Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hmmmm. Seems Bella is closer to considering the apartment a waste. I shall be anxious to see what Emmett has discovered about the creepy neighbors.
While Bella has good intentions with her monthly playtime, she still needs the guidance of her Dom. Perhaps there is another way they could go about this?
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
DO NOT LEAVE, Bella!!! Stay and do as you're told. Once he calms down a bit and is less terrified for your well being, he will be glad you finally told him.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
A beautiful ceremony and fabulous night together!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Progress is happening for their relationship. I do hope she decides she'd rather stay at his house full time before anything else too weird occurrs with the neighbors.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Uuuumm. *oops* Gotta learn to listen to your inner voice better! Master is PISSED.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 68
Awe, preggers. That's sweet, and I'm guessing they will be very thrilled & nervous about becoming parents & the responsibility that comes with it.
I personally like long chapters:~D)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 68
I'd be qiute happy if you kept this story going on until the kid goes to college. Keep up good work, I don't know what I'd do if I didn't have this to read every other sunday morning with my coffee.xx
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Aaargh! Shit shit shit. When Bella told the group about her neighbors, did she happen to mention any names?? Damn it girl, just give in and move into the one place you feel at home!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Hmmmm. 'Vicky' and 'Jim'?? I don't trust this, seems fishy.
Aaargh! This seperation is just going to suck. At least if she was at his place, his shadow would be there with her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 68
I know it was long butworth it. This just gets better and better. My understanding of them increases with every chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 68
Great chapter ... Your chacters are like comfortable friends of mine that I can't wait to take out for play. Favorite part was Carlisle when he was in the dog house. Would live to be a fly on the wall when. That comes up in privacy of their own home
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 68
That was a wonderfully long chapter. The BDSM growing pains are certainly insightful into the lifestyle. I'm amazed at all the emotions and how well written this story is.
I've been a nurse for "ever" and I've never heard the term "fall pregnant". Interesting term.
Thanks for all the time you put into PLU.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Kate occured to me mere moments before she was revealed. I am sooo glad the group had an intervention of sorts for these two. I am pleased that they are stepping back from their D/s rolse for a month. Obviously, they can still have LOTS of fun times!!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 68
Epic chapter M, well done! I especially liked the bit where their OBGYN was appreciating the intensity of their love for each other. That look thru another's eyes brought a certain zing of intensity.
I for one would be thrilled to have your/their story go on and on. Tho how you manage to keep the drama going... I'm in awe. The physical humor of the hospital encounter was a hoot. Daddy C lossing his cool and setting off a chain reaction. hehe. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well HELL! Had to know it would be bad if Edward left the house! How could she leave though? Emmett has her truck.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
I do think Bella found education as well as arousal from their private viewing.
Poor Edward appears to be having a crisis of emotions, his girl has him in fits half the time, horny as hell the other.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, this day has certainly been emotional for both of them, as well as enlightening for Edward.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 68
Those Cullen boys definitely don't shoot blanks =)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
So happy that this round of unpleasantry is behind them. Now, onto Bella's living circumstances...
Date: 05 Jun 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
What an emotional week. For once, I am immensely grateful for Alice's scheming ways. Gotta hope her winning ways continue.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good timing for her collar to be off!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad Edward reminded her that she will make mistakes. Though I doubt her ass believes he went easy on her!
I like the matching infinity bracelets but agree with Edward that wearing her collar all the time is not the best idea. I would think that the braclet would serve Bella's intended purpose. Although the collar sounds charming (hee hee, pun intended!).
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yikes!! Alcohol is a baaaad thing. The girls are in so much trooouble. *ouch*
Date: 04 Jun 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Must be an ingeresting evolution, having one's body no longer be entirely their own...
*hee hee* I hope she asks! While not ingrained in her psyche, it would be rather fun on the rare occasion ot switch.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jealous much Edward? Guess he doesn't much like the feeling. I suspect when they return to their 'real lives' the feeling will be returned ten fold.
Alice, the little engine! Loved it.
Teasing is fun until you are the one being teased!
Author's Response:
thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 68
Loved it so no, it's gotta keep going and going and Going......
Ahhhhhh.....good & more sexy times ahead!
Author's Response:
yeah it will go on for a while!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
They are learning, adapting and growing as a unit.
Author's Response:
you are so right
Date: 04 Jun 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
It shall be a long journey of learning for Bella. First lesson is the knowledge that she WILL make mistakes.
Author's Response:
you are so right!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good progression. Fun to see Edward's confused state of mind.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
*swoon* Damn, Edward is good. His control is amazing. He knows what he wants and is incredibly focused.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great plot progression. A lot for one day but not forced at all. Very nicely done in fact. I definitely did NOT expect things to be revealed in this manner, but it fit perfectly. Very natural.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. That was a VERY intense evening. Seems Edward may have gotten a little bit more than he expected from his hostess. Perhaps Edward will explore the closet a little bit while putting laundry away tomorrow...
Date: 04 Jun 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 68
I absolutely LOVE this story and I encourage you to go with it as long as you can!
Author's Response:
I will - i promise that I won't just hurrry through to get the story done xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Things sure are heating up!!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like the suddenness of Edward's reaction to seeing Bella with another man! Rather telling, huh? Now, Bella's reaction as she undressed him was perfect. This, as they say, is the beginning of something wonderful.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a dramatic entrace by Edward! Eager to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 68
Love the update!
Author's Response:
thank you :)
Date: 04 Jun 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 68
Wow, that was amazing! YAY for Bella and Edward :) Also, Alice, Jasper and baby Tiffany :) There was one picture that didn't appear in the chapter :( Oh well! Only 5 more chapters? Guess you'll have to fast forward through the next few months, huh? I cannot wait to see what else happens next :)
Author's Response:
No, don't worry, I won't fast forward - I'll just keep going to do it right! So maybe it's going to be 10... I'll know when I get there.
Thanks for the review xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 68
love the long long chapter it was great.... Bella pregant so soon didn't see that happening so fast and no way can you end this in 5 chapters can't wait for more
Author's Response:
thank you so much xoxo
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 68
Michele - I totally love you andt this story. Amazing chapter and yes, amazingly long.
First, during the 20 questions in the den. I actually got angry, like really angry. E basically threw the scenario in B's face about how he wouldn't leave her, blah, blah, blah. But in reality that is exactly what he did after thier wedding. Yes, she forgave him and thier world went to shit, but did they actually work all that out? I don't think so. He couldn't deal with his own emotions and rather than talk it out with her, he ran. So even if it is deep in her subconscious because she forgave him for that episode, that doubt probably still lives there. I wish she would have thrown that into thier discussion so they could truly move past it. In my opinion that is partly why she found it so difficult to open up to him with her confused feelings because there was this doubt in the back of her mind from that incident - he ran, he left.
I am fine with her being pregnant, I do want her to safeword again - I don't know why, but I think it would make me feel better like she is more in touch with herself than E is even if its just in an instant.
I really don't want this story to end. Please consider wriitng it forever. Thank you (I am giving you my best doe eye impression now).
Author's Response:
Hey Vic - You know you are right. I never thought of that and I think that Edward and Bella need to deal with that. Their play time will take on a different tune now, they are both growing and maturing and Bella has a lot more confidence in her own abilities and Edward's.
Forever? Not sure but definately for a while longer
Thanks,
Michele
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 68
Super Gianormous chapter. Woo hoo for new baby and new pregnancies. Love Kate/Garrett.
Author's Response:
thank you so much :)
Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 68
Wow! That was an amazing chapter!!!! I love when you write about all Alice's antic's. I laughed until I cried during the hospital brawl. This family is wonderful. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for a great story.
Author's Response:
thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 68
holy mackerel!...lol yes it was long but soooo good! yes! she's preggo!!! so happy for them! so now there are going to be babies everywhere!!! the 2 pics of Bean and Alice's baby were too freaking cute!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much
Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 68
The waiting room for Alice was a hoot! OMG I can't believe Carlisle belted Jasper! The retreat was informative, I'm glad Edward stood up for Bella... Loved the chapter! A LOT! Only 5 more chapters... I've been following this story for so long, I don't know what I'm going to do without it? Thanks so much for all your hard work.
Author's Response:
don't let the remaining number of chapters worry you - it'll finish when it finishes, right? Thanks so much for your review :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 68
God I hope this story never stops......... it wonderful.. I actual like the length of the story.. You had put it together.
I am excited that their preg. it going to be hide from hell but that them.. True love.
:)Leona
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the great review xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 68
I think that this chapter was PERFECT! They are gonna have a BABY!!!!! I am so happy for them. I just hope that she has an easy pregnancy. It would be nice since Rose and Alice struggled with various things. Bella has had a hard life, an easy pregnancy would be good karma. OOHHHH and I think it should definately be twins! One boy and one girl. And the girl should be a splitting image of Edward. Can you imagine those beautiful greem eyes on a little girl? Lastly, I think that it will be just fine to continue on forever and ever. I love this story and can never get enough. Thank You!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your wonderful review - now stop reading over my shoulder!! :) till next time, honey xoxo
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 68
Michele~
You always amaze me. One of your chapters is liek 4 of mine, but that is all good, because I flove this story! I love it that she is preggers already, I love Alice going on a She-rah man haters binge. I love rosie ready to beat down some nurse, and Esme on the beat down too. Papa Carlisle starting a fight, and then sent to sleep on the sofa. You crack me the heck up seriously. I have about 5600 word count on my next chapter ready, I have a tad more to add than it is off to the beta, so I will post soon. Love this story, hugs and kisses,
Kasi~
Author's Response:
Hello my friend! thanks for the great review and I can't wait to read your next chapter. Take care Sweet friend, xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 68
im excited that they are preggo i hope that it brings them closer together ! cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 68
You are such a great writer. That whole birthing scene was wonderful. Poor daddy carlise just wanted to protect his little girl and Talk about timing... Couldn't have been any better then when Rosalie got off the lift to a half dressed Em. And now we have a pregnant Bella. Such exciting times ahead. What's this about only 5 more chapters? I don't want this to ever end. Love your story. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thanks so much for the review - 5 chapters isn't going to cut it is it? We'll see ....
Date: 04 Jun 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 68
thanks for the update! wowo it took forever to read i even had to take a break! haha!! can't wait to see the baby! also always a drama with the cullens first the drama with the alice/jas wedding so i guess we have to have the birthing drama of alice/jas baby!!! wow i would have wanted to crawl under the table and die if my family acted like that!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you darling for the review xoxo
Date: 03 Jun 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 68
yay! baby time! i am du in 3 weeks. this is my most fave story im reading so forever sounds awesome! thanks fr the c,hapter!
Author's Response:
hey!!! Great to hear about the baby, Momma! I hope that you will still find some time to drop by after those 2 a.m. feeds...
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 68
I loved it!!
I don't mind if this story continues forEVER!!!!
I love getting chappie updates and this story is just so FREAKIN awesome!
It makes my day when you update!!
Author's Response:
thank you and thank you again. xoxo
Date: 03 Jun 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 68
no matter how strong and solid a relationship is it will always takes work as it changes and grows. Thats what they have to learn and it seems that is what they are finally learning. Congrats Alice and Jasper, Kate and Garrett and Bells and Edward, its a baby boom!!
Author's Response:
thank you for your insightful comments! Thanks for reviewing xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 68
what can i say...... Loved it all .
Author's Response:
thank you so much xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 68
Sweetie... your chapters can NEVER be too long!
Author's Response:
you are sooo good for my ego! thanks so much for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 68
Man that was a monster chapter!! And well worth the wait. So much happened, I don't even know where to start. Great, Wonderful chapter!!
Thank you so much for writing this fantastic story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that you are still with me! xoxo
Date: 03 Jun 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 68
yay I loved this Chapter I am glad she is pregnant but hope everything is ok with the baby since she did take some birth control pills ( I know probably irrelevant and the Health information Manager in me but those things can cause birth control pills
Author's Response:
she's gonna be fine - promise xoxo
Date: 03 Jun 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 68
oh i ove it !!!!!! I was right !!!!! she was having baby fever. !!!!! I get Edward for one night for having the correct answer right ?!?!?!?!?!? Shit i know Bella won't share, if i had him i woudln't let him see daylight, we would be under the sheets forever !!!!Wow, somuch in this chapter you really worked your ass off. Thank you!! it was wonderful !!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, you were right, but I couldn't give all my secrets away! thanks so much for the review and comments
Date: 03 Jun 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 68
LOVE IT LOVE IT..... I think the whole hospital scene was hillarious, i was laughing so hard I started crying. Now that Edward and bella are going to be parents it's going to be interesting to see how things go with them, and the others. Keep up the great work, and i cant wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks so much for the review honey
Date: 03 Jun 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 68
That was awesome!!!! Unless I missed did/or did not charlie know about renee?? how did that happen??
Author's Response:
Go back to the last chapter where Carlisle was telling them the story - when they came home from their road trip? you will read how it happened there. thanks for the review
Date: 03 Jun 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 68
I love this chapter!! So much happened!! Wow You are a wonderful author. I would read anything you wrote. Thank you for this story. I hope you upday soon lol
Author's Response:
you are too kind and generous! Thanks so much for the review
Date: 03 Jun 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 68
well life on the DOM farm will change now with a new DOM on its way. Trust me they come out as dom's.
Author's Response:
loved your comment! thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 67
WOW!!! IS BELLA PREGNANT???? WOW WE LOVE THIS NEW MORE DOMINANT EDWARD!!!! EEEEEEE !! WHAT A WONDEFFUL WRITER AND AUTHOR YOU ARE!!! WE LOVE YOUR STORY!! Theres this story on here called sugar daddy.. well theres two! we are talking about the one where renee cuts bella off and hooks up with edward a 38 year old man.. and she 18 and He calls her his little girl and he makes her call him daddy.. likeall the time.. well it started like that.. well anyways you would be soo awesojme to write something like that.. with the daddy name.. its not weird like that.. it is like a caretaker kinda thing you have to read it!! Well we cant wait for an update!! We are soo thankful for these stories!! DOMWARD!! DARKWARD, all of that we LOVE!~!!!! Your Fans, The Fanfic Girls Reading group here at the university of El Paso, TX, UTEP!!! All 46 of us!! adore you!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
You totally know you're going to hell for using Carol Kane as a pedofile right? LOLZ I totally freaking love it though. I think there should be a toaster involved like in Scrogged and her dom should be Humperdink. lol
I'm totally digging thist story btw!
Date: 25 May 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 67
Bella gets into trouble when she talks to Alice and not Edward. She knows better. Bella should not be holding anything back from Edward. He is in charge of this relationship and she needs to talk to him or at least write in her journal. I don't get Bella. Edward has proven over and over again that he would do just about anything to make her happy. All Bella has to do is ask or state what is going on and Edward will make sure that it works out. She needs to stop worrying.
Date: 25 May 2011 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 67
I had almost forgotten about any restriction. Holy hell, what will he do now! Exciting! Is Belka already pregnant, or does she just want to get pregnant?
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 67
It is a measure of how much I admire your writing skills that I have not thrown a wobbly over Edward's behaviour in the playroom. He worries about hurting her after the event? Would she ever red him? Go on just once do it, lets see how the big baby would cope. lmao. I think Bella is getting broody, time will tell. I loved how you dealt with the Renee thing, very inventive. As always looking forward to reading more.
Until the next time.
hugs Caro.
Date: 24 May 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 67
O no! I have this hunch and it isn't a good one: I think that Bella has found out that she may not be able to conceive naturally, if at all, huh? She must have gone to the doctor for her annual exam and asked about conception stuff and the doctor may have had a concern that some thing was not right, the doc probably did tests...and now she has to tell Edward that the only way they might be able to conceive is if they try artificial insemination (if they're lucky) or in-virto fertilization, and that her window of opportunity is closing so that they have to try it sooner rather than later. That would expalin why Bella is worried about "taking the control away from Edward" when he just got it back. Silly, Bella... why when is she ever going to learn that keeping this shit from him is only making it worse!!!!
I hope I am wrong and way off here, but I really think that I may be right. :(
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 67
Another amazing chapter. I do have to say I get the feeling you are going to end this soon and that makes me sad. Wow to the last playroom, Edward kept his promise. I completely understand Bella's reaction to the Renee situation and I am proud of her for it. I wasn't happy that E was so quick to think she was running from the situation because I don't see it as that. She needed time, beyond the run and sex, to reflect again before he accused her of retreating, I mean give her some time and self relect on how he would react to something like that.
As far as your cliffie, I know there is one ghost yet to be slain, but that was a weird conversation w ali.
Date: 23 May 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 67
GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I am really enjoying this story. I am a little sad that the end is coming. I am not ready for that. Your writing makes me feel like I am right there with them, feeling everything that they feel. I am so excited that they are finally getting back to "normal". I am thinking that Bella was talking to Alice about her (Bella) wanting to get pregnant and starting a family. Am I right????? Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 67
Following this on FFN.....but the addition of the pictures is a beautiful bonus!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 67
Wowsa Michele~
You have gone and out done yourself yet again, not that it would or shoudl be a surprise. I LOVE, no make that FLOVE this story so much and I am really enjoying where it is that I believe that you are going with it. I really am so proud to have been with you through this for a long time now, and I am really enjoying it for sure. I will MISS this story and the characters as you have developed them for this story, when you are done. You never stop amazing me though.....just one of your chapters are like almost 3 of mine...or more. I love this story, and I heart you big time too! I am so proud and honored to call you a friend, and I am in awe of your fantastic abilities and skills as a writer that you share with us all.
XOXO
Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 67
WOW! Renee is all sorts of fucked up!!! Poor Bella. It is amazing that she is not more damaged than she already was from having that thing as a 'mother' her whole life. I am so glad that she has the Cullen's as her family. No matter what happens in the future, they will be behind her 110%.
As hard as it is to see Edward struggle with his PTSD, I am glad that you include it because it was such a tramatic experience that it deserves its place in the story.
I don't know if I have told you lately, but I love your dirty, filthy mind (and my hubby likes it too). Sex in the woods..hot, sex after the party..hotter, sex in the studio with her tits against the glass..fuck me sideways..that shit is classic heat that should never be messed with.
But then you have to go and make Bella all secretive and holding back from Edward again! WTF?!? That is evil and you know it. You had better write fast or I am sending Edward over with a single tail and a Sybian.
Excellent chapter!!!!
XOXO
Nickey
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 67
that whole thing with Renee is crazy, but thank god she's not related in anyway......i wonder what Bella's hiding now, they're doing so well in the communication dept. Edward should just confront her about what she's hiding
Date: 22 May 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 67
I feel that I am reading a wonderful novel, you are so good. Is is baby time at casa Cullen?? Edward will flip. I am glad that their 24/7 still allow her personality to shine. You do such a great job of giving them each such distinct personalities.
Date: 22 May 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 67
Is she going to ask Edward about having a baby. Or something crazy about becoming a switch. I hope not. :(
And when he gave her the crest necklace did they decide to go for more of a 24/7 relationship? I was really confused by that part.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 67
Well I a little shocked!. I think she is preg. or their is something is has to do for photo. Why is she think Edward would not want the Baby.. that stupid. What every it is she is hurting Edward. All hell is going to break. I thought their Lieing was. Bella will feel guilty. what a horriable ciricle she plays on her and Edward. I hope we find out in the next chapter. I dont' think I could stand seeing Edward Hurt to much longer.. Damn Bella..
And I know it! Renee is a Bitch. I agree that Bella to go on with life and forget the past enjoy the furture. If she can stop lieing to Edward. and Twister they in trouble again.
it is almost to funny it hurts;
this was a awesome chapter. all the emotions were there..
:)Leona
Ps. I love shhhh story too. actuall I have noticed most of the stories you rec. I 'm reading.. Good tast. hahah. Love you.. I will hate when this story is done.. Please don't stop. haha. You got to think of a squeal or outtakes of the furture. okay. enought pleading have a great day..
Date: 22 May 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 67
What is Bella up to now. Glad Edward got a clean bill of health health. I must say that Renee is one evil bitch and I sure hope she gets what she deserves some day. Love it
Date: 22 May 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 67
love the insight into Calisle and Esme ... you portray them so very well
Date: 22 May 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 67
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it SO much! I am so happy Edward is completely healed :) YAY! I cannot wait to see what Bella was talking about...although I have an idea ;) I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Date: 22 May 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 64
Wow what an emotional chapter. I loved it. I mean its wonderful to see that Edward too can lose control of his emotions and he is human just like the rest of us. But still I was upset that he left her like that. I was really shocked to read that both Jasper and Edward were shot but I am so glad that they are both ok. Again a very emotional and draining chapter.
Date: 22 May 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 67
love this story!! I could tell when reading this chapter that it's coming to a close. It will be greatly missed. can't wait for the final chapters to come and I hope you continue to write fanfition and give us a new kick ass awesome fic just like this one!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 67
Jeez will she ever, ever learn? She should have learned by now that keeping shit from Edward is never a smart move!
Author's Response:
You are telling me! My ass is smarting and i'm just writing this stuff!!! thanks for the review and comments xoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 67
well my gosh that was such a twist with Bella's birth mother... still not sure why Renè would do such a thing to someone but at least Bella knows that she is not biologically connected to that wicked woman in any way at all.
Edward did ramp it up in the playroom, im not sure why he has started calling her his little slut, BUT thats something for him and his pet, not me. im just used to seeing and feeling the tenderness he feels for her in everything that he does even the punishments he can still feel the tenderness whether its the hurt and disappointment that he experienced or just frustration and anger.
as for whats up with Bella at the end and her conversation with Alice, i think she either has a show that she much be on the road for or she wants to start a family
Author's Response:
thanks for the comments and the review - update soon xoxo
Date: 22 May 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 67
another great chapter . I cant wait for next time ... OH I am guessing Bella is Pregnant ....
Author's Response:
shhh! thanks for the review xoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 67
Great chapter. renee is a real piece of work aint she. Hmm for the cliffy. Im thinking she has been asked to go away somewhere or something similar.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review darling xoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 67
wow this was one long ass great chapter !!!! i think Bella has baby fever.
Author's Response:
hmmm
:)
Thanks for the review xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 67
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 21 May 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 67
Another rivetting chapter. Am so envious of Bella's responsiveness and her orgasmic tendencies. Lucky cow lol!
Am already a fan of Robshandmonkey's story and it has been on my fave for a while. Thanks for the other recs. Sadly not many people like mine lol!!
Looking forward to the next update. I think I can guess what is going.
Author's Response:
Hey Cf, I have just looked at the long list of stories that you have written - wow! I'm going to get onto reading one of your stories asap - you know that I don't get much time to read, or else I would never write anything, but I am going to make the effort and I will absolutely pimp your stories, honey! Thanks so much for the review and your comments. I don't think that it's a matter of not liking your stories, maybe they just need to get out there a little more!
Love and hugs,
Michele
Date: 21 May 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMG another cliff hanger! You are evil! ;-)
You put so much in each chapter it is hard to comment on one thing. I am happy that Edward got a clean bill of health but am concerned with Bella's attitude of late. So... 2 weeks can't come fast enough. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review darling oxo
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMG Renee did not deserve her as a daughter anyways.. I wonder what the hell Alice and Bella where talking about...
Author's Response:
update soon, thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 67
Your story is an addiction to me, I need another fix!!
Author's Response:
soon, I promise xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 67
UGG what else are you going to do to these 2? I think you cant stand to see them happy ,you keep finding ways to give them more drama and more trouble. (Not that it's always a bad thing) I guess i am just getting frustrated I want to see them happy TOGETHER!!!!
Author's Response:
hey there vw, it will all be okay, I promise. isn't RL just like this sometimes? One damn thing after another - but then it all works out, so please, please trust me. love, Michele
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 67
It just gets better every chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you darling :)
Date: 21 May 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 67
thanks for the update interesting on the mother twist.... what up with bella? is her pregers!? yeah for ed!?
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reviewing xoxo
Date: 21 May 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 67
i think she wants to havea baby! im excited that everthing is back to normal and hes back to 100% ! cant wiat ot see what she and alice were talking about
Author's Response:
hmmm - I could tell you, but then I'd have to kill you... :)
Thanks so much for the review bb
Date: 21 May 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 67
oh wow, the Renee story was right out of the blue. Awesome little twist there and a wonderful thing for Bella I think.
Author's Response: thanks for the review!