[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm trying to find the logic in Isabella's departure. I understand her need to keep HRH William Edward Trenton Cullen a secret from those that desire to ascend the throne but to vacate her position while the King is away at war seems counter intuitive.
Rosalie's treason needs to be dealt with before the King returns.
Will Jacob fund himself caring for the future King?
I look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
King Edward, the makings of a great leader and example for all to follow. Now and in the future.
Is Rosalie behind Emmett's push to rule his brother's kingdom?
Who was this intruder?
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my word......shit's bout to hit the fan!!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
poor Bella. She thought she could trust Rose and Emmett
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
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Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Fabulous! I love angst ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh I wish that Bella would have ay least confided in Alice, and I hope Edward is wise enough to understand why Bella left....and ends the war soon, i'm suspecting that maybe Emmet isn´t as into getting the crown as is Rosalie and her father...well at least I´m hoping
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
You like rose as the bad guy dont you!? Interesting twist
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hmm. Something is up? Who wants Bella gone?
Date: 23 Sep 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thus far,
BRILLIANT!
i hope and wish Lady Swan continue to excel
and not succumb to any maliciousness.
instead, i hope she counters any and every
treacherous acts against her.
and i hope that the court sees all of the viciousness against
her and then watch her rise above all....i hope all of England
Scotland and Ireland love her for it...
Love this thus far...hope you decide to finish this piece
since although i am not yet to the end of this update, i can
already tell we will not be satisfied until you do....
thank you....
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMFG..... PLEASE TELL ME MORE IS ON THE WAY!!!!WHO IS WITH BELLA?!?!?!?!? WHAT OF THE AVALANCHE? PLEASE TELL ME THEY MAKE IT THROUGH!!!! SOON PLEASE!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow! I just found your stories and the are amazing. I hope you continue and thank you so much for sharing. I love the way you write and what a cliffy you have left this story!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward and Isabella's kingdom is in jeopardy of being over-whelmed by outside forces. How will that survive?
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward better dig out from under the snow and do what he has to do to get back home to Bella and the baby.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
hey
my gosh, what will happen to them ??
Is it James who has kidnapped Bella ?!
what will happen to Edward ?!
I really hope that it will be a Happy-Ending... okay, I know that all the drama will kome now, but I really don't have to like it, do I ?!
bye
Lil
Date: 16 Jul 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am going to amazon right now to get my copy! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh wow who got to Bella and will Edward servive the avalanche update soon and good luck on the book
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
So he is dead? WTH!
Date: 15 Jul 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks? I am so nervous!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
loving this. Looking forward to reading Ruthless People
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
You are killing me!!!! WHo is the evil peeping tom in the bath I wonder. Uh oh Avalanche.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Now there's a cliffhanger! In more ways than one! My mind is going a mile a minute trying to figure out who is with Bella! I look forward to more and also congratulate you on your book release!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Dramatic for both of them. Wonder who the informer is. Can't wait to buy an ebook.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am very much loving this story, but the thee and thou are drving me bonkers lol!!! you do know they spoke as well as we do now back them right? No matter it's awesome anyway!
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wonderful! It seems they both have a difficult task ahead! You bring home the pain of separation yet knowledge of duty beautifully! I'm glad E met is there for her. Perhaps he can help her know her Edward better. Thank you!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
She is pregnant yeah!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks! I love this story ;)
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
She is going to have a baby and now he has to leave for war not good for the baby so sad he needs to come back soon
Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
The queen is a frisky little thing she knows how to get his mind off war lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
loved his speech. Bella is very strong
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope Edward will be safe and returns to her with the ring!!! Good chapter. PLEASE for the love of God, could you update sooner?!!! There are a lot of people waiting to read your story, and us waiting for nearly one month for just one chapter is really frustrating. So I'm asking nicely, may you PLEASE be updating sooner?!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yes, please keep them all safe!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another amazing chapter!
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great speech. Glad B talked him out of the one the "council" wrote. Morons.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh yes, long live King Edward
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
A very touching and emotional chapter. Hope she has no need to use the secrect passage.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
Isabella has a unique way of inspiring her king. Great speech!
Of course the queen would become pregnant during the threat of war. I hope this information will not hinder the king's ability to focus. Emmett is the best choice in keeping the queen and heir safe.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
some of your chapters like this one do not show up in the dark vision mode. I have vision problems and can not easily reat black letters on white so I use white letters on black in the dark vision. I am not sure if you post your chapters with black letters of some other color, or even it that could be the problem. I really like the story and want to keep reading it. Could you please as the tech support why the dark vision does not work? It is only some of the chapters so I dont know what you do differently if anythin. Thank You for you time writing _ Xanath
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful! I can't help but wonder though if the French Princess is pregnant already, is it surely King Manuel's heir? I love visiting your world here! The writing is wonderful, but so are the historic devices I also love. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
I feel so bad for Edward. No one wants to start a war. No one wants to go to war. Edward just wants to enjoy being married.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love it as always. :-)
Annie B
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
"shatter brained", does that mean shit for brains? :) All jokes aside love your work.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE YOU JJ! BTW, YOU DONT MAKE MISTAKES!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Isabella sure knows how to ease the stress her King his under. Will James and Newton be at odds with each other through accusation and deception?
The two princes need to find their way to Carlisle and Esme's care. Then maybe the new queen of Portugal will know she has limited pull.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
U PUT UP CHAPTER TWENTY TWICE ON THE SAME PAGE. SORRY TO SAY, BUT I EXPECTED BETTE. U R USUALLY A GOOD WRITER, BUT THIS CHAPTER SEEMED RUSHED AND SLOPPY. :(
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonder if someone is giving her some herb or cream so she doesn't get prego. Ugh Denali and Newton are really sleezy.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
The baby will come when the time is right. I'm glad he realizes there are spies.
Go get them Edward.
Date: 23 May 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 May 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
We all know it was probably Newton or James who did it. At least he realizes he was an arse.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow. I'm so proud of King Edward! Great chapter.
Date: 21 May 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay!!! They talked, worked it out, and the man was freed!!!!! Loved that fiery Bella!!!!!
Date: 21 May 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is such a good man and King. This one act is priceless in gaining the loyalty of his people.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
The King his hands full with his wife, Isabella!
She is the perfect Queen and partner. He will become respected and revered.
The statement about the real traitor to the throne being discovered may actually cause the culprit to panic and turn against the group of individuals that wanted Isabella out. Exposing everyone involved. That would be a unexpected benefit to the kings actions.
I really like the banter between these two.
Date: 21 May 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
I must be PMsing, because I shed a tear in this chapter. LoL!
Date: 21 May 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
She is teaching him how to be a better man and king and he is learning not to mess with her lol
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!Can you please be updating sooner?!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!! :)
Date: 21 May 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so glad tht Edward stopped the hanging.I hope they find out who did it.Surely the guilty person is worried now. Long live good King Edward!
Date: 21 May 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful! I do love the way Bella calls Edward on his behavior! She gives him pause and that is a wonderful thing for a king. She acts unlike any woman he has ever known and that is expanding his knowledge of his people! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness he listened.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow I didn't think he would set the man free wow but Edward buying her gifts he had to know she would hate that niw will they find the one who tried to kill her update soon
Date: 19 May 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
I thought it was great! Love the new plot lines you've laid out.
Date: 16 May 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story so far!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hey, I've just started to read your story and I'm already in love with it!! :)
Date: 13 May 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward should talk to Bella. It is better than drinking too much wine. Edward is scared, but can't admit it because he is King.
Date: 12 May 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
They are finding things about them selves and each other. She like a little kinky lol
Date: 11 May 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
A wonderful view of a man be labored with so much responsibility and the outlets he finds! Interestingly, if he would only listen to his wife he might be surprised. She is the same woman that liked to go riding alone in. The morning after all. Pressure is never good when it is not shared. Excellent work!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow Edward is trying to stay ahead of all can he do it and stop it before war and how will he make it up to Bella hmmm update soon
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
A moment of wine induced unclear thought!
Bella needs to discuss this event with him in ernest. Bella needs to heed Carlisle's concern for Edward's ability to keep a level head.
A war is imminent. Will James, Michael and Lord Denali find themselves at the wrong end of loyalty? Will Edward take King Phillip by surprise.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Soooo hot. I love Domward!!! That was just sexy, if not the best lemon YET!!! Please update soon! :)
Date: 10 May 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm Edward def needs to watch her drink. I don't trust any of the men he met with. Trial sounds more like a lyncing.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, it does tend to make a fool of you.
Since the Ruthless series is pulled and so I cannot review, I just want to tell you I finally read it and am totally impressed. What a fantastic story. I'm sure it will be a huge success. Great job. Cannot wait to buy as soon as it goes on line.
Now back to the royal couple, hm... who to trust.
Date: 10 May 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Ed.....you are so you!
Date: 10 May 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love a domineering Edward!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
They all know how much fun she had in chambers with Edward. She only misses them now that she has to be in the real world. She did not think of them in chambers.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
After two weeks shut in the bedroom chambers with her new husband, does Isabella really wonder why those she greets do not believe her sincerity of missing them? I'm sure the rumors of her expressive nature while pleasing her husband will find her ears soon.
Isabella is going to be an amazing Queen to her beloved King!
Let France try and derail their already intense bonds.
Date: 03 May 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are so good together and makes them a better rulers.