Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:04 AM Title: Bound By My Love
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:11 AM Title: Play With Me
LOVED their scene together in the playroom. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!! I am thinking that Edward had a little problem controling his self. lol.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it tends to happen when one gets a little worked up. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:10 AM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
I think Bella did a great job being the Mistress. I would love to fall a sleep for the same reasons that she fell a sleep. Edward could orgasms me to sleep anytime. lol Glad that Edward taught her how to use the flogger. Maybe she could use it on James and NOT in the pleasureable way. lol.
Author's Response:
I was thinking more like a whip for James with whelps all over his body, but a flogger would work too. Maybe have her change it up a little. LOL Yeah, this is not my reality either....:( sad but true. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:46 AM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
LOVE this chapter. Did Bella, Edward or Jasper tell Alice that James is now in Seattle?????
Author's Response:
That's a good question...it wasn't in there. I would say that Jasper or Bella told her. She knows later in the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:41 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
I can not believe that Edward did not demand more from Irina. He is going to have her head when everything goes down.
Author's Response:
When he finds her possibly, but you will see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:39 AM Title: Down On The Corner
Love the collar!!!!!!!!! OH, he put her in his bed!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:38 AM Title: Call Me
I like the little role playing that Edward and Bella did.
Author's Response:
Oh, we have to keep things a spicy sometimes. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:37 AM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
LOVED IT!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT lemon!!!!!!! Liked that Edward teased Bella and she got a little payback. Glad that is seems that Bella is ok with the way things went and she does not seem to have any flashbacks or problems.
Author's Response:
Things will level out for her at least for alittle while. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:54 PM Title: Bound By My Love
Good chapter, but I am worried that firstly Edward did not say anything about what she wrote in her journal. Yes I know he already knew what she was doing, but for him not to say anything, I find a bit far fetched.
Secondly, the restraining order she has against James, even if the one she has say one year, would she not be able to go back to the judge and question why it only has one and not three.
Thirdly, if her friends were truly friends they would talk her out of being silly and luring James, I know it makes for a good suspence story, but if my friend was going to do something this silly, I would have talked her out if and if I could not I would tell her partner she was up to no good and going to harm herself.
I love this story and I cant wait to see what is going to happen to James, he truly deserves some unhappiness in his life.
Author's Response:
Let me see if I can dispense some worries: 1) I haven't had him read it yet, and I think that with Seth watching her, he might let this slide. Of course, not for long. She will eventually be punished, but right now he is thankful her telling him something. I will state this soon. Edward will come to her rescue to a degree. He is always montioring her and knows pretty much what is going on. I hoping to covey that he wants her to succeed a little, but he won't be far.
2)I agree, but she hasn't realized it until now. James has been able to defend himself rather well, and being that he never admitted he was guilt of anything the judge might have a hard time allowing such things. However, her medical record could stand for itself. I guess I should say that she is tired of the legal system, and ready for a fight of her own. The system has in some ways let her down.
3) Which would tied in this next aspect, Alice will come around and help, so will Rose. I plan on having Rose go a step further and contact Edward about the restraining order. She will also talk to Emmett about her own restraining order, and get him to work on things. This will help Bella. She will come around too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing....I will add all these aspects in the coming chapters. I am glad that you love and I am always open to suggestions, questions, and I need to get some more things out in the way of outtakes or extras to explain everyone's stand points to a degree.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:33 PM Title: Bound By My Love
oooh yummy chapter.
hmmm If she knows someone messed with the restraining orders, why not go toher lawyer or back to the ordering judge?
Author's Response:
I reallly never thought about that...good point. Emmett's a lawyer and Charlie being the cheif of police and all. Maybe Rose could tell Edward about it and he take care of it. I would think...just a thought. The system had let her down one time before in away, even though James was the driving force behind it. Maybe this should be something Edward addresses? Thanks for pointing this out. Good question!! :)
As always thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:31 PM Title: I'm So Excited
I love how you have them together. I also like that is story is more than a BDSM story.
Author's Response:
Thanks... I tried. I figured he wouldn't be a good dom unless he had a little flexibility about things. I also wanted it light. Didn't know if I would be able to pull it off, without the knowledge of the lifestyle myself. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:12 PM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
I like how they are enter acting with each other. Side of the road "head". lol.
Author's Response:
Bella was just a little worked up and truth be know so was Ed. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:11 PM Title: Moving On Up
Loved the ending of this!!!!!! LOL!!!!! I am glad that they all talked and agreed that Bella needed to stay with Edward. I hope the medicine helps her. I am also really glad that she told Edward everything about James.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she will finally be able to mend herself with meds and talking to Rose and Ed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:09 PM Title: Rehab
I love how you are not rushing Edward and Bella into their Dom/sub roles and scening together. I had to smirk a little when Rose shot Bella "that look". lol. Something just clicked in my head. Alice helped Bella when she was at the house and it was said that said had medical backgkround/studies. Let me guess, Alice is Jasper's drug rep. that he is interested in!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!
I was wondering, who all knows that Rose was involved with James also????
Author's Response:
People who know about Rose...when the story started it was just Alice, Bella, and Emmett about the a tat of course. But he wasn't aware of the name or anything like that. Rose is the mistress in their situation and doesn't provide much info to him. When Rose comes to Bella's rescue they all learn about it. Yes you are on the right path with Alice and JAsper. Glad that you love it thanks so much for the reviews.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:46 PM Title: Bound By My Love
love your story can't wait for more chapters ,can't wait for bella to get james i hope .
Author's Response:
Thanks I am glad that you like the story, it warms my heart. She will get him...pay back's a b**ch. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:59 PM Title: Bound By My Love
great chapter!! I hope that James does't hurt her again.
Author's Response:
I promise that Bella will not be the one hurt when James does show up finally. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:45 PM Title: Disturbia
It's a small world after all.
Author's Response:
It's gets a little smaller too...thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Excite Me
Sounds maybe more like PTSD?
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Your right it is PTSD, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:15 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
They are bonding nicely in their vanilla time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing and yes they are bonding nicely.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:52 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks glad that you loved it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Disturbia Part 2
James is one sick sucker. He is NOT a dominant. He is just a cruel cruel person.
Author's Response:
Right, he acts like it to lure women in then abuses them. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Disturbia
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Rose and Bella were both living in that house with James and that he tattooed both of them. OMGosh!!!!!!!! He came back and got Bella when she and Rose move out, why did he not bring Rose back too???? Edward and Emmett are both going to kill James.
Author's Response:
He didn't bring Rose back because he could do her like he did Bella. If that makes since, Rose was stronger and more able to fight. Bella wouldn't fight back and was a easy target. Rose is a bitch she don't take shit off nobody. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:06 AM Title: Excite Me
LOVED the scene. Great job writing it. Glad that Bella did ok through it.
OMGosh!!!!!!! I can't believe that she fainted. I am glad that Rose came to help her. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, things get a little difficult for her, and she doesn't work well with changes. Thanks about the writing though...I would have never thought this would be me. I was never one to read or write. Well, if you don't count the fantasy story about my neighbor when I was thirteen... LOL Wish I still had that story.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:06 AM Title: But Whips and Chains....
Again, Loved this chapter. I liked that they had the day just to be Edward and Bella. I had to laugh a little when she rolled her eyes at him. I can see some fun time coming their way with that. I loved that Edward kissed her scare. James is one sick bastard. I hope he gets his punishment. I am really excited to read about their time in the playroom tonight. Double penatration....Wow!!!!
Author's Response:
I will have to make her roll her eyes more, she really not that...angysty. She just has moments of lapse. Thanks for reading and reviewing glad that you like the story.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:15 AM Title: Please Release Me
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks another one will be out soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Maybe she's just what he wants! I'm curious to read his reaction to her & Jasper. And I guess this is a polyfic.
And that list, woa, I have to get out my google dictionary.
Author's Response:
Glad you came to read. Thanks for the review, and have fun with the dictionary. Trust me had to use it to figure out what to do with those lists. Not really...starts out that way then sides to just a d/s strictly.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:52 AM Title: Please Release Me
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review glad that you loved it. There should be more coming soon. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:45 AM Title: Please Release Me
i say they should tie him up and exact the exact torture he put them through
Author's Response:
We will have to see what they do to him, he's not done yet. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:50 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
I glad she is taking self defense classes
Author's Response:
She's going to need it in order to confront James. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:50 PM Title: Please Release Me
this was a great chapter - glad to have you back
Author's Response:
Yeah, got lost for alittle while...but back and chalk full of ideas LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:20 PM Title: Please Release Me
oh Bella...hiding plans from E will not go well for ya I think. Yummy club time.
Author's Response:
She confusses kinda....if she didn't he would punish her. No secrets. Thanks for the review. Ch 29 should be coming along soon, almost done with beta.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:53 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
WOW!!!!! I loved that Edward "marked" her. Can't wait to see them together.
Author's Response:
You will get more answers about James and everything in the chapter disturbia....Rose comes in there. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:52 PM Title: Natural High
I am hoping that Edward and Bella can come up with something in the future for her to get rid of her tattoo. That is awful what James did to her. I am glad that she was ok with telling Edward about it. I hope that when/if she talks to Rose, that Rose can help her.
The form that is filled out is something different. I have never heard of someone doing that. Poor Bella. It must really be hard for her. I am glad that she seems to be over coming what James did to her.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:44 PM Title: I Touch Myself
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that James did all of that to her. How??? I know she was living with them but did they not have safe words??? I think I remember something about she would leave back he would come find her and bring her back, is that right???? Was he obessive with her???? I feel so sorry for Bella. Why has she kept the piercings???? Why not take them out and let them grow back up???? The tattoo has got to be the worse. It is a reminder to her everyday. That is something that can not be removed easily. I hope at some point in this story Edward gets his hands on James and just beats the shit out of him and then lets Bella "play" with him some and torture him also. I think James needs his penis pierced!!!!!!!!!! Several times!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Okay let me start from the beginning...Glad that you love it. It makes my day to hear that people like my writing new to this and all. No, safe words. James didn't know what he was doing. He would get off on the control of people, not so much into pleasuring them, just his own gratification. Typical James. Some of the piercing where removed, and she tries to get rid of the tongue one, however, Jasper likes it. Ed likes it. Enough said. Plus, I read that they are sometimes harder to heal. I have no clue about that being I don't possess one. You don't know how many times I kick myself for giving her that tattoo. It makes it impossible to put clothes on her, LOL. She will get rid of some of it, but the other will be turned. One the banner she has a different tat and this is what will come of the tattoo James gave her. Oh, and Edward getting a hold of James...well it's coming.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:42 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
I am soooo loving this story. I like how you are having them get to know each other before they ever really meet in person. LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Glad you like
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:03 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
Wow, Bella has been through alot. I am glad that Jasper got her and has helped her with some of her things. Edward will be a loving and caring Dom for her. Can't wait to read about them getting together.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:02 PM Title: You Sexy Thing
Glad they approve of each other!!!!! lol
Author's Response:
We wouldn't have them any other way.... who didn't see that one coming. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:02 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
Again, thanks for the background on Bella this time. Can't wait to see all of them together.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and happy reading.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:01 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Thanks for the background on Edward. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Your welcome and thanks for the review. Happy reading.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:56 AM Title: Every Day of the Week
Just found this story, and I love it!! Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
Thanks should be adding more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:48 AM Title: Every Day of the Week
Loving this
Author's Response:
Thanks I've been having a little bit of writers block with this story. I will get back to it very soon. Just finished my other story and trying to get it out of the way. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:01 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
....It was getting so good, then I realized I was at the last chapter :( Update soon please, you have me hooked :D
Author's Response:
I am working on it. Keep checking...Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:51 AM Title: Every Day of the Week
Naughty E keeping secrets. Hmmm now how did he know how to sabotage the video survellence. Glad B went straight to Sam. Hmmm Wonder if James is involved with Skankya and Scumro in order to get back at Edward too? hmmm
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yep, you have to watch out keeping secrets, it bites you in the behind in the long run. LOL I would say an inside job, someone who is close to Edward. Good change, but once again my lips are sealed.
Thanks I will get back to writing soon have been busy tonight relocated myself. LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing will get my next installment soon!!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:43 AM Title: Prisoner of Love
a punishment had to happen sooner or later. Glad the way it went. He showed her that she could trust him by talking to her about it first and needing to calm down first. :-)
Author's Response:
Even a good girl needs a little repermanding once in a while. LOL I want him to be good to her, and treat her like he should. The submissive holds all the power in the relationship anyways. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chains of Love
uh oh what happened to Irina I wonder.
Yummy little scene.
Author's Response:
I can't say...my beta has sworn me to secrecy. I keep letting all the info out. LOL She will be found belly up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
SOunds like a great date night. Oh boy. I have a feeling not telling her is going to come back to bite him. Wonder where Irina is.
Author's Response:
Yes, it will come back...should always tell the truth. He expects nothing less from her, but he is not living up to his own rules. I can't remember if I have the chapter up of Irina yet. She will surface soon. I promise. Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:24 AM Title: Play With Me
Yummy play time. Glad that they are doing so well right now.
PS I'm going to see the movie Sunday. My movie Buddy has to work all weekend till 2 pm Sun so we are going then. Heard great things.
Author's Response:
Play time is always good time with this couple. LOL
The movie will definetly keep you on the edge of your seat.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:13 AM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Glad he gave Bella control that way.
Ugh well he knows to be on the lookout for James now. Trying to remember. Victoria was one of the three doms in the other house right? Did B tell E their names? Would think that hearing Victoria from Irina would raise a flag as its not a very common name anymore. Ah well Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Author's Response:
I think she did mention it to him, being that Rose would already know this information. Victoria was like a passing thing, she and Laurent left the situation. Irina was supposed to contact him, but didn't. We will seen the future. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
LOL for Jazz' reaction to finding out about Alice. Glad she got away too. Yummy. THose balls look interesting. Had to go look them up.
Author's Response:
I can't stand by the results, read different review about them. Some say they work and some say they don't. I have no clue, but might get some for Christmas. LOL Thanks for the review. You have brighten my last few minutes....I thought I was having a good day after watching the new twilight.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:46 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
James is a real delusional psychopath. Would have thought that Charlie or one of others involved would have checked the protection order. Wonder if he somehow got a tracking chip or something like that. Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Woo hoo for boyfriend/girfriend. Happy dance.
hmm Victoria huh. Dunno that I'd trust Irina either knowing she's the sister of Skankya. Glad Edward is being careful and thorough.
Author's Response:
Loved the dancing bear, needed that... Charlie doesn't know because the clerk, fudged the records. Could have installed it on her car (assuming you are talking about James here). Irnia is not to be trusted, and she is skating on thin ice. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:30 AM Title: Down On The Corner
Not my favorite scene as there was being out in public, but its her choice to say yea or nay. Glad that Seth is watching out for her. Wonder how many others?
Author's Response:
I haven't decided yet. Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:15 AM Title: Call Me
OOOH Yumminess. Great scene.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review glad to see positives here.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:05 AM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
yumminess. Great first private scene. LOL for position...was trying to picture it in my head. hee hee
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear that you like the story....Had some very resent bad reviews that have gotten me very, way, way, down. I am glad to have something positive about it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 3:07 AM Title: I'm So Excited
long chapter yes, but thorough and needed. Glad she is still meeting with Rose.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 1:58 AM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
ooh little yummy time on the road. Esme and Carlisle seem great.
Author's Response:
Good parents once again. Road yummy always good. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 1:35 AM Title: Moving On Up
CHarlie is a great dad.
Author's Response:
Wouldn't have it any other way. I love to see a carring father, warms my heart. Thanks for the review.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 10:19 PM Title: Rehab
Glad Rosalie is on their side. She is bad ass. Em is cute as always.
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah...she will help Bella come to terms and fix things. Em is always cute. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
Oh wow. James is def a sick SOB. Lemme guess Alice got away from them and is now the interest of Jazz? Hope Rose can help her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and reading.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 10:02 PM Title: Disturbia
Oh wow..... Rose got her involved with James and co??? No wonder she is so pissed.
Author's Response:
Rose never liked James, but dealt with him. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:57 PM Title: Excite Me
oooh Yummy times. You get something special for that.
Glad Rose came down.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the bounching lemon...cute. I love it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:26 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
glad they got to know each other a little more. hope James gets run over by a truck someday AFTER he is scarred and mutilated and castrated. Yeah I'm a bit vindictive.
Author's Response:
You will have to stay and see what I have planned for James. He deserves every single inch...LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:15 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
Hawt dayum. Yummy first scene.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it....**wiping my brow on that one** thanks for the review.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:06 PM Title: Natural High
Glad Jasper is so attentive to realize the need for the form.
Author's Response:
Come across this while doing research for the story and thought with Bella's give situation, she would need something like that to help her. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:53 PM Title: I Touch Myself
oooh YUMMY Glad that B talked to charlie about the background check.
Author's Response:
Oh, yes... she needed to do that just to make sure he was on the up and up. I bet she could have done that with James, but it would have probably come back clean too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:40 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
wow Skankya and Scumro really tried to pull one on them. Wonder if Skankya will confront B at some point? Great talk though
Author's Response:
You give me an intriging idea...about Tanya. Now, I have to decide what to do about it. I hadn't planned on reintroducing her, but she could work. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:25 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
great first talk.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked the talk.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:50 PM Title: You Sexy Thing
lol they are funny.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:43 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
1313 Mockingbird Lane..... Someone likes the Munsters. LOL
Great first look at B. Can see she has some self esteem issues.
Author's Response:
Guilty...but it also ages me. LOL Glad that you liked keep reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Looks like a great start
Author's Response:
Thanks glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:09 AM Title: Every Day of the Week
Wow she made it without losing it. Edward is freaking out.
Author's Response:
He worries about her, and worries that she will leave. Thanks for reviewing and reading.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:37 AM Title: Prisoner of Love
She needed it and to know that she could trust in him enough not to harm her.
Author's Response:
We all get a little sassy from time to time, and need a little correction. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chains of Love
That was fun ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, they all seem and look fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:44 AM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
Freak out and with good reason. Edward better tell her soon and keep his gaurd up.
Author's Response:
Oh, he doesn't tell her, until he has to with pisses Bella off, but enought about that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:10 AM Title: Play With Me
Very intence very exciting. loved the picnic I hope James was not watching them.
Author's Response:
He was, but it's not mentioned in the story yet. Thanks for the review.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
She did good ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, she did. I didn't want to see her hurt, him with the flogger. I didn't want her to over think and have a setback. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 7:01 PM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
Shocked Jasper into happeness lol. Them balls sound like fun ;)
Author's Response:
I don't know if the balls are any good, just read about them a couple of times. Read the advertisement for them when I looked at them. Thought about buying a pair, we could all use a pair right?? Yeah, no more vanilla nightmares for Jasper. As always thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:56 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
James is a sick fuck. Edward is going to flip his shit if James get ahold of her. I am so happy they have said the I love yous
Author's Response:
Yep, we had to get it out there. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:49 AM Title: Down On The Corner
A little pretty women and then sleep in the same bed now if that is not love what is lol
Author's Response:
You are only the second person whom notice (or have said to notice) that in the story. There is another one in there. Thanks for the review.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:14 AM Title: Every Day of the Week
i'm glad we're getting closer to the confrontation. i want james dealt with and out of the picture. good chapter.
Author's Response:
Ah...yes, I want him gone too. Soon my dear soon. Thanks for the review
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:20 AM Title: You Sexy Thing
It's good that they each like what they see
Author's Response:
Oh, yes always a good thing. Thanks for the review.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:05 AM Title: Don't You Want Me?
"1313 Mockingbird Lane"...The Munster's address?
Author's Response:
There is a mockingbird lane where I am from, and to answer your questions yes. You are the first to notice it. When I was in high school had this project where you had to give an address for your pretend life. This is address I used, I guess that shows how old I am too. Thanks for the review. Did you like the story other than the munster's address?
Date: 14 Nov 2012 10:53 PM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
That was so fucking sexy!!! I wish I could have that same rendezvou in the kitchen... with Edward of course!! lol! Bella was great thinking about their daily acting!
Author's Response:
I think we all think that way, that is where I get my ideas from. Thanks for the review.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 10:13 PM Title: I'm So Excited
wow!! That's amazing!! The contract was great and Edward thought of everything!!! Can't wait to see them play!
Author's Response:
Once they sign they play light at first and then towards the end it will get a little heavier. I had to remember she has been abused before, and he would take it easy on her. Thanks for the review.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 10:00 PM Title: Call Me
That was sweet and hot as hell it is good for her to be in charge a little.
Author's Response:
The first couple of times she is in charge on Friday's, but as she gets stronger she will see that Edward will take care of her. She won't top after that. Thanks for reading and the review.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:26 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
Loved it as always :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked, Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:10 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
The plot thickens....
Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yes, we are boiling down to seeing James. Every chapter takes us one step closer. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:35 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
Thank you for the update, glad Bella finally knows James is near by she needs to know to be alert. Great chapter and as always you rock.
Author's Response:
**blushing** thanks. Soon we will see more, a lot of people wanted Edward to come clean about seeing James, and I knew he needed too. So, I figure this was one way. He could have just told her but what fun would that be. Thanks for the review as always.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 2:40 PM Title: Every Day of the Week
Please keep her safe!!! I hate reading where Bella is abused or tortured.. I like a nice HEA for them.. looking forward to your next update
Author's Response:
No worries my dear, she will be perfectly safe. In fact, she will be great!! Always happy ending with me, the only death you will see will be one of the trouble makers potentially. No, romeo and juliet, no death of spouses, girlfriends, ect. I can't stand to read a story where one of them die. It kills me, I can't even watch or read new moon because he leaves her. Hate that type of story to. I have wrote them, but don't like it. Once she is with him, they are together....Love conconcers all. Thanks for the review and no worries.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:38 AM Title: Prisoner of Love
that went better than i'd expected. i was afraid it would set bella back a lot. sometimes a girl just needs to be spanked. :)
Author's Response:
Bella is going to get a longer stronger in the next couple of chapters, at least until James shows up. Then, she will probably digress a little. Who knows....haven't written them yet. So, as always thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 10:19 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
i think that she definately knows the difference now. looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I hope she does. Thanks for reading will be updating soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 10:14 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
great start to the story
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you liked the start, continue to read you might like.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 6:41 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
Loved it as always :)
Author's Response:
Thanks glad that you liked. There will be more soon. Thanks for the review too always love to see them.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 4:58 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
She pushed for a punishment and got one she should not try to top from the bottom to get it she should communicate with her master and boyfriend. Cannot wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review as always love to know what you think. Update will be a long soon, still writing the next one.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:14 AM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
I'm sure Victoria is still involved with James what are the chances that she just so happen to rent a home in Bella's gated community not very likely. That would be a nightmare scenario having Victoria/James as neighbors. Thank you for the amazing chapter.
Author's Response:
Yep, your right she is. I just haven't figured out if she is a willing participate or if she is being forced. In chapter, Easy, Peaceful... James's pov talks about moving into the gated community, and then Victoria shows up. So, yeah...Bella struggles with them being so close. She just knows about Vic at the moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 1:03 AM Title: Play With Me
You write playroom beyond well excellent in fact. I say definetely yes to an outake from Jasper and Alice POV.
Author's Response:
Then by all mean see Outtakes and Extras under my name. Thanks by the way, that makes me feel good. I have had people ask "Are you sure you don't participate in the lifestyle?" My answer is always Yes, I'm sure, just have read alot of fan fictions with it in it, or books. I have also researched a lot, and I have a very, very active imagination. Very vanilla.
If my brain was a computer in the sense it was constantly spitting out stories. I would have a hundred of them, unfortunely, I can only write so many at a time. LOL Keep reading I'm glad you enjoyed.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:27 PM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
That was incredible!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, and keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:58 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
Wonderful chapter as always
Author's Response:
Thanks....thanks for the review
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Prisoner of Love
This was an awesome chapter... you can tell that he very much loves Bella and is trying to help her..
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review...yes, I hope that I show how much he loves here, and is trying to make her better.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:51 PM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
On my way to pick up Luna beads stat! Thanks for the amazing chapter
Author's Response:
LOL yeah, while researching I come across them, and thought strongly about ordering me some. Hahaha Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:37 AM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
J'ai bien aimé cette Bella en "maîtresse d'Edward", elle reste quand même très respectueuse et gentille, à mon avis, elle ne peux pas trop "dominer" son maître.
Merci.
Author's Response:
I liked the Bella "mistress of Edward," she's still very respectful and nice, in my opinion, it can not really "dominate" his master. Thanks
Oui, elle serait une bonne maîtresse, mais pas pour cette histoire. Souvenir de ce qu'il a fait principalement à l'aider dans ses craintes. Il était dangereux pour lui de laisser faire, elle aurait pu lui faire du mal. C'est pourquoi elle s'est arrêtée, une fois elle a compris toute l'énergie qu'il a fallu pour contrôler une scène. Elle se sentait comme si elle était en de bonnes mains. Merci pour la revue.
Yes, she would be a good mistress, but not for this story. Remember he did this mainly to help her with her fears. It was dangerous for him to let her do it, she could have hurt him. That's why she stopped, once she figured out all the energy it took to control a scene. She felt like she was in good hands. Thanks for the review.