Reviews by HelsBells
Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

This is off to a great start - please do continue it! Can't wait for the sparks to fly...



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

This story was a great journey from start to finish! I actually felt I was there in the room with the characters and loved the dynamic between Bella, Jack and Edward. Can't wait for your next story but I am sad to see this one end :)



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was an excellent chapter and can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to the rest of the family's reaction when he makes it home!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Another brilliant story - loved this journey. Merry Christmas :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

Thank you for a wonderful journey - I have loved this from start to nearly end (looking forward to the epi)!



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete.  We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short.  When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both.  Nikky has written hers and I have written mine.  Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on.  I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS.  We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten.  THANK YOU!  Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it.  Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 170: Edward

Brilliant as usual, sad to hear we are coming to the end of the journey with these two. It's been a blast and I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters!! Thanks so much for a great story.

Cast Off's by Sassymami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It’s been ten years since them. Her parents are dead because of their loose end, but she has moved on with her life. Still dealing with the supernatural in a daily basis but she never thought she would hear from them again so soon. Now two of the Cullen men need her assistant but only one wants more. Will she let them in her life again or cast them off like they did her. Hum/Vamp—Jas/Belle

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56116 Read Count: 47263
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think this is shaping up to be a great story! Can't wait for their first reunion and if Peter is there, it would be even better (he's one of my favs).

Summary:

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When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Brilliant!! Can't wait for the next installment - more hijinks to follow I hope.

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Great so far - more Masen please!

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222316
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I found this story by accident and I am so glad I did. It was so easy to just keep reading, so I finished it in a couple of days. I loved the personalities which shined through and the realistic dynamic to their relationships. Thanks for a brilliant tale!

Orange Crush by OzellaMarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

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Bella Swan's life is turned upside down when a hunky new guy moves in next door. Will she be able to handle 'Sex on Legs'? Or will he think she's a complete fruit cake? 

Edward/Bella/Drabble/Romance/Humor

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3003 Read Count: 5203
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Do You Understand The Words Coming Out Of My Mouth?

Chuckled my way through this, waiting to see if Bella remembers her own name....

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285576
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

Brilliant! I can't wait for Kate to get what's coming to her and soon. Pretty please?

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

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BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7390
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

Loved this and wait in hope of the futuretake!

Summary:

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"We must be willing to pay a price for freedom."

-H. L. Mencken


Set during/after Ch. 12 Eclipse. Newborns are terrorizing Seattle. The vampires of the Olympic Peninsula are worried that the Volturi will become involved, so they call their closest friends and allies. But when the Denali clan shun Carlisle's request due to Laurent's death, an old friend unexpectedly answers his plea. Will his presence shake up their rock solid foundation?

*~Bella & Garrett~*


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Garrett
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61489 Read Count: 7511
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 23 Mar 2014
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Coersion

This is a great start to the story! Looking forward to the next update. Hoping Edward gets his desserts too.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoting it. I'm going to update either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for tte review-J A

Summary: Past Featured Story


The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40208
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

No, no no, no! That is a cliffy-and-a-half!!!!! Next chapter pls.....

Entwined by Justabitoftime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A bond, centuries old, has finally completed, and the Volturi Kings have found their mate at last. But when the Spirits unite old enemies, what new dangers could be lurking on the horizon? *B/A/M/C. Wolf-pack, vampires. Lemons. Poly, no slash.*


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Aro, Bella/Caius, Bella/Marcus
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99815 Read Count: 39130
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2014
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving this so far.....next chapter pleeeeeease?!?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved this chapter! Felt like I was right alongside Edward wanting to deck Charlie!!

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another brilliant story ladies! I look forward to the next one (and next chapter of TTOO) x

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: HelsBells Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Another fantastic story x