[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 73
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Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 73
oooh Rose is a real peice of work
Date: 07 Mar 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 73
So that's how Rosalie knew all she knew. Also who's paying Rosalie's lawyer fees? Liquor in Arizona in the same room may lead to some aaction. Maybe Bella will start listening to herself.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 73
I can't wait for more! and more and more and more...
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 73
Well that would explain how she knew about E/B's financial situation. Rosalie is something else. I wonder if she has screwed Emmett over by stealing his identity too.
Looking forward to Mesa.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 73
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 73
It may explain how Rose knew about Edward and Bella's financial arrangement
Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 73
seems like this is how she knows so much about e/b's payments. thinking she must be stealing either e's and em's money
Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 73
I want to know who is helping her?? She needs her face broken. Bella knows she is in love with Edward why is she fighting it poor thing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 73
Bella please be good for our boy, I know you want it.
Rosalie is a bitch.
I'm looking forward to this trip, let them be together ...
Date: 07 Mar 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 73
I think Road did steal Edward's identity... Is that how she found out about how much they pay on rent?
Date: 07 Mar 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
Please let them fall into a relationship in Mesa!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
I.m sure Rise will screw them both she vindictive enough
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 73
I'm guessing she did. That would be how she found out how much
was being paid by whom for the mortgage. Nasty, skank-ho!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 73
She needs to quit gas lighting him and get her head out of her but before she forces him to find someone else.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 73
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 73
Her inner voice recognizes that she LOVES HIM!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 73
This is so fantastic!! I don't think Rosalie would have stole Edwards identity because she was dating his brother but I think she could possibly have messed with is real estate. The fees or inspection. Can't wait to find out!!! :D
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 73
i really hope that bella comes to her senses and get her head out of her ass and see that things could be really good for both of them
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 73
PLEASE fall, pretty please ... it is a king-size bed after all. :)
Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 72
I just want to slap Bella. How can she be so stupid? She is 25, not 19. She is the prime age to meet her someone special.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 72
At least B realizes what a mess she is. Think she would really do well with some counselling.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 72
I was kinda hoping Edward would've brought the blonde home with him to make Bella more jealous.
Wishy-washy describes Bella to a T. She gives me whiplash. Edward is just too perfect, willing to wait for god knows how long. They're already acting like an old married couple bickering. Why can't she see that?
Hopefully this trip will rekindle more than their struggling friendship.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 71
I'm starting to dislike this stubbornness of Bella's. She knows what her hold-ups are, maybe she should get some therapy for it.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 72
His willingness to be ... Whatever she needs him to be should be melting her.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 70
Edward admitting to Emmett the girl he talked about was Bella is huge. Glad Em figured it out. I hope he decides to do some meddling that causes Bella to see Edward more clearly.
The fun is just beginning at the club?
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 69
I'm saying it with you... HEA...HEA...HEA...
At least Bella realizes she has her head up her ass. I hope someone approaches Edward at the club and makes Bella jealous. Was Heidi using Felix name as a decoy to get information from Edward? I'd like for her to show up at the club.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 68
Operation Woo Bella is a go.
Your AN about the club makes me anxious.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 72
I hope she gets her shit together. :) I really like this story, and I'm very much a Bella of this story. I think that's why I like this so much!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 67
Ha!! You had us panicing over Heidi for nothing. Maybe starting over is exactly what Edward and Bella need to see what is in front of them.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 72
She has her head up her ass Edward is such a great guy
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 66
If Heidi is showing interest in Edward. Things just got more interesting and confusing between Edward and Bella. Bella needs to pull her head out of her ass soon.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 72
urgh
ive known girls like her all my life
have a great guy at their beck and call and dont see it whilst the rest of us would give a vital organ to be in their shoes
wonderfully written
smooches
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 65
Oh Emmett. You gotta put two and two together. Surely he's not that naive.
Rose needs to go away. I'd love for Em to have her charged with stalking.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 64
I really hope Bella figures it out soon. Edward is just too perfect.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 72
That Bella better get her head out of her ass!! Edward loves her, and all she is doing is hurting herself and him with her stubborness. Keep being patient Edward! You and Bella are worth it!
Hope they have a great trip, that helps bring them closer together! Can't wait to read the next update!
peach
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 72
Edward played it well. He's pushing the friendship but anything more. Smart boy.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 63
Looks like Bella will be getting nursed back to health by Edward.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 72
I hope they both trip overthemselves on this trip and come to grip with their feelings ... E needs to lose his temper and passionately pursuade her with words and, well yeah other pursuasive techniques like some KISSING. And B - she just needs to shut up and listen to E's words and HER heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 62
Bella may need to face the possibility of losing Edward to see what she has.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 61
More sensual kissing. Please
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 72
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 72
I want this trip to wake her up and see she can have it all
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 72
she is so stubburn and she will lose the best thing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 60
It looks like they'll be kissing now. Damn, that cyber sex was hot.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 71
Maybe she hit her head when she fell, I'll marry him! Lol
Date: 05 Mar 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 71
Stupido..big time He did the right thing.. Find a gal and go for it. Maybe just for the night but show Bella the game she is playing may wind up leaving her alone.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 71
Uggggg why is she doing this
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 71
She's thinking to much
Date: 04 Mar 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 71
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 71
Definitely needs a butt kicking, or at the very least a smack to the noggin! Gitl come now...... this is Edward!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 71
Bella defintely is stubborn!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 71
I left this on your facebook page, but I thought I should leave it here as well.
I guess people are forgetting the HEA that is part of this story. And I am so over one of your 'critics' Tufano. That person kills me on the reviews. Sorry you get those. Anyway, I loved the update as always. And you gotta have your eyes 'opened' to what can be lost before you get your head out of your ass, as you say. I feel for both. Going from friends, to FWB to possible lovers in a relationship can cause a lot of heartache, headache and pain. I hope to see them both overcome the obstacles.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 71
damn, more please :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 71
I'm GLAD that Edward talked to that blonde! I'm sure it was innocent, though. At least he wasn't grinding all over her, or letting her grind on him like Bella had done with that idiot.
I'm shocked that Bella finally realized how unfair & cruel she was being towards Edward. She sure DIDN'T like Edward even just talking to another girl, let alone if he had done what she done! Let that be a lesson to her about how it feels, & how hurtful she was & still IS!
But instead of talking to Edward, or at least apologizing, what does she do? A classic Bella move...she runs away like a coward. :( She NEEDS to realize that it's all HER fault. He wouldn't even be talking with some blonde in the first place, if she treated him right, if she'd be with him! He wants her, unfortunately, for some strange, unknown reason, not some blonde! She NEEDS to grow a spine & quit living in denial!
What REALLY aggravates me though, is how she always claims to "love" him. I feel safe to say that she most certainly DOES NOT love Edward - because when you TRULY love someone, you DON'T do what she's done, & you don't treat him like she has. I believe that she honestly has NO clue what love is, so she shouldn't say words that she doesn't mean or even understands! She doesn't even love herself, let alone anyone else. She's too selfish & stupid to love!
Whether it's the friendship kind of love, familial, or the kind between lovers...love IS love. And when you say you love someone, you DON'T keep hurting them repeatedly, you don't take them for granted, & you don't string them along, toy with their feelings, or use & mistreat them - at least you TRY very hard not to do any of that. You care about their feelings more than your own.
I'm glad that Emmett at least called her out on some of her bullcrap! I mean, if dense Emmett can even see how STUPID she's being, WHY can't she?!? If she's as stupid as she always acts, then she really has NO business being a teacher. She NEEDS to grow the hell up!
If she keeps this up, she's going to be truly all ALONE, & maybe even homeless, although I doubt Edward would be that heartless. Honestly though, she deserves it.
This will effect more than just her relationship with Edward. Even Emmett sounded kind of disgusted with her - I highly doubt it will be any different if/when Alice or Esme find out. I bet they rip her a new ass, & rightfully so!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 71
I hope Bella get your head out of your ass and go get your man!
Kisses.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 71
She has admitted she loves him that is a big step now where is Edward
Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 71
Please go back to two chapters a day!! This is getting SOOOOOOO good! I like the sex and all, but I am LOVING this! I love the Bella's self conflict, Edward's too and how they overlap in such ways and how they differ in others. I cannot wait to know what was going through Edward's mind in the 30 minutes he was gone and what happens when he finds out Bella left...and what happens when he gets home!!! :D
Wonderful job writing! You are truly amazing!
Love always,
LunarArtemis xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 71
she is going to lose a good thing, Don't shut him out because of a bad relationship...one apple to spoil the whole bunch girl.....I just had to say it LOL
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 71
Bella needs therapy. IMO.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 71
I love this! Oh silly Bella. smh I can't wait for the next update!! :)
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 71
What happened to the snarky, scrappy bitch that got in Rose and Jess' faces?!?!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 71
Scared girl has alot of insecurities. She needs some counselling I think
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 71
OMG - she's killin' me, and Edward and now Emmett!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 71
Thank heavens this is no dumb Emmett! LOL!
As for Bella, I think she maybe needs to step away to be able to clear her head?
Maybe it'll be good for Edward to have another female friend - just not a friend with benefits.
I don't think either one of them needs to jump into anything serious. I think they both need some time to theirselves.
xoxo
Date: 03 Mar 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 70
still hate the double standard. Women are "sluts" but men are
players. utterly ridiculous. Ah so Em did figure it out. Hope he stays quiet for their sakes.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 70
Bella is like blind deaf & dumb though! seriously she's getting onmy nerve. still love your writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 70
yay Emmet, poor Edward and boooooooooo Bella!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 70
Im so glad Edward told him even if Emmett already knew.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 70
Edward is finally admitting to friends that he loves Bella, well to Emmett, lol, and hopefully if Edward stays strong, he can make Bella understand, to not be afraid of committing to him. Love it! Loved how Edward wanted to pummel the guy that was dancing with Bella and making her uncomfortable. You do a great job showing how a relationship can take time, how taking chances with friendships to make them into a commited love relationship can be scary to some. Awesome job!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 70
Sounds like the predicament I'm in. Sigh...
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 70
Bella being a moron is an understatement! I was her age once, too, & I NEVER acted like her, nor would I EVER act like her, no matter my age! So to me, her age is NO excuse.
And her having the audacity to grind on the dance floor with some jerk is just her speed...but to do it while knowing that Edward was there was just wrong...rude. I don't feel sorry for the way that idiot treated her. Serves her right!
Too bad Edward didn't do a little bump & grind of his own with some chick...see how Bella likes it!
Honestly, she DESERVES to lose Edward. That's the only way that people like her learn, or at least get what they deserve. LOL
Date: 02 Mar 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 70
Keeshond staging should happen to make her jealous
Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 70
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 70
I have a feeling Edward going outside to cool off isn't a going to end well! ;)
I can't wait for more! I love this!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 70
I think Edward is gonna get "jumped" by that douche. Maybe this will make Bella se what everyone else sees
Date: 02 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 70
Come on girl wake up
Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope she doesn't make him wait incredibly long. there's GOTTA be a way that she can speed up her growth. She's young, but not THAT young.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 69
I'm crossing my fingers that at the club Bella will get jealous. That way we will only have a few chapters of them not being together.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 69
im with him i hope she realizes it before its to late and he does either end up finding someone else or their friendship comes to an end completely. keep up the good work
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 69
Thanks. .for putting it all on the table next to the salad....He will wait ...but if she cheat s I am so kicking her ass ...help pull her head out of her ass ....1 2 3 pull....
Date: 01 Mar 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 69
Always with the cliffhanger your killing me I LOVE IT
Date: 01 Mar 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 69
So how long is Bella's head going to be up her ass?
Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 69
HEA...HEA...HEA...I love these two. They will be fine!!! :)
Date: 01 Mar 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 69
More, more, more! I found this story at chapter 68 I finally caught up. I'm sometimes lazy about reviewing but I do sometimes. Thank you for writing and OMG your lemons are great!
Date: 01 Mar 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 69
I am not sure that I know where Bella is coming from. It almost seems like she is feeling sorry for herself. Snap out of it, girl! That man loves you!
Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 69
As difficult as it might be for him - and her - I think they're doing great! They've talked about their feelings and took the time out from the benefits to get their friendship right once again;)
Im pretty sure they will work this out, because sometimes distant makes the heart grow fonder... And there was never a saying how much distant you should between you and what you really want;)
Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 69
Looking forward for the next chapter