Reviews by TopazRuby
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311120
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

*Gasp* Oh no, what's he gonna do to her? Can't wait to find out!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76230
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you my dear

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Irrevocable

Nice chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I thought the ending was very rushed. You disappear for so long and then you come back. Suddenly, Bella has cancer, and then we find out it was fiction the whole time. Reminds me quite a bit of my grade 2 writing experience. I've come to a dead end...'Oh, it was just a dream.' TBH, I was not impressed. I was expecting your characters to develop more. All I got was Edward was an arrogant twit and Bella was the damsel in distress. There was no definite ending, too. I would have been happy with you letting Bella die. Big mushy ending and all. Seems complete, you know? But you didn't even get there. Just taking the easy way out, eh?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you feel that way.  This is the way my story was planned, and I never expected everyone to be happy.  I know I can please some people but not everyone.  I appreciate all reviews, yours included.

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Not to be mean, but I kinda think that Bella's really stupid and selfish. Subtly, of course. So she mopes around all day long and doesn't get the guts to tell Edward. That part's fine, because most of us would do that. But then she has to involve all her friends. Emmett, Jasper and Rosalie are now mad at Edward. And Bella has to drag Jacob into the mess that SHE created. I just think that she's irresponsible. Also, it's her fault that Edward didn't know. She didn't tell him right?

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Poor James! I really want him to end up with Bella, 'cause Edward's so "perfect" and all.

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope Bella ends up with James. Edward and the Cullens are far to goody-goody.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42793
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed half-star
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor

Overreaction much? 



Author's Response:

yes, she did overreact, but it was b/c she has so much stress right now.  she's not thinking clearly, plus she's a teenage girl and her hormones make her super moody.  she's also super overwhelmed and is not sure how to act.  hope you stay with the story.  bella makes major progress and grows throughout.  thanks for the review!  ;)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm loving Michael :)

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter :)

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love the pairing BellaxMichael in this story! :)

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter!

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nice chapter! A bit confusing though.

Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Fabulous! 

 

BTW, your 300th review!!!!

Summary:

A small group of people struggle with the drama that comes before two of the friends' wedding. Secrets and lies become known at the worst of times and everyone's lives are affected. There is cheating, lies, blackmail, and all different POVs



Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 626
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TopazRuby Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Do, I Don't

Love it! I hope you write a sequel. Great job! :)