know what you think. I'm especially looking forward to seeing you understand more why Seth chose Edward from the very beginning! I know a lot of you don't read outtakes, not sure why, but I take it that's the case. I really hope you'll read Seth's Story, though!!
 
I've also signed up to take part in the Fandom4Tsunami fundraiser. I haven't quite made up my mind yet on what to write, so I would love to hear your suggestions. PM, email me, or send me a message on Twitter if you have anything you'd like to see. TGG, something from TPWC, or something totally different, just let me know.
 
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, and like always, for the incredible support and encouragement you give me week in and week out. Your reviews, PM's, emails, and messages on Twitter mean more than you can know. I read them over and over again and I smile each and every time. I've gotten to know so many of you and it's been an incredible experience meeting you all and hearing from you week after week. This story is a leap of faith, I know that, and I can't tell you what it means to me that you've trusted me enough to take this journey with me. It will be worth it in the end, promise!

Look for me on Twitter, I am finding myself spending more and more time on there! @les_sh_16
 
For those of you who have been retweeting my chapter updates and such, thank you so much!!! I appreciate that more than you can know!

If you're not on Twitter but are on gtalk, hell, find me there, too! Me and my girls are always on there...erinsharpe.16(@)gmail(.)com. Friend me and I'll accept!

Remember to email me if you're missing a bonus scene, from yours, and I'll send it to you.

Okay, here is a bit from Jasper and Emmett and then our two angels. Hope you like it!!

See you Sunday! Don't forget the tissues...you're gonna need them!

Hugs and Much Love,
Erin~

PS...Be sure to keep checking the blog for new things on there. Have you all seen the amazing banner YSAR made for me?! It's so freaking beautiful!!

Chapter 21 Bonus Scene~

 

While Seth was busy with Edward and Isabella was being comforted by her Nonna, Jasper and Emmett were having a heated discussion in Jasper's office. Oh, they weren't aggravated with each other, but rather both were extremely pissed at Edward...and rightfully so.

 

Gideon was paying close attention to the two men because Seth was otherwise occupied. He had to chuckle to himself, he did NOT envy his young friend, not in the least.

 

"Jasper, man, what the fucking hell is up with Edward?" Emmett asked as he paced back and forth in Jasper's office. "I mean, he went from happy go lucky Edward back to Sullen Cullen almost overnight. I mean...shit, did you see how upset Bella was?"

 

Jasper grunted in annoyance when he thought about just how upset she'd been and it was all he could do not to stomp down to Edward's office and kick the ever-living shit out of him. He wasn't standing by this time, he vowed to himself. No fucking way. He'd watched, most of the time without comment, as Edward continually sabotaged himself where Bella was concerned, but there was no way in hell he was doing it again. Something was up with his friend, and he was damn sure going to find out what it was.

 

"I have no clue, Em, but whatever it is, it's something big," Jasper finally said.

 

"Shit," Emmett growled and threw himself in the seat across from Jasper.

 

Jasper nodded and stared off into space as he went over the past few days in his head. Edward had continually regressed as the week went by, growing more and more distant and more like the Edward of old with each passing day. When he found himself remembering the first meeting of the week on Monday, he groaned out loud.

 

"He's pissed about what we talked about on Monday," Jasper said emphatically. When Emmett looked at him with a confused look on his face, Jasper reminded him, "We all talked about how glad we were that Isabella could take over for him if anything ever happened to him."

 

"Ah, fuck," Emmett said and nodded his head. He knew Jasper was right, and though they'd all had a feeling Edward wouldn't really want to talk about it, Emmett had to admit, he was surprised by just how upset Edward was. "I just don't get it, Jas," Em told him. "I mean no one wants to think about dying, but it has to be done; we've all agreed it does and Edward is smart enough to realize we're right."

 

Jasper sighed but only because he thought he knew what might be causing Edward to want to hide from what he needed to do. "Em, I don't think that is really what's wrong."

 

"No?"

 

"No. I mean think about it. Something happened a few weeks ago to Edward and he makes this total about-face personality and attitude wise. You know he's had to have a lot of regrets over his past actions toward us all, but no one more so than Bella. He's been so damn happy lately, imagine knowing you could have always had that, but were too stubborn, or scared, or whatever it is that's held him back, to experience it. Then all of a sudden, you have all of us telling him, well, we need you think about what happens if you die. I don't know about you, Emmett, but I'm not sure I would be able to handle it either if I was in Edward's shoes," Jasper said.

 

"Well, you never would have shut us all out," Emmett snapped back and then felt bad, though he knew he was right.

 

When he saw Jasper raise his eyebrow at him in that annoying way he had of making you feel like shit for saying something bad about Edward, he held his hands up. "I know, I know, Jasper, there is obviously a lot Edward hasn't shared with us, but man, admit it. The last month and half with Edward has been amazing and I'll be pissed...really pissed, if he goes back to the way he used to be. Bella isn't the only one that couldn't handle it, you know. He's my damn brother and I feel like I've just now gotten to know him." Emmett swiped at his eyes and took a few deep breaths to keep himself from saying or doing something he would regret.

 

"I know, Em, I know. Let's just hope it isn't too late to reach him. I don't want to lose him either," Jasper answered him back quietly.

 

Gideon shook his head as he watched from above and then checked in on Seth and Edward...there was a lot at stake at the moment, he only hoped Seth could get Edward to do what he needed to do.

 

The time had come.

 

~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~

 

"Seth?" Gideon questioned while his young friend stared at the stairs Edward had just run up.

 

Startled, Seth turned toward him. It was rare...very rare, when Gideon came down...from up above, though at the moment, Seth was exceedingly grateful for his presence.

 

Noting the shocked expression on Seth's face, Gideon chuckled softly and the sound was reminiscent of the rapids of a river as they flowed over the rocks. Smiling he said, "Seth, don't look so shocked to see me...you know I do mingle with the humans on occasion." His smile faded when he continued, "Besides, I figured you needed me."

 

Seth had turned back around and stared up at the ceiling, as if he could see through it. He could do many things, but seeing through walls and floors wasn't one of them, though with his supernatural hearing, he heard Edward beg Isabella to let him tell her what she'd needed to know for so long.

 

With a sigh full of regret, he turned toward his mentor and asked, "Do you think I could have done anything different these past few days?"

 

Poor Seth, Gideon thought with a sad shake of his head. He loved both Edward and Isabella so much and seeing them in the pain they were in right at this moment was agonizing for him. "My friend, you and I both knew this was bound to happen sooner or later. Edward facing the realities of his mortality was going to be difficult and there was every possibility that the walls Isabella has fought so hard to break through would go back up again. Surely you can't be too surprised that they did?"

 

Agitated, Seth floated around the room while he thought over the week thus far. He never should have allowed Edward to pull away like he did after Emmett and the others made their comments during Monday's meeting. He had no idea what more he could have done mind you, but the angel felt like the reason his two humans were upstairs, heartbroken, was very much his fault. It was a totally wrong way of thinking of course, but Seth was rather prone to self-recriminations...especially where Edward and Isabella were concerned.

 

For the past four days, Seth had hovered and cajoled. He'd teased and threatened, he even tried ignoring his stubborn friend...all to no avail...which led to the events of today. His heart was positively shattered as he recalled with his perfect angelic memory, the anguish that was rolling off Isabella when Edward had sent him to her aid earlier. He couldn't stop the sudden smile and burst of pride he felt though. Edward was so concerned about her, so hurt at seeing her suffer that he thought nothing of his own pain...helping her was all he cared about.

 

If that didn't say everything about his honest and true feelings for Isabella, nothing did.

 

Edward had been a mess all week, literally. He had been moody, irritable, and on edge. He walked on egg shells around Isabella because he knew she was getting frustrated at his continual refusal to tell her what was wrong. Of course, if he would have done that, there was a likely possibility that they wouldn't be where they were right now, so Seth wasn't one hundred percent convinced that it had turned out all that bad.

 

He hated that there would be pain and tears, for both of them, but he truly hoped they were well on their way to healing. Even as perceptive and highly sensitive to their kind as Isabella was, there was little Seth had been able to do before to help her. He was able to offer her a bit of comfort, but honestly Edward was the only one that could help her the way she needed.

 

The questions she'd asked Edward earlier were...hard...but necessary. Edward had taken her for granted, hadn't been fair, and at times hurt her deeply so she'd had every right to be as angry and hurt as she was. Both Seth and Gideon knew she was close to her limit. She'd kept things inside for such a long time that the fear of losing the Edward she'd just found, after so steadfastly believing he was always there, was more than she could take.

 

She lashed out, she purged...and now hopefully, she would be granted the healing that only Edward could offer her.

 

Everything rested in Edward's hands now and the only thing both angels could do was hope and pray he was ready...that they all were for what was to come.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

glad you gave us the tissue warning.. i am to emotional to write a long review ... cant wait for the rest

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

still holding on to hope ... cant wait for the next chap.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i am still keeping the faith * sits in a meditating pose chanting HEA HEA HEA*

great chapter.. kepp up the good work

Summary:

intg

 

After spending years in love with her best friend, Bella deals with heartache and learns to grow when he chooses another. 

 

My winning entry for the FanFicAholics Anon's 100 Pictures Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 1391
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not That Girl

omg well done .. just calling him E I was convinced it was Edward and I was so broken hearted ...OMG you fooled me so much

Summary: Past Featured Story

crr

 

What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.

After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Finding Home

some times less is better and in the case of this story I feelthat even tho ts short it is definatly worth the read.. i loved it... a little drama, a lotta luvin  just the right mix. love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your words and your reviewing!

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Divine Miss Hale

i feel like you wasted alot of this chapter with roses back story ,it wasnt needed at this part in the story if at all,but not a bad beginning



Author's Response:

I tried to keep Roses back story as brief as possible. This story is about relationships (primarily Bella and Edwards) and will be delving into each characters personal stories in an effort to see what makes them tick.

Thank you for your honesty and your review. Happy New Year!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

yeah gotta say i'm a little dissapointed as to where you are taking this now.I will prolly read for a few more chapters to see where you eventually end up ..but .. yeah not likin this turn of events at all.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

good chapter

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter

i hate the ones where she is treated like trash or a child. Please dot change the story just to be popular.



Author's Response:

I will change my author's end note. I was just being sarcastic. My story already exists in French so there's no way I can change it to something it was never intended to be :-)

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

BannerBanner

Banner Banner

ba

 

  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184537
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Big Balls

omg .. you left me hanging here on the edge of my chair.... i sure hope i can hang on til the next update i cant wait.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point

i had a feeling it was her mom.. i ge the feeling he has gone off the deep end

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie

i soo love these 2

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Epilogue

omg i am so sad to see this story end but I loved every minute of it .. i will be sad that there will be nomore alerts that this story is updated .   I am gonna miss them all soooo much.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee

Rene is a nasty ***ch.. i hope Bella gives her a swift kick to the curb.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee

WTG Alice, I love it when one of her plans falls into place.

I hope Bella can stop the transfer before renee can get her hands on it.

I knew renee was up to no good.. I wonder if phil knows what she was up to..hummmmm

update soon i cant wait for more .. i am so hooked on this

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises

interesting turn of events here..would it be greedy of me to beg for a update? LIKE NOW? *giggle*

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken

OMG .. it cant be Bella.. is just cant be.....I wish i would of buckled my seatbelt before this chapter I think i fell off my chair. *rubs bottom** yep definatly fell of me chair.

hope you update soon.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place

I have to say that I was prepaired this time I had my seatbelt on and it's nice and snug but I imagine that it will get tight if you leave me hanging too long. update soon and get our girl back.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

OMG .. this is getting so exciting.....i am on the edge here .. where is my damn seatbelt? uggg !!!!!!

hurry back and update i'm not sure how long I hold on .

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One

*lights up a smoke* ahhhhhh that felt good ..LOL

cant wait for more whew

Summary:

In the midst of tragedy, Bella is forced to make a heart-breaking decision. WARNING: Character Death

This was my entry in the The Never Ever Happily Ever After contest.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 1254
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

omg I think i cried all the way through this one .. you are very talented.

Summary: Past Featured Story

twr

Banner by ChildOfSummer!!  THANK YOU!!!

If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?

AU-Human. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissue moments in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've read
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72920 Read Count: 15590
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this tale.. several times you have refered to this as a fantasy, plz dont tell me this is all a dream.  I will be devistated if this is all just a dream.

i love your stories and you writing ,thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved this story and i am so glad you didnt have alot of angst and break ups .. this is truly a good tear jearker story .. it made me laugh and cry , it was fantastic , thank you

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923492
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstar
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

ok I have to say this and get it off my chest..REALY? AFTER ALL THEY BEEN THROUGH YOU ARE GONNA LET EDWARD PULL AWAY FROM BELLA???? IN WHAT UNIVERSE DOES ANYONE DO THAT????????????? ok rant over. now I know you are gonna fix this ..(i hope)

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 66007
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

Hooked on this story saw it recommended on a d f ... Glad I took a chance 

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

Will you be updating soon? I hope