Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 65
Emmett is a good buddy
Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 65
Bella needs to talk to Edward and lay it all out that she does not want a relationship and he should find a nice woman to love him back, then she probably will be jealous if that happens no more fantastic sex.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 65
I hope Emmet busts Edward an Bella
Date: 24 Feb 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 65
This is fantastic! I think Emmett will have an 'ah ha' moment and figure it out! :)
Date: 24 Feb 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 65
I think Emmett isn't dumb enough to not put two and two together ... Or at least, I HOPE he isn't that stupid! LOL I am trying to figure out if I want redemption for Rosie or not. *hemming and hawing*
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 65
Ummm wake up Emmett and put two and two together already...lol
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 65
Emmett has to be able to figure out they are talking about each other but when is the light bulb going to go off lol
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 65
wondering if em will piece it together or not. would think so. also wondering what rose is up to and how she keeps getting em's number
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 65
He just might figure it out. Emmett can be unobservent but he is not stupid. It would be odd that they both have a similar arrangement at the same time when Bella just got single. If Bella truly is not ready for a relationship, she needs to be honest with Edward about why. It's within her right but it would probably help him understand and lessen her guilt.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 65
I thought Emmett would get it right away, but I guess stalker-girl has him preoccupied. Note to Bella: a guy doesn't wash your hair for you if he doesn't love you.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 65
OMG! Bella needs to love Edward, he's so sweet! Emmett is not the smartest, if he thought some would see it is that Bella and Edward fuck buddy. Bella wants taco bell, she is pregnant? I hope so.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 65
I wonder how long it will be before Emmett puts two and two together, & figures out that B&E are each other's friends with benefits? LOL
I also wonder how long it will be before Bella grows a brain, a heart, & a spine? Probably never! :(
I just hope that Edward finds someone else. Bella's not the right fit for him other than sexually. She doesn't deserve him, & he's WAY too good for her! But maybe if he went out with someone else, it might light a fire under Bella's ass. LOL
But honestly, Edward shouldn't cave, or really care, if that happens because she'd only be wanting him because he's with someone else, & she can't have him anymore. If she didn't want him when she more than had the chance, then she doesn't deserve him if he ever tries to move on!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 65
I hope she pulls her head out before she hurts Edward too badly!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 64
Maybe it's the pain meds making her not see what's right in front of her.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 64
See they are not that kind of people they have feelings and it is confusing them. Her love for him has expanded
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
YOU ARE A AWESOME WRITER IM SO IN TO THIS STORY LOL
PLZ UPDATE SOOON ... I WILL HAVE TO CHECK OUT OTHER STORIES
Date: 23 Feb 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 64
Come on girl you know you love him
Date: 22 Feb 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 64
Hopefully with her being all emotional & needy these next couple of weeks it will soften her heart towards having a relationship with Edward.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 64
He is loving taking care of her not happy she is hurt but loves taking care of her he is the real boyfriend.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 64
Bella us figuring it out. Why the hell is she fighting it?
Date: 22 Feb 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 64
Maybe now that they can't be physical it will give time to think and pull heads out of asses.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 64
Yeah, what you said in the A/N!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 64
If she doesn't want him ...send him my number. ...
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 64
He is the sweetest!!
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 64
Seriously Bella, what's it gonna take????
Date: 22 Feb 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 64
I think it's interesting that Bella keeps thinking that she is using Edward when he is also getting something out of the arrangement. While it might not be everything he wants at this point, what relationships, no matter what type, are ever totally equal? Besides, I have faith that Bella will eventually come to her senses. She is just so used to bad boyfriends that maybe she doesn't know what a good one is like. Or doesn't think she deserves a good one.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 64
BF material he is:)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 64
Edward is fantastic! I hope Bella opens up soon!! You know get's her head out of her ass! lol :)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 63
OMG! I love this! :)
Date: 22 Feb 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 64
Bella is getting on my nerves...l love the story but damn get it together already Bella
Date: 22 Feb 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 63
Poor thing she is in so much pain her body and her heart. how is Edward holding it together.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 63
Well off time she can think better.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 63
Edward as a nurse.....oh baby....
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 62
Is Bella waking up please have her wake up
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 63
I wonder what Edward would think if he knew that he was her second choice to come get her because the first didn't pan out?
It's total bullshit because he's the ONLY one who is ever there for her, especially when she needs it most, yet she treats him like secondary shit!!!
Edward should take her ass to the hospital, drop her by the curb or door, & drive off! She shouldn't be his problem or concern anymore. Let her clumsy ass whine to someone else about it.
Since she wants avoidance & detatched coldness, then that's exactly what she'd get from now on! There's no use in beating a dead horse, & that's exactly what trying to have any kind of a relationship with Bella is like.
Move on, Edward! Get yourself tested since you've unfortunately been messing with that skank, then move on to someone who deserves you! ;)
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oh, I (almost) feel your pain! Your ex? Really? Sorry. I used to trip UP the stairs and fall. Sheesh.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 63
She needs him. Is she starting to see it??
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 63
Edward will take good care of his Bells
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 63
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 63
No don't stop there :/ !!! Loved it loved it
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 63
Ugh getting hurt sucks.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 63
Oh shit... That was a pretty bad week for her...
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 62
Think she is in denial, but at least she is acknowledging feelings too.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 62
Oh cop On people
Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 62
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 62
I bet if she had a relly vivid dream about E being wit someone else it might just wake up the jelous demon and realise she would die if he was with someone else
Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 62
The crazy nut is still in denial. I wonder if she sees Edward with someone if that will help her wake up
Date: 21 Feb 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 62
I think she needs to see what is in front of her before she looses the best thing she ever had. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 62
Oh please u;pdate soon!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 62
Finally she may be realising her true feelings for Edward
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 62
She has to see what Edward means to her and that is more than just friends with benefits
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 62
See it Bella, see IT!!!!!!! And this is a 7 because I feel Edward's PAIN!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 62
Bella needs to pull her head out...maybe a date for Edward is just what she needs!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 62
Yes, Bella IS a skank, & she IS using Edward, as well, especially as cold & clinical as she always is with him & towards him. She's very hurtful, whether she means to be or not. She's even colder than some guys who are "players"!
The way she treats Edward & selfishly disregards his thoughts & feelings certainly isn't being the "loving friend" she always claims to be. Plus, she always scoffs at even the idea of a relationship with Edward, like it would be such a terrible thing, like he isn't worthy of her - like he's only "friend/brother" material, period. NOBODY likes to be put in the "friends only" box, you know? It hurts. :(
He's good enough to fuck, good enough to be her best friend, helper, & pseudo brother, yet in her mind, he isn't good enough for anything else?! She's totally insane, & I just DON'T get her! She cried over some disgusting loser like Paul, yet treats Edward like shit. Either she wants him for him, or she doesn't - it's that simple.
The fact that she became insanely jealous at the thought of him with someone else SHOULD tell her dumb ass that she WANTS him, & NOT just for a fuck. However, if Edward does end up with someone else, she'll have absolutely NO right to be angry at anyone other than herself! She'll be on the outside looking in...where she DESERVES to be!
Hey...maybe Jacob will still be available. That's much more her speed. Plus, she could move back home near him, because once she destroys things with Edward, she's gonna need somewhere to live. LOL
I can only hope that Edward comes to his senses & kicks her ass to the curb!!! He deserves to be treated right, loved, & happy, & he ISN'T gonna get ANY of that from Bella. :(
Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 62
I WANT THEM TO BOTH ADMIT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 62
she is soo stupid and if she isnt carefull she could hurt edward and he will look elsewhere for a relationship .
Date: 21 Feb 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 62
I'm so glad Edward was smart enough to pull the jealousy card on Bella. Her seeing the green eyed monster may just be what makes her admit her feelings.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 62
I think that was a stroke of genius on Edward's part. Remind her that their arrangement means that he could go out with another woman seemed to hit a nerve.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 62
A poor emotinally stunted Bella, can't figure out why the thought of Edward being with someone else hurts. Hopefully she will figure it out soon.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 62
ugh! she is such a man!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 62
Wake up Bella!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 61
Bella's a complete & utter idiot!!! I don't know WHY Alice is even her friend, or would encourage her to get with Edward - I wouldn't want my brother with a coldhearted skeeze like her! And I certainly don't understand what Edward sees in her?!? For a young woman, she's a WEIRDO!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 61
Need more kinky kissing
Date: 20 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 61
Good to be home and how can she ever say no to kissing him???
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 61
Yay I love turning points :)
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 61
I think I should dance the jig right now or scream from the roof tops; THEY KISSED, THEY KISSED, THEY FINALLY FREAKING KISSED! I'm so happy!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 61
It's Edward's fantasy ... Let HIM tell it! 😈
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 61
I always want to hear what he is feeling. ..He is such a girl ...I hope that kiss helps take down that wall she has up around her heart. ....
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 61
Leavin you some big lovin! lol ;)
I love this story!! :)
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 61
Bella ! Don't make me slap you
Date: 20 Feb 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 61
Oh boy! big touble.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 61
Nice :) but I think Edwards going to be disappointed when Bella says no more after today.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
I need Bella to realize that they belong together!!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 61
Oh Bella, you know once you start you will not be able to go back. Because as hard as you try, this time you will not be able to forget so easily.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 61
These TWO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 61
oooh she gave in to the kiss. YEY
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 60
I seriously think she does know but is egnoring it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 59
Emmett really has a big ass mouth doesn't he?
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 58
Edward tell the girl how you feel!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 57
Wow that was hot!