[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
Damn, didn't see that coming. Great twist.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm thinking IM is a toy or a name for Edward. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love it can't wait for more
Date: 20 Apr 2014 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Really loving this story......so wNna know who miss honey is!!! Xx
Date: 20 Apr 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
ARE THEY GOING TO HAVE SEX SOON?????????
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
I look forward to all your updates...I love your story and how you are building it up without giving in too quickly. Well done!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Liked all the new info into understanding Bella a bit more. I should probably be able to guess what IM is but I can't think right now. I always use BOB, battery operated boyfriend, lol. Now I wonder about Cher and if that was Sue because of her long, straight dk. brown hair. I adore all the time they're all gettting together. Edward is really, really smitten. wow. thanx ;o)
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Is the nickname Hawk from the tv show Spenser: For Hire??? That would be FUCK AWESOME if it was!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 19 Apr 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I bet IM is a toy. i really like this, i find it really interesting. cant wait for more :)
Date: 19 Apr 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hawk and Cher have to be nicknames too? I hope the next chapter still has them in bed without any children interruptions......
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe that Mike is married and still said that Bella is His in that note until he is done with her! Edward needs to just get it over with and tell her what it is that he thinks he is starting to feel for her. Bella needs to do the same and they need to do it soon. The Mike situation is getting crazy and complicated. It might help them realize that they are better together than apart if they are able to be completely honest and trust eachother completely with anything. They may be able to handle the Mike and Jacob situation easier together. Bella has shown that she is good at hacking so maybe she can help Edward in more than the way of being the kids nanny.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can't believe that Mike says that Bella is his until he is done with her! Edward needs to just get it over with and tell her how he really feels. Bella needs to do the same and they need to do it soon.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
IM is her battiery operated friend ;) She has been through a lot in her young life.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Was Cher a blood relative to Bella?
The bank robbery was a coincidental setting, right? The gunmen/bomber didn't seek her out, did they?
Bella keeps referencing Starks inept security and safety measures, will he ask her explain that in greater detail? His security detail needs help!
The kids didn't have any trouble picking up on their father's slip of the tongue. Haha.
Stark needs to stick to the words he spoke to his kids about marriage and sleeping with a woman. It's a matter of trusting the person they respect and not damaging that precious connection.
Cullen mimicking his father was adorable.
Bella's story only explained one of her scars from a bullet. When will the next story unfold?
Date: 19 Apr 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so loving this story!! You have hooked :D
Date: 19 Apr 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
I've never read as slowly as I did just now-- I didn't want the chapter to be over!! Please please please update ASAP! I love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
HAPPY EASTER!!!! ( MAYBE THE EASTER BUNNY WILL BE GOOD TO US AND LEAVE US SOMETHING SWEET TO READ TOMORROW HMMMM?????????????????
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow she is really letting him in but what is the big secret that she thinks will push Edward away and when will we find out who the people she keeps hidden are and damn how will Edward react when Bella tells him what IM is hehehehe update soon
Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love waking up and finding an update in my in box. I get up, get my coffe and read ;) thanks for the extra chapter it made my morning!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Who is Hawk and Who is Cher? Will they be in it any more? Will we ever find out their real names? Is IM instant male or I'm a coming or intimate massager? Also I'm assuming that it's a vibrator of some variety.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow rough story. Glad they had fun at dinner though. IM , I'm guessing is a new name for BOB, battery operated boyfriend?
Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
IM has to be a toy, or maybe her hand. Love that they're getting closer and more honest with each other. Love what Cullen said about girls having cooties. So cute! Who is she that she has better security than he does? Great mystery here and I'm loving that you're keeping us guessing and in the dark!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
The boss of the gang in the bank robbery are the ones looking for Bella - revenge. But Edward will protect her.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the bonus;)
Hm... I think IM is either a vibrator or just I'm, but I'd guess it would be the first one;)
They had a great time out, I think. I'm impressed that she didn't freak as he called her his girlfriend infront of the kids! But I can understand that him telling her she's perfect for him, that she couldn't stand it without getting spooked;)
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
My guess is that IM is short for "Internal Management" - her personal sex toy? I can't see Bella letting anyone get that close to her. Also, knowing what we know about her past now, I have a feeling that Bella is sure anyone she becomes close to and loves will die. It's an awfully sad and lonely way to live! Again, this story is stunning! Edward's explanation of what he wants here was lovingly sexy. Perfect!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't remember is Hawk a nickname we have been given yet? Or is it another mystery person?
-Kate
Author's Response:
Hawk is a nick name, that has yet to be revealed, and I bet it is not yet in the list is it??? Well double damn. I will fix that with tomorrow's post. I would post another right now and clairify, but I don't have hte next chapter set yet and I am leaving to on a road trip to have a party in honor of my cousin's death. He didn't want no sad funeral stuff and tonight is his party, so I'm off to travel down the road. YAY!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
It's Jasper's job to be suspicious. That makes complete sense to me. He wouldn't be doing his job right if he wasn't. Imagine what Bella and Peabody could accomplish together - computer wise! I keep coming back to her over the top computer and electronic skills. Did she learn that from her Dad and then Guido and Miss Honey? Is that why Black both wants and fears her? Marvelously engaging mystery/ romance you have here!! I adore it!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Guido ans Miss Honey are closer to Edward's family than Anyone would have thought about. Part of Jasper's concern must be related to how much he has missed when it comes to getting information. Bella and Edward know they can trust each other, but that doesn't mean that those around them agree, except the kids.
i wonder what will Aro have to say about being blamed for Bella's hit. I can't wait to find out what Bella is going to do with the stuff she bought.
i have a question, Bella said she needed a job, but she goes and soends a lot in equipment and has state of the art things at her place, so does her need to work co es from having to stay busy rather than needing the income?
Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
So ehow, Aro is on Edward's side when it comes to Bella. That has to mean a lot to the whole family.
i wonder who has a secret, Jessica or Mrs. Wattles?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Will Bella just lay it all out for Jasper to ease his fears? She can even assist him with his computer skills. Though that might make him just as uneasy since she is far more adept than he. Haha
I'm presuming that Jessica was killed by her twin, Jane. Thanks for confirming Mikey's employment with the Blacks.
Now that Edward's identity was revealed, will Bella finally give more details about her past?
Has Aro been secretly protecting Bella with the aid of Miss Honey and Guido? Who by the way are very well disguised in this story. (frustration hits me hard, pout) Could this be the reason that Jasper received no information from Aro on Miss Swan?
I'm also presuming that Charlie was a Federal Agent.
Bella needs Edward's connections and Edward needs Bella's skills and expertise. Not to mention her body, Haha. Her observation skills may get Edward's team in trouble, hehe. We all know Cassie and Cullen will benefit from her presence.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, there was a lot of info in this chapter. First, for Edward being the boss I don't like the way Jasper seems to be dismissive of that fact. Yeah, he's suppose to protect Edward but stopping him and slamming the door, uh, NO. I'm glad that Bella is revealing more to Edward too. It will help him trust her more for sure. Because he's sure getting closer to her. I figured Mike worked for the mob and now it explains how he quoted what he told Edward about Bella supposedly having a boyfriend. Jacob was told that by Bella so how could Mike have known........yeah. thanx ;o)
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
I WANT LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it! Can't wait to meet or figure out who Dora is keep up the good work
Date: 19 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, lots if info. Glad they're sharing. So what a low life who would beat up an old lady. I guess no more is need to be said about that character except maybe carma will provide a just reward.
I was surprised Stark told her about breaking the guys fingers. I look forward to learning more.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
A LOT of information in this chapter. Glad that Edward's family didn't have anything to do with her father's death. Does Jacob know who Bella really is? Loving this story.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Does Roscoe
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
At the start I was a little lost then I realized the it was EPOV. This is an amazing story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this story and all the mystery it's very interesting and I love all the names Bella gives to people.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving that Edward and Bella are talking to each other. And Jasper, he just needs to chill out. And I have a feeling Edward is going to tell him the exact same thing as well.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward needs to know more about Bella and he is so surprised as to how much she knows about him and knows that someone is trying to set them up. I wonderwho.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
I really like the whole 'Nicknaming everybody' thing ;)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am glad she was able to open up to Stark. I am glad she is trusting him.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm very curious how Bella has such prior knowledge about security than Jasper, as she calls her new bought items shit when Edward thinks it's great stuff...
Also I start the guess that maybe Ms. Honey and Guido are Dora, as you hinted out before Dora hasn't have to be one person only... And it would fit with Bella knowing Aro wasn't behind the hit to her father or him getting info about her too...
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
That rat bastard Jacob beat up an old lady. Hope Edward gets him good and Mike too.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved how this chapter cleared up a LOT of what I had been wondering about. I don't think Bella is out to get revenge on the Masen's. She openly came out to Edward with the false information she had been fed. It is as if someone wants her to think the Masens killed her dad. I was right about Marmaduke, the big dumb dog, being Jacob Black. Hah! Apt description! I'm not sure why Jasper still doesn't trust Bella, maybe it's his job to be extremely careful with, and protective of, Edward. Very enjoyable story, this is....
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
oooh lots of good info. B needs to talk to Aro and tell him what she knows too. Ugh Knew mike was dirty but jane too. Double EWWWW
Date: 18 Apr 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella isn't stupid, she doesn't believe that Aro called the hit on her father. I think once Bella has revealed all about herself Jasper will relax and trust her a little more. Can't wait to hear why they would put a hit on Bell. Could it be possible that she has a genius IQ/photographic memory abd has committed to memory information re whatever 'case' her father was working on that caused his death?
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! More please. !?! I sound like Oliver Twist.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is so good! Its nice that Bella is finally opening up about who she really is.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well theres more about her past......was it the blacks?
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
There was a lot of info. I still can't piece everything together, Lol. She told him about his shit security and now we know why she is so good. Her Dad taught her/she is gifted since he did work for the gov top security.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow a ton of info and Jasper is just doing what he is supposed to. I'm glad she is letting him in and they are sharing info. Oh wow Jessica and Jane and Mike that was an awesome twist.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
the blacks are involved in her father somehow
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved this chapter!! Hell I love every chapter!! Lol So Jessica and Jane are twins?? Who would have ever thought that!!! Lol and Mike & Jane are working for the Black’s!!! Did William Black kill Charlie?? hmmmm Bella is a smart cookie so she knows Stark’s family didn’t have anything to do with it. So Guido and Miss Honey are they Eleazar and Carmen??? Post more!!! lol
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Thank you for the bonus chapter!!
Did Charlie work with Dora?
Harry Clearwater = Dora? Aka Guido?
The Black family probably ordered the hit on Charlie and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
MY THOUGHTS ARE...... I TRUST YOUR MAGIC AND LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving this story so much! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
more information so thanks. Good chapter
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I promise I'm not blowing sunshine up your ass when I say this. I can see this being a movie. It's got all the right elements-danger, UST (so far), mysterious assholes, some cute kids who might get caught in the crossfire, a dirty cop, etc. Am I right?
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love the Roscoe name.. fits him.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
wonderfully written and very intriguing. Loving reading your work.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
It will be interesting to see Bella school Jasper on better cyber protection. Also, Guido or miss honey must have some link to Aro because she stated she wouldn't trust them if she had found out it was Aro. And with Dora not returning any info about Bella that would mean that Dora is someone on the inside with her. Also, where she learned her cyber skills from.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it well we got information but still don't know who killed Charlie and is still after Bella will they also put a stop to Mike and the Blacks update soon
Date: 18 Apr 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really love this!! :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
This is getting really interesting. I have half a mind to put reading on hold so I can read it all at once beacause I am really impatient. But cant resist the update :P
Please update soon :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am enjoying this story so much.....really hanging out for the next update :)
Date: 18 Apr 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
So addictive.....hoping you update more over the Easter hol's xxxxx
Date: 18 Apr 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
Mysteriouser and mysteriouser! Edward is obviously not threatened by what may be in Bellas past, rather he fears either he or his family may be the cause ( in-directly ) of what has caused such pain for her and also Bella is obviously comfortable with revealing her story to Edward, does she hope that he may her best chance of surving whoever is after her? Maybe it's revealing who is after her and why that is what Bella is most worried about. Didn't think of Bella possibly being in the witness protection program hhmmm - food for thought! Could 'Dora' unwittingly know Guido and Miss Honey but not the connection with Bella? I'm loving this story and therefore need more updates.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE IT! MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEMONS SOON PLZ I BEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Guido is Dora. This story just keeps getting better and 2 updates within one day is awesome!! Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 Apr 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really love this story and Bella and her nicknames are too funny.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
Think you so much for addressing every one of my questions. Even if the answers were vague or non-existent. Haha. I understand why.
I like your astute Esme.
Ok, more questions.........
How can Mike spend so much time focusing on Bella if he is a detective? Wouldn't his rookie partner question his motives?
Was Charlie a gun for hire?
If Bella knows Edward is a mob boss, why does she feel her presence would bring him more danger? He has levels of protection around him and his legitimate business.
Is Bella a computer programmer or a hacker? She sound like a genius in this area.
Will Bella tell Edward she is capable of computer espionage and she would make a great addition to his illegal business?
Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love it!!! Keep the chapters coming!! Oh and I can't stand Roscoe lollol
Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
So much fun. I think Stark is right, somehow his family hurt Bella. But, I also think she knows he is the mob boss.
Date: 18 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Getting to know you. Sweet
Date: 18 Apr 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
ohhhh my god this keeps getting better and better!!! I´m really hooked to this story!!! The plot thickens!! Thank you so much for updating. I am left in suspense every new chapter comes out!!! It´s sooooo goood!!!!