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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

really like your story will add to my favs, hope all is well with your surgery

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

I wish you a fast recovery :).    The sooner she tells him the better she will be.

Reviewer: msbull Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love it hope you recoop quickly and everything goes well.

Reviewer: msbull Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hooked

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wish Bella would get comfortable enough with Edward to just tell him herself. I am wondering what Aro is going to find out. Will he find out the truth???

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Dammmnnnnn

Reviewer: BBYGRL Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

So far so good!! I too can't wait to see how he reacts when he finds out about what happened to her & what her parents did!! Can't wait for the next updates!!

All the very best for your surgery!! Hope it all goes well!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) I hope everything goes well with your surgery

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

gang raped... he better be good to her also i hate the term slave call her pet or little one but not slave

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope everything goes well for you. I can't wait for more story ;)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

I just dies covered your treasure here and love the characterizations and possibilities.  I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter! I hope Aro can give Edward the information he needs.

I hope you surgery goes well. We will be looking forward to your return, and more wonderful chapters.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story is not showing up under most recent when u update!! U have to notify TWCS each time to manually change date u last updated then it will show up under most recent!! I am recieving an e-mail when u post new chapter. I am absoulutly loving reading this most captivating & beautifully well written story!!! This truley is an intriging story. I definatly rate this story as a #10 as a #10. Please UPDATE real soon I will be impatienly waiting for next update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am sorry to hear that you are having surgery. Hope everything goes well. I would have thought that Edward would have held Bella and talked to her to get her to claim down. But I guess loving her worked even better. 

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like the story. I like how Edward didn't waste anytime taking Bella, but I'm really curious to find out his reaction to the gang rape.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love Love I hope everything goes well.  She is going to need alot of help to get her healed

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Isabella. Hopefully he can help her deal with this trauma. Your Edward sound like a really good Dom. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great update! I can't wait for more ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor girl so much trama she needs help and Edward will help her get it.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow! She finally got to see Edward! You made me giggle with her thinking he was probably an older man. I would have too. I'm so excited to see what happens next. I love your story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

WOW!! This is truely an amzingly beautifully captivating & intriging story!!!! Please keep up with regular updates. Can't wait for next update. I am definatly rating this story as a #10 out 0f #10!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you! I love kinky stuff ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter!!!!!!!

Hope you move goes smoothy and everything works out. Just know that I will be here waiting on you when you return. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

good luck with your move and with your surgery I wish for everything to go well and a quick recovery.  She is going to be a happy girl

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)



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Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter! I love your choice for Aro. They didn't waste any time getting Bella set up for the auction, did they? I hope this turns out to be what she wants. I know two million dollars is a lot of money; but three years is a long time. Can she get out of the contract, if she gives the money back?

I love this story; and I can't wait for the auction. Since you are one of my favorite authors, I'm not surprised that this one drew me in too.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love it, always eager to read more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMGosh!!!!! Does Bella really know what she is getting into with a 24/7 slave contract??? Why would you got straight to that? I would have thought that you would have tried it just on weekends first.

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

I will be back to read as soon as the next chapter posts, I am hooked!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

cant wait for the auction.  Kate is very helpful

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really like this Bella. Even after the terrible things that happened to her, she didn't let it stop her from starting over. I loved that she went up to Aro at the restaurant. Now I can't wait to see what happens at the ball with Kate.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait for more ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, poor Bella. Going through getting gang raped and then having your parents throw you out of the house. I just have to ask....how did Kate know to ask Bella about the Ball???? Who was Aro's sub??? Will Bella be calling Aro??? Will she see him at the Ball???

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was amazing :D  I really cannot wait to see what happens next!  I know this Bella is strong and can overcome anything :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Her parents know nothing and they are so wrong.  Kate is going to help her that is great.

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Bella, what Jake and his friends did was horrible and shame in her parents for doing that to her.

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Absolutely love this, Can't wait for more. Hope you can update again soon.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

I'll give it a try ;)

Reviewer: ceceprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Yum!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

OMGosh!!!!! I can't wait for you to updaate!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

she sold herself how sad

Reviewer: Kinga72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Intriguing

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?


 

Intriguing, excited for the next chapter.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Love it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

This is a great start :)  I cannot wait to see who the new "owner" will be!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

OK.  I think I like! XOXO

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Welcome back!  Mmmmm your stories were dearly missed!   TY for this new story



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Wow, what a beginning.

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Looking forward to reading more please!

Reviewer: likeisaid Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

can't wait for more

Reviewer: newmommyak Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Okay. You have intrigued me. Please continue. :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Hope that's Edward

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Promise!

I want more ......

Haha update more in the short term was too short, please enjoy this Lol.

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you very much !

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Well, I am certainly intrigued! This was a great first chapter. I can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Well I am glad you liked it ! I will try and post every two weeks

The first on Sunday !

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Its so short. Its hard to know if it will be good or not. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

The  chapters will be longer this is just a starter to see if reviews like it!

I will try to update every two weeks  Te first one will post on Sunday !

Hope you stick with it   ;)

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