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Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130198
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

All of them better pray that Emmett and Charlie find them before Edward. If Edward gets his hands on them, they will wish they were dead. Bella is so strong and is a fighter. She just has to hang on a little longer. As for Sulpulcia, she was probably taken and forced to marry Aro. That would be my guess can't wait for more. 

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Holy crap!  She loves Charlie?  Were they together before Renee and Charlie got together?  Wow!  I can't wait to read the next chapter. 

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Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

She is one strong woman to put up with all that abuse and I can't wait until Edward, Emmett and Charlie get their hands on James and Riley. And Aro since he is apparently retraining Sulpulcia in how to act and I think she is in love with Charlie and Bella is their daughter. Did I guess correctly?  Can't wait until the next chapter. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Aro is one sick bastard. I'm off to read the next chapter and I hope that Edward and Charlie get to end Aro, James and Riley soon. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

I. Strain,y hope Edward shot James and Riley. Heaven help Aro, although I truely believe that he will rot in help for this. Can't wait to read the next chapter so I must go right now. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I'm so excited that they are back together but I hope Bella can survive this both mentally and physically. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

You are so right. Charlie might be a criminal but he's still a good person. He loves his family and only wants the best for them. You can't ask more of him than that. I can't wait until Bella and Edward can talk to each other. Bella has a very long road ahead of her, both mentally and physically. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Edward really pulled some string for that to happen. Fortunately, he knew the right people who could angle being the liason and help pull those strings. I loved this chapter. Emmett was hilarious. I can't wait for Bella to wake up although I know it will not be sunshine and roses for a while. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

One hurdle down, tons more to overcome. They both need lots and lots of therapy. Loved the chapter and looking forward to more. 

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Loved the chapter. I can't wait for the update because her reaction is going to be rather explosive. At least that's what I eect anyway. See ya next time. 

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

She handled that better than I thought. Hopefully she will realize what she did while she was being tortured, she loves him and needs him in her life. She still has so much to work through. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

Wonderful chapter. You're right, that time with Edward and Esme needed to happen. It definitely ties up some loose ends and shows how far he has come. Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Wonderful chapter. They're connecting again at that deeper level required for trust to rebuild. She's finally going to get her Daddy back. Biology doesn't mean a thing, it's the Dad that raised you that matters. Ask anyone who was adopted, has a step parent or even a family member not their biological sperm donor that raised and loved them. It's the one that loved you unconditionally that makes a Daddy. Yep, I'm a Daddy's Girl. ;)

Edward in a cheerleader outfit would be so worth seeing!  Wonder if there's a manip queen who could make that happen?????

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Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Great chapter. I loved that Edward saved her and told every one of those idiots how to go screw themselves. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Edward is amazing and she said she loves him!!!!  Edward should know how to deal with the panic attacks considering he has them himself. Can't wait to read more. These two need a break. 

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Loved the chapter. I knew Charlie wouldn't lose his shit over that news. Bella will always be his little girl, no matter what test results say. I love this story and always look forward to more. 

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Loved the chapter and looking forward to reading more soon. 

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

Loved it!  And Aro's issues couldn't happen to a better guy!  He deserves to have his nuts cut off as cruel as he is. But, then who is the female version of Aro's father?????  Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Loved the chapter. Bella Nd Charlie definitely deserve their father daughter time. Edward is too sweet and sexy for words. I love me some FBI/Mobward too. Definitely one of my favorite "wards" to, right up there with Baseballward. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Bella is making amazing headway. She needs to count her wins and not her losses, look at where she started and where she is now. Edward is right, and he should know since he is in a similar situation. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one. 

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Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Poor Bella is going through Hell.  At least Edward understands what she is going through. See ya next time. 

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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

These two have been through Hell and back, and they are too stubborn for their own good. They really need to talk and maybe start doing therapy together so they can work out their individual and couple issues. Both are just so insecure and take everything so personally.  

I love the story and look forward to dacha dn every update. 

 

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Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

Loved it. Maybe the panic attack will wake her up and she'll realize she still needs others in her life. I mean, she did have them before the kidnapping and torture so why wouldn't she need them after?  Hard headed and stubborn don't blend well with admitting you need someone else's support. Trust me I know. One hard headed individual typing this review, I'm just able to admit it. ;)

Cant wait for the next one. 

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Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

I look forward to every update. Edward's testimony went well. Hopefully Bella's will go just as well. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us. 

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Loved it. Bella is making bigger strides toward her recovery than she realizes. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Loved it. Can't wait for the verdict and punishment for that monster. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

*both hands are raised and a party has started* loved it. He finally got what he deserved. See ya next time. 

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Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 195: Chapter 195

Loved it. I can't wait for more. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I absolutely love this story. I don't think I've wanted to kill so many characters in one story. I hope Phil finally kicks Renee to the curb. I hope that Edward gets his hands, either physically or figuratively through the legal system, on all the boys at Harvard and Charlie. They all need to be taught one hell of a lesson. I can't wait to read more. 

PS- good luck with the awards. I know I voted for you in very catagory. 



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved the chapter. Christmas was perfect and she so deserved it. The ball sounded amazing. Their first, and second, time was sweet and insanely hot. I can't wait for every one of the useless people who have hurt her gets their just desserts. I'm sure Edward can't wait to deliver it either. Love the story. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

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Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!  Gotta love Momma Bear Esme. So proud of Bella for standing up to her creeptastic dad and step sister. Sue really needs to get a backbone and leave Charlie. If Leah wants to stay there, let her make that decision. Somehow, if Sue left I think Edward and Bella would happily help her out. Loved the press conference. Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wonderful chapter!  Revenge wrapped up in a huge dose of karma is so sweet!  If I were one of your enemies, I'd learn to watch my back at all times!  ;)

I can't wait for the wedding and to find out who Phil is bringing to the wedding. See y'all next time. 



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it. Edward's pretty cool when he's not being a possessive, threatening ass. Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved the chapter. All aspects of their wedding were perfect for them. They didn't meet in the traditional sense and they shouldn't marry following all the traditions. My husband and I didn't follow the traditions either since we had every picture taken prior to the wedding starting. When we walked down the isle as husband and wife, we immediately left for the reception. We were the first ones there and treated all our guests as they entered. Several people thanked us for not making them stand around forever waiting on all the pictures to be taken. It took a great deal of the stress away for everyone. 

I can't wait for the epi. I hope it includes the honeymoon and a glimpse into their future. 

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great chapter. The boys are being protective and they should be, considering how he has acted around them. I wonder how things will be when the girls go to NY to dress shop?  Should be interesting. 

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I so didn't expect that. Great chapter and I can't wait for Bella and the boys to kick some Volturi ass and save Edward. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, Bella really let him have it there at the end. And he didn't pull his domineering crap with her. But I hate to see what happens when she sobers up. Somehow I think the shit will hit the fan. 

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Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Somehow I don't think Edward will like their bonding time activity. See ya next time. 

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved this one. It's cool to see a nice side of Edward and get another view of Bella. I can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I loved it!  Especially the part where Jessie and Edward are talking. See ya next time

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Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

And Assward has returned. I can't completely blame him for being pissed but he should listen to what she said at the end of the chapter. I love this story and I can't wait to see if the next chapter gives us more Assward or if Sweetward will return. See ya next time. 

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jealousy is definitely the cause of his Asshole disease. Gotta hate that green eyed monster makes him act like he needs to control every aspect of her life. Oh wait, he does that anyway. ;) hopefully Sweetward will come back before he kills her family. See y'all next time. Can't wait for more of this great story. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter. So glad the the ladies of her family behaved and they had a fun time while visiting. See y'all next time. 

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Somehow I just don't see their happiness lasting because they both get so jealous and possessive. I'm sure Edward's Rectal Cranial Inversion Affliction (Asshole Disease just in case you don't know the medical term;)) will come back with a vengeance before too long. I like these two. Yep, Edward's a complete ass most of the time but it's the only way he knows how to handle Bella and their situation. And we all put up with a lot for our families, so I can't really blame Bella for putting up with his crap. Love the story, love the chapter, love your attitude toward the "Guest" reviewers. See ya next time. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Loved it. Bad ass Bella is perfect for Mafia Edward. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. I love these two because they don't cut each other any slack. I've definitely changed my opinion of Edward, to some extent. At least Bella isn't cutting him any slack any more. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter. Esme is a hoot!  I love Bella and she is perfect for Edward. Laying Alice out was perfect and when she told her "we're not friends", that was so Bella and Edward all rolled into one. Can't wait to read more.