Reviews by sweetmel21
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

Love it.  Can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

Can't wait for Halloween.  And great chapter.  Phil is a douche and got what he deserved.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Can't wait to see what's next.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

It's so sad what Esme went through.  And poor Bella, I hope Edward doesn't truly lose his changes.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

She wants to do what she always wanted and I think if Edward truly loves her, he will let her do this.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I'm glad he let her go.  Best decision ever.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Sad to see it end but I'm glad everything happened good in the end.

Summary:

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Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21250
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Definitely enjoyed the story.  It's sad they couldn't have children of their own but they still got their happily ever after.

Last Wish by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?

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This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5743
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Very Merry

I am guessing Have You Ever comes next chappie.  But I am already liking the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

Ah what a great story with a happy ending.  I'm glad Rose was able to end up having kids.



Author's Response:

I know, I couldn't let there be know little Emmetts. Thank you

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 9907
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Definitely a beautiful story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

I know Poor Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I look forward to seeing how this story plays out.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

That's not a good sign.

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really love this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies

Ok.  I am not upset.  I mean I am totally on pins and needles to find out if it's true or not.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted

I'm glad he didn't really screw up.  And I hope they get things figured out.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

These kids have a long way to go and well I think with every writer things change at some point with there story.  But I'm all about going for the ride with you.  Can't wait to see how things work out.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13509
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: New Digs, New Day

Ok, I can't wait to see what happens here.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review!  I plan to have the next few chapters up later tonight hopefully!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Possession

I kind of have a bad feeling about Jude too.  And I just want to slap Jordan.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!  Jude is something else, but we shall find out more about him soon! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303550
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

LMAO



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Such a loving chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Weddings are always so much fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

That is so sad.  I hope Alice is ok.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Definitely different and definitely liked it.



Author's Response: fantastic!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Carlie are twins with mysterious powers.What's the fallout after they are abducted by a psychotic vampire? OOC! mostly canon pairings some OC's

NOW COMPLETE!

BEING BETA'D AS OF 9/19/10

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240263 Read Count: 18343
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 The Fork in the Road

Thoroughly enjoyed your story.



Author's Response: thank you! It was my first attempt at writing fanfiction. I learned a lot while doing it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Two years ago Edward was wrenched out of Bella's life, taking their kismet, or destiny, with him, but before he disappeared, they made a promise that changed their lives in ways they never imagined. AH/OOC/Language/Lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140799 Read Count: 8732
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Graduation/Epilogue

Ok.  I love all of your stories and I have slowly been working my way through them.  Cant wait to get started on the next one.



Author's Response: Oh, wow! I'm honored that you think so highly of my writing! Thank you thank you thank you!

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39. The Coven

Wowie.  Can't wait to see what is next.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Aw, I'm sad to see this coming to an end.



Author's Response:

Me too. It's been a long road. I hope you enjoy the epilogue and who knows maybe a sequel down the road. Ya never know!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41. Epilogue

I'm sad to see it end but I'm glad they ended up getting back together,

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

This is a beautiful story, I have thoroughly enjoyed it thus far.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Such a sweet chapter.  I'm a bit nervous about next chapter though.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Stuff like that is so sad.  I am glad Bella finally talked to Edward about it though.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

It was beautiful.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Such a sweet chapter.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a beautiful chapter.  I can't wait to see the epilogue.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

What a beautiful ending to such a lovely story.  I truly enjoyed it.

The Affair by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Thanks to M81170 for the great banner.

Bella is married to her favorite Cullen but what happens when his past changes her future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57358 Read Count: 17053
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Truly loved this story.  I'm glad it all worked out in the end.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

I am really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it, this story has really found a home here!

Summary:

The night of Bella's high school graduation she lost the 2 most important men in her life. Now 6 years later she has to decide between letting the one who left her behind by choice back in, or losing him forever. But can she ever trust him again?

 

*On hiatus till futher notice but will be finished, writers block sucks*


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29643 Read Count: 4865
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 31 May 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Definitely interested to see the why to what led to all this mess in the first place.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok, well I don't feel as bad about what Edward did, but they should have came clean right then.  It just ruined everything.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well at least the truth is about to come out.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wowie.  That's a lot to take in.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is such a lovely story.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I'll update soon dont worry! :D

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think was a great addition to the story.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aren't these kids sweet.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I probably would have acted just like Bella for that.  I hate scary.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

I'm interested to know, how long Edward knew.  Was it just when he thought he overheard her say his name or before.  And if before was it just because he wanted to get even with his father.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

What a mess they are all in.  I really want to kick Edward in the head.  I had a feeling he was using Bella.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I'd listen to what he has to say.  Could be interesting.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Wow I can't believe it's almost over.  Great chapter though.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Totally love the ending.  I am going to miss the story though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20503
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

I truly enjoyed your story and I look forward to more of your work.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  It was nice of you to review even after the story was finished.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BACKSTORY

No problem.  I feel like I want to let author's of completed stories know that I read their story and what I thought.  Though I don't say a whole lot.  They all deserve recognition for hard work.



Author's Response:

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You

I could just kill him.  I mean really.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity

What a selfish jerk.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Friends

He is obviously going to f it up again, but he is headed in the right direction for now.  And I just love Jasper.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter.  I'm a bit behind but I'll catch up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Story Banner

This story takes place after Bella Swan graduates from Forks High School. She has been trying to move on from her heart wrenching break-up with Edward Cullen when he left her behind to go to Dartmouth. She has been living her life trying to move past the memories of him - her one true love -ever since.

Then that fateful night at the reunion, she sees him in the first time in ten years and her life is turned upside down when she must choose between the one man she has always loved, and her husband that she is devoted to.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114042 Read Count: 16165
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2011
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning (JPOV)

Well that should make things easy unless Edward is attached to someone new and doesn't have feelings for Bella anymore.  Or if Nessie is attached.

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Brothers in Arms

I'm definitely nervous about this fight.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - It all comes tumbling down

Wow.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath

It was a beautiful story and I really enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

How sad.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

Oh crap.  That doesn't bode well.

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow.  I am definitely enjoying this story.  Look forward to more.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well I'm a tad confused and I know I would guess wrong answering those questions.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Id like the answers to those questions, most definitely but mostly why he won't change her.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

I think he wants to get hitched.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Within Temptation

Oh boy what a cliffie.  Can't wait till next time.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She was born special and had a destiny that could change the world.  She is the Keeper! He will be the Overseer!  Together they try to save the Cullen's and restore the balance.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64270 Read Count: 26857
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Really enjoyed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading _ Beth

Insecurities by JamesRamsey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

insecurities

Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be safe

 

My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there.  5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Award


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 185033
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 May 2011
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am really enjoying this story.  Can't wait for more.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Poor Edward.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

Well I am glad he agreed to let her take care of him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

I'd sure like a preview.  This last chapter has me all confused.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  Here is a preview:

 

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“Wh-Where are we?”  I opened my eyes slowly and took in my surroundings.  We were in another hotel, this time a classy one.  The bed was a queen-size and smelled of clean sheets.  There was a couch in the corner and the television was facing it.  There was a figure standing in front of the window.

“Alaska,” the soft voice said.  I smiled.  Jasper had said he was going to take me to Iceland with a few stops on the way.  I asked why Iceland and he replied simply “I’ve always wanted to go there.”

“That’s nice,” I replied.  He moved from his spot and stood in front of me.  His cool hand brushed against my forehead gently.  Since we left, I’ve gotten to know Jasper better.  He really is wonderful and has been great to me.  And I can’t stop looking at him.  I’ve seen him without his shirt twice.  Nice, firm abs, toned arms and low-slung pants that only enhance my imagination.

I closed my eyes.  I have to stop thinking this way.  It’s Jasper.  Alice’s Jasper.  She would kill me if she knew I was having sexual thoughts about her husband.  Not to mention it would destroy Edward.  Edward.  I didn’t know if he was safe or even alive.  Jasper told me very little about what happened.  I would do whatever it took to keep Edward safe, even if that meant being changed.

“Are you okay?” he asked quietly.  He was still stroking my forehead but saw my eyes were closed.  I opened them and nodded.  He smiled.  “Lie with me?” I asked.

He did.  He was very cautious, very hesitant.  He slowly removed his hand and unbuttoned his shirt.  His muscles stretched his tee shirt tight against him and he crawled into bed next to me.  After a moment, he put an arm around me.

I snuggled back into his chest.  I craved contact.  We had been gone eight weeks and I was desperate for a man’s touch.  I shouldn’t be thinking of him this way, but I couldn’t help it.  I knew he was attractive, but he had never held so much desire in me as he did now.  I wanted him.  All of him.

I sighed.  He shifted so he was hovering over me, his weight on one arm.  I knew that wasn’t painful at all for him, being the vampire that he is.  I slowly brought my hand up, careful to not make any sudden moves, and ran it down his arm, feeling his skin warm at my touch.  His eyes, consistently black these days, closed and he moaned softly.

“That feels amazing,” he whispered.  I continued the movement.  He opened his eyes.  The blackness was still there, of course, but something else as well.  They were full of depth, passion.  Desire.  I could only stare into the black void.  I was lost, mesmerized by the passion I saw there, the beauty.  I could not look away.  Nor did I want to.

Then, very gently, he lowered his lips to mine.  

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

 stories/8916/images/My_Heart's_Desire.jpg


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ya I kind of do.  I wonder why the sudden interest in Bella.



Author's Response:

Hi sweetmel!  Thanks for reading.  Here is a preview of an upcoming chapter:

 

“I can’t see anything past you, dog,” Alice said condescendingly to Jacob.  Jacob just growled at her.  I pinched the bridge of my nose.  We were supposed to be finding Bella and they could not stop fighting. 

“Stop,” I said.  They looked at me.  “Your constant bickering is not helping in the least to find Bella and Jasper.  We need to work together.  If you can’t do that,” I said looking at the wolf in front of me, “then you will have to leave.”

Okay, Jacob’s thoughts said.  I sighed.  I couldn’t believe we had the wolves helping us.  You know Jacob is in love with her.  He probably figures that if he can find her before you do, he can prove to be the better competitor for her affections.  I’m sure he would love to fight me, to fight all of us, but that would have to come later.  Right now, the woman I loved more than anything was missing and my backstabbing brother had her. 

When we find her, I will make that slut pay for stealing Jazz.  I growled at Alice.  She turned to me, eyes wide.  She hadn’t meant for that thought to slip out.  “I’m sorry, Edward.”  I narrowed my eyes at her.  “Bella is not a slut.  She had a rocky past, yes, but that does not make her a bad person.  And I don’t know what happened that made Jasper betray us like this, but there has to be an explanation.  He loved you, Alice.  He was loyal to the family.  Why would he suddenly turn?”

She shrugged.  “It doesn’t surprise me, Edward.  I mean, really, she slept with that…thing,” she pointed at Jacob.  He growled again.  “I’m surprised she didn’t go after the whole family as soon as we came back.  You know, in retaliation?”

I lunged at Alice and knocked her to the ground.  She kicked me off and jumped up.  I started to run at her and she held her hand up.  “You see?  This is what she wants, what Jazz wants.  They want us fighting so that we won’t find them.”  I stopped.  It made sense.  Running my hand through my hair, I looked down at the ground.

“I’m sorry, Alice.”

She smiled.  “I’m sorry, too.  I shouldn’t be blaming Bella, my sister, for Jazz’s actions.  He’s perfectly capable of saying ‘no.’”

I still had a hard time believing that she was gone and that Jasper was responsible.  Why would he do it?  He was a Cullen as much as the rest of us.  Why would he betray those that loved him?  It made no sense!

As if Jacob could hear me, his thoughts invaded my mind.  Maybe he doesn’t know you’re alive.  Maybe he thinks you’re dead and he feels like he is the only one who can protect Bella.  I hadn’t thought about that.

“That’s a good point, Jacob,” I said patting his furry head.  He licked my hand.  I laughed.

“What’s a good point?” Alice asked.  I explained what Jacob was thinking.  She cocked her head to the side for a moment in thought.  “That would make sense.  But why would he suddenly want to sleep with her?  Or her with him?  They have never shown interest like that before.  Besides,” she stopped for a second and glanced at Jacob.  “You and I both know he wasn’t very good with his control.”

It was true.  The whole reason I had left in the first place was because Jazz had tried attacking her at her birthday party when she got a paper cut.  Could he really have gained that much control?

“Stranger things have happened,” I said.

We came upon a run-down building that Alice had seen in a vision.  I took a deep breath and froze.

“Smell that?” I asked, turning to her.  Her nose wrinkled.  “Yes.  Like a dying vampire.”

Suddenly we heard maniacal laughter.  Victoria, I thought.  We ran towards the front door, Jacob breaking away and heading for the back.

It was unlocked.  We walked in and were assaulted by two scents.  One was definitely Victoria.  The other was still that dying vampire smell.  We followed it until we found some steps leading to a basement.  There was a steel door at the bottom. 

I charged the door.  It didn’t budge.  I charged again.  Nothing.  After the fourth time, the door fell off.  I somersaulted across it and immediately sprang into my crouching position.  It was the one used when on the defense. 

Alice drew in a sharp breath.  I followed her gaze.  My jaw dropped when I saw it.   

 

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

intense



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I hope to get chapter 4 up soon.  :)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Jasper.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!

 

Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: MY UNHAPPY ENDING

He totally has to be hearing Maria.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Stay tuned to find out...

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: RUN DOWN

I will definitely stay tuned.  I'm excited for what is coming next.



Author's Response:

:D Thanks.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: UNEXPECTED VISITOR

Take you time.  I will be here waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: CAUGHT

Still loving the story.  Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  More will come...eventually!  :)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: KISS

Great chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: VOLTURI

Wow.  That kind of kicked butt.  Bella rocks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

memory


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It's so sad that she can't remember.



Author's Response:

I know :( thanks :)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL.  Love her last thought.  I hope she can get her leg moving again.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I probably would hold out on telling her too, but I dont know.



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh boy.



Author's Response:

THANKS:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

how sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh Jessica why must you start trouble.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Those boys are so silly and sweet.



Author's Response:

THanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well I am happy she remembers but Bella can be one hell of a firecracker.



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes she is:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

How sweet. 

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aw, she should talk to them.  It won't do her any good.



Author's Response:

I know but she so stubborn!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella, always trying to take everything on herself.



Author's Response:

I know,thanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh poor Angela.



Author's Response:

I know :(

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh
Shoot.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Poor kids, they can never catch a break.



Author's Response:

I know:( thanks!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay for happy times.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

How exciting.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)