Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Absolutely loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it!!!!!!!!!! Who is this sanctimonious french bitch that is trying to become Edward's queen?? Bella will be the only queen for Edward!!!!! Great Chapter. Please update soon for I love this story and would like to see them get married in court like Alice and Jasper.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Marvelous! Your use of letters back and forth is both affecting and touching. Bella's sadness at seeing butterflies now was especially heartbreaking! Kudos! I look forward to Bella at court.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow oh wow :P
Soo desperate for the next chapter, I was already imagining him going back to Devonshire for her
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm trying to devide who is more trapped here. I feel for both of them.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
I can't wait for Bella and Edward to reunite.
Update again soon please. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is king, why not declare Bella is to be his wife during court? If he made an official announcement, how could she decline him? Alice and Jasper's wedding would be the perfect atmosphere to make an announcement.
He needs to send the princess of France packing... soon.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow what will Edward do who will he choose will he find his way and marry Bella and not go to war or will he try to make her his mistress update soon
Date: 06 Feb 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Intense...very intense...
Date: 05 Feb 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so excited to tell Lady Rosalie! She will have to bow to the queen!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank God, she finally did the right thing. She would never be truly happy with Jacob. Who wants to marry their "brother"? She will have passion with Edward. Once you have experienced real love, nothing else will do.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
yes !!waiting for an update..:)
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh lord, can Bella handle being queen? Or should I be asking if court can handle Bella.
Either way can't wait to see what happens!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love it!
Can't wait to read more.
Wonder how princess Rosalie will react to the news?
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Can't wait to press next.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm enjoying the steady guidance that Jasper has to offer his king. The butterflies were a nice touch.
Does Emmett speak his own thoughts or are they a reflection of his wife's disdain for Lady Swan?
What will Lord Swan think of his daughter catching the eye of his King?
Jacob is a very gracious friend.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next chaztper
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Perfect he new the perfect gift to prove he loves her. I am so happy she said yes. Jacob is a good friend he sees that she and Edward have feelings for each other.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my romantic Ed!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yay!!! She said yes! Finally.....we can get these two starting their relationship!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG that was such a great chapter :) I love the butterflies filling her room...she finally said yes but I'm anxious to see how her father will react to the news.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Rose is really getting on my nerves. Snot. Yey she said yes to E
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love it will her father give his blessing
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes yes yes!!' Yay! So happy! However, now in am at the end for now.....not fun! I just love period pieces. Update soon!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
It's beautiful! Say yes already! Great writing! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Heck yes! Great one on one time with Edward and isabella! Woohoo!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it as always :)
Date: 02 Feb 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Happy Happy day
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh thank God. I was so worried she was going to become engaged to Jacob. Can I please smack Rosalie. I want the King to know what she said.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh loved it please update asap
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
finally!! this was a good chapter. Don't take too long updating please!!!! I love it! Can't wait to read about the wedding and their wedding night!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yah! And her first action as queen should be to tell rosalie OFF WITH YOUR HEAD, BITCH!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Will he go to Jarrod? Of course, she wouldn't be happy with Jacob.
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
:-) Finally! And wow, a Jacob I don't have to hate!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yes, indeed she said Yes to being his wife! Woot Woot
Date: 02 Feb 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter! I do love that the winning of Bella's heart is in butterflies and not jewels. Edward will always know that the woman can't be bought! Once word leaks out of their betrothal, the fire is sure to get a rise out of everyone! Thank you for making your story such a joy to experience!
Date: 01 Feb 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love this!!!!!!!!!! Please update asap :]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
I just want to shake her & make her say "YES"
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
The Kings words cut deep into Isabella's heart and mind.
King Edward has already made sweeping changes to his ruling style because of this desire to be better for his future wife.
Will Emmett and Jasper aid the King in swaying Lord Swan's thoughts on Isabella's intended husband?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
If it were Emmett as King I sure as hell would say yes, lol. Love the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is crazy not to say yes. She will be able to do so much more for her people as Queen. Plus she will get to love the most handsome man ever. She needs to stop fooling herself.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! I have a feeling Jacob is going to be purposing. She should have just said yes. Update again soon please.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! Thanks ;)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoying your writing
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
jacob, pansy ... really
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Everyone in my house has been sick this week, including me, and when we begin to recover I open my IPad to find your update!! You made my week! Something tells me Isabella's father will not be thrilled to find the King ensconced in his home. Nor will he be. Happy with her behavior! We won't even begin with Jacob! The next 24 hours should be very enlightening! I adored your update! Thank you!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
She has to say Yes it is good her dad showed up before they could go any farther.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
waiting for an update...:)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
great Chapter But i Want More please!!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Man Edward was so close to getting a yes !!! Now he may have to use his power as King to get it.
i love all the pics :)
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow E is relentless ain't he. Good doing with the sleezy man who wanted the land to himself. Sadly it was the way of the times.
Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy...what is dear old daddy going to say? Jacob? Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
What rotten timing for them to return. She needs to listen to Edwards wise words.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Anxious for next chapter!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks! I am in ;)
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lol, I'm also#TeamFrancis (nooooo poor Francis yesterday) but I like Torrance Coombs more than Toby Regbo... is that weird?
What aspects of your story will be related to the show? Is it at all based on the show?
And would you by happy chance also watch the vampire diaries or any other CW shows? Or do you watch the Canadian channel M3 or something that airs reign on Wednesdays?
Date: 24 Jan 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it they are going to see him as the king when they come and find out that he is a good king. Bella is falling for him and he is making sure she knows what he wants
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Please write more.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Historically or geographically accurate is a small indiscretion I'm willing to over look if the characters can show development. Which you are achieving quite nicely.
Lady Swan and her cloaked King make a good team. How long before Isabella realizes she is needed in multiple ways by her King? She is the connection to the land and its people.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
This story is turning out to be very interesting. I would love to see what happens next.
Do you by any chance watch the tv show reign? I know your cover art and some pix are from the show but do you actually watch it?
Author's Response:
Yes i watch it and I love it! #TeamFrancis
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
This young lady of the northern lands is inspiring to read. As she tends to her people.
The young King should be in awe of her gentle yet firm guiding ways. She will be a great asset to his kingdom.
Will Emmett be able to keep this information from his wife?
I think Lady Alice and Jasper are co-conspirators in the hopes of their King finding a match in Lady Swan!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I do believe the young King Edward is about to get another lesson in earning the love of his people! Hopefully Uncle Carlisle can bring a sense of balance back into type kings head.
Will the King get a chance to watch Lady Swan interact with the serfs of her father's land; taking care of their needs in any fashion.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another Royal using the position to take what is not theirs. I hope Lady Swan gives merry chase as the King seeks to find reason in his pursuit.
At what point will he take her words about his kingdom to heart?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thoroughly enjoy historical fiction!
I'm very curious as to how Lady Swan will react to his majesty riding along in the early morning. Will she attempt to lose him in the woods as well?
How old is Lady Swan?
Date: 24 Jan 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I find this story as beguiling as the King finds Lady Isabella. When I see it in my inbox I can hardly contain my excitement over a new chapter. This chapter is wonderful in portraying the changes in Edward's view of the country he rules. I look forward to the next installment.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story, so very good
Date: 23 Jan 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think this story is great! It doesn't matter if the location is correct that is why this is fanfiction!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving it!! please update soon!! <3
Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh Edward. Sadly the truth sometimes hurts.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
ooh B is in over her head I think. Rose is going to have a cow when she finds out.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh Go Bella. Loving her giving as good as she gets. Rose is annoying as always
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love B all angry and outspoken.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
keep up the good work, i really like the story so far, i love how bella is in this story and i'm curious to see what kind of king edward is going to be
Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
your doing a great job your writing flows with a easyness
Date: 23 Jan 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
this story is damn interesting...waiting for an update...:)
Date: 23 Jan 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
I do love the verbal sparring that you give us! It's intelligent, witty, and yet tests the soul. Thank you for all the care you take in creating your characters!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tomorrow will be interesting when they see he's the king.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Lol you said it all I know about Devonshire is that it was mentioned in the book pride and prejudice and thats my book! Keep on writing and should you change from north to south to west to anrtica I shall follow along happily knowing its just a story that's really well written.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait to see if the people go update soon