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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

I haven't reviewed the last five chapters because my finger automatically hits the next button!    But this was so good! I squealed when I read the good news and squealed again when I saw the next button! Woohoo!

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow this chapter made me cry , I hope she  remembers him soon it's too sad and I just love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love the kids.  Edward is in heaven

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

That is a suprise that explains why she did not return to him. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

So glad Edward is back and Alice is so brave and loves Bella as much as she does.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 24

She is so brave and smart but poor Edward so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor Bella not knowing who to trust.   Edward is a great king.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

OMG who put there hands on her???   Bella is doing everything she can for her people

Reviewer: ivysilvergoldandglitter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I truly wish you finish this story. I always wait for your updates!  You're a really good writer and from the start you had me hooked! Please please finish this and I hope you update regularly 😊thanks for letting us read it!! 

Reviewer: Belighted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am so thrilled with the twist. I do hope she remembers the issue in short order though. Maybe a little at a time? Don't doubt yourself!

Annie B

Reviewer: andiec Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm in love with this story xxxx hope she remembers xxx

Reviewer: JAZZPURR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love this story, can't wait to get the finished product for my Kindle.  Trying to figure out who Seth's father is, my guess is Michael or James.  Good luck on the paper.

 

JAZZPURR

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow it sad but beautiful all at the same time I loved it but will Bella remember before it's too late and Rose and her father kill them

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG.. Had to read twice.. first time was in tears. . Can't  wait 

Reviewer: Blueflowers Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 27

Again, thank you for writing despite the pressures of assignments.  I am about to finish my degree and know how stressful it can all be.  I hope the assignment goes well.  Once I finish in 4 more weeks I would love to try editing your story - do you want just grammar and spelling checked?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hope Bella regains her memory once she is back in familiar surroundings. I still worry about Emmett and Rosalie.

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG!! Loved this chapter, I had watery eyes all throughout the chapter, I loved that Edward was giving her space and is accepting Seth into his family, I´m still thinking that Emmet doesn´t have a clue about what Rose and her father had planned before Bella dissapeared...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 27

loving this

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

Aw damn, she really does have amnesia. 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 27

IM SO GLAD YOU ARE BACK I HAVE MISS YOUR STORIES , THIS ONE ALOT ,THERE LOVE IS SO UNBELIVEABLE, SO GET YOUR PAPER DONE AND HURRY BACK ...WE MISSED YOU....LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 27

Isabella's cheeky challenging banter remains. That's good to see. ;)
Seth's existence is a blessing and King Edward easily recognizes it. Maybe Seth can grow up to be a personal aid to the future king of given land to govern or be elevated to a Lord and give council to the future king.
I have so many hopes for the safe return of Bella's memories and her husbands loving arms.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks! I love this story ;)

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

I have caught a numcer if little mistakes and would like to help.  How do I go about making corrections?  Xanath



Author's Response:

Copy and paste each chapter into MC word and then just let me know when you are done?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love the chapter.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 27

can't wait till the next one :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 27

Really great chapter...glad they've been reunited...and I know Bella may not rember Edward or being Queen but on other levels her heart and body know who and what they are to each other...Edward will be courting her all over again :)

Reviewer: Shiko Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

PLEASE tell me she will remember. She has to remember how they truly love each other and the passionate relationship they had. PLEASE!!!! But it's good that he finally found her. But men six years is a long long time! Good chapter. Please update soon and don't keep us waiting for three months like you did previously!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 27

THANK YOU!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY! can´t wait for more... yo are truly gifted

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 27

She is already warming up.  I'm so excited!  On top of that he is going to bring Seth with him because he owes him.  I wonder if seeing her father & Alice will help?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

Really loving this

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 27

They have both been through so so much and both Will and Edward have lost out on on time that can never be replaced. So much danger still lurking.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 27

Big twist!  Good luck with your paper!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

A great chapter,bimonthly loving the story and whole I'm not holding you to sneak real level of historical accuracy what's with the umbrellas?  

Can't wait for the next chapter, hope your paper writes itself :)

 

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

I love the chapter. 

 

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

did not see that amnesia coming!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad he is going to help us seth too.  Wonder when she'll get her memory back before something really bad happens.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 26

You were really beginning to worry me with the 6 year gap. guessing all the murders are probably Rose's dad's work?

Reviewer: kday Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

Awesome... Didn't see that coming at all.  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Blueflowers Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

wow, I am left with soo many questions, will Bella ever remember? What will Emmett and Rosalie do to her now? Is just just pretending because Emmett is there?

 

Thank you for this story!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh this is a wonderful twist!  I hope she is still wise enough to be on guard even if she doesn't remember the traitor.  I'm so looking forward to Edward having to woo her all over again. 

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

I just started this story yesterday and have been captivated from the beginning. This last chapter was just...wow!  I had to reread it twice!  Thanks for the great story telling.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

It was best not to tell Alice.  I wonder though if Emmet is really in on it.  Rose never confirmed anything to her father.  Rose beheaded will be a glorious thing!

Reviewer: JAZZPURR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is on of THE BEST historical novels Ive read in a long , long time!  I started it yesterday evening, put it down to go to bed, picked it up this morning and just came to the last chappy posted.  How often do you post?  Was Bells amnesia due to the shock of everything or did she really get attacked.  If she had amnsia, how did she know to go to Charlie n why didn't he stop her?  Can't wait for more!

 

JAZZPURR

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow, What a surprize for all of them! I Love the amnesia thing, its about the only explaination for her 6 year absence.

My question is though........

When you start part 2 of Reign, are you going to be adding it to this story or starting a new story like you did with the "Ruthless" series????

Either way is great, cant wait

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm so glad he howled her the passages.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow!  Did. Not expect that at all!  Wonderful twist!  Good job!  Also love the pictures!

Reviewer: edwarda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 26

I was so thrilled to find this. Yay !!!!!  I'm so glad Edward finally found them. I can't believe it's been 5 years!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, that stinks that she has lost her memory. But I'm still questioning the coded note that Alice received from their childhood maid. There must have been some clues as to who within the castle was trying to kill King Edward's heir.
Has the King been bidding his time as to how he would act upon this information? Six years is a long time to sit on the thoughts of a traitor in your midst.
Will the Queen be returned to her castle?
Maybe the sight if Alice will trigger Isabella's memories?
Who leads the hunters?
Nice use of the time jump.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

so pleased he finally found them.  Poor Bella

Reviewer: gopi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

Holy snap I just caught up and damn what a twist will she remember who she is and who is out for her and her son will she love Edward once again update fast I need to know

Reviewer: sparklymagpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

I can't wait to hear what happened and how she got to where she is now. And what was Emmett doing for he last 6 years? So many things to learn...

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

I LOVE IT !!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.....   LOL

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

FINALLY!!!!! :D

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

Very good...I wasn't expecting her to have memory lose...it will be like them starting over to when they first meet :)  looking forward to more...

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

undecided ... surely she couldn't forget EDWARD!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

not expecting that . . . i guess it would have been too easy to let b remember the traitors. can't wait to find out what happens next. so happy you didn't make us wait for more updates. hoping you might cave again

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

No flame from me, I thought the chapter was awesome.  Just imange when she does get her memory back.

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 26

Few misspelling but I love this story. 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

You're killin me, attacked! Amnesia! Six years lost! What the heck??????

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

     I hate that they have been apart for that long of a time.  She would have come back as soon as she could have.  But without her memory how would she have known.  Will she get her memory back?  I can't wait for the Reign 2.  Please have mercy and let her get her memory back !  I hope Emmett isn't really in on this and that it is all Rosalie and her father.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Fonzie Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow! Keep going!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

OMG OMG! LMAO !! That Was Great HOLY SHIT ,Love your stories but this one is wonderful.can not wait to see where this goes.Hope Bella starts to remember fast so she does not get hurt again.

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 26

Did not see that coming at all,  please tell me she will remember before its to late 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well it took you long enough to finally get back to thus I'm so happy!!!! Kind of crazy the twist you decided to take with the story. I would love to see if she ever regains her memory and if they ever find the traitors to the crown and who tried to kill Bella and the baby. Please let this be a happy ever after!!!!!

Reviewer: sarahsauruswrex Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

I LOVE the twist!!!!! Keep it coming!! I'd forgotten about this wonderful story, then went back today and read the last 6 chapters. Love love love! Can't wait for more. Feel free to post anytime before the weekend if you feel so inclined. Haha

Reviewer: phillips Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 26

Enjoying reading this story. Just read last 4 chapters I haven't seen the story for a while.

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

Damn. Well I can only hope she either gets her memory back or is staging an excellent fake in order to smoke out the traitors. Seriously---bring back our smart, clever Bella!

Reviewer: hunybmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

EEEEKKKKK!!!!!! Long live the King and Qeeen 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hope she gets her memories back. Emmett and Rose need to be dealt with. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: mebk03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh gosh.  I didn't see that coming.  I do like the twist, can't wait to read what happens next.  Looking foward to the rest.  I really love the story and your writing, thank you for sharing it will all of us.

Reviewer: Safa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

Love to see your writing.....I can't wait for the update.  I like to twist to the story!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow didn't see that coming. 

Reviewer: ALewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow, just wow!!!!! Can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

OMG! I did not see that coming. I was confused at first and now I understand...I can't wait until she gets her memory back.

Reviewer: dopey5of6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 26

Do you really have to wait for the weekend?

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Omg no I didn't see that coming at all.  Mercy that was powerful!   Lord have mercy you are wonderful!   

Reviewer: Emma Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved all the updates today :) So glad you have continued this story :D

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

i was so happy with the update, and now i'm curious to find out where bella and the baby left too. and if Rosalie really betrayed the crown i'm wondering if she gets her due

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 25

Where oh where is Bella?  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

Don't blame B for leaving.  Rose is a cunning snake in the grass.  Hope Esme knows nothing about whats going on....I doubt she does though.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oooh  Wonder if Em is really in on it or if its mostly Rose and her father?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad B is being smart and suspicious.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: edwarda Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

do not take too long

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love your story...keep it going. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love the story, can not wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: henniy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I am so glad you are back. What a chapter! I cannot belive he went totally cray! I love how you write their love. They only have eyes for each other and I think that is one of the most important parts of the Twilight saga. Read everything you have written and I really like your style. Looking forward to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

So glad he's back and knows they are both alive but will the others be searching now too?

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

So much intregue. Baby is well and Bella is going into hiding but poor Edward. Rose Emmett and her clan but who warned Bella?

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Fabulous!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

Rose is now aware of the living heir. She can inform her collaborators in treason so a search can be started. Isabella and William are in danger. I wonder if Jacob has provided some form of protection? Has Charles Swan seen his grandson? Did he take precautions on their behalf?
I question Emmett's loyalty but somehow feel Rose is the one pushing him forward in thus quest for the throne.

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