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Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 69

Bella is best to take the head butt really fast! OMG, I know she's afraid of losing a good thing, I went through this, my husband and I were friends and neighbors, our mothers worked together he had feelings for me and wanted to date first, it took me a lot to give a response afraid to ruin the friendship and the family pressure, in the end I said fuck it and gave a chance for us, we're married and have kids and I have the best of everything ... my friend who is also my husband;) Bella will pick up the poor boy!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 69

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 69

loving this.  I hope she realizes soon.  Poor Edward

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 69

at least she acknowledges her faults.   Hopefully she can get her life together as she wants.  I can understand her wanting to be able to hold her head up next to him as an equal

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 69

They are talking and they both know there is more she is just not ready to commit yet but it wont take long.

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 69

nicely done

honestly

i wanna scream pull your head out

chemistry comes along once in a lifetime

once its gone youre just left w regret

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 69

=)

Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 69

how about a HEA just for Edward? i am very tired of Bella, she doesn't deserve one. that would suit me :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 69

I'm saying it with you, Holy Cow Bella pull your head out,  and fast,  fast!  Lol!   Seriously I know you're gonna give us our HEA!   HEA!  HEA!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 69

I LOVE YOU!   I am so glad there will be a HEA!  All Bella needs is to get her head out of her ass and I think if she sees that someone is interested in Edward, then it will give her head that shove.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 69

At least this time, it sounded like she's acknowledging that she may have some feelings toward him as well ... even though she isn't ready to pursue them. At least, that's how it sounded to me.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 68

Edward is such a wonderful guy. Bella is an idiot. She is letting fear rule her life. She needs to think if she wants to live her life without Edward. He has told her he wants a relationship. He will only be patient for so long. Does she want him with someone else? She needs to decide.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 68

I hope Edward makes her jealous. 

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 68

Edward should get Alice to help him. 

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 68

I thought Heidi like E, too! Can't wait to see what's next.

 

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 68

I love this story truly. Regardless of some people's opinions, I believe Bella is scared of letting herself love Edward fully. She loves him, she knows it, but she is having a hard time putting herself out there. She's had a couple failed relationships and her friendship with Edward means the world to her. I'm glad Edward sees what he wants and is willing to risk everything to achieve it. I know Bella will come around. As a woman, most of us lead with our emotions/heart, and are terrified to put them at risk. 

She just got out of a relationship where she didn't have the emotional and sexual attachment, she wants to experience that before going for the gold. I can understand that, and obviously there are a couple out there who don't. Oh well, their issues. 

I can't wait for the moment that Bella's mind and heart sync themselves, because then, all I have to say is....Edward, watch out!!!

I can't wait!!! *jumping up and down, clapping* (I feel like Alice right now, without the squealing)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 68

Loved it :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 68

we will hope for them.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 68

Edward is on a mission, I support Edward, totally!
I hope Bella does not hurt our boy.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 67

I'd like to kick away from Bella for Edward, he's amazing, I know she is scared of a relationship, but in life nothing is guaranteed, so she should take a chance.Eles need to come back, I miss them.

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 68

Good for Edward don't give up

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 68

:)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 68

Loved it! Go Edward! Yay!

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 68

i hope things work out for him and things go as planned and dont backfire. maybe his ideas will help her realize that she does care for him and cant live wtihout him. keep up the good work

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 68

Good for him

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 68

Go Edward! I wonder if Emmett will figure it all out come dinner and clubing. And i really don't want Bella or Edward interested in someone else, but wouldn't it be nice if Bella saw all the attention he may get from someone new. Hopefully it will kick her butt into action. And as much as Edward loves Bella, I really couldn't see him interested in anyone else, and it would break his heart to see her with anyone. I guess we will see!

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one!

peach 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 68

About time

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 67

WOW THAT WAS CLOSE WITH HEIDI!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 68

I LOVE WHERE EDWARD IS AT! BELLA HAD BETTER GET HER HEAD OUT OF HER ASS SOON!   LOVE YOU!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 68

Awww!!! Love him!!! :) Bella should, too! LOL

I understand Edward's worried about their friendship, but if Bella is really, truly his friend, then what is there to risk? If she loves him like she says she does, even if it's just as a friend then surely this wouldn't come between them because real, true friends forgive...they understand & care about you & your feelings too!

But to me, she HASN'T really been a very good friend, or anything else, so what's there really to lose? Sure, he might end-up with a broken heart, so it'll be a risk...but no risk, no reward. I'm glad he has a spine, heart, & brain because Bella sure doesn't!

Hopefully, it's a risk that will be worth it either way - he'll either get what he wants, or he'll finally see Bella for what/who she truly is...which in my opinion is NOT a very good person.

I STILL wish he would've got to date someone, even innocently, just to make Bella wise up about what she could be losing! I think it would've been a good eye opener for her!

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 68

I loved it :) I always do

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 68

He has a plan I hope it it a good one she needs help admitting she wants him to

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 68

I don't think our Edward's heat could take the agony of her finding someone else to date. 😕

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 68

Hope B wakes up soon.   I want E to get his happy ending.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 68

I don't see Edward meeting anyone at the club because he knows where his heart is at but i could see Bella doing that just because she is still trying to deny her feelings. Plus, it would be the total opposite of a relationship, which she keeps claiming she doesn't want. I still say its just because she has never been in a good relationship that she doesn't see the value of them. I'm sure dinner will be interesting.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 68

=)

Reviewer: TwiAngel92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 68

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. Are we gonna be reading edward or bella with other people before we get to the end. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 68

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 67

I thi k taking a step back from the physical is a good idea.  

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 67

i hope they can get their friendship back on track and bella will realize that she cares for edward as much as he cares for her. keep up the good work

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 67

UGH!!!!!!! I was hoping Edward could've at least got some distance by dating Heidi, but no...instead he wound up at home with a cold, hateful, cowardly Bella who thinks that fixing him a dinner is going to make everything okay. :(  Not to mention that she wouldn't have even offered the meal if Edward hadn't been the bigger person & spoke up, not allowing her to scurry off upstairs to avoid him, acting like her normal, idiotic self. 

Even if Bella was interested in a relationship with Edward, WHY would he, or anyone else EVER want one with her?!?!?!?!?! I mean, maybe Paul wasn't so stupid after all! If someone like him dumped her/didn't want her, then that should say something!

Edward should step back, take some time to examine his head, as well as his heart - not beg or plead, not chase her, or feed her ego while she does nothing but rebuff him. Her excuses are nothing but cruel, pathetic, & lame anyway. She already has TOO much power over him as it is! :(

 

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 67

:) he should stop fronting consequences or not ;he knows what he wants.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 67

Kinda glad they are going to step back a bit.  Think B needs to think about her relationship needs/wants first.  She needs to be comfortable with who she is first I think.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 67

Loved it :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 67

I hope he has some really good wooing techniques because she really isn't budging.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 67

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 67

=)

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 67

:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 67

Well, that went better than expected

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 67

Poor Heidi and maybe that's what needs to happen to get Bella of her but a little jealousy never hurt :) loved the update can't wait for more

Reviewer: beckey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 67

YOU ROCK  QUICK ON UPDATES ...HUGS AND KISSES

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 67

More! Team Edward!

Reviewer: Louie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 67

Started off loving this story but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere:(

you are a very talented writer but you've lost me a bit. Kinda ready for things to wrap up.

I gotta say too that this Bella is not a favorite- sorry.

All this said, I can't wait for your next story:)

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 67

wheedle, wheedle, wheedle ....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 67

I am happy Heidi wants Felix and not Edward but I think that would of opened up Bella because she could see herself losing him.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 67

Phew! I was hoping Heidi wasn't asking about Edward!
I Love this!! :)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 67

I was actually hopeful that Heidi was going to pursue him. That would have made Bella rethink some of her stances.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 67

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 66

Bella is having competition, maybe she will fight for Edward now.
I miss the hot sex.
Kisses and thanks.

Reviewer: MyClairtyIsYours Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 66

Aww...you scarying me

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 66

Ruh-roh.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 66

Come on Bella get it together

Reviewer: NotYourGirl555 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 66

I think that if Edward starts dating Heidi, it may be a good wake-up call for Bella! She is acting like a brat!!! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it :)

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 66

Oh no she didnt! Heidi ho better back up off nerdward! Waiting for next update....

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 66

And the jealous will begin.Bella may just wake up!

Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 66

I would love it if Edward took Heidi out. Hopefully it would make Bella realise life is too short.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 66

Go Edward!!! :) If he starts seeing Heidi, then maybe Bella will finally see what a fool she's been. Serves her right!

Edward deserves happiness, appreciation, & love, & I'm afraid he's never gonna get any of that from Bella. If he has a chance with someone else, then he should go for it...not wait around for Bella to decide what she wants, or be at her beckon call. If she ever does decide she wants him, will it be for the right reasons? I highly doubt it. Too little, too late, I say! 

Dating someone else gives Edward a chance at a clean break, without him being the one who gets hurt. Plus, the way Bella pushes him away, it would seem to be a welcome break for her too. Besides, why should Bella care what or who he does? She avoids & treats him like crap most of the time unless it's convenient for her, plus she doesn't seem to want him. It will all be her loss, NOT his!

Good luck, Edward! Anyone is better for you than Bella. There's another Paul or Jacob out there waiting for her. LOL

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 66

Well since Bella's still not pulling her head out even after he took such good care of her, maybe he will give Heidi an opportunity!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 66

:)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 66

OOOOOHHHHH!!! I love this!!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 66

maybe a little jealousy and a shock of losing edward will finally get bella to get her head out of her ass. :)

Reviewer: nnalday Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 66

Oh! Tell me Bella finds out Edward went out for coffee with a girl and she gets jealous and realizes she wants more with Edward than just sex, that she loves him as more than friend.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 66

WOW! I hope she is asking because of someone else in the office! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 66

hmmm Wonder if Heidi is asking because of E or someone else.   I think because of Garrett though.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 66

Uh oh Bella may have some competition for Edwards attention...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 66

*smh*

*chews nails nervously*

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 66

well he isn't in a relationship with Bella because she doesn't want him that way so I say go for Edward you might be happy with Heidi

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 66

o snap? Will he if bella is pulling back hmm. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 66

Maybe when Edward goes home & tells Bella that he was approached by Heidi it will make Bella see the light!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 65

I feel like Emmet is not going to figure it out bc he a little dense in the love dept. and on top of that if thy each follow Emmet's advice they won't be together.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 66

is she going to propostion him?  Well Bella is so undecided let her off the hook. Move on.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 66

uh oh. seems she has a crush on e and if he will realize it and possibly pursue it. might light a fire under b's ass

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 66

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 66

Oh no can't leave it like that what torture

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 66

Maybe this is the push that Bella needs to know she could lose him.

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 66

I agree with some of the other readers and was just thinking this myself last night, Bella needs to "see" Edward with someone else to have herself a wake up call.  While I don't want to see another woman get hurt in the process, perhaps Heidi is interested in someone else and is just turned to Edward for advice, maybe Bella needs to "see" Heidi as a threat and then she'll get her head out of her hiney!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 66

Aaaand here we go! LOL He needs to go out with someone else in order to 
protect this heart, and SHE needs to see him off, dating someone else. It's
the only thing I can think might actually cause her to think twice about her
'only friends' stance.

Reviewer: PandaBri Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 66

I want Edward and Bella to be together, but to really test Bells feelings and make her feel guilty, I want Heidi and Edward to be "together", just so Bella explodes and admits lol. Dun dun dunnnn! 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 66

oh my god!! I hope bella wakes up and accepts her feelings for edward once and for all!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 66

I have to tell that my heart races for a second when I see a new update email in my inbox. Love this story. Bella, Bella, Bella...snap out of it!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 66

Oh hell. This may or may not be good. It'll give Edward a chance to get what he wants, in one form or another, and it may give Bella the kick in the ass she needs to see what's right in front of her. This could pan out in either direction and it'll be interesting to see how this works out. 

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 66

Oh Hell No!

Reviewer: 00miracle36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 66

Here comes the drama!! 

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 65

I'm thinking he may. He's not that dumb & why is Rose being all stalker?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 65

Oh poor Emmett! Getting stalked by crazy-ass Rosalie, and then he's unaware that Edward and Bella were speaking of themselves! LOL! Can't wait to see if he'll figure it out or not! LOL!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 65

looking forward to more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 65

Wonder how long til Em figures things out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 64

Glad  B is starting to realize even more that he's such a great friend and more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 65

Loved it :)

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