Reviews by shookie
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

honestly i feel a bit disappointed. i loved your writing but i kinda wanted selfishward to change b and then she remember and kick his vamp but before all the lovey dovey...you know kinda bella turn him into her whipping boy. turn about is fair play and all 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  I went over many different scenarios before I decided on the ending that I did.  I understand how you feel.  I may do an alternate ending at a later date.  Thanks again!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20188
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: he Good Boy Edward: Daddy's Gonna Buy You a Diamond Ring

Love this story..Really I do!! But that last line....By far my favorite line in the whole shabang. :-)

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Oh this should be very interesting....But Why did Alice shout NOOOO????



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thanks for your review, I think Alice saw her saw her saying she would walk away and just freaked, the cullens know what Tania can do and no one really knows how Edward will react once she turns her gift on him so Alice was like OMG what if she does seduce him I'm gonna lose my sister.... hehehehehe... Thanks for reviewing and asking the question, make sure you check your email for the link... MWAH!!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

AWWWWW i was hoping would get to read Edwards reaction to th e"surprise" before Tania came along... evil cliffy....Can't wait to read how dear ole Tania reacts.... :-)



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, what can I say I'm just plaiin evil hahahahaha you will get Edward's reaction in the next ch right after TPOV... I could never be that mean and not write some yummy E stuff when it is presented so perfectly in front of me.... I hope you like how the next ch turns out I am almost finished it so I will post asap... Thanks for reviewing it really does make me go faster

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Her throat itching...Hummm could it be she is thirsty for blood??? Or maybe just thirsty for Edward... Yeah that has to be it she is thirsting for Edward...LOL



Author's Response:

hahahahahaha.... close but no to both.... Thanks soooo much for reviewing you are a super star

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Nothing really to say. Love the story and can't wait for updates...So if I review 17 times does that count??? :-)



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! thanks a bunch for your review.... I made it to 22 reviews so you don't have to worry about trying to do it all yourself...hehehe funny thought though.... Ch 39 just posted

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Pain what huh why did you stop???Oh the torture of not knowing!!! Come on PLEASE



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehe!!!!!!!!! I didn't think stopping there would cause such a reaction for everyone... Sorry.... hahaha... I honestly didn't mean to torture anyone it just felt like a good place to start a new chapter.... OOPS..... I promise the next chapter will make the wait sooooooo worth it

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

No worries... We shall be patiently waiting for your return :-)

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

AWWEEE that was the sweetest kiss that I have read about in a long while.. So heart warming.

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Is it a horse HUH HUH is it????

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Poor Edward!!! LOL And poor Innocent Bella.... As much as I love me some sexy times with E & B        I wanna know whats up with Alice and WHY OH WHY she is saying no to Jasper

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Yes you have us hook line and sinker.. Now go save Bella!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

GO! GO ! Go!.. I am ready to save Bella and read some B&E action......Please don't hurt Bella!! Let her be okay. Shoot um up Alice !!!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Hurry up boys and save Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

You are a very evil writer :-) I just new when they came upon the shack Bella would be saved.. Oh you torture so.

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

You are evilly brilliant!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Enough said..

There will be an update like in the next few minutes RIGHT????

I know you are not that Mean.

I am using mind control now YOU WILL UPDATE NOW YOU WILL UPDATE NOW YOU WILL UPDATE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW. Nothing can move forward until you UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now...PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!! I am not above begging

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

LOL Love Emmy

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

Okay first review because I just found this the other day. Love the story and can't wait for the update. It is killing me I want to know whom the accompolice is soooo bad..I do have one question that has been bugging the heck out of me since I first read of Bella's ability

Why doesn't she come out and ask each of her coworkers if they are the mole and see if they lie???? Why doesn't she use her ability????



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

All that I can think right now it WTF!!!! Edward is mental!!! He has to be. A mental Monster!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

From the summary of the story and the "Bella was given to Edward as a present" I tend to believe Michael. I am hoping I am wrong but after what happened on the cliff. I don't think I am. I wasn't sure if I wanted to  keep reading this because of the cliff scene. i mean DarkEdward can be extremely hot but that was just wrong. Druging her and allowing others to watch him basically rape her. (Touching without proper consent in my view is rape even with out penetration) that is beyond Dark edward..Not trashing your story this is just my opinion.. :-)

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

HUMMMMM This one is a toughy... I hope Edward is innocent. He may not have done anything but he may know more than he is telling esp since he looked away from Bella when he said he didn't do anything to Jessica. If he was totally innocent he would have looked her in the eyes. Then again maybe he was addmitting to hurting Bella.   This Michael guy Bella is hanging with is really creeping me out. not sure why but he is. He pushes for her to not trust the Cullens a bit too hard?????

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Something is just not siting right with me....I mean edward researching stockholm syndrom and BDSM.. Attacking Bella. Now what Matt is doing would so NOT happen. He keeps saying he doesn't want to pressure or push her but that seems to be exactly what he is doing and Nicks coments.. Those just are not the type of actions one would expect esp with a victim like Bella. Kinda makes me wonder if matt is really a good guy????

Bunker by vampiremama Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Bunker

Thank you to Ima Twi Hard for the wonderful banner

As the bombs land around them, trapped together in a bunker, friends Bella and Edward have to make a choice. After all, no one wants to die a virgin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2792 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Oct 2010
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bunker

AWWWEEE That was so sweet. Kinda wished he would knock her up and then we could read the drama that would unfold form that :-)



Author's Response:

LOL, that is an idea

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Simple Man

I agree whole heartedly with you on the Emmett situation. I LOVE ME SOME EMMIE.



Author's Response:

Did you enjoy his backstory? Emmett has been so under-appreciated in this saga. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In Which I am the Clairvoyant

Yes I really did SM just glanced over poor delicious Emmie.

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling

ARRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Most evil cliffe EVER

Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. One moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it will stop, no one knows. AU/AH/OCC.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51782 Read Count: 10375
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Jan 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes

foursome I say foursome

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89170
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

dun dun duuunnnnn. :-) Sorry that just popped into my head...



Author's Response:

Hi shookie!

dun dun duuuunnnnn is exactly right, bb! Now Edward's going to realize just how much Bella needs a guardian angel and just how much he wants to be her protector. *sigh* *drool* *puddle*

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch. I hope you like the next chapter!

-bannerday

Lonely Doctor by tiff_0001 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 303]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2011 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

He may need nothing else but I SURE AS HECK DO!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

BS Banner

 

Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I would love to hear the conversation between Officer Black and Edward as an outtake as well... Will there be a continuance of this story???PLEASE ya Know kinda him growing and her having beautiful gree eyed little wolves :-)

Summary:

 

 

 

A heartbreaking tail of Edward and Bella in foster care. How do you become a "normal" person after being abused in every way, brainwashed, and manipulated. can they make it life together or will it rip them apart?

This story contains physcial, mental, and sexual abuse. slight slash. this story may offend some, so don't read if you offend easily. very occ.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85652 Read Count: 19374
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2011 Updated: 04 Oct 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, first off I found this story today and man oh manwonderfully dark. I have cried, laughed and gotten so disgusted and angry...my emotions are all over the place. The only thought that has stuck with me is HOW BLIND AND STUPID ARE ESME AND CARLILE TO THE ABUSE THAT EDWARD IS STILL DISHING OUT TO BELLA. I mean come on he is acting just like james and know one sees it to point that little fact out to him... 

 

Love it and can't wait to read more.

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mli

After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Okay a first I figured it has something to do with the research...NOW I think it has everything to do with Edwards past. Carla  maybe long lost relative/friend. Jimmy helping Carla....I figured Leah's attack might have been a mistake. ya know the bad guys thinking that they got Bella.



Author's Response:

All very good guesses...and you're close. There are only a few chapters left, so you will find out soon! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Me thinky that it has something to do with their research and or the bum Jimmy???



Author's Response:

Hmmmmm  could be...either. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Hunting

OHHHH EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFEEEEEEE...

Could it be Vicky finally showing herself????



Author's Response:

Could be, there are lots of b ad guys in the world, and Bella does seem to attract her share!  Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in!  lol!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife

Oh bite me yessss Please bite me ;-)



Author's Response:

Ha!  Wouldn't we all like to participate!  Glad you liked the chapter!  They still find themselves alone in the nest chapter . . . just sayin . .

 

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Mom

i do pray that Bella is just wrapped amongst those blankets by the fire place...You are scaring me... WHERE IS BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

You are so funny, i love the review!  Not to worry, the answer will be there tomorrow!  THANK you so much for taking the time to leave me a note!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Past

AWWWW man I was so hoping she was preggers....Wouldn't menstral blood smell different to him???? Are you sure its her period???? :-) UPDATE SOON



Author's Response:

I think she's pretty sure!  Not to worry, at the rate they continue to do it, something's gotta give!  the next chapter deals with the freshness of the blood there, and it's not a chapter for the faint of heart - let's just say, or for anyone that is easily grossed out!  Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bella

LOL Now  I am very intrigued.. My mind is a dirty dirty place. :-)



Author's Response:

Trust me . . . your mind is probably not as dirty a place as where Edward is going with this.  After all, he is a vampire . . .

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Blood

What??? Seriously you leave it there :-( How? Why?   ARRRGGGGG. You are trying to kill me!!! Him feeding off her I could see some think it gross..Me human to human yeah it would be but that was HOT... I have a dirty dirty mind remember :-)



Author's Response:

I thought it was HOT, as well.  He is, after all, a vampire!  I read up on some stuff and it seems it isn't even that unusual for humans!  Weird.  Anyway, glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock

First off I am so, so glad she told him away from the family  AND she told Alice to let her have this with him!!!! Family can be a bit overbearing at times. :-) Second... How he will react??? Hummm if typical Edward personality he will flip. If OCC I am hoping he is jumping for joy...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  I thought they should be away and slone when she told him!  You are soooo good about reviewing, here is a small snippet from the next chapter -

I couldn't move. I had completely shut down, save for trying to figure out what it was she was trying to tell me. Baby, she thinks we're having a baby? God I hope she is alright, I hope I haven't pushed her over the edge. This must be why she accepts everything about me so readily . . . the blood, the hunting, the claiming her . . . it just finally got to her and she snapped. She just wanted us to work so badly that she had deluded herself into believing we can be a normal couple, have a normal life with a family. I have to reason with her, call Carlisle . . . perhaps there is a doctor in Rio that can help.

 

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Confidants

This was a very sweet chapter... HUMMMM Three babies ????

Author's Response:

remember, Alice only sees possibilities - nothing is written in stone!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters

We shall see indeed...GO BELLA!!!



Author's Response:

Ha!  Are you enjoing the idea of the Cullens going to Disney!  I thought it would be hilarious!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122 Reactions

UHHHH AM I remembering incorrectly or mixing up stories..I thought B refused Jean and a woman came in to do it...Wouldn't Renee and or Rose know this and have thought or told E that



Author's Response:

Bella did refuse to let Jean Claude do the waxing, but only Alice was with her and knew that.  Renee was in a room of her own and had no idea who did Bella, but presumed it was the same guy.  Rose was unaccounted for, presumable not with either of them, so she couldn't have told him anything.  Alice DIDN'T explain it to himk because she knew that he needed to learn a lesson - she had seen it!

 

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Okay he basically punished bella by using their son...I do hope you make Edaward pay for a LONG hard time. He should NOT get off easy as just a talk.. What he did by using their son uggg he needs to see what it feels like.... Bella should NOT be CANNON this go around..



Author's Response:

I don't think he was trying to punish her by taking masen with him, I think he honestly missed his son.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532887
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

OKAY PHWEEE i FINALLY FINALLY CAUGHT UP TO YOU!!! i FOUND QUIET STORM AND HAVE NOT STOPPED UNTIL NOW TO REVIEW, WELL CAUSE I JUST COULDN'T STOP READING :-)

 

fIRST NEVER NEVER LET THOSE JERKS OUT THER MAKE YOU FEEL BAD FOR WHAT YOU WRITE. THIS IS FANFICTION AND IF THEY CAN'T DEAL EVEN AFTER YOU GIVE FAIR WARNING F THEM SEND THEM TO SEE EDWARD ON ONE OF HIS BAD DAYS. ;-) I FEEL A WRITER SHOULD WRITE WHAT IS IN THEIR HEART AND NEVER CHANGE THE STORY FOR THE APPESAL OF OTHERS.  I MAY NOT LIKE WHAT THEY SAY BUT IT IS SOLEY UP TO ME TO READ OR NOT READ NEVER BASH FOR WHAT I CHOOSE TO READ. YOU THE WRITER DO NOT HOLD A GUN TO OUR HEADS TO READ THERFORE WE SHOULD NEVER DISRESPECT SOMETHING YOU DO WRITE..

 

OKAY ENOUGH OF THAT. THE STORY AMAZING!!!!! I USUALLY READ ANYWHENRE FROM 10-20 FANFIC'S AT A TIME, BUT SINCE FINDING THIS I HAVE READ NOTHING BUT THIS STORY.

EDWARD MAN DO I WANT TO SMACK THE CRAP OUT OF HIM SOMETIMES.. AND BEBELLA SHE HAS CHANGED SHE WAS SO STRONG IN THE BEGINNING IN HER STANDING UP TO OLE EDWARD. NOW I FEEL SHE IS COWERING MORE AND MORE JUST TO APPEASE HIM. BUT WITH THE HELL THAT WOMAN GOES THROUGH WHO CAN BLAME HER. CARLILE SICK SICK MAN BUT I AM PRAYING ALEX BEATS HIS BUT INTO LINE.

THE KIDS TOO TOO CUTE (STILL I KEEP HOPING EDWARD WILL GO LEGIT FOR THEM I KNOW THAT IS NOT FEASINLE) 

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WHAT YOU DO

 

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

if there is anything between ed and lau.... i say B castrates e and takes over the whole kit and kaboodle :

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 64

While I do understand Edwards protectiveness of B. I feel he is being a bit harsh. I mean What would he do if it was his mother. Renee is ill she can't help that fact any more than we can help the sky being blue. Did B enable her. Yes did Charlie Yes but come on Edward should not expect B to turn her back on her ILL mother completly. B should take guardianship and then do just what she told Charlie Have the State pay to take care over her and place her in a home where she can be cared for.

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Updating every other day is highly over rated. Personally I believe with ALL my heart everyday... heck 2-3x's a day is much much bettter. :-)

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67

LOL I kinda like your creepy stuff you come up with....

Summary:

Bella has moved back to Forks following a traumatic year. She is placed into temporary foster care with the Cullen's and meets Edward who is also battling his own demons. Life isn't a fairy tale; or maybe it is! Rated M for language AH E&B

This story is on hiatus. I'm sorry to any readers who are waiting for a new chapter, but I really want to concentrate on my other story 'Wrecked with Bella'. I may come back to OUaSN, but I don't want to make any promises I might not keep.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 135285 Read Count: 5141
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2011 Updated: 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Someone is Watching You

Jasper had discreetly vacated the room while Edward and I argued and he hadn't yet reappeared.

Well based on that statement maybe it was Jasper??? But more than likely Jacob..



Author's Response:

Hi Shookie

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I can tell you that it isn't Jasper but what an interesting story idea that would make.

Regards

JKazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167503
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: 2 Change My World

OKAY... STARTED READING THIS TODAY. AND I MUST SAY I HAVE NOT FELT SHOCKED IN A STORY FOR A WHILE...i WAS SO NOT EXPECTING THAT.  i FIGURED SHE WOULD SLAP HIM OR SAY HEY EDWARD SINCE SHE KNOWS WHAT HE LOOKS LIKE AND ALL, BUT DAMN NOT THAT...



Author's Response:

Well he had the advantage of not looking anything like the photo she received!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What or whom ever gave you the ridiculous idea that we (I) don't want long chapters.. The longer the better!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

NEXT WEEK!!!! NEXT WEEK!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO I can't wait that long you can do it now...You know you can come on.  I WILL HELP

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

more more more hell yeah more. i as so very excited when i saw this in my inbox PLEASE more



Author's Response:

Hi shookie

Thanks for reading and reviewing the chapter 27 teaser.

I hope you enjoyed chapter 28 as well.

More on Bella, Rose and Larry in chapter 29 sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Dangerously in Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought she had found everything in Edward Masen while she was at high school, but when he mysteriously vanishes from her life without a trace Bella has no choice but to move on.

When Bella moves to Washington DC three years later her past comes back to hit her in the face and she realised that loving Edward is going to be a dangerous game, full of fear, pain, action, but most of all passion. AH    

Thanks to my Beta'a Sally and NeeNee.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133255 Read Count: 66670
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You suck :)

 

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

UGGGGG WHY WHY THERE HUH WHY THEREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: shookie Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

WHATTTTT NOOOOO Tha t is so not all for today come on you can't really do this to me can you come on PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: shookie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

Love your story!!!  I am not much of a reviewer, but I love it when authors leave story recs at the end.  I am interested in the one you posted Artual Maneuvers - planetblue...Is this a tWCS story.  I can't locate by story or penname.  Could you possibley put the link??  

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, although you're not much of a reviewer ;). Unfortunately, Artful Maneuvers isn't here on TWCS, but it's on fanfiction.net and you don't need to be registered to read there. Here's the link to the story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10693749/1/Artful-Maneuvers I hope you'll enjoy it. I do :). See you next chapter.