Reviews by fall up
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it. Firefox kicks explorer's ass.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

I'm all confused. Is Aro referring to Bella? I apologize if it's obvious from info learned from other chapters.

You made Felix some what sympathetic character. It would be cool if he got a happy ending not at the expense of Edward. 

 

Chapter was engaging & brought me into the character's feelings. Excited for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Aro is referring to Bella. I do feel a little sorry for Felix, but this is an E/B story, not F/B. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

Enjoyable to read. Nicely written.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

:)

Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

very cool

BxE first meet was entertaining. Great writing. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. That was my fav E/B meeting I've written. I like me an aggresive vamp!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

Damm, stopping where is was starting to get good just so the dog can speak, yuck.  Great chapter. I hope Edward keeps gaining some humanity. Excited to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

hehe well i've got to keep you all wanting more :) xxx thanks for the review, next chapter is on its way xx

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Loved the chapter. So glad Edward took out Riley, weird to say but I would have respeced him less if he had let riley live. Interesting how he comments on his dad beating him for not telling him about A/J and that he will beat Seth for not coming to him about his relationship with Kate. I guess that's his world. Excited to read the next chapter.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995715
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

What really stood out for me in this chapter was the cold shower. I thought that was sadistic. He makes her do it twice. That part really bothered me. I would think if he is so concerned about her health, he would be concerned that she could get sick from having no hot water in the shower. The shower wasn't quick b/c she had to wash her hair. Punishment spankings don't bother me.

 

You have an engaging way of writng. I'm not always comfortable with what the characters do but I am compelled to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Wolf That Cried Soulmate

great story idea and chapter.  I do wish Edward wasn't such a dumbass and fought for bella. Way cool, that Bella is going after her man.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward was being typical Edward, being the bigger man in a situation where he should have gone caveman and clubbed her and ran away.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Every Light in the House

so sweet and emotional. Writing is wonderful



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love!  I really enjoy this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward thoughts are too funny. Very enjoyable read.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have a lot of fun with him, even if I do worry where they come from in my own head!  He is certainly a character!  Hopefully I'll have a new chapter in a week or two :)  Thanks for leaving a review!

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

drama and humor written all in this story. E needs to get a clue and realize he f-up and that Bella is killing herself to escape the pain. She is not going to heal and find a relationship w/ a normal boy. I love that the family is coming back since E can't get his head out of his ass and stop being an emo dumbass. Great story premise. I am excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

too funny

go get her Edward

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good for Bella going out and partying w/o telling Edward. Drunk Bella was too funny. Fun and sweet story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Sight

What a fun chapter. Bella is too funny. 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Open Book

LOL

Bella and Edward are so cute

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Phenomenon

loved the chapter



Author's Response:

I am glad you are liking my crazy little story so far =) Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review!

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

Love the banners/pictures for this story. Chapter was so much fun to read. I'm so intrigued by Edward and his powers and his eyes. Bella is so much fun-not a whiny push over like in SM novels. Great intensity between Bella and Edward. I can't wait to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support of this story. I myself cannot stand the naivety of canon Bella, lol. Why not make her a snarky vampire, right??? Again, thank you and the next chapter is almost done =)

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Banner is cool. The start to this story is yummy, I am so engaged. Please update soon. So much fanfiction is Edward as a human,  yeah for Vampire Edward.



Author's Response:

i think edward should always be a vampire!! thanks for liking the banner it was my first try, now if i couild figure out how i did it i could put one on each of my stories..LOL next chapter will be up soon as i reread for corrections.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another great chapter. I luv that this story is dark but that Edward is loving towards Bella. I am not a big fan of real darkwood stories. Please update. 

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Never Say Never

The writing flowed nicely. B/c the chapter was short, I don't have much feed back to give. I'm excited to read more chapters. I love your plot idea. Please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, I know it was a short chapter...lol... I now have an new appreciation for all the other writers.... The next update will be longer

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I like how the story is unfolding. Great chapter and can't wait to read the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review... next update in a day or 2

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

engaging chapter

narrator guess-emmett



Author's Response:

Uploading chap 3 today - hope it clears it all up. Thanks for taking the time to r & r. Hope u enjoy the rest.

 

xx

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238929
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wonderful chapter.

I hope I explain this right. From the last chapter. the whole "female" term was handled so nicely in this chapter. It just flowed into understanding that it was not Edward being disrespectful. 

Swooning about Edward 2.0. Yummy.

Bella's interactions with the vampires at the store were awesome. Vampires have no shame (LoL) getting all sexy and not being able to control their urges. I really want one.

Excited to read the update

 



Author's Response:

Hi fall up!

Thank you so much! =) So glad you liked.

Yes, that's exatly right. Edward wasn't being disrespectful. But Bella being human and all, she saw it a little differently, but now she understands. Even though Edward did order her around in ch 14, but he was only afraid for her life. And then of course he was all feral. lol But he'd die if Bella got hurt or worse. Although my male vamps are dominant, they still cherish their mates and do anything to keep them happy. Kinda think of it as a really twisted Dom and Sub relationship thingy but Vampire style. <--- I don't know if that makes sense, but it's my version of it. LOL

Thank you. I love going into details like vampire grocery stores. There's so much more for me to cover like vamp jails, vamp amusement parks, illegal human hunting clubs etc. lol

IKR? I want a vamp too. *sigh* And yes they have no shame. Gah! Could you imagine if this was real? OMG! *blushes* I don't think i couldn't handle it. lmao

Anyways, thank you for your awesome comments. I appreciate it.

I should have the next chapter posted by 2mrw or the next day.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Oh PS: here's a tiny snippet of ch 16: (sorry for any mistakes)

Bella's POV ch 16

I watched Jasper’s and Emmett’s fangs grow longer and their expressions turn fierce as their eyes changed from crimson to black. Edward and his brothers didn’t waste another minute as they stalked out to the balcony like the natural predators that they were. Their big bodies moved lithely with each calculated step they took, their powerful muscles rippling fiercely underneath their pale skin. I followed them out to the balcony quietly, but halted my steps abruptly as all three males simultaneously whipped their heads back and growled, sniffing the air. I watched in terror and in awe as the moonlight illuminated their long white fangs. Their hunting senses became alert, immediately kicking in as they perched on the railing, scanning their surroundings. I wasn’t prepared for another feral growl to tear from Jasper’s chest so I instinctively jumped back and squeaked in surprise. I caught Edward’s attention as his head snapped in my direction. His lips curled back from his extended fangs while looking over his shoulder at me. I gasped and stumbled back in shock. His eyes. I was caught in his dark gaze, hypnotized by his black orbs. Those eyes. Those terrifying eyes were staring straight at me and right through the very depths of my soul. But I couldn’t look away…no matter how wild he looked, my eyes locked with his, drawing me further into his black pools.

 

I didn’t know how long I’d been paralyzed on the balcony, completely captivated by Edward’s gaze. His predatory eyes. But my breath suddenly hitched in my throat when his mesmerizing gaze grew more intense. I felt like prey caught in the eyes of a powerful predator, a predator that could rip me apart if he chose or sink his fangs into my delicate neck and suck my hot blood into his parched mouth.

 

My heart began to race. I couldn’t tear my gaze away as his eyes continued to burn into mine.

 

Beautiful black smoldering orbs…so beautiful….

 

“Bella don’t worry, stay calm.” Carlisle’s soothing voice was right next to me, calming my frazzled nerves a bit. But I couldn’t look at Carlisle when he spoke. No matter how much or hard I tried, it was fruitless.

 

~ Yeah....confused? lol No worries, it'll all come together.~

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

hi, awesome chapter.
Interesting the mystery of girls getting killed that look like Bella. I can't wait to see how this plays out in the story. Is it possible for the person to have an orgasm when she is marked by a vampire? B/E are so cute when their "getting intimate" especially when he gets all possessive and shouting "mine." This is 1 of only a few Edward stories that I like right now. A favorite is falling beyond redemption. So I get so excited when I get an email that this story has been updated. Loved the chapter and can't wait to read the next update.



Author's Response:

Hiya fall up,

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter. And yup, a human can have an orgasm when marked by a vamp, just depends how much marking venom is injected into the bloodstream. =) I'm not sure what chapter this will be in, but there will be a male vampire that challenges Edward, wanting to take Bella so...Edward will mark her possessively in front of the other male. He'll inject enough venom into Bella's body, causing her to orgasm in front of the vamp, deterring him. Edward will be more possessive of Bella after they have sex in ch. 10...so there will be more marking. lol Thank you, glad you like E&B. Ooo I haven't read Falling Beyond Redemption. I wish I had more time to read, I have a list of fics that I would like to start.

Thanks again. I will update this week. I wanted to do it sooner like last week, but RL is a little crazy for me right now.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just adore this story. Your writing flows nicely. I love how your vampires are different from SM. I like Bella, her anxiety and fear is real. Hell, if I was in her situation I would have been taken to a mental ward for constantly having panic attacks. Awesome, how J,A,EM have treated Bella. I hope they stay nice to her. I'm so excited to meet Edward and see his instant connection to Bella. I'm hoping he will not be abusive towards her. I don't like a wussy Edward but adore him being sweet to Bella. I can't wait to read the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoy it so far.  I can assure you that J,A, Em will stay nice to Bella. When I first had planned to write this twisted tale, I wanted to make the Cullens dark BUT I decided against it. There would be no chance of Bella ever being happy if ALL the vampires were dark. There will be an instant connection when they both meet and no, Edward won't be abusive towards her. He won't be a wuss either, he'll be fierce but sweet to Bella. Edward will be feared by other vamps because he's kinda like...umm...I guess you could say the Alpha. lol But I can assure you that he'll be awesome with Bella. I hope you'll like my version of Edward. lol I'm working on ch 4 already however I'm not sure when it will be finished. Life is a little nutzo with my fam getting back from vacay. I'll post more soon =)

Thanks again,

~Jellybean

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just love Edward. Thanks for not making him a wuss or little choir boy. Are you going to do any EPOV in this story? I like how Bella's thoughts are getting more assertive. Your banner rocks. 



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you like Edward. Welcome about not making him a wuss/little choir boy. LOL I couldn't do that to him. He has to be fierce ;)

Yes, I think I will do an EPOV but I'm not sure if it will be included in the story or outtakes.

Yup, Bella is getting more assertive. She'll transform even more as the story goes on =)

Thanks for reading/commenting =)

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The conversation between Renee, Charlie and Bella flowed nicely. Edward is yummy. I love vampires that mark their mates. I can't wait to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

I'm glad you like my version of Edward! And vamps that mark ;)

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I thank u for writing such awesome long chapter. Your the best. I so loved how E marked Bella. It was sexy. Edward's Pov would be so appreciated, but I so get the RL thing. I can't wait to to find out the trouble Bella will get into on her errand for Renee.



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks.  =) I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. And I'm happy you liked the marking =)

Yeah, I'll do my best with EPOV, hopefully school won't get in the way. lol But I think I'll write ch 8 first.

I'll post more soon. And I hope you'll like ch 8. I'll try to write another long one. lol

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved it. I just want to eat Edward up. I'm so glad you did not make Alice a whiny wanting to play dress up Bella Barbie. Nicely written her conversation w/ Bella about mating. Shit, now I'm all scared with Bella taking the new pill. I can't wait to see how that plays into the story and of course so wanting E to mark her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

LOL@ whiny Alice. I'm glad you like her. I'm totally not going to have a hyperactive Alice. And NO to BELLA BARBIE! LOL I've read so many fics like that. Some were really great but I can't portray her like that, Sure, Alice is still a girl, she enjoys makeup and shopping but it won't have her drag Bella all over the stores and torture her with dress up.

I hope I won't disapoint with the marking scene. I'm going with my gut feeling on this one. lol

And yeah, the new meds will cause some problems. Hopefully, Carlisle can help.

Thank you for reading/commenting =)

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, so much going on. I loved the super long chapter. You've got a great creative mind. I was all nervous about Bella leaking blood. Nicely written. Of course I'm all scared about Ben and Angela. Ben's father is off the hook scary w/ wanting to drain Angela. I will be so sad if Ang or Ben dies. I know I will just have to wait and see. (lol). I really loved how you wrote the scene of E/B running into the other vampire w/ his human girlfiriend. The vampire sounded sexy, E needs some tats. Digging E increased super vampire strength and possessiveness. Love this Edward. Rose forming a blood bond w/ Bella. Still up in the air about that. B already has one w/ Edward correct? so I guess it's good she has one w/ another family member. Glad it wasn't Alice.

 

Side note-I joined freedom writers site just so I could read this story w/ pictures. I have no idea how to navigate the site. The UI is was more complicated than it needs to be which is a shame b/c I would also like to read some original stories. End bitching rant. I got to your home page. How do I get to LAV chapters? 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.

I LOVE tatts!!! ikr? Ed needs some too! Thank you, so happy that you liked it. I really liked the tatted vampire. He was hot. If I can find a pick of him and alter it a bit, I'll post it. =)

Yeah, some like the Rose/Bella bond, some don't, others are unsure. But just remember this, the blood bond can be broken or it'll fade over time. When Rose doesn't feed from Bella, it'll fade. =)

Yup exactly, B has a blood bond with E. And the more of her blood he drinks, the stronger it will get.

Yeah FFFW is abit tricky. It took me a while to get used to it. Here is the link to LAV: http://www.thefreedomfanfictionwriters.com/group/adultahautwilightfanfiction/forum/topics/living-amongst-vampires-story  (but I haven't posted ch 17 there yet, i'm a bit behind. It takes a while to post the story with pics. Here is also my profile page. Add me as a friend and I can help you navigate =) http://www.thefreedomfanfictionwriters.com/profile/JanineSanchez

Thanks again, fall up. I appreciate you reading and giving me your thoughts, questions etc...

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the chapter. I so want to have vampire style sex w/ Edward. Vampire porn- too funny. So cool how Peter and Char came to Bella's rescue. You are fleshing out the story nicely.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed this chappy.

The sex scene will be coming up in ch. 10, which I'm working on now. lol And Peter and Char will be around more often. They're a little older than the Cullen kids...they attend an all Vampire University.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You get an award for being a kickass wonder woman with writing this over 18,000 word fab chapter. The scene w/ Garrett was so yummy. I can't believe that Mike Newton, I actually liked him in the grocery store now he is all slimy. I have been having so much fun reading this world you have created. The fight scene was awesome, while reading the scene I was wondering if Edward will get an ultimate power. I'm all for Edward kicking more ass and having vampire sex w/ Bella. Of course that just makes me droll b/c Edward only lives in my dreams. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This banner and the one for your new story are awesome.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you =) *blushes* I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter. It was a pain in the behind tho...lol...over 18,000 words was exhausting. lol  I'm happy that you enjoyed the Garrett scene. =D Yeah, Mike Newton is a creep. He loves ot taunt Edward because he knows he could never calim Bella...so he will taunt him. All I can say is that Mike better be careful, Edward won't take any more snide remarks or teasing from him.

Good question....hmmm...I think it would be cool somehow for Edward  to become stronger by possessing a power. He is the Ultimate Vamp after all. *wink* lol I'm sure something will happen to make Edward even more powerful. =) And thanks about teh fight scene. Lemons and fight scenes are not easy to write for me. lol

Thank you. I'm glad you like my fierce ass kicking Edward and vamp sex with Bella. Now when Bella is turned into a hybrid, I know I just gave it away...but this is a HEA, they will have mad passionate vampire sex, where Edward doesn't have to hold back.

LOL. Yes, Edward only lives in my dreams too. *sigh*

Thanks about the banners. I hope that you will continue to follow this story, even if you may not follow the other much Darker story. The other one is going to be very dark, unlike this one.

Thanks again.

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hey, fantastic chapter. . I'm in such awe of your talent that I can't explain how much you rock writing this story.

I so enjoyed learning about the ultimate vampire legend can't wait to see how it plays out in the story Ben and Angella were to cute. Glad Ben was able to think past his instincts and claim Angela w/o everyone watching. I teared up a little when Edward was talking about his human friend.  I so agree w/ Bella that Edward is hot when he acts all dominant. I had no idea that Mike killed Victoria, but I'm not yet convinced that he killed all the Bella look a likes. Excited to learn more. Poor Renee-I hope she will be ok. I know my Edward is getting there to kick some ass and kill a few evil empires.

As always I will not be patiently waiting for an update, I wil be saying a wish that I everytime I open an update link it will be for this story. Considering this chapter was wonderfully long and indepth I will give you a few days (LOL). I appreciate all the time and creativity you put in this story.



Author's Response:

Hey fall up! =)

Aww thank you so much! Your comment made my day!

Yay! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. Initially, I was going to let Ben claim Angela in front of everyone, BUT then I decided against it. Angela wouldn't of wanted that kind of attention. LOL So yeah, hopefully Edward will help Ben control his vampire intstincts. Aww yeah, poor Brock. Edward really loved him like a brother. Oooo so you like some dominant Edward?=D Awesome! Me too! LOL Yeah, Mike is a creepy vampire. Victoria stood no chance.You could be right, there are other villians out there. Edward felt Bella's fear and pain so he's on his way to Bella. Hopefully, Renee will be okay.

Thank you =) Oh so I only have a few days to post another chapter? LOL Wow! I better start writing then like asap.

Thanks again,

I enjoy hearing from you. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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This was one of my favorite chapters. The lemons were so yummy, unbelievably hot. I loved Bree. She was so cute and so was Angela. Enjoyed her and Edward’s conversation in Vampire speak.

In other reviews I've embarrassed myself w/ my utter obsession with this Edward. My obsession has gotten so much worse. Animalistic Edward is awesome especially when he’s spanking and getting all dominant.

I would so love to read EPOV-you mentioned you might write some-I hope so. I would like quicker updates but I so appreciate your hard work in writing these in-depth long chapters.  Whatever you do, thank you.



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

Thanks. Yeah, I like Bree and Angela. Bree will be sweet and not a threat to Bella, and Angela will be around more often once she meets Ben. Ben is a sweetheart. He will cherish Angela, as Edward does Bella. Oh No you haven't embarressed yourself. lol I share the same obsession...there are so many varieties of "Edwards" in different stories that I have become obsessed with as well. I'm flattered that you like my version of Edward. =) Thank you.

I'm actually working on an outtake in EPOV before he met Bella, and when he saved her from James the first day of school. I will try to explain how he knew Bella was "the one" when he first laid his eyes upon here. It's a little difficult, because sometimes these intense emotions are difficult to put into words. But i will give it my best. Hopefully, I will have EPOV completed soon.

I've started on ch 12, and it's difficult for me to cut down the chapter. I think I will continue to write longer chapters, but I will also update sooner too.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved the chapter.

This line "I was utterly pathetic when I first moved to vamp town. But I could tell that this little girl wouldn’t let anyone push her around when she got older, including vampires. This line reminded me that in previous chapters some readers commented that Bella was too passive and weak. I never viewed her that way. I like how you write her in this story.

Period scene was awesome. It was sexy and funny.

Poor Angela and Ben, I can't wait to read more about what happens between them.

Excited to read the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Fantastic chapter. Loved the conflict and how you wrote Bella feelings toward Edward after his sexy dumbass took a trip to vampire instinct land. I could see both their sides. Of course, my insane love for this Edward has me slightly swinging to his side. I am just to obsessed with him. Now if my human husband said that shit to me- it would of been on and I would of been looking for a divorce lawyer.  It will be interesting to see if Edward can understand Bell's perspective.

I would love to know what Edward was feeling during their ride to the hotel.

I so agree w/ Bella Old Cum smells nasty.

There are very few Twilight fanfiction stories that I am reading. I don't even open the story when I see an update. I will get back into them b/c some of the auhors are really good.

NOW-when I see that you have updated, I drop everything do a thank god and get right to reading. You rock.

 



Author's Response:

Awww fall up, thank you so much. Your comment made my day. Thank you so much for that.

I agree, i'm still favoring Edward. lol How could you not? But yes, if my bf said that to me, i'd be fuming. lol

I can't say thank you enough. I hope you'll like ch 15 as well. =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Fantastic chapter. I feel like I'm living in this world w/ all the details you give.

 

 "I haven't posted any pics here within my chapters, but I have tons at the other site that I post with this story."- Where else is the story posted? I would love to read it with pictures. Awesome how you see werewolves in the story. 



Author's Response:

hiya *waves*

Sorry for the late reply. RL is crazy.

Thank you. It's definitely not without difficulty writing a detailed chapter. lol

Oh yes, I post this story at Freedom Fan Fiction Writers site as well. I have lots of pictures posted there and a bunch of different banners, too. The link is on my bio page here if you want to join. =)

Anyways, thanks again. Love hearing from you.

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved the chapter

Love the pictures

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved the chapter. Not feeling the mating house idea such as Alice. It is an interesting kink. 



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

thanks so much =) Yeah the mating house is def kinky. Not for all. Def not for me lol

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I had to rewrite what I had b/c I lost it all =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Writing was creative and engaging to read. Edward was yummy. I view this chapter as D/s lite (awesome b/c not a big fan of a full on D/s relationship). Love how you write E/B emotional connection. Lemon was hot. 

Angela and Ben are so cute and I'm so worried about them and the pregnancy. Love how your story takes on prejudices and political views. 

43,000 word chapter is a gift from the Gods. I have no life so I sat down and read the whole chapter is one sitting. I was so excited you updated. 

 



Author's Response:

Wow!!! Thanks so much! Your comment totally made my day =)

 

Yeah just a bit of light D/s here, don't want to get too heavy into it. I don't have the time to research anyway LOL  And the story will take a turn soon anyways. 

 

Thanks again!!! So excited that you enjoyed it!!

 

*hugs*

 

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Kudos to you for writing this story as you want and not changing it b/c some readers might be pissed. 

Oh Shit, talk about drama. I so want Mr. Cheney to die. I loved the intense blood play between E/B which is usually not my thing. Hoping you update in 2 weeks and that R/L drama stays away.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay TY for updating. I'm sorry to hear about your grandma.

NoNO........,Nothing can happen to my Edward. The angst ugh a separation No! (Hugs)

 

So glad ur back

 

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome & TY for update

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

TY for update

awesome chapter

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Loved this- "And Bella did deserve better. The mate part inside of him knew it all the better. Bella was his, fully bonded or not, he didn’t know if he could stand to see her hurt."

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

Amazing chapter. Love when E/B share humor together and Edward having some sweet feelings toward Bella. I know that E is supposed to be a tough asshole vampire but he is also so enjoyable when he has some "tender human emotions towards Bella. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much !!!! 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

OMG- this sounds so cool. Are the Cullens going to physically or mentally abusie Bella? Please let me know- b/c I can't read the stories of abuse.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

So about the abuse. Edward won't hit her, but he won't be that nice to her in the beginning either. As for the rest of the Cullens, I'm not sure how dark they will be to Bella. This is definitely a dark story unlike Living Amongst Vampires where Bella is protected and cared for by the Cullens, Charlie and Renee.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Omg, I loved how the baby (hopefully Edward) carried by the pregnant vampire responsed to Isabella. That was great. Chapter flowed nicely. Exccited to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Yes, it was little Edward *giggle* Glad you liked it! =)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Damm, this was good. Exciting and fast paced. Poor Bella, must suck to watch your grandmother get killed. I love the 3pov. Excited to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey fall up!

Wow, thank you. =) Glad you liked!

Yeah, even though Mimi wasn't the nicest person, she did have good intentions and loved Bella. And Bella did love her back. Now, will Bella realize that Mimi had been right about vamps all along?

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

Damn, I'm sort of in shock. I was drawn into the chapter and I felt all dfferent emotions while reading. That's what made it a good chapter b/c you made me feel: I can't just love/hate or be indifferent about Edward. He's definitely got his sadistic moments-pulling out of the blood whore with his barbs still intact. Blood whores are vampires? He's sexy when he goes all primal and dominant. It wouldn't of fit the story if he was gentle w/ Bella. Of course he's such an ass just plowing throuigh her w/o any foreplay. Hopefully his sex skills will get better or Bella is going to have to join a nunnery. (Do those even exist?)  I'm glad  he has some need to protect Bella. His conflicted feelings & thoughts about Bella were written really well. Loved how you wrote Bella's feelings.

Well P/C are interesting. Charlotte seems to have some unresolved baby issues. A Major part of me wants Jasper to become evil b/c it's too heart breaking reading about Edward kicking his ass and feeling for Jasper.

Excited to read the next update.



Author's Response:

Hi fall up!!!

Thank you so much =) We're happy that you enjoyed it. It was such a pain describing the conflicting emotions. lol  Blood whores are humans. Good question, I have no idea if nunneries exist here. lol I do have a vamp religion in mind for LAH and LAV, but I'm not sure if or when i'm going to cover it. Yeah, he's definitely not gentle with Bella. We're trying to keep him dark because we don't want him to go soft and sweet all of a sudden. He definitely has a mean streak, that mofo. lol

Yeah, Jasper will be...interesting. Or at least I hope. lol

Thanks you so much. I enjoy hearing from you!

~Jells 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

My heart was beating so fast while I was reading the chapter. I had my eyes half way closed till I reached the next sentence because the chapter was that good. Since the shirt storm has just started, my nerves will be worn out. It will be worth it because this story rocks.

Damn, all my hopeful faith in Peter having some compassion was dashed in this chapter. Him and Char are something.

Poor Bella, at least she didn't suffer the whole chaper. Thanks for giving the girl an orgasm, her hell life needed a little bright spot.

I can't believe, I am going to write this, but I actually didn't want Edward to get torched in this chapter. I am feeling more connectd to him.

Congrats on passing the finals.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! =) We're happy you liked the chappy.

Wow! So you're feeling a little more connected to Edward? he he Yeah, but he better watch out for Jasper, he's sneaky.

Thanks again. We enjoy hearing from you

~Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

Jasper is too funny. Nice to see his evil lighthearted side. He makes me laugh.

Ahh..Tanya and James are so sweet together. 

E/B nice gentle moment. Loved that. Love vampire smut. 

Emmett is such as ass. I so want to kick his ass. 

Loved the chapter. Excited to read the next update. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

Thank you so much!

 Sorry for the crazy late reply! RL is getting crazier lmao

I'll post a chappy for lah when I finish ch 19 of lav.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Gauntlet Pt 2

LOVED the chapter!

Writng flowed really well. Engaging to read. I love an evil Esme. Bad Carlisle being married and still doing the blood whores (LoL). 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Damn, Edward is fucking scary. I loved Tanya, sad to see her turned into Edward's puppet. Amazing written chapter. Very engaging to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks honey buns! Edward is a peculiar vampire. I deal with him everyday. He talks about the women but sometime he just won't shut up! lmao. I'm glad you like it babes! See you next chapter!

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Excellent writing



Author's Response:

Hey *waves

 

Thanks so much!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Blown away. Fantastically written and beyond engaging to read. Esme/C scare me. Cheered when C got burnt. Score for the human. 



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

 

Thank you so much!! C and Es are nuts, aren't they? lol 

 

Thanks again! We are happy that you are  still enjoying the story =) It makes us smile! 

 

Jells and Tyggy

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Flowed nicley and I would love to read more so I hope you continue to write.

Sent From Heaven by Alice1290 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

After her brother’s death Andria DeAngelo is leaving Lake Tahoe, California in search of a new start. The tragic death of Bella Cullen had torn the Cullens apart and left Edward in a constant state of depression. He only lives because of Renesmee.  When Edward and Andria meet Edward must control his desire to kill her. Can Andria get away from the memory of her brother’s tragic accident? Will the Cullens be torn apart forever? Or can Andria save Edward and the Cullens and show them happiness and love again?

Lemons in later chapters!

 Thanks to Frozen Soldier for the AWESOME banner!

 

Thanks again to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner!

 

made by Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com! Thanks!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218274 Read Count: 7840
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2013
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Past

loved it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Listen to Your Heart

loved it. I just hope Edward learns to not be so emo. I'm excited they admitted their feelings.



Author's Response: I'm glad you love it, thanks so much for reviewing! Andria helps Edward learn to not be so emo eventually!

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Sushi and Dreams

:)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it, bella is hysterical.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Edward- you should just kill all the men in forks so Bella doesn't mess up by talking to one. Nice to see Edward's feelings about how losing Bella was so painful for him. I hope Bella doesn't lose some of her spunk.

Great chapter

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved it

Two Too Shy Outtakes by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

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What happens when you underestimate the possesiveness of a vampire? Just a thought of what might happen when it comes to redominating your mate.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1405 Read Count: 740
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2011 Updated: 08 Feb 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 80705
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: What Just Happened?

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Break Up

Exciting chapter. loved it

Calving by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Volturi Dairy by fetish-fanfic fan piece. What happens the first time Bella gives birth.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2285 Read Count: 4666
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 24 Feb 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)

Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672077
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

loved it

exciting, funny, and sweet.

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Loved the chapter

I so want Aro and Esme to have a relationship, get married. They would be awesome together.

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

Dirty talking E is hot. Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

loved it

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

This was so good. I loved Jake in this story. He was such a young guy who acted his age. Too funny how he wanted to kiss E ass. So sweet how E touched his cheek when and silently thanked him. Yay, Aro found out about the baby. Excited about Lauren coming back. Caius totally inability to see the double standard of him cheating and not wife is so fucked up. I love all the different personalities in this story. I do wonder why Jacob shot him 1st. Hopefully Caius will get shot by Nicole. What a shit for beating her up. 

YOU SHOULD NEVER SAY SORRY FOR GIFTING YOUR READERS W/ AN EXCELLENT LONG CHAPTER. 

Sequel- Hell yes. Damn I'm excited. I buy more books probably more than most and lately they have been so boring. This story is totally holding my interest. Thank you.

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Excellent

Thanx so much for sharing your time and talent w/ us all. I have totally enjoyed spending my time reading this story.

 

Yah, sequel.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112168
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:)

Summary:

A compilation of Quiet Storm outtakes. Most outtakes will be in the secondary character's points of view. Read Quiet Storm first. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41126 Read Count: 18106
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 02 Aug 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro

Awesome chapter. Fun to read. Aro and Lauren are cute together. 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

Loved the lemon

Exciting chapter

Love A/L

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

loved it

Second Spins by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

 

Lara's common sense and her body are of two different opinions when it comes to Julien Diotallevi.

She remembers all too well the passionate summer they spent together on the French Riviera. It left her heart-sick, pregnant and alone.

She never expected to see him again, but what happens on the riviera doesn't always stay on the riviera. Now he stands before her, still as breath-taking as ever, only this time he comes bearing startling news, and a legacy of danger.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Mystery, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44801 Read Count: 5671
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2011 Updated: 08 Oct 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! When writing chronologically (a first for me) it is wonderful to have outside encouragement.

The Archer by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Centauro

 

No, this is not a vampire story, but supernatural all the same. It is the tale of a princess in peril and the mythical creature who saves her. They will love each other passionately but, as it is the case with other cross species mating, it will not be easy. The time? Oh, some 2700 years ago. BTW, Kallisté and Alexios have the same meaning of Bella and Edward, in ancient Greek.

 

o65;λθε, Κp59;πρι,
Χπρυσp55;ασιν o52;ν κυλp55;κεσσιν o40;βραισ
συμμεμιγμp51;νον θαλp55;αισι νp51;κταρ
οo84;νοχp57;εισα. 

Come hither foam-born Cyprian goddess, come,
And in golden goblets pour richest nectar
All mixed in most ethereal perfection,
Thus to delight us. (Sappho)

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9744 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

Well, I suppose you like it. Thank you.

Summary:

Clear and Bright banner

Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Together

loved it



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 : Broken Wing

:)



Author's Response:

:)   ~CM

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 : Listen

I wrote this long review and when I pushed submit TWCS said you are not authorized b//c you are not logged in. 

1st this story is beautifully written and makes the reader want to know the characters. In a lot of ways they are realistic. I do worry about Chloe loosing herself in this relationship but I also think she is still trying to find her way so maybe she will gain not lose. 

Jamin I adore but he needs to get some control before he does something that in unforgiveable. And if Chloe keeps forgiving Jamin might start forgetting he needs the control. 

Excited to read the next update.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

That's happened to me several times. By the time I get to the end of a chapter, the site sometimes logs me out. If you open another tab and log in again, it should take care of it. Or do it and C&P your review into the freshly logged in page ;)

 

Thank you for your thoughts on these two chaotic lovers. Their road isn't always smooth, but they take it hand in hand. If one falls, the other will always be there to pick them up. :)  

  ~CM

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 : Milk

So sweet together. Loved the chapter.



Author's Response:

They melt me. Thank you :)

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77464
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Conform

:)

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Enraptured

:)

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Memories

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263179
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

Awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awesome

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow awesome chapter